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Aoba Ringo - Asgardh (Short Ver.) [Taiko|Osu]

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Miya
Sorry, nothing changed >.<
But thank you for the mod~
Suimya
fixed one spacing, thanks for modding :3

http://puu.sh/yTyB
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hi

Sekai's Easy

00:06:864 - The green timing is useless,you ought to use previous red timing point to adjust volume.
00:47:201 - The timing is useless.

Other seems fine to me.

Imo,01:10:107~01:13:350 - like shown below

http://puu.sh/yVxg


Normal

fine.


Miya's Hard

01:16:796 - remove finish,I don't think there needs a loud hitsound.At least,turn the volume down.

Insane

fine.

Good luck!
Kurokami

General

  1. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
    - [Insane] : 0
    - [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
    - [Miya's Hard] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Sekai's Easy] : 0

Sekai's Easy

  1. OD +1
  2. 00:27:945 (3) - 1 grid right [nazy]
  3. 00:35:647 (1) - 1 grid up [nazy]
  4. 00:44:161 (3) - 1 grid up [nazy]

Normal

  1. OD +1
  2. seems good~

i_k's Taiko

  1. The taiko is okay, but here are some suggestions.
  2. 00:18:620 (1) - Why the big note? I think a normal one is better here.
  3. 00:37:674 (1) - Big don?
  4. 00:44:161 (1) - ^
  5. 01:20:445 (3) - Kat?
  6. 01:21:863 (2) - ^

Miya's Hard

  1. 00:26:222 (9) - maybe delete? I tried several times, but I always just click here 2 times. ._.
  2. 00:58:553 (5) - slider until 00:58:755? sounds better to me

Insane

  1. 00:29:566 (1) - 1 grid down, this ways it will be stacked with 00:28:350 (2)
Since its too good to me, I give you a star too. :3
jossieP

Kurokami wrote:

i_k's Taiko

  1. The taiko is okay, but here are some suggestions.
  2. 00:18:620 (1) - Why the big note? I think a normal one is better here. but double big don with 00:18:215 (1), then normal dons 00:19:026 (1,2) and again big don 00:19:836 (1), has a nice effect I think <:
  3. 00:37:674 (1) - Big don? why not, nice effect, thanks
  4. 00:44:161 (1) - ^ want to keep this 00:44:161 (1,2,1,2), as normal notes
  5. 01:20:445 (3) - Kat? oh that guitar accord, thanks
  6. 01:21:863 (2) - ^ also applied to next note
Edit:
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Insane] : 0
- [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
- [Miya's Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0
- [Sekai's Easy] : 0
xD taiko diffs can have different lead-in

>udpate<
Topic Starter
merchat7
Athena Tennos
SPOILER

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~

[Normal]
♪~

[Insane]
01:15:985 (4) - this rhythm have a little worry~i think~
maybe u can make like this~ I agree, this slider is off, change in another way
or change SV~just this slider~xD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~just suggestion~

Nice~song!~and mapst~
Star~~
Good Luck~ Thanks!
@TTTTTTTTTTTT
Thanks for modding, I'll give kudos if they are change in Easy/Hard

Kurokami
SPOILER

Kurokami wrote:

General

  1. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
    - [Insane] : 0
    - [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
    - [Miya's Hard] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Sekai's Easy] : 0
Taiko and osu standard diff starts at different time so should be fine

Normal

  1. OD +1 Hmm, a bit too high compare to Easy, also wants star rating to be a little lower.
  2. seems good~

Insane

  1. 00:29:566 (1) - 1 grid down, this ways it will be stacked with 00:28:350 (2) Alright
Since its too good to me, I give you a star too. :3 Ty :D

Ty for stars Athena Tennos & Kurokami and ty for mods all!

Edit:@Katty Pie
Np, thanks for checking
Kurokami

ikari_kyon wrote:

xD taiko diffs can have different lead-in
Good to know. o.o Well, I'm still an inexperienced modder. >.< Oh, and these are not my suggestions, I'm noob in taiko.They are my friends, but we not want to wrote 2 post for one mod. :o
jossieP
its ok <: thanks to your friend, nice suggests
Miya
umm, Sorry, nothing changed >.<
@TTTTTTTTTTTT : I like that finish, it match for the music imo.
@Kurokami :
  1. Triplet fits there. Nope
  2. Adding slider there doesn't follow anything.
Suimya
Thanks for modding >w<

http://puu.sh/z6pY
Fenya
Hi~

Sekai's Easy:
00:11:728 (3) - 1 grid up?

