David Guetta Feat Sia - Titanium · forum

GreyWarrior

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

GreyWarrior 2012-04-15T20:42:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 03, 2012 at 7:34:56 PM

Artist: David Guetta Ft Sia
Title: Titanium
BPM: 126
Filesize: 5816kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:

Iron (3.1 stars, 250 notes)
Steel (1.5 stars, 175 notes)
Titanium (4.86 stars, 416 notes)

Download: David Guetta Ft Sia - Titanium
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Steel: Done 100%
Iron: Done 100%
Titanium: Done 100%

Ready for mods~

Last edited by GreyWarrior 2012-09-04T00:34:59+00:00, edited 46 times in total.

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2012-04-17T09:30:45+00:00

Hey request from ingame so some suggestions here:

[Easy]
01:47:746 (1) - this spinner don't really make sense. it didn't really fit the music, try something else.
03:45:839 (9,10) - wrong spacing. they are way to near to each other, try to use distance snap here.
most of the rhythm and spacing you got here are okey. you may want to try some more hitsounds to make the map more perfect.
and the breaktime you use didn't feel really good, they seem to be really random, but I guess it is not a big issue though.

[Normal]
Try AR4 or 5 for a normal diff, current is really low.
00:15:367 (1,2) - these are too near to each other, really hard to read. (some similar things like this I won't list them all, try to find them yourselves)

actually I'd suggest you map the easy and normal dif, using one distance from begin to end. Easy and normal diff are map for new players, if you use too many distance spacing changes, they won't be able to handle it.

So these are all for now. try to make your spacing distance more consistent, and then try to add some hitsounds. good luck o.o

Athena Tennos

1,038 posts

Joined February 2010

Athena Tennos 2012-06-19T07:48:29+00:00

form IRC mod~

22:45 <kratoz> : Hey Athena
22:45 <kratoz> : can u mod my map pls (?) .3.
22:45 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.~
22:45 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.~~~~~
22:46 <Athena_Tennos> : ok~well~~~show me u map~xD
22:46 <kratoz> : ok ^^
22:46 *kratoz is listening to (David Guetta Ft Sia - Titanium)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48871]
22:47 <kratoz> : hard diff is not finished yet ;W;
22:47 <kratoz> : easy & normal are done
22:47 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.~ok~i'll skip hard~xD
22:48 <Athena_Tennos> : do u want normal mod~or irc mod?~
22:48 <kratoz> : o_o
22:48 <kratoz> : what's irc .///.
22:49 <Athena_Tennos> : xD.....That mean is i tell u change now~...
22:49 <Athena_Tennos> : wait done ...i will save chat notes~put in ur queue~
22:50 <kratoz> : ok
22:51 <kratoz> : irc mod means that
22:51 <kratoz> : i have to change it right now (?
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : ye...
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : sor my english is so poor~
22:51 <kratoz> : well
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : ....orz·~
22:51 <kratoz> : no problem xDDD
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : so~
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : what do u want~?
22:51 <kratoz> : well i think i can change it now
22:51 <kratoz> :

22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : ok~
22:51 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:14:534 (5,6) -
22:52 <Athena_Tennos> : sor...i change diff...
22:52 <kratoz> : XDDD!
22:52 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:18:224 (5,1) - distance not uniform~
22:53 <Athena_Tennos> : maybe u can move 1 a little bit~
22:53 <kratoz> : without distance snap (?)
22:54 <Athena_Tennos> : no~
22:54 <Athena_Tennos> : http://puu.sh/C0nc
22:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 5 to 1 distance have 0.84
22:54 <kratoz> : sorry i can't open puu.sh links
22:54 <kratoz> : firewall :@
22:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.
22:55 <Athena_Tennos> : hmm~just move 1 to x:336 y:304
22:55 <kratoz> : done
22:56 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:23:938 (1,2) - a bit overlap~ move a gird left~
22:57 <kratoz> : which x(?
22:57 <kratoz> : 387:y:55 (?
22:58 <kratoz> : or
22:58 <Athena_Tennos> : x:344 y:128
22:58 <kratoz> : ok
22:58 <Athena_Tennos> : xD
22:58 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:26:319 (4) - move to x:344 :256
22:59 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:26:795 (5) - x:280 y:304
22:59 <kratoz> : what the hell
22:59 <kratoz> : it's
22:59 <Athena_Tennos> : =_=
22:59 <kratoz> : x344 y 16
22:59 <kratoz> :

