Aoko wrote:

so is it really unrankable? o3o

I asked and its not unrankable.

Kei wrote:

Hi!





[Starry's Normal]

• 
  This is a very calm and slow song, so I suggest you to decrease the approach rate by 2 (at least by 1). Many people say I should decrease AR so I will now AR is now decreased by 1

1. 00:23:548 (1) - This difficulty lacks hitsounds. I suggest you to use whistles to follow the piano. To do so, add a whistle here.
2. 00:27:548 (1) - And here, at the start of this slider.
3. 00:31:548 (1) - ^
4. 00:33:548 (2) - ^
5. 00:37:548 (5) - ^
6. 00:39:547 (2) - ^
7. 00:43:547 (3) - ^
   All the above fixed
8. 00:45:547 (6) - Fix this spacing with distance snap. It's confusing for beginners. They will probably think that this is placed at the red tick (00:45:214) instead of here. Fixed
9. 00:47:547 (3) - Whistle at the start of this slider to follow the piano. Fixed
10. 00:49:547 (4) - ^ ^
11. 00:55:547 (1) - To emphatize this part, add a finish here at the start of this slider.
12. 00:59:548 - Just the same as I said about this drum sound. It would be nice if the taiko drum sound is used as a custom sample in parts like here, and at 01:03:548, etc. For now I am going put a Whistle I will think about putting a taiko drum sound for this
13. 01:11:547 (2) - If you added the finish that I suggested you already, you should add a finish here too for consistency. Added
14. 01:31:548 (3) - To emphatize, add a finish here, specially because of the kiai time. Added
15. 01:35:548 (1) - A finish would fit nice here.
16. 01:39:548 (1) - ^
17. 01:41:548 (5) - ^
18. 01:47:548 (1) - To emphatize again, add a finish.
    All the above added
19. 01:50:214 (1) - Why in the world do you make jumps in a Normal difficulty? That's not acceptable. It's confusing. Also, this nc shouldn't be here, because the vocals change is at 01:51:548 (2), not here, so remove nc here and add it to 01:51:548 (2). The spacing is fixed but the new combo is staying for pattern purposes.
20. 01:51:548 (2) - Is this another change of spacing? Also, add a finish here to keep emphatizing Spacing+Finish Added
21. 01:55:548 (1) - ^ Here too. ^
22. 01:57:548 (4) - ^ And here. ^
23. 01:59:548 (1) - Add finish to this spinner to emphatize more the end of the kiai time? ^
24. 02:20:881 (2,3) - Why a jump here!? WHY!? .-. The spacing between notes in the timeline is the same, so, this shouldn't happen. Fixed :O
25. 02:33:548 (3) - Why do you add a whistle here, when you didn't added any hitsounds before? It doesn't make sense. Also, the whistle at the sliderbody sounds noisy and very unfitting imo. There is no whistle at the sliderbody o_o? (Confused)
26. 02:35:548 (3) - Finish to emphatize and add some hitsounds, because this part lacks lots of hitsounds. Finish Added
27. 02:39:547 (3) - ^ ^
28. 02:55:547 (3) - Spacing.. I honestly don't get which spacing did you used when you mapped this difficulty. In some parts, I change the spacing to 1.4x and it seems to be OK, but I check other parts with 1.4x and they seem to be all wrong. Be consistent with your spacing. Ah and also, you forgot to add a finish here. The spacing here is now fixed
29. 02:59:547 (1) - Finish here too.. again, to emphatize and add some hitsounds. Added
30. 03:03:547 (1) - ^ ^
31. 03:11:547 (1) - ^ ^
32. 03:13:214 (2) - I personally dislike how this slider sounds. It doesn't fit with the music at all because it is at a red tick and ends at a red tick. Okay I changed this whole thing.
33. 03:15:547 (1) - Finish. Same reason as always. Added
34. 03:19:547 (1) - ^ ^
35. 03:21:547 (4) - ^ I disagree. I added a clap instead
36. 03:26:881 (1,2) - Move this notes down. They get overlapped by the spinner-osu, making them difficult to see for beginners:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Put in the middle and stacked
37. 03:27:547 (1) - I think that it sounds better if this spinner ends at the big white tick.
    
    Reaaaally weird difficulty. I don't know if you change of spacing or what, but it's really weird. Check and fix all the spacings. This will be not rankable unless you fix them. Also, this difficulty lacks a lot of hitsounds. Consider adding some specially to kiai times.

Well that's all. You have to work more on this, but I'm sure that you'll improve this mapset a lot. The SB looks beautiful, by the way. I forgot to say that. :3 Good luck!

Kurokami wrote:

Aoko wrote:

so is it really unrankable? o3o

I asked and its not unrankable.

So in other words, its rankable, but try to avoid them.

Netsukawa wrote:

Oh yeah ! GC ><

Starry's Normal

• Setting

1. 1. OD -1

Fine I will now decrease OD by 1

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. Try to use Tiny Grid when you make the diff , It will make more symmetry spacing for you.
   2. 00:29:548 (5) - I doubt why you change DS when use 1/2 , 1.4 DS for all 1/2 if you want to use it.
   3. 00:37:548 (5) - ^
   4. 01:16:881 (4) - Why not 1.4 ?
   5. 03:11:547 (1) - No need to NC here.
   Okay
   
   
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. 02:45:547 (4) - Remove whistle slider and you use to double click and add whistle.

