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騙kds的來了

[General]
  • - 打開記事本把所有難度Offset修改成整數, 目前為"1401.00093632959"
    - sliderarrow.png, default-comma~x.png都不需要


[Easy]
  • - 音效聽著比較混亂…或者我沒有聽清楚你下的方式, 舉幾個我覺得奇怪的例子
00:27:018 (3,4) - 這邊我會覺得 none-whistle-finish-whistle合適一些
00:51:288 (2,3) - (2)結尾開始 finish-whistle
01:35:783 (3) - 第二折返whistle, 之類

02:17:580 (5) - 打圖時其實挺不習慣一向3連slider後, 突然接一個5連的…雖然不太重要=v=



[Star Stream's]
  • - Hey Star Stream -w-~
01:16:906 - Kinda loud sliderslide D: Can you use a lower volume or switch this part to SC1?
03:08:379 (2) - I'd wonder it isn't placed on a right beat but, meh...Maybe try move it here: 03:08:463 - , though it'll be a little off (late)



[Hard]
  • - 目測比上一張(spirit)善良了!
00:16:906 (2) - 其實結尾的finish有點點點多餘

進步了=v= 目測沒什麼好挑的



[WTFTaiko]
  • - 太鼓什麼的人家才不會mod呢, offset記得改好TvT
Frostmourne
Mod :3 ~~~~~~~


Easy
I think -1 ar is better (test by my newbie friend)
01:58:030 (2) - it looks not good for me , from its tail nearly touch 01:54:659 (1) - , move its tail 1 right grid ?
01:59:378 (3) - if you did ^ , I think move this note to x:168 y:304 instead , according to (2)
02:17:580 (5) - a bit confuse for beginner


Star's Normal
00:41:850 (x) - for me , add this note please , it sounds very obviously, feel empty =_=a


Hard
01:08:142 (5) - add new combo ? , according to piano's accent sound
01:18:254 (3) - sorry for nazi , move its tail 1 grid up , its tail touched 01:16:906 (1) - , It's not beautiful for me :p

really really beautiful SB , song , note

Good luck for ranking ! S h i a :D
Star Stream
lovhin456
Hello, sorry for the huge delay ...

[Song's Info]
- Source: Are you sure this doesn't come from anywhere ?

[General]
- Are you sure about the timing ? I'm not good at it so I suggests you to check it with someone who is an expert

[Skin]
- I'm sorry in advance but I'm going to be very picky with your skin and point all the things I dislike/disagree with but these are just opinions except for some that are a must
- Reduce cursor trail to a 1x1 png to save space
- Default numbers 6, 7 and 8 are not well centered, you can clearly see it when playing
- Default comma, dot, percent and x are not necessary and should be removed. This is because they don't affect the looks of the skin at all, only score ones do
- Reduce slider point 10 and 30 to a 1x1 png to save space
- I'm not very sure about that spinner circle, I mean yes it does give me something to look for to know if I'm spinning or not but I don't know if it is noticeable enough
- It would be nice if you added score numbers too
- It would be nice and it is highly recommended to add a pause overlay, fail background, pause buttons (pause-continue, pause-back, pause-retry)
- You have to add a play-skip too
- You mention that the map is better when you don't use combo burst, you can force this if you add a 1x1 transparent png image named comboburst.png to your folder. When you do this the combo burst will automatically be this 1x1 png

[Easy]
- Since this is such a slow song and the slider velocity is really calm I'd suggest AR -1, I feel like it suits the feeling that the song is trying to give more than the current AR but this is a suggestion so do as you like
- 00:37:805 >> Try using normal finish 20~30% volume, it sounds quite nice and fits
- 00:39:827 >> New combo
- 00:45:221 >> ^
- 01:04:097 >> I strongly suggest that you add a note but it's ok if you don't this too
- 01:16:906 >> Here too, a normal finish with 50~60% volume sounds very nice
- 01:30:389 >> New combo
- 01:38:479 >> Again, a normal finish sounds better in my opinion
- 01:43:872 >> Whistles should only go on the start and second reverse arrow in my opinion
- 01:58:704 >> Add a whistle
- 01:59:378 >> It may be good to use a normal finish here with 30~40& volume instead of the whistle
- 02:35:108 >> Normal finish 50~60% volume sounds awesome

[Star's Normal]
- 00:37:805 >> Same as Easy
- 01:02:075 >> I think you should delete this note, it plays and feels better this way imo
- 01:04:434 >> Add a note
- 01:16:906 >> Same as Easy
- 01:24:996 >> New combo
- 01:38:479 >> Same as Easy
- 01:59:378 >> A normal finish with 30~40% volume sounds better
- 02:05:783 >> New combo
- 02:11:513 >> ^
- 02:16:906 >> ^
- 02:21:962 >> ^
- 02:38:479 >> ^
- 03:06:550 >> Reduce volume to 10%
- 03:14:534 >> ^ and add a whistle

