1. lepidon! - Taiko Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 561 notes)
2. Pag-ibig (4.83 stars, 362 notes)
3. Pagligaw (1.89 stars, 166 notes)
4. Pagsinta (3.35 stars, 209 notes)

NoHitter wrote:

Some of the English translated lyrics are wrong or could be improved:

SPOILER

"Bawat sandali ng aking buhay..." translates to "Every moment of my life..."

"Maghintay!" can be better translated into simply, "Wait!" considering the context of the song.

"Paga't sa isang taong mahal mo..." should be "'Pagkat sa isang taong mahal mo..." and should translate to "Because when you love someone..."

(This part below is difficult to translate since it mixes first and second person.)
"Lahat ay gagawin... Makita ka muli..." translates to "You'll do anything... Just to see you again." The first half comes from a second person POV but it's vague enough to work as a first person POV, which is used in the second half. I suggest changing it to "You'll do anything... Just to see her again." to keep up with the consistency.

"Nang tayo ay makapiling..." is in past tense. It should be translated to "When we were together..."

Edit: Oh and remove the dash from "Pag-ligaw", you only add dashes if the word after "Pag" starts with a vowel.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ dkun ~ hello rika, how are you?

Random check beatmap ~ (I doubt this is really "random")

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Pag-ibig]

1. 00:21:401 (10) - Add new combo,large jump here. this is part of my mapping style, therefore no. the new combo does not match the music. is this a joke?
2. 00:25:177 (9) - Add new combo and Remove 00:26:016 (1). is this also another joke? does not fit the music as well if I do this suggestion.
3. 00:27:275 (4) - Remove circle sound much better. there's a beat that this is mapped to.
4. 01:03:778 (3) - Sound too bad here, so this slider should end to 01:04:198. the song is in 3/4's metronome, as this slider is. it makes sense.
5. 01:09:233 (6) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo. wouldn't fit with the music, no. this is a hard.
6. 01:54:548 (7) - ^ if I didn't know any better, you're nazi modding me?
7. 02:02:100 (8) - ^ yeah, i'm pretty sure this is a nazi mod.
8. 02:31:051 (10) - ^ okay.
9. 02:48:254 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this. same 3/4th claim I made earlier, 3 is in the middle of "puso", and 4 finishes it off.
   
10. 02:57:275 (1) - This spinner should start to 02:57:485. should it?

[Pagsinta]

1. AR+1 much better with play. lol what, no
2. 00:27:275 (7) - Same as Pag-ibig diff. same as above
3. 01:36:715 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner. same as above
4. 02:51:191 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. this isn't unrankable. are you sure you're updated with the rules and guidelines?
5. 02:57:275 (1) - Same as Pag-ibig diff. n

[Pagligaw]

1. 00:45:317 (9) - Add new combo,don't use too long combo imo. same as above
2. 01:03:359 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. this isn't unrankable. are you sure you're updated with the rules and guidelines?
3. 01:36:925 (1) - Make same as paga-ibig diff's spinner. same as above

That's al ~ no fast bubble! just some short mod? No fast bubble when you gave me a completely nazi mod that is completely suggestional? For all I know, you should re-bubble this and not Agnes.

Like this will be make unrankble ~ (I don't what what you're trying to say, my bubble was already popped?)

SuperMICrophone wrote:

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[Pagligaw]

CS +1 (-1) (make it bigger) (my CS language is different than everyone else's lol) because I think it'd be good for the Easy players, also no overlap, woohoo!

00:41:541 (5) - NC?
00:44:897 (8) - NC?
00:49:093 (1,2) - I noticed this would be an area of overlap if you did use my suggestion, so I think one grid up? You can slightly violate distance snap here, but if you do use my suggestion this would look much neater.
01:59:163 (2) - Finish to stay with the pattern?
02:04:617 (3) - ^
02:06:715 (3,4) - For the finish pattern, put the finish on (4) to (3)?
02:16:366 (3,4) - Again, but the finish on the end of (3) instead of the start of (4)?
02:25:177 (4) - This Finish feels quite out of place, please remove it from this slider.