Fixed

That's all

pieguy1372 wrote:

Starry's Normal:

-there's quite a few spacing problems please go through the map and space everything correctly...

01:28:214 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, antijump in normal isn't a good idea, so perhaps space it normally? Changed
01:38:881 - add note No , Putting a note there will sound BAD
02:33:548 (3) - remove whistle from slider body Okay
02:40:547 (4) - remove clap Okay
02:45:547 (4) - remove whistle from slider body Okay
03:14:881 - add note No as stated above


there's quite a few spacing problems... good luck

Netsukawa wrote:

Oh yeah ! GC ><

General

• Setting

1. 1. Fine

^^

• Folder

1. 1. I suggest you to add silence-slider to make it fit the song , use S:CS 1 in all diff when you add it.

S:CS?????? owo and I will add but what is S:CS? But I already added this before but only on easy diff.

Easy

• Setting

1. 1. AR -1

okay

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. What Distance Spacing did you use , or you didn't use it ? , I won't mod this diff now.
   I didn't use Distance Spacing that much
   
   
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. Fine

ok


That's all Thank you~♥

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

-seems you didn't use distance snap...please go through the map and space everything correctly. ._.// Okay

02:19:548 (1) - finish on startok
02:28:881 (2) - try it like this http://puu.sh/z4hKnope
02:32:881 (6) - try it like this? http://puu.sh/z4if nope
03:01:548 (4) - clap on endok
03:19:548 (3) - add NCok

K a Y e wrote:

Good luck Aoko \:D/ Keep up! You've been doing a good job :3

Netsukawa wrote:

@Aoko : You forgot to add it in hard diff ~

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi Aoko

General

1. You have to add a SliderBorder for every because you're skinning the hitcircle, so add all the difficults one by one in notepad and add this down all combo colours:
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,0,128
   Combo2 : 255,128,128
   Combo3 : 255,128,192
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

   
   You can change the color if you don't wanna use white

Okay sure, thanks ^^ Added on all diffs.Easy

1. Alot spacing problems i will mention the ones I'm worried about and other stuff ;w; sorry
   
2. 01:20:881 (2) - Really far away from 01:19:548 (1) Made some changes in this part.
3. 01:50:214 (2) - Too far away from 01:47:548 (1) Made some changes in this part too.
4. 01:55:548 (1) - Remove 1 reverse arrow, it can confuse new players no sorry ;w;
5. 02:23:548 (3) - You added clap but it doesn't sound any clap hitsound so remove the clap because its unnecessary ok
6. 03:05:547 (4) - I think a finish in the end sounds good whit the instrumental okay ^^

Good Luck !
Thank you ^^ Starry and Crystal, if you wanna update your diffs, pm me thanks. ^^
Edit: just edit it on the next mod >w< @Crystal, thanks.

Bobo wrote:

Hey there, from my queue ~

[General]

Seems okay to me! Okay

[Easy]

First of all I'd increase the AR to 3, anything underneath 3 is just too slow and hard to read. ok

Hmm. You have a heap of spacing problems.
I ask that you go over your entire diff with distance snap and fix all the spacing problems before I mod this.
After that is done, forum PM me and I'll properly mod [Easy]. I have done my best changing the spacings and everything =w= I'm really tired of this so if you wanna confirm ANY PROBLEM on spacing please tell me and don't just say that 'You fix the spacing' , etc. Mention your concerns. Thanks.
I already used Distance Snap.

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Mapset's off to a good start, however [Easy] and [Hard] could use some work considering spacing and patterns.
Don't forget to contact me once you've resnapped everything in [Easy].

Good luck!
Thanks.

Mio_chan wrote:

Sorry for late modding

[General]
Wrong meter, use 3/4 instead of 4/4 idk, not sure

[Easy]
Same as Bobo... use distance snap throughout the whole map I already did.
01:04:881 (3) The shape of this is strange... Change to this and move it to the place you want?

SPOILER

Okay didn't move but changed slider.
02:51:548 (1) - End this spinner earlier? This is an easy diff. No bec. I think they get enough break after.
02:55:548 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack them? Update your map please. I already moved them before your mod =w=

Star~ good luck with your map
Thank you <3

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

oAo Looks like I have a bit of work to do ._.
I'll fix them after school ~ I sended a pm to you Aoko ~

Bobo wrote:

Hey there, from my queue ~



[Normal]