Normal:
00:14:363 (2) -(IMO) I find it a bit odd... If you remove slider and add circle in 00:14:566 - (because there ends the voice...)
00:15:985 (4) - ^ but add circle in 00:16:188
00:35:445 (1,3) - Overlap ugly... Maybe so http://puu.sh/zfSE be better... Or you can change your way. x:

Miya's Hard:
Nothing, good diff :3

Insane:
00:19:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I feel I do not have the same distance between them... imo e_e
01:13:350 (1) - 1 grid left?

That's all... Sorry for my poor mod :c
I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~ :)
S o r d a
from queue

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[Insane]:
  1. you should be volume up I really cant hear hitsound like Miya's Hard
  2. 00:42:539 (1,2) - ctrl+j? maybe you like this jump
[Hard]:
  1. 00:33:012 ~ 00:47:607 you use sc1 clap better imo
  2. 00:18:418 - add note its good flow
  3. 00:59:161 (6) - new combo looks good
  4. 01:10:512 (2,5,7) - add sc1 clap
  5. 01:12:742 (9) - ^ end clap
[Normal]:
  1. good
[Sekai's Easy]:
  1. good again
Nice map overall~
Good luck ranked soon
Miya

S o r d a wrote:

[Hard]:
  1. 00:33:012 ~ 00:47:607 you use sc1 clap better imo Umm, i don't like the sc1 clap. So, no change here.
  2. 00:18:418 - add note its good flow for what purpose? I don't see any rythim on this spot.
  3. 00:59:161 (6) - new combo looks good hmm, okay
  4. 01:10:512 (2,5,7) - add sc1 clap ^
  5. 01:12:742 (9) - ^ end clap ^
Thank you for the mod Sorda :3
http://puu.sh/ztY6
Suimya
thanks for modding but no changes >A</
Topic Starter
merchat7
Fenya
SPOILER

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Normal:
00:14:363 (2) -(IMO) I find it a bit odd... If you remove slider and add circle in 00:14:566 - (because there ends the voice...) If you listen at 0.25x, you can her say "aa" here. The main reason through is I want to keep the rhythm 1/1 (simple). 3/2 rhythm is not too nice to play especially if you do hit circles.
00:15:985 (4) - ^ but add circle in 00:16:188 ^
00:35:445 (1,3) - Overlap ugly... Maybe so http://puu.sh/zfSE be better... Or you can change your way. x: Alright fixed, but I think this is only noticeable in editor.

Insane:
00:19:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I feel I do not have the same distance between them... imo e_e Spacing is pretty consistent here, but I think I understand what you mean, adjust a bit.
01:13:350 (1) - 1 grid left? Alright

That's all... Sorry for my poor mod :c
I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~ :)

S o r d a
SPOILER

S o r d a wrote:

from queue

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.
[Insane]:
  1. you should be volume up I really cant hear hitsound like Miya's Hard I have even higher volume in this diff then Miya I think like 100% in kiai compare to 75% in Miya's diff, I just use the custom hitsound. The whistle sound a bit like the soft-hitnormal, but much louder so maybe you thought there weren't hitsound on the note because of this. I use this custom whistle because I don't think high pitch whistle fit well with this song. As for clap, it follow kick drum, I just want the clap to compliment the kick drums. I've test with higher volume custom clap and thanks to higher volume, the drum sound really overpowers the song (sound too bassy). I may consider raising the volume of the clap a bit through.
  2. 00:42:539 (1,2) - ctrl+j? maybe you like this jump Hm, I think current pattern lead better to (3) and spread the mapping around a bit more. Feel like too many notes at top right.
[Normal]:
  1. good
Nice map overall~
Good luck ranked soon

Ty for mods both and Fenya for star!
Kokatsu
Taikomod from my queue, sorry for late mod x__x'

General:
You don't use any sliders/drumrolls in your diff, reduce Slidertickrate to 1?
Maybe add your name to the background?