[Pagsinta]

00:43:638 (3,1) - I have an idea for consistency. Add a whistle to (3) for a setup, and a Finish to (1) for consistency. Remove the whistle from (1) as well.
00:46:575 (1) - Add a Finish to make that other Finish a few notes back not seem like a loner?
01:02:939 (7) - Finish for emphasis on chorus?
01:14:268 (2) - I really need a Finish here for the pattern.
01:16:785 (1) - ^
01:24:338 (4) - ^
01:25:596 (1) - Again for pattern, but this time remove the finish.
01:26:855 (4) - Add a finish to the beginning of the slider.
01:30:631 (1) - Add a Finish to the repeat of the slider, sounds a bit more dramatic imo.
01:59:582 (1) - Since the previous (4) changed the hitsound pattern, this needs a Finish.
02:02:939 (2,3,1,2) - I'm finding the hitsounds on the reallly iffy. First off, give (1) a Finish, take away its whistle and give it a clap. Then, add a whistle to its end. Take away all the hitsounds on (2). It sounds a lot neater this way imo, having that repetitive Whistle-normal didn't really work for me lol.
02:07:554 (2,4) - Remove Finish from (2), add it to (4).
02:09:652 (1) - With another pattern change, the start of this needs a Finish!
02:24:757 (2,3) - Add a Finish to (2), take out the Finish from (3).

[Pag-ibig]

OMG SO GOOD AND FUN <3

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Lol, sorry for pretty much a hitsound mod, but honestly, I tried my best but I didn't fing any playing issues! (Except maybe the CS in Easy lolol) Awesome map dkun, as always, and good luck on rebubble. I look forward to seeing this ranked.

1. As what you've said this is the first Filipino (Tagalog) songs on osu!. You'd put the language name to Tags for Filipino people or people who like. Also put what sephwin told to Tags if he's right(another thing to help searching key words). Or we have to deny his KD.
2. Optional: Give us what difficulty your 3 diffs actually match by adding some intro to creator's words cause we're not familiar with Filipino. (i.e. Pagligaw - Easy)
3. Using a folder named "Lyrics" to place all lyric pics can make your osz file more decent and easy for modders to check

1. As you can see from the pic. There is a volume difference between your 4 custom hitsounds that shouldn't have been there at all. http://puu.sh/EeyR This cause to the "soft-hitwhistle" sound lower than the others and makes the feeling the players get while playing unbalanced. Try to increase it's volume by about 70% to make it the number shows around 4.4.
2. Even though it's default soft-sliderslide, it still sounds to noisy for the song. decrease its volume or use silent one directly. (00:31:471 (1,2,3,4) - typical example on hardest diff)
3. Have to say soft-hitnormal and soft-hitclap are traditional Japanese percussion which is not that apt here but anyway it's not that bad. Try find some hitsound created by Filipino will be better just saying

124,328,42799,2,0,B|38:301|38:301|16:171|96:87,1,320,2|0

212,188,117065,2,0,B|253:144|253:144|300:192,1,120,2|0

LKs wrote:

Hi there. A map bubbled without a real/detailed mod post, cool. Let's see what I can find. So, did Kawayi Rika send you too? Okay, let's take care of this mod as well then.

[General]

1. As what you've said this is the first Filipino (Tagalog) songs on osu!. You'd put the language name to Tags for Filipino people or people who like. Also put what sephwin told to Tags if he's right(another thing to help searching key words). Or we have to deny his KD. Sure, I'll add this in.
2. Optional: Give us what difficulty your 3 diffs actually match by adding some intro to creator's words cause we're not familiar with Filipino. (i.e. Pagligaw - Easy) The difficulty indicators are there for a reason.
3. Using a folder named "Lyrics" to place all lyric pics can make your osz file more decent and easy for modders to check Not needed.

[Hitsound]

1. As you can see from the pic. There is a volume difference between your 4 custom hitsounds that shouldn't have been there at all. http://puu.sh/EeyR This cause to the "soft-hitwhistle" sound lower than the others and makes the feeling the players get while playing unbalanced. Try to increase it's volume by about 70% to make it the number shows around 4.4. This is clearly nazi.
2. Even though it's default soft-sliderslide, it still sounds to noisy for the song. decrease its volume or use silent one directly. (00:31:471 (1,2,3,4) - typical example on hardest diff) It sounds noisy? You are the only person I recall complaining about this.
3. Have to say soft-hitnormal and soft-hitclap are traditional Japanese percussion which is not that apt here but anyway it's not that bad. Try find some hitsound created by Filipino will be better just saying Is this a joke? I honestly can't tell.