22:59 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.
23:00 <Athena_Tennos> : y:16?~
23:00 <kratoz> : yes lol
23:00 <kratoz> : it says 16
23:00 <kratoz> : wth
23:00 <Athena_Tennos> : orz~
23:00 <Athena_Tennos> : then 00:28:224 (6) - move to x:56 y:224~
23:01 <Athena_Tennos> : this look more beautiful~
23:01 <kratoz> : done
23:01 <kratoz> : ^^
23:02 <Athena_Tennos> : hmmm~~~u need more learn how to put slider~~~slider a little mess
23:02 <Athena_Tennos> : not too beautiful~
23:04 <kratoz> : .__.
23:04 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:39:652 - maybe u can add note to this time point~
23:04 <kratoz> : dude
23:05 <kratoz> : i finally found
23:05 <Athena_Tennos> : =_=
23:05 <kratoz> : x344 y 128
23:05 <kratoz> : XDD
23:05 <kratoz> : excuse me im noob for those things .w.
23:05 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0.
23:06 <Athena_Tennos> : whats up?~
23:06 <kratoz> : so what i do with 00:23:938 (1,2)
23:07 <Athena_Tennos> : u dont need change 00:23:938 (1) - ~~~~~just move 00:25:367 (2) - to x:244 y:128 is fine~
23:07 <Athena_Tennos> : x:344
23:07 <Athena_Tennos> : no 244...sor~
23:09 <kratoz> : 1ok
23:09 <kratoz> : ok*
23:09 <Athena_Tennos> : ·-·
23:09 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:38:224 (11) - change this slider .....look not too beautiful~
23:11 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:44:414 (5) - move to x:376 y:168~
23:11 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:06:794 (3,4) - this distance is so far~
23:14 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:32:508 (1,2) - this overlap is bad....change it~
23:15 <Athena_Tennos> : and 01:33:461 (2,3) - distance is so far....orz~
23:15 <kratoz> : hey
23:15 <kratoz> : what can i do
23:15 <kratoz> : @ 3,4
23:15 <Athena_Tennos> : in easy ~distance need to uniform~
23:15 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:16 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:06:794 (3,4) - ?
23:16 <Athena_Tennos> : this?~
23:16 <kratoz> : yes
23:16 <kratoz> : delete 4
23:16 <kratoz> : and put 3 notes (?
23:16 <Athena_Tennos> : move 4 to x:288 y:304
23:16 <kratoz> :

23:17 <Athena_Tennos> : just move 4 is fine~
23:18 <kratoz> : ok
23:19 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:21:080 (7) - x:104 y:192
23:19 <kratoz> : lol i need
23:19 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:19 <kratoz> : to do better sliders ;W;
23:19 <Athena_Tennos> : lol
23:19 <Athena_Tennos> : hmm..
23:19 <Athena_Tennos> : this u need to look other one map study....
23:20 <kratoz> : for better sliders
23:20 <Athena_Tennos> : ye~
23:20 <kratoz> : which snap divisor (?
23:20 <kratoz> : im using 1/4 right now
23:20 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0~
23:21 <Athena_Tennos> : ye 1/4 is fine~
23:21 <Athena_Tennos> : we usually use 1/4~
23:21 <kratoz> : ok
23:22 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:22:032 (8) - x:104 y:272
23:22 <Athena_Tennos> : im so fast?~....
23:22 <kratoz> : no
23:22 <Athena_Tennos> : ok~
23:25 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:44:413 (6) - x:152 y:232
23:25 <Athena_Tennos> : 01:46:794 (8) - x:472 y:248
23:28 <kratoz> : ok
23:31 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:08:698 (2) - x:144 y:208
23:31 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:09:174 (3) - x:192 y:144
23:32 <kratoz> : ok
23:33 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:25:840 (2) - x:384 y:152
23:33 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:26:793 (3) - x:312 y:296
23:33 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:27:269 (4) - x:256 y:240
23:33 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:27:745 (5) - x:200 y:296
23:33 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:28:697 (6) - x:128 y:152
23:34 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:29:650 (7) - x:256 y:80
23:34 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:30:602 - add spinner to this time point~
23:35 <Athena_Tennos> : end of 02:32:507 - ~
23:35 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:32:507 - delete this slider~
23:36 <kratoz> : ok
23:37 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:47:745 (4) - x:256 y:24
23:38 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:48:697 (5) - x:152 y:144
23:39 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:40:601 (2) - x:176 y:336
23:40 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:41:077 (3) - move to x:256 y:328~then move last point to x:352 y:168
23:40 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:45:839 (9) - x:216 y:280
23:40 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:48:696 (10) - x:256 y:128
23:40 <kratoz> : last point (?)
23:40 <kratoz> : o3o
23:41 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:41 <Athena_Tennos> : last slider point~
23:41 <kratoz> : oh
23:41 <Athena_Tennos> : hmm~
23:41 <kratoz> : make it larger (?
23:41 <Athena_Tennos> : =///=....no~
23:42 <Athena_Tennos> : white a bit point~
23:42 <kratoz> : XDDD
23:42 <kratoz> : yay
23:42 <kratoz> : i did it
23:42 <kratoz> : XDD
23:42 <Athena_Tennos> : orz~sor~idk how to say it~
23:43 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:26:795 (5) - nc~
23:43 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:38:224 (11) - nc~
23:43 <Athena_Tennos> : 00:40:128 (1) - remove nc~
23:44 <kratoz> : hold on
23:44 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:44 <kratoz> : that 11
23:44 <kratoz> : is changed
23:44 <Athena_Tennos> : oh!~
23:44 <Athena_Tennos> : sor~
23:44 <kratoz> : because
23:44 <kratoz> : i deleted that red slider
23:44 <kratoz> : xdd
23:45 <kratoz> : im gonna update ok (?
23:45 <kratoz> : then u can see it better
23:45 <Athena_Tennos> : ok
23:45 <Athena_Tennos> : ~
23:45 <kratoz> : ok
23:45 <kratoz> : update
23:46 <Athena_Tennos> : ye....this good~
23:46 <kratoz> : ^^
23:48 <Athena_Tennos> : hmmmm....in easy u need use only one distance from begin to end.
23:48 <Athena_Tennos> : u muat
23:48 <Athena_Tennos> : must
23:48 <Athena_Tennos> : ...
23:48 <kratoz> : 01:46:794 (8) -
23:48 <kratoz> : lol
23:48 <kratoz> : that 8
23:48 <kratoz> : ;W;
23:49 <kratoz> : i moved it to
23:49 <kratoz> : x432 y 224
23:49 <kratoz> : (?
23:50 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:50 <Athena_Tennos> : dont overlap....
23:51 <kratoz> : its wrong (?)
23:51 <kratoz> : o.o
23:52 <Athena_Tennos> : ye....dont overlap~
23:52 <kratoz> : so
23:52 <kratoz> : where to place it
23:52 <kratoz> : x456 y192
23:52 <Athena_Tennos> : just dont overlap is ok~
23:53 <kratoz> : ok
23:53 <kratoz> : now
23:53 <kratoz> : is it finished? o3o
23:53 <Athena_Tennos> : nope
23:53 <Athena_Tennos> : ~
23:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:36:316 (4) - nc~
23:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:38:221 (1) - remove nc
23:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:40:126 (2) - nc~
23:54 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:38:221 (1) - sor...
23:55 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:38:221 (1) - this nc...
23:55 <kratoz> : ok
23:56 <Athena_Tennos> : 02:40:126 - nc again?~ u decide~
23:56 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:10:601 (7) - nc?~
23:57 <kratoz> : 2:40 nc
23:57 <Athena_Tennos> : ok~
23:57 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:35:363 (4) - nc
23:58 <kratoz> : done~
23:58 <Athena_Tennos> : ·03:41:077 (1) - nc~
23:58 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:44:886 (5) - nc~
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:48:696 - delete note change to spinner
23:59 <kratoz> : 3:41
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:59 <kratoz> : 3:41
23:59 <kratoz> : that's 3
23:59 <kratoz> : a 3 ;_;
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : well..
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : this my mistake...orz
23:59 <Athena_Tennos> : sor~
00:00 <kratoz> : np dude xDD
00:00 <Athena_Tennos> : 03:50:601 - that spinner end of this time~
00:01 <kratoz> : ok
00:01 <kratoz> : now is it finished (?)
00:01 <kratoz> : ;o
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : yer
00:02 <kratoz> : oright
00:02 <kratoz> : i have to go
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : 0.0
00:02 <kratoz> : my mom is angry ;W;
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : ok...
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : orz~
00:02 <kratoz> : thanks for ur help
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : u a wlcome
00:02 <kratoz> : tomorrow u help me with normal (?)
00:02 <kratoz> : D:
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : ok~
00:02 <kratoz> : kk bye
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : i just put in ur queue
00:02 <Athena_Tennos> : beybye