Mapping:
00:08:282 - I dislike the rhythm here, maybe try something like this? 00:11:728 - as above, try this? 00:14:972 (1) - make it small?
00:18:215 (1) - ^
00:29:566 (1) - ^
00:31:188 (1) - ^
00:33:215 (2) - kat?
00:34:634 (2) - ^
01:25:512 (4) - ^

Only suggestions for all things mentioned, really not much to find, good job on that one :)
jossieP

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue, sorry for late mod x__x'

General:
You don't use any sliders/drumrolls in your diff, reduce Slidertickrate to 1? as Im not using any slider have sense decrease it?
Maybe add your name to the background? no, my username is already on difficulty name or my initials, also I dislike those type of bg, just fitting to taiko mode and the name of song is enough for me

Mapping:
00:08:282 - I dislike the rhythm here, maybe try something like this? both patterns dont follow anything Im just trying to give an easy pattern for the vocal extension 00:11:728 - as above, try this? 1/1 easy pattern00:14:972 (1) - make it small? k
00:18:215 (1) - ^ highlight big don here
00:29:566 (1) - ^
00:31:188 (1) - ^ concicstant pattern here
00:33:215 (2) - kat? song on same scale
00:34:634 (2) - ^
01:25:512 (4) - ^ simple 1/1 dons to finish the song easyli /o/

Only suggestions for all things mentioned, really not much to find, good job on that one :)
> to merchat <
Flanster
Nyaho~
Heres my mawd~

[General]
Nice tags oowawawawawawawa--

[Sekai's Easy]
Sliders need fixing in this diff.

00:08:485 (2) - move the middle sliderpoint to x:208 y:236 :3
00:13:350 (1) - fix the middle sliderpoint :3
00:14:972 (1) - remove NC
00:16:188 (2) - NC
00:21:458 (1) - remove NC
00:24:701 (1) - ^
00:44:566 (4) - red sliderpoint to x:380 y:308
00:59:972 (1) - remove NC
01:00:377 (2) - NC
01:02:404 (1) - remove NC
01:03:620 (4) - NC
01:05:242 (4) - ^
01:06:863 (6) - ^
01:08:485 (1) - remove NC
01:10:107 (5) - NC
01:11:728 (1) - remove NC
01:12:945 (4) - NC
01:13:755 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
clean

[Miya's Hard]
Sliders could use a bit of fixing.

00:12:539 (7) - sliderend to the center please (x:208 y:364)
00:13:350 (1) - same here^
00:17:809 (4) - ^
00:53:485 (8) - maybe NC here?
00:58:147 (3,4) - why not mirror 00:57:539 (1,2) correctly?
01:06:458 (8) - same suggestion for the NC on stream
01:11:728 (6) - NC?

[Insane]
How about lowering the volume to 40-45%? at the beggining until the timing point on 00:19:634?
01:04:836 (4) - how about Ctrl+R :3?
01:19:836 - maybe add a note with finish...end kinda bothers me o.o'

[]
Thats all from me, good luck ~~
Topic Starter
merchat7
Experiment with timing point at begin for Insane.
01:04:836 - Prefer current pattern
01:19:836 - Would be annoying to play imo, something like ninja hit circle at end of a song.

Ty for mod
Miya
No fix. Thank you Lolicore for modding >.<
Suimya
Thanks Lolicore for modding >w<

Sekai's Easy
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: song.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 19431
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Asgardh (Short Ver.)
Artist:Aoba Ringo
Creator:merchat7
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Shirogane no Soleil -Successor of Wyrd-
Tags:Unmei no Keishousha soleil of silvery white marie MANYO littlewing skyfish hentai eroge game visual novel opening Miya -Sekai- Sekai ikari_kyon

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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0,0,"background.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,45576,45844
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo3 : 255,225,160
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nanda2009
Hello from my modding queue~

[Sekai's Easy]
  1. [optional] 00:18:620 (4) - make this encircling 00:18:215 (3) ? like this :
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:539 (4) - there's a useless slider point here, delete it.
[Miya's Hard]
Nothing wrong, I guess... nicely mapped.

[Insane]
Nothing wrong, I guess... nicely mapped.

Nicely Mapped! I really like the hitsounds. Star! *throw* ~
Topic Starter
merchat7
k fixed, thanks for mod and star!
Niko-nyan
okay here my mod (request from my [ur=http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/1621012#p1621012l]modding queue[/url]

Normal
CS +1
OD+1

Insane
CS +1

goodluck for it :D
Topic Starter
merchat7
cs4 is typical for Insane, the current od in Normal is for a bit lower star rating and cs4 to prevent overlap and cleaner map.

Thanks for mod

Edit:
Also fix that slider for sekai due to sekai quitting.
KRZY
[Sekai's Easy]
00:16:999 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:134 (X) - Add a note here
00:45:782 (X) - ^
00:57:134 (1,2,3) - Try the following to better represent the music:
01:10:107 (1) - Shorten to 01:10:715, and add a finish at the end
01:11:728 (3) - Shorten to 01:12:336, and add a finish at the end

[Normal]
Seems good.