[Hard]
- 00:17:243 >> The slider should end here, you can clearly hear the sound of the piano (I think here) so it makes more sense to end the slider here
- 00:19:940 >> Start the slider here, same reasons as above
- 00:22:805 >> Add a note to follow the music more
- 00:37:805 >> Same as Easy
- 00:40:165 >> End the slider here
- 01:16:906 >> Same as Easy
- 01:23:479 >> Add a note
- 01:38:479 >> Same as Easy
- 01:43:872 >> Add whistle on the start
- 01:44:547 >> The whistle should go on the end
- 01:45:729 >> Add whistle
- 01:46:569 (1,3,5) >> Add whistle on the start
- 02:02:749 >> Reduce the volume to 20~30%
- 02:13:535 >> A normal finish with 30~40% volume would sound good
- 02:35:108 >> ^
- 02:44:378 >> Start the slider (3) here but end on the same spot as before
- 02:15:559 >> Use 15% volume

[Wmf's Taiko]
- I'm not very sure but aren't breaks in taiko difficulties not allowed ? Around 02:00:052 there's a break

Very nice overall
Star Stream
http://puu.sh/sgwK
somethings changed but i'd like to stick my soft-finish sounds
Topic Starter
S h i a

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, sorry for the huge delay ... xD~ sorry for late reply

[Song's Info]
- Source: Are you sure this doesn't come from anywhere ? source is blank, it's ok

[General]
- Are you sure about the timing ? I'm not good at it so I suggests you to check it with someone who is an expert comfirmed timing with Faust, He is pro at it.

[Skin]
- I'm sorry in advance but I'm going to be very picky with your skin and point all the things I dislike/disagree with but these are just opinions except for some that are a must
- Reduce cursor trail to a 1x1 png to save space Done
- Default numbers 6, 7 and 8 are not well centered, you can clearly see it when playing Done
- Default comma, dot, percent and x are not necessary and should be removed. This is because they don't affect the looks of the skin at all, only score ones do I'd like to keep Default comma, dot, percent and x :D
- Reduce slider point 10 and 30 to a 1x1 png to save space Done
- I'm not very sure about that spinner circle, I mean yes it does give me something to look for to know if I'm spinning or not but I don't know if it is noticeable enough It's OK tho
- It would be nice if you added score numbers too
- It would be nice and it is highly recommended to add a pause overlay, fail background, pause buttons (pause-continue, pause-back, pause-retry) as score numbers and pause-continue, pause-back pause-retry I would like to keep them defaut. players can use their own skin or defaut skin to play it.
- You have to add a play-skip too Done
- You mention that the map is better when you don't use combo burst, you can force this if you add a 1x1 transparent png image named comboburst.png to your folder. When you do this the combo burst will automatically be this 1x1 png Done

[Easy]
- Since this is such a slow song and the slider velocity is really calm I'd suggest AR -1, I feel like it suits the feeling that the song is trying to give more than the current AR but this is a suggestion so do as you like Ok
- 00:37:805 >> Try using normal finish 20~30% volume, it sounds quite nice and fits OK
- 00:39:827 >> New combo OK
- 00:45:221 >> ^ OK
- 01:04:097 >> I strongly suggest that you add a note but it's ok if you don't this too no change :D
- 01:16:906 >> Here too, a normal finish with 50~60% volume sounds very nice OK
- 01:30:389 >> New combo OK
- 01:38:479 >> Again, a normal finish sounds better in my opinion OK
- 01:43:872 >> Whistles should only go on the start and second reverse arrow in my opinion no change here.
- 01:58:704 >> Add a whistle OK
- 01:59:378 >> It may be good to use a normal finish here with 30~40& volume instead of the whistle OK
- 02:35:108 >> Normal finish 50~60% volume sounds awesome Yep.

