Hi you~ took me a while.... got distracted :p
[Sherrie__Sola]
You have some awkward short combos there, like....
00:01:716 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:05:144 (1) - ^
00:08:573 (1) - ^
00:12:001 (1) - ^
00:12:001 (1) - ^
00:13:716 (8,1) - make these two one combo like this http://puu.sh/xnMZ fits the music better, you could do this to the other that sounds like this, idk if you like
00:16:716 (1) - remove new combo
you'll maybe would want to check your combos in the whole map, to make them more even
00:22:287 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - on this part are understandable the short combos
00:41:574 - combos at this part are more even ^^
03:30:216 (5) - this jump wasn't too predictable
03:53:144 (5) - new combo
03:59:359 (4,1,2) - according to prev pattern, these should be in the same combo, you'll need to fix spacing after changes
01:25:716 (1) - don't see the need of this single combo here
01:29:144 (1) - same
[PoLKs]
a bit random your combo pattern at the begging but if you change it would be even more messy bacause of the beat placement on chart, so i guess is ok as it is.
02:07:074 (4) - this slider is a bit hidden by prevs hit burst, fix that plz
03:42:431 (4) - fix that wrong spacing, looks bad
03:45:860 (4) - fix spacing here too
03:46:288 (1) - this looks kinda bad, looks like a bad stack
[AgneSushi]
00:24:431 (1) - the overlap with 00:22:931 (3) - looks kinda bad, maybe if you flip it horizontally in that same position would look better
02:47:788 (4) - try this, i think fits better http://puu.sh/xoIM
04:06:217 (4) - this is a bit confusing, since it looks like is spaced at 1/2 beat. Try to not place it right beside the slider.
Nice maps and lovely song <3
[Sherrie__Sola]
You have some awkward short combos there, like....
00:01:716 (1) - remove new combo here?
00:05:144 (1) - ^
00:08:573 (1) - ^
00:12:001 (1) - ^
00:12:001 (1) - ^
00:13:716 (8,1) - make these two one combo like this http://puu.sh/xnMZ fits the music better, you could do this to the other that sounds like this, idk if you like
00:16:716 (1) - remove new combo
you'll maybe would want to check your combos in the whole map, to make them more even
00:22:287 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - on this part are understandable the short combos
00:41:574 - combos at this part are more even ^^
03:30:216 (5) - this jump wasn't too predictable
03:53:144 (5) - new combo
03:59:359 (4,1,2) - according to prev pattern, these should be in the same combo, you'll need to fix spacing after changes
01:25:716 (1) - don't see the need of this single combo here
01:29:144 (1) - same
[PoLKs]
a bit random your combo pattern at the begging but if you change it would be even more messy bacause of the beat placement on chart, so i guess is ok as it is.
02:07:074 (4) - this slider is a bit hidden by prevs hit burst, fix that plz
03:42:431 (4) - fix that wrong spacing, looks bad
03:45:860 (4) - fix spacing here too
03:46:288 (1) - this looks kinda bad, looks like a bad stack
[AgneSushi]
00:24:431 (1) - the overlap with 00:22:931 (3) - looks kinda bad, maybe if you flip it horizontally in that same position would look better
02:47:788 (4) - try this, i think fits better http://puu.sh/xoIM
04:06:217 (4) - this is a bit confusing, since it looks like is spaced at 1/2 beat. Try to not place it right beside the slider.
Nice maps and lovely song <3