Kryptogram

600 posts

Joined December 2010

Kryptogram 2012-06-19T20:07:38+00:00

Star ~

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-06-20T01:41:09+00:00

In-game request. I'll post my mod once I'm done.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2012-06-20T05:26:47+00:00

Ok.

Overall:
Your timing right now is 126.003. Change it to 126.000
Put your claps on 2 and 4 :>~. It makes the map kawaii~. (Like this =

)
YOUR SPACING. It's not horrible but it's not good at all. Make sure you're consistently mapping with distance snap with a small grid snap

You need a preview point
Make the combo colors the same~
Find a background that is 1024x768

Hard:
00:20:129 (3) - Make this symmetrical :3
00:24:891 (5) - ^
00:41:081 (4) - This slider isn't really kawaii at all. Make it just regular
00:49:652 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Remove these
01:42:032 (5) - Change this slider to look more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347110
02:05:841 (1,2,3) - unfitting slider speed change.
02:09:650 (1) - Make this symmetrical :3
02:24:888 - Map this part
02:39:888 (1) - Make this symmetrical
03:07:744 (4) - Add NC
03:17:268 (4) - Don't make the curve so sharp
03:24:887 (6) - Make this a regular curved slider
03:26:315 - Map this part

Easy:
00:16:319 (3) - Make this symmetrical
01:09:175 - Map this
01:22:032 (8) - Not moe ;~;
01:44:889 (7) - ^
02:38:221 (1) - lower the last sliderpoint
03:06:792 (4) - Make this symmetrical

whee.