[Miya's Hard]
01:15:782 (6) - Remove the repeat and add a note on 01:16:391
01:16:796 (1) - Start this spinner on 01:16:593

[Insane]
Too many accounts of spacing inconsistencies. The ones I group here would be better if mapped with consistent(same) distance snap:
00:07:674 (2,3,4)
00:11:120 (4,5,6,7
00:14:566 (4,5,6)
00:27:945 (1,2,3)
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:34:634 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:36:053 (2,3,4,5)
00:42:539 (1,2,3,4)
00:51:255 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
01:01:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10)
New Combo Mods
00:50:242 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:647 (10) - NC
01:01:999 (7) - NC
01:03:215 (1) - Remove NC
01:03:620 (6) - NC
01:06:661 (1) - Remove NC
01:06:863 (9) - NC
01:08:485 (6) - NC
01:08:891 (1) - Remove NC
00:07:877 (3,4) - No need for a jump here I think. Keep the spacing at x1.4?
00:23:688 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a more consistent pattern. One example would be:
00:38:282 (4) - Move to x:144 y:228 for better aesthetics.
01:11:120 (4) - Move to x:371 y:83 for better aesthetics.
01:15:782 (3,4) - Remove note 3 and move slider 4 to 01:15:782. More natural that way I think.




http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37497 for M4M

Good luck!
Miya
I will not change anything since i feel there's no mistake in i put that slider with repeat there. I put the spinner there because i want to put finish sounds for closing the rythim. Sorry no change. But thank you for the mod~
BeatofIke
STAR~
Topic Starter
merchat7
KRZY
SPOILER

KRZY wrote:

[Sekai's Easy]
00:16:999 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:42:134 (X) - Add a note here Hmm, I think it sound fine without this note and considering star rating, I don't think I should do this
00:45:782 (X) - ^ ^, refuse mainly because of star rating
00:57:134 (1,2,3) - Try the following to better represent the music: Changed at first, but realize inconsistent with below, read reason below for why not change, but may change in the future if more mention this.
01:10:107 (1) - Shorten to 01:10:715, and add a finish at the end Hm, I keep this for now, I normally agree with you, but I want to keep a bit to sekai mapping style and don't think this sound bad.
01:11:728 (3) - Shorten to 01:12:336, and add a finish at the end ^

[Normal]
Seems good.

[Insane]
Too many accounts of spacing inconsistencies. The ones I group here would be better if mapped with consistent(same) distance snap:
00:07:674 (2,3,4) (4) really feel like it should be a jump for me so this is why I did this. Good lead-up to the 2.4x jumps.
00:11:120 (4,5,6,7 Fixed, but (7) has that sound on it so I think it should have highest spacing.
00:14:566 (4,5,6) Someone mention this, but I just find it weird not to do this.
00:27:945 (1,2,3) The reason here is very similar to 00:07:674.
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5) Hmm just following the map accent (accenting the sliders), just part of my mapping style.
00:34:634 (1,2,3,4,5) What I want to do here is to have jump, and I wanted to do a certain pattern so I didn't use distant snap. I don't think I can do this pattern while keeping to distant snap, but make spacing nicer for the parts that I can.
00:36:053 (2,3,4,5) This one is intentional for aesthetic reasons, similar to above as well.
00:42:539 (1,2,3,4) This is the same as 00:29:566 (accenting the sliders).
00:51:255 (3,4,5,6,7,8) For these two parts, just following accents again, (higher spacing for louder note, slightly lower spacing for softer notes, some people don't like this mapping style, but this is how I map in general)
01:01:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10)
New Combo Mods
00:50:242 (1) - Remove NC I follow vocal over stanza, end of this slider I feel belong with the next vocal phase.
00:50:647 (10) - NC ^
01:01:999 (7) - NC Hmm, you didn't mention for previous part, what I decide to do here is to just new combo when new vocal phase starts and I think it hasn't ended yet here.
01:03:215 (1) - Remove NC Same as 00:50:242
01:03:620 (6) - NC ^
01:06:661 (1) - Remove NC Same as 00:50:242, here I think you should see the vocal is singing ha-ru so new vocal on "ha"
01:06:863 (9) - NC ^
01:08:485 (6) - NC As mention vocal, I'm sometime inconsistent, but here, I feel a new vocal phase start at 01:08:891 so that's why I new combo there.
01:08:891 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:07:877 (3,4) - No need for a jump here I think. Keep the spacing at x1.4x Mention the reason before.
00:23:688 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a more consistent pattern. One example would be: K, try a more consistent pattern.
00:38:282 (4) - Move to x:144 y:228 for better aesthetics. Done
01:11:120 (4) - Move to x:371 y:83 for better aesthetics.Done
01:15:782 (3,4) - Remove note 3 and move slider 4 to 01:15:782. More natural that way I think. Try another pattern

I map generally without much consideration for distant snap so that's why there are sometime lot of spacing errors, I fix the ones which weren't intentional through. I couldn't agree with your new combo suggestions because all the ones you mention fit with vocal to me.


http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37497 for M4M

Good luck!

