占位
No_Gu wrote:
request from in-game PM
[ERT]
01:39:217 (3) - 稍微动下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/324346
太standard了没啥看的
[Barry]
01:09:763 (2,3) - 我觉得normal里面叠的话大部分都认为是1/2了
01:57:763 (2,3) - 这个同
02:46:854 (1,2,1) - 别overlap比较好。而且后面1的箭头还被2挡住了
这么standard还看个毛
[Lan wings]
01:10:445 (3) - 这个可以摆大气点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/324351fixed
加速惨无人道
01:39:490 01:44:945我觉得这两段跟音乐里面的手机铃声会很有意思不觉得S更怪异么``
01:46:308 (1,2,3,4) - 这个光看的话感觉满误会的,1和2同样间距但是1/4.3和4同样间距但是1/2fixed
01:58:104 (1) - 其实仔细听这个不压红线,是黄和蓝黄线开头太2
加速惨无人道
加速惨无人道 没空拍惨无人道
03:42:490 (1,2,3) - 静音吧fixed
烂B给你☆玛德我给你2个你才给一个``惨无人道
thx your mod and star~~~~kosiga wrote:
Hi~ Lan wings :3
thank you for the request~
here my mod ~
[General][Barry's Normal]
- Song folder - video.flv - Do you plan to replace this with the SB? When replacing, Please do not forget to turn off this. and add "Yui" to a tag.When finished sb I will remove "Yui" Originally has been have
- Song Setup - Title - Monokuro Act - Please watch video x3 http://puu.sh/x0yz so change to 「Monochroact」 or 「Monochro Act」 is better.When finished sb I will change Monochroact
- Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - add 1500ms ( i think starts a little faster )keep
[Hard]
- 00:08:127 - same easy diff fixed
good map ! Star~☆
- 00:08:127 - same easy diff? fixed
- 03:08:672 (6) - remove whistle ?change clap
- 03:08:945 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider ?fixed
- 03:43:445 (1) - Do you really want this spinner? If you want it, volume is a slightly larger for me >< I think enough at 10%. fixed
- 03:44:308 - This green line is not working. remove or move to 03:44:263fixed
Good luck~
以上4個都是"錯位"的問題Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod for request~~
[ERT's Easy]
- 00:13:581 (4,1) - 这里似乎节奏错位了……建议00:13:581 - 放note,然后00:14:126 - 开始放个1/1长度的折返slider。
- 后面00:17:945 (2) - 也是……恩……简单来说就是没有特别情况的话建议不要slider结束在downbeat上,略别扭……
- 00:48:490 (4) - ^,一直到kiai,整段的节奏感觉都是错位的……真的不舒服……好吧……后面也有大量的,不来回说了总之真心不建议这么做
- 01:19:581 (4) - 后面那组nc从这里开始吧
- 02:01:581 (1) - 建议删掉NC,然后后一组NC放到02:03:217 (2) - 开始
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod for request~~
给神sb跪了…………
[General][Storyboard]
- 有2个osb文件,多余的删掉明天搞完SB再full
- 考虑把Display storyboard in front of combo fire打开?fixed
- 顺便,瞎眼警告可能你也得开一下……开头挡了``找菲姐弄个SB``
- 另外不考虑给soft加个静音sliderslide么?明天一起full
[Hard]
- 确认下01:36:626 - 到01:37:036 - 之间的这个突然黑屏是不是原本设计的就是这个效果……这里原来应该是雪花的开始
[Insane]
- 02:08:536 (4,5) - 这里建议稍微调整下节奏,如图fixed
- 02:46:854 (2) - 这里NC下?fixed
- 03:01:308 (1,2) - 像这里我就建议把(1)做成折返,然后2单一个note在长白线上~fixed
- 03:32:399 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这组遮挡说实话有点不好看……谢好梗
整体感觉不错的,于是给星闪人&GL~~
- 00:19:581 (4) - 结尾whistle下?fixed
- 00:24:763 (5) - 头whistle?fixed
- 01:19:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这里排成串比原地要好~fixed
- 01:34:990 (4) - 感觉叠不如和前面一起排成串……fixed
- 02:46:854 (2) - NC?fixed
- 02:50:126 (1) - 这里调整下节奏?于是打算保持``
额``为啥我没看出来```iroseka wrote:
无力吐槽……神SB……
(非mod,no kds plz)
SB比歌提前半拍左右 调整下
star0 0
取个中间``+7了._.kioukiou wrote:
沒什麼可以吐槽的 ._.