Beren

961 posts

Joined September 2009

Beren 2012-06-20T06:58:33+00:00

Hi/

[General]
add preview point
remove .osb
BG size 800X600 or 1024X768
BPM 126
add hard diff
add some hitsounds
OPEN AIMOD change DS

[Easy]
00:22:510 (X) - add note
00:22:986 (X) - add slider end at 00:23:462
02:10:603 (X) - add note
02:11:555 (1) - move to 02:11:079 end at 02:12:031
02:12:507 (X) - add note
02:13:460 (2) - move to 02:12:984 end at 02:13:936
02:25:364 (X) - add note
02:26:317 (X) - ^
02:28:221 (X) - ^
02:28:936 (X) - ^
02:29:174 (X) - ^
02:29:412 (X) - ^
02:29:888 (X) - ^
02:30:126 (X) - ^
02:30:364 (X) - ^
03:10:601 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
00:31:081 (X) - add note
00:39:652 (X) - ^
01:17:270 (1) - end at 01:17:747
01:18:223 (3) - end at 01:18:699
01:41:079 (X) - cut down one turn,end at 01:41:556
02:21:555 (X) - add note
02:33:935 (2) - remove to 02:33:935
02:34:769 (4) - remove to 02:34:888
02:35:721 (6) - remove to 02:35:840
02:47:269 (9) - add one turn
03:10:125 (10) - ^
03:18:220 (X) - add note
03:18:696 (X) - ^
03:34:410 (1) - end at 03:34:887
03:35:363 (3) - end at 03:35:839

GL

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2012-06-20T08:18:26+00:00

from mod req in game

[General]

Offset - 15405
delete OSB file
consider add Kiai Time
set preview point

[Easy]

00:15:438 - delete green line
00:22:986 - add note
00:23:938 (1,2,3) - why suddenly the spacing become so large? this is an Easy diff. such jump will be confuse beginner player.
00:38:224 (1,2,3,4) - continual circles may be confusing for beginners, too. consider replace them with two sliders.
00:39:652 (4,1) - spacing
00:42:509 - add note and replace them(00:42:509 - (2,3,4,5)) with two sliders.
01:06:794 (3,4) - ^
01:29:651 (3) - covered with 01:29:175 (2).
01:32:508 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:36:794 - add note and ~~
01:44:889 (7) - be symmetry like
SPOILER
```
152,312,104889,2,0,B|248:312|296:392|344:312|448:312,1,300
```
01:58:222 (5) - covered with 01:55:365 (3)
01:58:222 (5,1) - spacing (too narrow. be wider)
02:11:555 - delete green line
02:11:555 (1) - end at 02:12:031
02:12:507 - add slider from here to 02:12:984
02:40:126 (1) - be symmetry
02:48:697 (5) - remove note and start break time at 02:47:745
03:06:792 (4) - be symmetry
03:06:792 (4) - 1 grid right
03:45:839 (3) - be symmetry

about combo

SPOILER

00:40:128 (1) - remove NC
00:42:985 (2) - NC
00:43:938 (5) - NC
01:20:127 (5) - NC
01:35:365 (4) - NC
01:37:270 (5) - rmNC
01:39:175 (7) - NC
01:44:889 (5) - NC
02:15:364 (4) - NC
02:28:697 (6) - NC
02:38:221 (1) - rmNC
03:10:601 (1) - rmNC
03:16:316 (4) - NC
03:20:125 (5) - NC
03:21:077 (1) - rmNC
03:37:744 (4) - NC
03:39:172 (1) - rmNC
03:41:077 (6) - NC
03:42:505 (1) - rmNC

[Normal]

00:15:438 - delete green line
00:16:795 (3,4) - should not stack
00:22:986 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:24:414 (4,5) - should not stack
00:26:319 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:28:462 (3,4) - ^
00:30:129 (6,7,8) - ^
00:31:795 (3,4) - ^
00:32:033 (4,1) - ^
00:33:462 (3,4) - ^
00:35:367 (6,1) - should not stack
00:36:795 (2,3) - spacing
00:37:986 (4,5) - ^
00:38:224 (5,6) - should not stack
00:39:652 - add note
00:41:081 (4) - I can't find the path of this slider clearly.
00:41:081 (4,1) - spacing
00:43:462 (3,4,5) - ^
00:44:414 (6,7,8) - ^
00:49:652 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:604 (3,1) - ^
00:51:080 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:842 (1,2) - ^
01:06:556 (2,3,4) - ^
01:16:199 - delete green line
01:17:270 (1,2,3) - the rhythm of these notes may be confuse beginners
01:41:079 (6,7,8) - spacing
01:43:936 (2,1) - ^
01:52:032 (3,4,5) - ^
01:59:174 (6,7,8) - ^
02:09:389 - unsnapped green line. snap to 02:09:412
02:09:650 (5) - sudden speed up is not recommended.
02:11:555 - delete green line
02:30:602 (1,2) - spacing
02:33:816 (2,4,6) - don't put notes on bule line. it's too hard to read rhythm. replace them with sliders.
02:39:173 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:41:078 (5,6,7) - ^
02:42:507 (1,2) - ^
02:46:792 (8,9) - ^
03:10:601 - add note
03:13:458 (3,4,5) - spacing
03:31:553 (1,2) - ^
03:34:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:32:794 - unsnapped green line. snap to 03:32:744

about combo

SPOILER

00:17:272 (4) - NC
00:18:700 (1) - rmNC
00:19:176 (2) - NC
00:25:843 (6) - NC
00:26:319 (1) - rmNC
00:38:224 (5) - NC
00:40:128 (1) - rmNC
00:41:081 (1) - rmNC
00:44:414 (6) - NC
01:16:318 (3) - NC
01:17:270 (1) - rmNC
01:41:079 (6) - NC
02:09:650 (5) - NC
02:39:173 (1) - rmNC
02:40:602 (4) - NC
02:42:507 (1) - rmNC
02:43:935 (3) - NC
03:06:792 (4) - NC
03:15:363 (6) - NC
03:16:316 (1) - rmNC
03:46:791 (5) - NC
03:48:696 (1) - rmNC

overall, I think you should use correct spacing, especially in these for- beginners-diffs.
but if these problems were fixed, your maps will be more better! good luck.