Thanks for mod! Sorry for late reply, I'll get to modding your beatmap really soon, but I have a guest diff I need to finish atm. I'll think about fixing title later, want to see more discussion on the new rule first. Change to od 7 in Insane since the timing feel a little weird at times.

@BeatofIke
Thanks for star!
Yume_old_old
merchat7 plz remove the Short Ver from the title because of new rule ... >.<
Topic Starter
merchat7
Change title back since it's fine to have short ver. for now. I'm definitely using below 50% of the original mp3 as I cut mp3 myself.
meiikyuu


feel free to ignore whatever you don't like ~


Sekai's Easy
00:20:242 (2) - make neater blanket around 1? not too big of a deal tho
00:27:945 (3) - move 3 grids down so it stands neatly next to 2 (and then u should adjust 4 by moving it down a little..)
00:55:107 (2) - add clap on end of slider?
00:59:972 (4) - add clap

Normal
00:16:593 (1) - add whistle at beginning of slider (to match rhythm of the last 2 whistles)

Miya's Hard
00:58:147 (1) - new combo to make jump clearer?

Insane
00:29:566 (1) - maybe it will look nicer if you stack the end of this slider with 00:28:350 (2) -
01:16:188 (4) - the finish sounds unecessary
01:19:836 (1) - adding a note here fits too but uh..u don't have to do this xD

good map and good luck <3
Topic Starter
merchat7
Fix some, thanks! If you're curious about why I didn't change something, you can always ask.

I won't fix anything in Easy for now since Sekai doesn't seem to be quitting anymore.
Miya
I think people can manage that since it's a 1/1 jump which is not hard.
Sorry, no fix, but thank you for the mod~
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[Sekai's Easy]
00:17:404 (2) - one grid right so it lines up with 00:16:188 (4)
00:25:512 (4) - Move it down a bit.
00:27:945 (3) - Put this in the center of the previous slider.
00:48:215 (2) - Move this a bit to the left.
01:07:674 (7) - Move up a bit.



[Insane]
01:18:215 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:836 like in the other diffs.



Well mapped ~
Good luck ! >w<
Suimya
ok fixed everything~ :3

My diff code~
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: song.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 19431
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Asgardh (Short Ver.)
Artist:Aoba Ringo
Creator:merchat7
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Shirogane no Soleil -Successor of Wyrd-
Tags:CoverVersion Unmei no Keishousha soleil of silvery white marie MANYO littlewing skyfish hentai eroge game visual novel opening Miya -Sekai- Sekai ikari_kyon

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-960,"video.avi"
0,0,"background.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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75985,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
76391,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
79228,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,240,160
Combo2 : 170,220,240
Combo3 : 255,225,160
Combo4 : 160,250,190

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240,40,11323,1,0
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156,132,12945,1,0
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252,292,18215,1,2
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168,156,19836,5,4
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Topic Starter
merchat7
About that spinner, I'll leave it like that for now, my intention was to follow vocal there so I want the two spinners to have the same length. Since the other diffs have just one spinner, for my Normal, I decide to change to follow instrument instead. However, since it's just extending that second spinner by 1/1, I may change it, but I'll think about this for now.

Thanks for mod, updated easy!
Crok425
Well, hello there... I forgot about you, sorry for the delay XD. I'm just gonna leave suggestions since there just a few things to be improved... the rest is perfect.

[General]
All of you (except Miya, you can skip this :P) are using the same hit sound in kiai mode... I know it's a custom clap sound, but try to add the soft whistle sound so it doesn't sounds so repetitive... Insane most of all.

Told you that it was going to be short since everything looks perfect. I hope you take this in consideration.
Topic Starter
merchat7
I do not think the default whistle sound good with this song, please suggest another custom whistle sound if you feel the current one is repetitive/blends with soft-hitnormal. I really can't think of any sounds that would fit here except for closed-hihat which is currently used.
Crok425
http://hs.sushi971.com/

I dunno... but you can search here... if you want.
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