[Timing]

01:02:520 (1) - Noticed this note? It sounds too late here. After checking I found there should be another red section at 01:00:422. BPM 144.2 You can quit using your BPM analyzer, please.

[Breaks]

http://puu.sh/EeLn do like this This isn't needed and is completely nazi.

[Pagligaw]

00:40:701 (3,4) - Unreasonable small spacing changes here It still flows.
00:42:799 (3) - the slider is not perfect shaped ^

124,328,42799,2,0,B|38:301|38:301|16:171|96:87,1,320,2|0

00:48:673 (5) - A couple of claps with 100% volume sounds angular. set a 70% green section to control the next one I have custom hitsounds for a reason
01:06:296 (4) - Move this a big right No, this contradicts with the new combo.
01:10:072 (4) - Don't use so many whistle within such a short period..remove this one The whistle is custom, makes sense, no.
02:02:520 (1) - Another slider with flaw http://puu.sh/EeV4(don't forgot fix spacing later)same slider remark as above
02:06:296 (2) - nazi. megascopic spacing error does this affect gameplay?


[Pagsinta]

00:33:568 (3,5) - what is this supposed to be? is this really a MAT mod?
00:26:016 (5) - no reason to use whistle on the beginning. it sounds not good, move it to the end will be better cause there is the place the music wanna people pay more attention to There is reason, as you said, there's a volume difference FOR A DIFFERENCE.
00:50:561 (3) - this whistle sort of breaks the flow, move it to 4 or remove it How does this exactly break the flow? You're not very deatiled with your mod.
01:51:401 (3) - ^
00:53:499 (2) - ← this fits here, no need to change. (just reminding that usually we'd follow the song) Uh, what?
01:08:394 (3) - not very good curve. http://puu.sh/EeJm It curves, and that's all I need.
01:18:464 (3) - your whistle covers the lead(I donno exactly what is that, sounds like some strings or artificial thing) in the music, remove it The whistle is complementary to the song, it was meant to be to begin with.
01:28:324 (1) - the clap is unexpected. nothing in the music so what're you following? No, it's not.
01:57:065 (3) - nazi

212,188,117065,2,0,B|253:144|253:144|300:192,1,120,2|0

I dislike nazi mods, it doesn't affect gameplay.
02:31:051 (1) - long white tick, new bar and this example(02:23:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )NC is needed imo No, it doesn't need a NC imo.
02:36:506 (6) - too long hitsound empty here, whistle on 6 or somewhere No thanks, I like it as it is.
02:37:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - your NC becomes disorder around this kiai time. Some are too long and some are not, do some changes. Really? I followed the same pattern as the first kiai time. Why didn't you note it there?

[Pag-ibig]

00:20:981 (8) - whistle? Makes no sense to me.
00:22:659 (1) - you might missed a whistle here, also on [Pagsinta]. Or you added an unneeded whistle on [Pagligaw] ^
00:42:170 (2) - weird shape. fix like what I've showed above Same remark as above.
02:31:051 (1) - I see no reason to deny a NC here I do.
02:46:156 (1) - ^
02:53:708 (1) - ^, with finish.

Well I guess the map still needs more mods before get ranked. The bubble was kind of arbitrary. No, you just need to quit nazi modding. That bubble was perfectly fine.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Rika and LKs tried to help you, so please treat them how they deserve and don't answer in such a rude way.

That's all I wanted to say.

LKs wrote:

1. Learn what is nazi, do not abuse the word. 2. nazi helps you much more than you can imagine. If you can't even hande nazi well, your map is poor too.

sephwin wrote:

LKs wrote:

1. Learn what is nazi, do not abuse the word. 2. nazi helps you much more than you can imagine. If you can't even hande nazi well, your map is poor too.

your map is poor too

your map is poor too

osuplayer111 do you even know what rude means?

LKs wrote:

please, I didn't say dkun's map is poor, I was making a suppose.

sephwin wrote:

LKs wrote:

please, I didn't say dkun's map is poor, I was making a suppose.

Well then, if you can't use the language have someone do it for you like google translate, just fix the broken english though, cause you're creating a misunderstanding.

I AM GOOD ENGLISH