Timing好像有點太早,建議+6~+8ms。
如果覺得上面的timing不適用就請無視這篇post吧。
DarkSkyKnight wrote:
红色的mod是该无视的!(大雾
总体:
也许offset应该+3~5。我决定按QQ姐的timing~
[Hard]
01:08:406 (1,2,3) - 我个人认为应该把这三个拉近一点,所以比较好读一些 .w. 拉到0.8x这样?1.0x的间距其实不算大了``而且整个图的三连间距都是用的1.0x
01:58:043 (4) - 也许这个应该离3更近一点,大概到0.25x?234的节奏是不同的``所以不能anti jump``会坑爹
03:40:315 (3,4) - 虽然大概能读得到,可是这样不太好。。。slider之间稍微拉大一点间距没什么问题的
[Insane]
01:10:111 (2,3) - 也许这里应该把3拉到1.7x距离同hard``尤其是在长折返slider的情况下``间距是可以拉大一点的
其他没什么了。。。
all fixed~thx your modMelophobia wrote:
As requested
[Hard]
00:46:861 (7) - add newcombo because of a downbeat
00:54:361 (4) - this rhythm sounds better imo it'll be a bit hard though
http://puu.sh/B5Bv
01:03:088 (3) - ^
01:07:588 (6) - what's point of this note? it follows nothing and sounds weird to me
01:06:497 (5) - add newcombo for change of melody. also it's better to use lower volume than previous part
01:15:224 (2) - finish sounds nice because i can hear it in music~
01:23:952 - ^
01:24:906 (3) - i prefer placing it like this
http://puu.sh/B5DX
02:07:588 (1) - same reason as previous one, add finish here
02:11:952 - ^
02:39:497 - maybe put a 1/6 kick slider here?
02:55:588 (1) - add finish?
02:59:952 (1) - ^
03:01:179 - add note to follow music better? also rhythm will be nice imo
03:04:315 (1) - add finish at the beginning
03:08:679 (1) - add finish
03:29:406 (8) - maybe add whistle on slider path?
[Insane]
00:22:861 (5) - i dont think this clap sounds that good
00:30:497 (9) - i just wonder why you used slider here, it's really hard to read and sounds not that good because of slidertick.
maybe you should replace it with just a circle or at least add newcombo to warn change of SV.
00:41:679 (6) - missing clap? feels empty so i'd suggest to add it even if it's intended
00:45:224 (4) - ^
01:36:770 (2) - add finish at the end
02:18:497 (2,3) - not symmetrical perfectly
02:45:770 (9) - clap is better
02:46:861 (1) - end this at 02:47:270 -
02:53:406 (3,4) - change rhythm into what you did at 02:49:043 (5) -
02:55:861 (2) - make this symmetrical slider?
03:16:315 (1) - sounds odd to me, it should start at 03:16:588 - instead
still dont know how to mod so creative maps like this. sorry
pieguy1372 wrote:
hi there~
Hard:
02:04:179 (4) - oo, big 1/4 jump, perhaps move it a bit closer?fixed
Insane:
02:00:361 (4) - o.o imo this spacing makes it seem like a 1/2 note, so perhaps remove this note?fixed
02:35:952 (4,5) - try it like this to be consistent with the last one? http://puu.sh/BeuE02:34:588 (3,4,1) - repeat rhythm keep
03:26:133 (4,5,1) - maybe try it like this? http://puu.sh/BevAfixed
nice map~
fanzhen0019 wrote:
[Insane]
01:36:770 (2) - reserve被前面3挡住了 改成slider加circle? ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343185fixed
哭了我只找到了这一个.. no kd
Kitsuneko wrote:
Hi Lan wings
M4M~ via In-game. My map[Hard]
SettingHitsounding
- Clear
Mapping
- 00:42:497 - Add clap, try keep your pattern.fixed
- 00:44:679 - ^fixed
- 01:19:588 (1) - Add finishfixed
- 02:03:224 (1) - ^fixed
- 01:05:952 (4) - rotate by 9 or 10°fixed
- 01:37:861 (2,3,4) - move all to left, (2) is X:280 Y:264fixed
- 02:18:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - uhm, i prefer previous pettern like 01:30:497 (1,2,3,4,5) than anti-jumpsfixed
- 02:38:952 (1) - Remove one repeat, then just stackking a note to 02:39:361It would be more difficult
- 02:53:952 (1) - odd spacing, 2 grids down?fixed
- 03:37:043 (7,8,9,10) - move down all, (7) is X:188 Y340fixed
[Insane]
SettingHitsounding
- Clear
Mapping
- 02:03:224 (2) - this slider body without whistle?
- 02:05:406 (3) - ^
- 00:31:861 (1) - stack to (2)?
- 03:23:133 (5,6,1) - move to left, 03:22:861 (4,5) - are close
Nice mapset with like god SB.
Those sliders have more improved room for beautiful.
But I was impressed that slider's whistle sounds are so good.
Good job and Good luck ~
Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Illumined wrote:
Requested from Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)
你好~
[Hard]
00:33:770 (1) - Move this clap to (3)fixed
00:35:952 (1) - Delete clapfixed
01:07:315 (2) - ^, or lower the volume for clap onlyfixed
01:23:952 (1) - Missing clapfixed
01:32:815 (1) - Don't use clap for spinner ends, sounds crappyfixed
02:03:770 (3,4) - It's an Insane jump, not really hard at all. But players will read as 1/2 spacing.fixed
02:43:043 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nice sensefixed
03:40:315 (3,4) - same as 02:03:770just consider the spacing between slider heads
[Insane]
00:08:952 (2,3,4,5,6) - Covered by spinner-osu
01:11:815 (3,4) - Suppose here is placed with 1/2 beatfixed
01:59:815 (3,4) - ^fixed
02:40:588 (4,5) - coordinate with 02:41:679 (2,3) - ?they're different patterns...
03:21:224 (5) - 1/8? (only whistle on 1/4)here's no 1/8 beats
03:28:861 (1) - clap?fixed
(・∀・)storyboarding sugoi!
Ah...sorryIllumined wrote:
my post isn't enough for a kds ?