DeeN

380 posts

Joined July 2008

DeeN 2012-06-20T09:20:31+00:00

we can fly~!

SPOILER

[General]

almost problems other modder point out so i dont say it again orz.

[easy]

00:59:771 - move this green line to 01:00:961
01:23:937 (1) - end at 01:27:270
01:33:937 (3) - change it to other silder start at 01:34:413 and end at 01:34:889
01:36:794 - add a circle
02:08:698 (2,3,4) - delete these and add a silder start at 02:08:460 and end at 02:09:650
02:11:555 (1) - this silder broken

02:47:745 (4) - close the distance snap and rigt move 1 in gird level 3
03:37:744 (1) - new combo
03:39:172 (4) - cancel new combo
03:41:077 (1) - new combo
03:42:505 (1) - cancel new combo

[Normal]

spacing not good do further works in it

00:43:938 (5) -delete
00:44:176 - add a circle
01:41:079 (6) - this rhythm not fit here change it
01:50:127 (1) - move it to 01:50:365
01:51:079 (2) - ^ to 01:51:317
02:09:650 (5) - new combo
02:09:389 - move the green line to 02:09:412
02:23:936 (4) - end at 02:24:888
02:41:078 (1) - new combo
03:06:792 (4) - ^
03:15:363 (1) - ^
03:16:316 (2) - cancel new combo
03:18:935 (1) - move it to 03:19:173
03:31:153 - move the green line to 03:31:434
03:32:794 - ^

need do more works especially sounds and spacing
never give up good luck!

Thite

1,043 posts

Joined April 2010

Thite 2012-06-20T11:44:30+00:00

Easy
00:26:319 (4) - this note is bit close from previous note
00:44:414 (5) - try to make this slider looks better
01:05:842 (2) - add clap like you did?
01:07:747 (4) - bit far from previous one
01:35:365 (4) - this note is bit close from previous note
01:37:270 (1) - try to make this slider looks better
01:44:889 (7) - ^
02:30:602 (1) - add finish this spinner?
02:46:792 (3,4,5) - put these notes like symmetry
02:59:292 (1) - start this spinner from 02:59:292 - ?
03:03:935 (1,2,3) - move these notes following center line?
03:10:601 (1) - remove new combo

Normal
00:17:272 (4) - stack this note exactly
00:23:938 (3) - adjust the spacing
00:32:033 (4) - ^
00:41:081 (4) - try to make this slider looks better
00:45:366 (8) - add finish this slider's end
00:52:033 (3,4) - adjust the spacing
01:08:223 (5,6) - ^
01:14:413 (1) - reduce repeats and add notes?
02:02:031 (9) - adjust the spacing

this Normal needs more effort i thought

good luck|

kosiga

1,548 posts

Joined May 2011

kosiga 2012-06-23T07:06:13+00:00

Hi~ kratoz

thank you for the request ~

here my mod~

[General]

Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - Remove the check. (or You really need this?
Song Setup - combo colors - easy'diff no setting? (normal'diff is set) so It is recommended that you also unified easy to normal
Song Setup - Set Preview Point - Easy:69681, Normal:69691. so it is better to unify it ( maybe 69691 @@?
KIAI TIME - Why do you not put kiaitime in normal? I recommend that you match it with easy. and i suggest KIAI TIME move to↓
1st 01:16:357~01:31:595. 2nd 02:32:548~02:47:786. 3rd 03:33:500~03:48:738 ( easy and normal diff )

[Easy]

SPOILER

HD,OD +1. AR+1 or 2 ( Setting is too low because this song is not fast. There is not the problem even if you make it hard a little imo )
00:23:976 (1,2,3,4) - it is better aligned with the DS0.8x
00:28:738 (3) - use copy 00:26:834 (1) is better. http://puu.sh/D0vx
```
100,156,28738,2,0,B|183:72|279:144,1,200,0|0
```
00:32:548 (4) - add NC and 00:34:453 (7) - add NC. ( too long NC in easy diff )
00:43:976 (4) - add NC
01:04:929 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:881 (2) - add NC is better
01:04:929 (1,2) - spacing too far. ( use DS0.8x is better)
01:09:214 (6) - add NC ( too long NC in easy diff )
01:20:167 (5) - ^
01:29:214 (1) - add NC
01:23:976 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D0Fj and http://puu.sh/D0Fq (because it is in kiai time, put more note is interesting.
01:35:405 (5) - add NC and 01:37:310 (1) - remove NC and 01:39:214 (3) - add NC
01:36:357 (7,1) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
01:44:929 (7) - add NC
01:49:691 (4,5) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
01:51:119 (5) - add NC
01:55:405 (3,1) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
02:00:643 (5) - add NC
02:11:555 - Unnecessary green line
02:10:643 (1,2) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
02:14:453 (5) - add NC ( too long NC )
02:26:834 (4) - ^
02:28:738 (7) - ^
03:06:834 (5) - ^
03:11:595~03:12:072 - Better to put something
03:18:262 (6) - add NC. and touch HP bar. ( You should put it not to touch it because it is easy diff ><
03:25:881~03:33:500 - Better to put something.
03:35:881 (5,6) - Rhythm has difficult this for a beginner imo. so add repeat. The rhythm is easier than now
03:39:214 (1) - remove NC and 03:41:119 (3) - add NC and 03:42:548 (1) - remove NC

overall
Volume is too big. especially normalhitsound use all 100% is not recommended.
Please use the hitsound more. too few now