[Star's Normal]
- 00:37:805 >> Same as Easy
- 01:02:075 >> I think you should delete this note, it plays and feels better this way imo
- 01:04:434 >> Add a note
- 01:16:906 >> Same as Easy
- 01:24:996 >> New combo
- 01:38:479 >> Same as Easy
- 01:59:378 >> A normal finish with 30~40% volume sounds better
- 02:05:783 >> New combo
- 02:11:513 >> ^
- 02:16:906 >> ^
- 02:21:962 >> ^
- 02:38:479 >> ^
- 03:06:550 >> Reduce volume to 10%
- 03:14:534 >> ^ and add a whistle

[Hard]
- 00:17:243 >> The slider should end here, you can clearly hear the sound of the piano (I think here) so it makes more sense to end the slider here the slider ends follow the drum~ this part was mapped by my own understanding,so I'm not follow piano here.
- 00:19:940 >> Start the slider here, same reasons as above yep. so no change.
- 00:22:805 >> Add a note to follow the music more Ok
- 00:37:805 >> Same as Easy OK
- 00:40:165 >> End the slider here Same reason as above.
- 01:16:906 >> Same as Easy OK
- 01:23:479 >> Add a note OK
- 01:38:479 >> Same as Easy OK
- 01:43:872 >> Add whistle on the start OK
- 01:44:547 >> The whistle should go on the end OK
- 01:45:729 >> Add whistle K
- 01:46:569 (1,3,5) >> Add whistle on the start No change here. I d like to keep it.
- 02:02:749 >> Reduce the volume to 20~30% OK
- 02:13:535 >> A normal finish with 30~40% volume would sound good OK
- 02:35:108 >> ^ OK
- 02:44:378 >> Start the slider (3) here but end on the same spot as before no change.
- 02:15:559 >> Use 15% volume :D? no change atm

[Wmf's Taiko]
- I'm not very sure but aren't breaks in taiko difficulties not allowed ? Around 02:00:052 there's a break no breaks in taiko diff is OK

Very nice overall
Thank you lovhin~:D
LKs
shiashia

[General]

  1. AImod说的 既然是冷色系不妨顺手放默认换颜色的进来? Missing Skin Files spinner-background.png spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png
  2. 这怎么回事lol 你是把一些osuskin的素材拖进文件夹了吧 这些都可以删 default对应的是note上的数字不是分数所以 default-comma.png default-dot.png default-percent.png default-x.png sliderarrow.png
[Hard]

Snapping 03:00:052 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Normal]

Snapping 02:59:378 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

由于种种原因先stop here

明天补完 >.+

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[Easy]

00:59:378 (1) - 音效略奇怪 slider略过了略多

[Star's Normal]

fine

[Hard]

02:22:805 (3) - 间距
02:47:243 (1) - nazi
432,96,167243,6,0,B|384:52|324:52|276:100,1,165.749997036159,4|0
02:48:591 (3,4) - 还有诸如这种的我就复制粘贴+翻折什么的了
03:00:052 (2) - 放到232 154? http://puu.sh/yWWK
03:08:379 (3) - 这note是想合钢琴?感觉略早了 而且和normal位置还不一样

[Taiko]

想mod一下 但发现你这图的下法是随着歌曲扬抑做的 我比较喜欢下怎么说 跟着感觉怎么舒服怎么走的红蓝下法 so不会mod了
不过这break是故意放的么 这么短不应该加?

果断这图够干净
Topic Starter
S h i a

LKs wrote:

shiashia

[General]

  1. AImod说的 既然是冷色系不妨顺手放默认换颜色的进来? Missing Skin Files spinner-background.png spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png
  2. 这怎么回事lol 你是把一些osuskin的素材拖进文件夹了吧 这些都可以删 default对应的是note上的数字不是分数所以 default-comma.png default-dot.png default-percent.png default-x.png sliderarrow.png
[Hard]

Snapping 03:00:052 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Normal]

Snapping 02:59:378 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).

由于种种原因先stop here

明天补完 >.+

---------------

[Easy]

00:59:378 (1) - 音效略奇怪 slider略过了略多

[Star's Normal]

fine

[Hard]

02:22:805 (3) - 间距
02:47:243 (1) - nazi
432,96,167243,6,0,B|384:52|324:52|276:100,1,165.749997036159,4|0
02:48:591 (3,4) - 还有诸如这种的我就复制粘贴+翻折什么的了
03:00:052 (2) - 放到232 154? http://puu.sh/yWWK
03:08:379 (3) - 这note是想合钢琴?感觉略早了 而且和normal位置还不一样

[Taiko]

想mod一下 但发现你这图的下法是随着歌曲扬抑做的 我比较喜欢下怎么说 跟着感觉怎么舒服怎么走的红蓝下法 so不会mod了
不过这break是故意放的么 这么短不应该加?

