Garven wrote:

I can't resist yanaginagi <3 Me too<3

[General]
Do you think you can reduce the quality of the BG? Just saving it to .jpg will save a lot of space, considering it's taking up 1.6 MB right now.
Oh it's actually too large. Saved as .jpg~
[Love]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. Umm...I feel tick sound doesn't fit this song well...(fits nicely in soft-hitsound part, but not so much in normal-hitsound part.)
00:49:694 (2,3,4,1,2) - <3 <3
01:47:525 (2,2) - This one wasn't as much <3 because the return stack position changed and it didn't have the same impact. Changed formation~
03:52:544 - I would have loved a slight increase in slider velocity here. It would drive home the key change and would make it that much more epic. That's true! Changed SV to 1.20x here.

Nice work here. Let me know your thoughts!

1. Everything looks clear.

1. 00:03:971 (1) - I guess a whistle here sounds much better :3 becuase it fits the music.
2. 00:10:115 (5) - I would reduce the spacing between (4)- and (5)- to make the spacing looks more consistent between (3)- and (5)- like this:
   
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3. 00:31:440 (3) - I knew that you were doing a symmetry here but I thought it would be much better to follow the vocal here because you were following the vocal from 00:27:826 - to 00:30:537 - and 00:32:163 - to 00:33:338 - , so I guess it should be consistency.
4. 01:16:983 ~ 01:19:603 (x) - I have a little hitsounds suggestion here.I would change to normal hitsound at 01:17:344 - , 01:18:067 - , 01:18:790 - ,01:19:513 - to fit the drum sounds.I guess something like 40% volume with normal hitsound is good enough.
5. 01:40:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Would you change to another pattern if possible?I have seen this kind of pattern(similar) in this map before, so a new pattern can make more fun to player.
6. 02:29:040 (3) - hum..I an wondering this shoud be snapping in 1/3 or 1/4.I prefer 1/3 because when I put the playback rate to 25% it sounds 1/3 fit the music much better.
7. 04:02:123 (4,5) - Probably make a jump here? It would sound great to me if you can put it like this and it can make more fun to player.
   
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kanpakyin wrote:

ok.Since this is going to approval.So I'm here.All my words stand in suggestions.

[General]

1. Everything looks clear.

[Love]

1. 00:03:971 (1) - I guess a whistle here sounds much better :3 becuase it fits the music. Sounds better. Fixed!
2. 00:10:115 (5) - I would reduce the spacing between (4)- and (5)- to make the spacing looks more consistent between (3)- and (5)- like this: Fixed.
   
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3. 00:31:440 (3) - I knew that you were doing a symmetry here but I thought it would be much better to follow the vocal here because you were following the vocal from 00:27:826 - to 00:30:537 - and 00:32:163 - to 00:33:338 - , so I guess it should be consistency. I agreed. Fixed~
4. 01:16:983 ~ 01:19:603 (x) - I have a little hitsounds suggestion here.I would change to normal hitsound at 01:17:344 - , 01:18:067 - , 01:18:790 - ,01:19:513 - to fit the drum sounds.I guess something like 40% volume with normal hitsound is good enough. Changed hitsound~
5. 01:40:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Would you change to another pattern if possible?I have seen this kind of pattern(similar) in this map before, so a new pattern can make more fun to player. I see your point, but I think this pattern fits the best here, so I want to keep it.
6. 02:29:040 (3) - hum..I an wondering this shoud be snapping in 1/3 or 1/4.I prefer 1/3 because when I put the playback rate to 25% it sounds 1/3 fit the music much better. Oh, you're right. Fixed.
7. 04:02:123 (4,5) - Probably make a jump here? It would sound great to me if you can put it like this and it can make more fun to player. Good suggestion! Fixed.
   
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Let me know what you think.