[Normal]

SPOILER

OD +2 ( too low. plz higher than easy.) and HD +1
00:15:367 (1) - Object isn't snapped. plz resnap
00:15:438 - Unnecessary green line
00:17:310 (4) - stack after the slider is difficult in normal diff. I do not recommend this ><
00:23:024 (1,2,3) - plz align the DS
00:24:929 (5) - add NC and 00:26:357 (1) - remove NC
00:28:500 (3,4) - spacing too close. plz use DS0.8x
00:29:214 (4) - add NC
00:30:643 (8,1) - spacing too close. plz use DS0.8x
00:32:072 (4,1) - ^
00:33:500 (3,4) - ^
00:36:834 (2,3) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
00:38:024 (4,5) - ^
00:39:214 (6) - same 00:17:310 (4)
00:40:167 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D18k
00:44:453 (6) - add NC
00:49:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - remove. This place is not much sense. I think that it does not need it
01:05:881 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
01:09:214~01:14:214 - Better to put something
01:14:453 (1,2) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
01:16:199 - Unnecessary green line
01:17:310 (1,2,3,4) - plz align the DS. and 01:17:310 (1,3) - Is it intentional to use the blue line? I recommend rhythm not to push the blue line in normal. so http://puu.sh/D1dI
01:23:024 (6,7) - note after kickslider are difficult in normal diff.
01:27:786 (1) - remove and 01:27:786~01:31:595 - You should put some note to here
01:41:119 (6) - add NC
01:52:072 (3) - ^ ( too long NC )
01:53:976 (7,1) - spacing too close.
01:59:214 (6) - add NC and 01:59:214 (6,7,8,9) - This pattern is very difficult in normal
02:05:841~ - Do you want to really change slider speed? I do not recommend the slider speed change in normal. but If you want to really use it , 02:09:691 (5) - This should slow slider speed, too.
02:09:214 (4,5) - add NC and spacing too far.
02:11:555 - Unnecessary green line
02:24:929~02:30:405 - Better to put something
02:30:643 (1,2,3) - This pattern is very difficult in normal
02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same suggestion 01:17:310 (1,2,3,4)
02:42:548 (1,2) - spacing too close.
02:45:881 (6) - add NC ( too long NC )
02:46:834 (8,9) - spacing too close. and slider end 02:47:786 is better
02:55:405 (1,2,3) - This place is not much sense. I think that it does not need it
03:06:834 (4) - add NC ( too long NC )
03:10:643 - add note is better
03:13:500 (3,4,5) - spacing too far.
03:18:262 - add note is better
03:18:738 - ^
03:23:024 (1) - spinner end 03:25:881. and 03:26:834~03:31:119 - Better to put something
03:34:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - same suggestion 01:17:310 (1,2,3,4)
03:40:167 (6,7) - note after kickslider are difficult in normal diff.
03:46:834 (5) - add NC and 03:48:738 (1) - remove NC
better to align the end. easy:03:50:643. but normal end:03:48:738

overall:
volume and hitsound:same easy diff

Good luck~

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2012-06-24T10:21:45+00:00

Hi~ Banana here from in-game PM

General

suggestions on kiai or disstance snap are mentioned in previous mods, so i'll skip that parts

Easy

seems you only use whistle and finish hitsound, maybe you can add clap on each note at the white ticks between the long white ticks
00:23:976 (1) - you used whistle over the former section, make sure the consistency of hit sound,
02:30:881 - spinner begins at here?
03:48:500 - ^ same issue

Normal

00:18:976 - add a note in consistancy with 00:16:834 (3,4) ?
00:23:738 (2) - same reason as above, i think this note is not necessary, if you really want to add a circle, try 00:22:786
00:31:119 (1) - i think there are some unreasonable break, and this is one of them, maybe you can map some of them
01:24:453 (1) - i don't think here to be a good place to use spinner
01:31:119 - make the spinner end here
02:02:786 - spinner starts at here and ends at 02:04:453 then add a circle at 02:05:405
02:12:310 - spinner starts at here

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2012-06-26T08:33:43+00:00

Hi from chat in-game
General
I think you can use more hit sounds. it's clearly when it to hit the notes.
you should set the same timing of KIAI TIME in all diffs.

on Easy and Normal, you should set same spacing with Distant Snap.
Easy
slider tick rate 2→1 is better
00:15:405(1) add whistle
00:23:024(5)^
00:30:643(1,2) not overlapped is better
00:33:500(2,3)^
01:47:786(1,2)^
03:26:834(1,2,3,4)^
03:30:643(1,2,3)^
00:38:262(1) add whistler at the beginning of slider
01:29:214(1) Distant error
01:37:310(4)^
01:56:834(1)^
01:32:548(1) remove crap and add whistle
02:30:881(1) add finish
02:47:786(5)^