果断这图够干净
:D alright
LKs
YE

Had a irc mod the last night. issues fixed:

skin elements (resize combo 300/100/500; integrated spin related skins)
some mapping details (recovery time of combo after spinner; unsnapped sldiers)

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[Hard]

232,154,180052,2,0,B|288:170|320:130|320:130|276:202|324:288,1,256
找到这串代码覆盖过去

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Topic Starter
S h i a

LKs wrote:

YE

Had a irc mod the last night. issues fixed:

skin elements (resize combo 300/100/500; integrated spin related skins)
some mapping details (recovery time of combo after spinner; unsnapped sldiers)

-------------

[Hard]

232,154,180052,2,0,B|288:170|320:130|320:130|276:202|324:288,1,256
找到这串代码覆盖过去

--------------

Done. sorry for my careless.
LKs
changelog:

resize combo 300/100/50 pic again
fixed all unsnapped sliders
some hitsound revisions

Bubbled

I can't say this is perfect in all aspects, but let's enjoy the atmosphere


EDIT: popped because the manually changed length slider can't be 300ed ):

finding solution

EDIT2:

solution:

I checked the timing sections, found that some uninherited lines could be removed, and the problem can be solved

180757→X
180400→X
181791→181777
187938→X

[hard]

364,220,181447,2,0,B|360:172|396:144,1,81,2|2
这次覆盖这个code
应该没了

今天略困 电脑没电 明天跟你来再check一次
Topic Starter
S h i a

LKs wrote:

changelog:

resize combo 300/100/50 pic again
fixed all unsnapped sliders
some hitsound revisions

Bubbled

I can't say this is perfect in all aspects, but let's enjoy the atmosphere

xie xie LKs da da :D


Edit: timing section fixed in all diff.
LKs
怎么我这看着还没改..wmf的难度红线一看就不一样 然后03:01:447 (3) - 这个也是

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/55305 你下载了AIBAT后自己检查一下
IchiGUN
Awesome map! Go go rank ~
;)
LKs
all things fixed
Garven
o/

[Storyboard]
01:59:378 - Check the right side of the screen. There's a tiny bit of a bright stripe of the next image that's loaded.

[Easy]
01:07:468 (3,1,2) - Look really misaligned
01:17:580 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:12:524 (1) - These super-short sliders with odd number of repeats on them can be confusing as to when they will end for new players. I'd recommend you think of something else with these. There are others in the map that you should address.

[Normal]
00:28:367 (4) - This could look a lot better.
01:05:445 (2,3,4) - Better to use a slider for this kind of rhythm in a Normal.
01:32:412 - Weird to have the sliderslide sound suddenly go away

[Hard]
AR/HP -1?
01:11:176 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking.
01:38:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sound so much better snapped properly to 1/6
There are other places that 1/6 could be used better too, but I wonder if it wouldn't work as well due to your strong following of the percussion.
Topic Starter
S h i a

Garven wrote:

o/

[Storyboard]
01:59:378 - Check the right side of the screen. There's a tiny bit of a bright stripe of the next image that's loaded. FIIIIIIIIIIIIXED

[Easy]
01:07:468 (3,1,2) - Look really misaligned Fixed
01:17:580 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty. ehw. any good suggestion?
02:12:524 (1) - These super-short sliders with odd number of repeats on them can be confusing as to when they will end for new players. I'd recommend you think of something else with these. There are others in the map that you should address. I think it's ok to new players who have more than 10 play counts in total. otherwise I don't have good idear for that.

[Normal]
00:28:367 (4) - This could look a lot better. fixed
01:05:445 (2,3,4) - Better to use a slider for this kind of rhythm in a Normal. Fixed
01:32:412 - Weird to have the sliderslide sound suddenly go away fixed

[Hard]
AR/HP -1? AR stay 8 better to me. :D HP-1 now
01:11:176 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking. Fixed?
01:38:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sound so much better snapped properly to 1/6
There are other places that 1/6 could be used better too, but I wonder if it wouldn't work as well due to your strong following of the percussion.I d like to keep those :P
LKs
rebubbled~
Garven
Beautiful. This is an excellent departing gift, Shia. Take care in your travels abroad, and always look forward to the new day.

Ranked!
Midasmens
Congrats~ >3<
kanpakyin
終於rank了 恭喜

edit: 2222 post
Kanari
Congrats ~ >w<
Mythol
gratz guys~
:) :)
Scorpiour
congrats~~~
vizzy
This map is so good. @_@ Congrats.
mosluv
Good job! So relaxing <3
Quilt
congratz!!
AoiX
大快人心!
Frostmourne
Congrazzz S h i a :3
vivicat
:)
Topic Starter
S h i a
Thank you guys. I will miss you. ;)
birra
OH YAY SHIA'S MAP AGAIN!!! *//////*
*DL this immediately*
Kite
congrats shia!
glad its ranked now
kosiga
gratz Shia :333
hoLysoup
哇~ 夏
IchiGUN
Congrats S h i a :oops:
Meowcenaries
grats
Thite
:)
phonic
Congrats \:D/
SingleGreent
Lovely map <3
I wonder who's the artist for the pics. They are very pretty :)
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