hi! :3
[General]
Hard diff has different
kiai time <offset from what the other diffs have. you must fix it~
AIBat found many unsnapped slider end in Insane and Hard diffs, please check them once again!
[Easy]
in the easiest diff, maybe you can put claps by another logic (ex. 1st and 3rd white ticks) due to the lack of note and long slider
00:02:628 (1) - why not make it symmetrical?
00:12:391 (2,3) - sorry for nazi mod but it's not symmetrical correctly D:
00:29:432 (2) - 1.5 rhythm may be hard to read/hit for beginners and sounds odd to me. you can keep 1/1 rhythm here because there's a emphasis at 00:29:610 -
00:43:634 (1) - move this to 00:43:101 - and add a repeat to it to follow vocal better and fill up the blank?
00:55:172 (2) - remove clap from the end since it follows nothing. if possible you should follow the drum at 00:56:060 - and add clap there.
00:58:012 (3) - i'd suggest to get rid of whistle at the end of this slider since accent exists on a weird place (red tick) so your previous hitsounding pattern may not work well
and i think you should simplify that part to emphasize the beginning of Kiai time :3
01:04:758 - the percussion here is stronger than others, so add a note here?
(at least remove these unnecessary green lines please~)
01:07:953 (1) - add finish at the beginning instead of whistle, since i can hear finish sound in the music~
01:09:373 (2) - same reason as above, add finish to the repeat of this and remove whistle~
01:16:119 - same stuff as what i mentioned at 01:04:758 -
01:16:474 (1) - clap at the repeat doesnt suit at all imo, consider removing it
01:20:024 (2) - add finish at the beginning
01:37:421 (2) - ^ at the end
[kosiga's Normal]
00:08:308 (1) - 音付けが少し寂しい&音っぽいのがあるので折り返しにwhistleつけてもいいかなって思いました
00:45:054 (1) - downbeatがあるので次の白線から始める方が好きです
00:53:397 - ちょっと音量を下げてみるとか?00:53:752 - と比べるとやや大げさに感じました
00:55:172 (2) - 終点のclapあってないです、もし置くなら00:56:060 - 。
00:58:012 (4) - whistleのかわりに折り返しにfinish? 音聞く感じだとそっちの方が合うと思います
00:59:077 - このclapあんまりあってない気がします、drumの音も他と比べると小さいですし要らないのでは
01:01:918 (4,6) - このoverlapが凄い気になりました
01:17:894 (5) - このpartではスネアが1/1間隔で鳴ってるので始点clapの方が合うのでは?
01:27:835 (1) - 折り返しにfinish?
01:27:835 (1) - 拾うにしても小さすぎてわかりにくい音なのでspinner or sliderに変更した方が良い気もします
[S o r d a's Hard]
00:01:204 (1) - 終点をミュートするとか
00:25:346 (1) - 始点finish
00:36:351 (4) - 始点clap
01:09:902 (1) - finish
01:26:943 (1,2) - このnotes要らない気がする
01:38:482 (1) - ちゃんとstackできてない
[Insane]
00:25:350 (1) - add finish at the beginning (Easy diff has it)
00:30:675 (6,7,8) - i prefer placing them like this so that they make a perfect rhombus and ctrl+r for (7,8) to make a better flow?
http://puu.sh/EivR00:42:036 (3) - clap at the end sounds nice to me
00:42:923 (2) - add clap at the end to follow the drum
00:43:456 (4) - remove clap because it doesnt follow the drum and sounds weird to me
00:56:060 (4) - remove clap from the end? i dont think it sounds very good~
00:58:545 (3) - add finish at the beginning
01:09:906 (2) - ^
01:16:119 (6) - add finish since you have it at 01:04:758 -
01:27:480 (3) - remove clap please ><, it sounds really bad and doesnt follow anything
01:33:515 (1,2,3) - i think they can be placed better
01:37:953 (4) - add finish at the beginning
nice~ good luck!