Normal
umm... weird hit sounds. try to set two and four rythem. it means

00:26:595(4) remove crap
00:28:500(3)^
00:38:024(4)^ and more...
01:04:929(5) remove whistle
01:43:976(2) ctr+J?
02:33:024(1,2,3,4,5,6) try this rythem
02:39:691(3) add finish at the end of slider
03:10:643(2) add finish
03:33:500(2)^

ok.
I think your map is good for 1st map

GL

Poggo

1,502 posts

Joined January 2012

Poggo 2012-06-27T12:22:28+00:00

hi ^.^

• Where Hard??? you should make Hard diff///
• kiai times should be identical on all diffs
• plz remove all last red points on sliders

Normal

00:22:072(5) - make this slider more symmetric
00:23:024(1) - 2 grigs down http://puu.sh/E1qh
00:26:357(3,4,5) - correct spacing (here should be 0.8 too)
00:41:119(5) - this slider very ugly and unranked/ make so http://puu.sh/E1sz looks better
00:43:500 - same on 00:26:357
01:03:500(3) - last point on sliders will be white/ and make this slider symmetric http://puu.sh/E1uu
01:06:834(2) - ^
01:08:262 - make this slider double and add finish on big white tick (remove on red)
01:09:691(1) - this slider touch score it's bad. Make this slider horizontal http://puu.sh/E1w9
01:15:881 - remove NC and put NC on start kiai time
01:20:643(4) - make so http://puu.sh/E1x1
01:27:786(4,6) - remove last red point
01:43:024(1,2) - ^
01:42:072(2,3) - correct spacing
01:48:738(3) - remove last red point
01:51:119(2) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/E1Ad
01:56:357(2) - this slider very confusing. batter make so http://puu.sh/E1Br
02:21:119(5) - 1 grid down
02:39:214(1,2,3) - correct spacing (should be 0.8)
02:41:119(1,2,3) - ^
02:46:834(3,4) - ^
03:07:310(2,3,4) - 1 grid up
03:15:405 - NC on next note remove

Hitsounds

On couplet better put 1 clap between 2 bigs white ticks. for example : 00:15:881 , 00:17:786 , 00:19:691 and so on
On kiai time better put claps on white tick to big white tick and after. for example : here 01:16:834 and 01:17:786 and so on

Easy

00:16:357(3,5) - make this sliders more symmetric http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354163
01:09:214(4) - 1 grid up
01:18:262(3) - more symmetric http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354167
01:40:643 - add note
01:42:548 - add note with NC
01:59:214(4) - same on 01:18:262
02:34:453 - ^
02:40:167(1) - ^
02:42:072(1) - repeat very hides. for easy it's dificulty reading. change it

Hitsounds

The same on normal.

This map need more work~~ good luck)

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2012-06-28T10:13:14+00:00

If you want I can make a Hard diff. for you kratoz, I love this song.

GreyWarrior

68 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

GreyWarrior 2012-07-22T18:58:24+00:00

bueno ya casi termino la hard sorry :/

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-07-24T20:51:53+00:00

Va a ser interesante modear esto, dejame que me ocupe a la noche.

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2012-07-26T12:54:44+00:00

[General]

..you need rehitsound all diffs. your hitsound too less and cannot feel rhythm while playing.
a easy hitsound way is to put clap at 2/4 short white line and finish at music part ends.

[Easy]

01:44:929 (1) - remove NC
02:38:262 (1) - ^
..why so much kiai times here..

[Normal]

02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard to read..dont put blue-lined notes in a [Normal] diff plz :>

[Hard]

00:22:548 - +note
00:30:643 (9) - NC
00:31:119 (1) - remove NC
00:32:548 (4) - NC
00:33:024 (1) - remove NC
00:43:500 (1) - ^
00:43:976 (2) - NC
01:03:024 (5) - ^
01:03:738 (1) - remove NC
01:06:595 (1) - ^
01:06:834 (2) - NC
01:14:214 (1) - remove NC
01:14:453 (2) - NC
..try to set your NC to long white line plz
01:49:929 (9,10) - hard to read. move them out of stack.
02:17:310 (5) - NC here.
02:18:738 (1) - remove NC.
02:19:214 (3) - NC here.
02:20:405 (1) - remove NC.
03:21:357 (4) - make it stack with the end of 03:20:167 (1) -
03:25:881 (7) - NC
03:26:357 (1) - remove NC
03:28:976 (1) - ^
03:29:691 (4) - NC
03:31:595 (1) - remove NC
03:39:214 (7) - NC
03:39:929 (1) - remove NC

nothing serious mistake in placements. all diffs feeling well while playing

so try to fix your hitsounds and NCs.
GL ♥

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2012-07-26T14:52:14+00:00

from IRC chat~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
Kiai mode's start ;
01:15:881→01:16:357,
02:32:072→02:32:548,
03:33:024→03:33:500
If you make long slider, I suggest you use more than 2 midpoint for visual of it.

[Easy]
01:13:500 (1) - start=01:12:786
01:42:548 (1) - 1 grid down
02:47:786 - delete kiai mode
03:48:500 (1) - fade out(volume down with inherited points)

[Normal]
00:35:643 - remove clap
00:35:881 - add clap
01:15:882 (1,2) - change NC
01:23:024 - remove clap
01:23:262 - remove clap
01:42:072 (2,3) - too short distance
02:32:548 (3,1) - change NC
02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too difficult rhythm for Normal.
03:33:024 (1,2) - change NC

[Hard]
01:16:000 (6) - delete circle(not match the sound)
02:32:548 (3) - NC
02:39:214 (4) - add NC?(3 and 4 is too short distance...)
03:21:357 (4) - stack before slider
03:33:143 (6) - delete circle.

Good luck!!

TTTTTTTTTTTT

1,116 posts

Joined August 2009

TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-07-28T18:24:29+00:00

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

Add more hitsounds?
but it's not bad at all!!www

[Easy]

Turn up the volume like normal

00:38:262 - remove sliderwhistle

[Normal]

00:33:500 - move 1 grid left (lv4)
00:38:262 - remove sliderwhistle
03:07:310 - remove clap it's isolated

[Hard]

00:25:167~00:26:119 - It would be better to use 1.0x
00:44:929 - move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
02:32:548 - add a NC
03:33:550 - add a finish
03:41:119 - add a NC
03:44:929 - ^

Good luck!!!

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-08-10T19:31:19+00:00

In-Game Request ! (Your map needs 12+ star priority btw):

General
-> Make your sliders and patterns nicer.
-> Add more hitsounds!
-> Always pay attention to your spacing when mapping and when fixing someone's mods.

Easy
--> Some parts of the map feels empty. Try adding some whistles/claps on upbeats (2nd and 4th White ticks). For example, 00:23:976 - 00:43:976 and 01:33:500 - 02:00:643 feels empty because it lacks hitsounds. There are other places too.
Make the patterns nicer. Like this:

SPOILER

152,56,15405,1,2
88,104,15881,1,0
96,184,16357,2,0,B|200:256|288:152,1,200,2|2

00:19:691 (1,2,3,4) - ^

SPOILER

320,312,19691,5,0
264,368,20167,1,0
200,320,20643,1,0
136,272,21119,2,0,B|24:272,2,100,0|0|0

00:26:834 (1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

288,296,26834,6,0,B|272:344|208:360|144:344|128:296,1,200,0|0
88,224,28262,1,0
127,152,28738,2,0,B|144:104|208:88|272:104|288:152,1,200,0|0

00:30:643 (1) - 2 grids down.
00:40:167 (1,2,3,1) - Why is the spacing 0.9x here? Your previous patterns have 0.8x spacing.
00:43:976 (1,2) - Here, you went back to 0.8x spacing.
1:00:961 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. It should be at 01:01:119.
02:10:643 (1,2,3,4) - I thought this pattern looks cooler XD:

SPOILER

232,296,210643,5,0
304,256,211119,1,0
376,216,211595,1,0
344,144,212072,2,0,B|296:40|296:40|200:40,1,200
80,96,213500,6,0,B|80:200,1,100,4|0

02:14:453 (1) - Readjust this slider a bit. It looks distorted.
02:17:310 (4) - Change this slider to a circle, so it's consistent with your previous break time. Also, add finish on this circle.
03:12:548 (1) - Angle this slider a bit so it is not touching the HP drain bar.
03:14:453 (3) - Symmetical with 03:12:548 (1).
03:21:119 (1,3) - These sliders are not symmetical. Make it symmetical. Like this:

SPOILER

192,200,201119,6,0,B|200:320|80:344,2,200
256,152,203500,1,0
320,200,203976,2,0,B|312:320|432:344,2,200

03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Normal
--> HP Drain +1.
01:07:786 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:15:882 (1,2,3) - You could make these symmetrical.
01:21:595 (1,2,3) - ^
01:42:072 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:09:691 (5) - New combo?
02:32:548 (3,1) - Switch their combos around.
03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Hard
--> Remove the following from .osu file: Video,0,"Titanium.avi"

03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Map needs a lot of work overall. Get more mods from people, then ask me for a recheck.

For

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2012-08-11T05:06:08+00:00

Hello,my english is not good,so,my grammar has some errors...

Generally,2 and 4 add clap.

Hard
AR6→7 is better

00:24:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is too near...I don't think this is very good
00:40:167 (8) - I don't think two note here is good
01:01:119 - add inherited points use soft is better
01:11:595 - and add inherited points here use normal and vol use 70%
01:23:738 (4) - add whistle (use soft whistle in 2 and 4)
01:28:024 (7) - add new combo
01:29:691 (10) - add new combo
01:47:310 (6) - add note
02:04:453 - inherited points use soft here
02:19:214 (1) - so far

02:20:881 (7,8) - i don't think good,change it
02:35:405 (3) - slider tail add clap
02:36:714 - here use whistle
02:37:667 - ↑
03:33:262 (7) - remove slider finish,slider tail add finish
03:36:596 (5) - slider head add clap

hope it helpful for you

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