00:58:881 (3) - Symmetry with the y axis would be quite nice :3
01:19:548 (3) - You used distance snap 1.3 am I right? From looking at this, you can tell it isn't snapped correctly. Simply resnap it using 1.3 distance snap. These errors tend to occur when mapping using a larger grid size. I suggest always mapping with grid size 4 to ensure that distance snap snaps objects correctly.
02:19:548 (1) - Could you move the slider point about 5 grids up? By doing so, you're giving the slider a smoother looking curve, making it look 10 times better.
02:21:548 (3) - Do the same here, don't forget.
02:27:548 (2) - Another little spacing issue, its too far away from (1). Simply resnap using distance snap.
02:29:548 (5) - Same problem here.
02:38:214 (7) - I'd stack this with (5), new players might find the approach circle hard to read with the hitburst in the way.
02:40:881 (5,6) - Another little spacing issue, these are too far away from (4). You may need to resnap (7) afterwards.
03:11:547 (3) - Mess around with the sliderpoints a little to try get a nicer looking curve, this might help:

SPOILER

03:20:881 (2) - Wooah spacing. You have a 1/1 gap between (1,2) whilst (2,3,4) are all 1/2 apart. Please resnap these.
03:22:881 (5) - Another little spacing issue, it's placed too close to the endpoint of (4).

Very nice diff, I like it.

I basically fixed everything in your mod,


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Mapset's off to a good start, however [Easy] and [Hard] could use some work considering spacing and patterns.
Don't forget to contact me once you've resnapped everything in [Easy].

Good luck!

Mio_chan wrote:

Sorry for late modding


[Normal]
01:16:881 (4) - Spacing, move it to x:316 y:264 ?
01:38:881 - Add something here?
02:41:214 (6) - Unstack it?
02:36:548 (4) - Spacing?
03:14:881 - Add something here?
03:20:881 (2) - Spacing

Fixed Everything

Star~ good luck with your map

1. last spinner i think this spinner gradually lower volume better add some green line?

1. 00:46:881 (1) - doesn't fit song this reverse slider.I suggest change put note 00:46:881 and 00:47:214
2. 00:51:214 (7) - hmm,move the note 00:51:547 music better for me also spinner start 00:51:714 end is same~
3. 01:34:548 - i hear the piano add note here?
4. 01:38:548 - ^
5. 01:50:548 - ^
   

1. you follow the distance snap? Normal/Easy needs follow this.The beginner players will be surprised at a change of some distance
2. I won't say this diff
3. if follow distance snap Normal 1.0~1.2 is better now.

1. the same as above i say you
2. Easy ds 0.8~0.6 better now.
   

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's modding from tha queue

I heard the song for like several times so maybe... mm

[Easy]
00:29:548 (4) - Suggest amend the slider and let next slider at the beginning of a lyric sentence, maybe 00:31:547 (1) Seems okay to me?
00:59:547 (2) - Shape ^
01:10:881 (1) - DS Fixed
01:26:214 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:55:548 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:58:881 (2,3) - Flip horizontally? Uhm, no. OAO

Thank you for the mod ^^ ♥

S o r d a wrote:

from queue

[overall]:

1. last spinner i think this spinner gradually lower volume better add some green line? idk OAO

[Easy]:

1. the same as above i say you
2. Easy ds 0.8~0.6 better now. Yes, my distance snap is 0.8 x3 So is it okay that way?
   

nice song~
good luck! Thank you ♫

KersiTyan wrote:

Sorry..i'm so late ;__; It's okay xD

[Easy]

00:55:548 - add finish ok
01:32:881 - remove finish no
01:36:881 - ^ ^
01:41:548 (3) - remove clap and add finish sounds better with clap ;w;
01:56:214 - remove finish no
01:56:881 - ^ no
02:21:548 (2) - ^ no
02:55:548 - add finish no
02:56:881 - remove finish no
02:58:881 - remove clap no
03:02:881 - ^ no
03:06:881 - remove finish no
03:16:881 - ^ no
03:19:548 - add finish ok
03:22:881 - remove clapok

Good luck~ Thanks for the hitsound mod ^^ But I like most the way it is ;w;

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 01:59:548 (3) - this shape let me feel strange , loool
2. 02:59:547 (3) - NC?

[Starry's Normal]

1. 00:44:881 (5) - let it on x:464 y:80 ? i think wii be more symmetrical
2. 01:15:214 (1) - let it on x:416 y:140 ?
3. 02:27:214 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC

[Crystal's Hard]

1. 01:51:548 (1) - get it on x:476 y:232 ?

l1106188 wrote:

Request from in-gmae by Crystal :3

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 01:59:548 (3) - this shape let me feel strange , loool If it is really bothering you and the modders/players, I will change it. xD
2. 02:59:547 (3) - NC? Okay~

good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English It's okay, and thank you!

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* You need a reversearrow.png for completing set of hitcircles I'm gonna add one soon. Wait please x3



[Easy]
00:55:547 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So beginners can't see which the head slider Made some changes in this part
01:04:881 (3,1) - Swap new combo? Okay~
01:47:548 (1) - Same issue as 00:55:547 (1) Some changes too
01:51:548 (3) - Use distance spacing of 1,00x for this slider. Beginners are confusing about short spacing ok + some change like I said above
02:55:547 (1) - Add finish at start slider? You seems forgot Uhm, okay? But I won't put finish on the (3) Slider? OAO

Goooood luck~
Thank you~ <'3

- t e n n y a - wrote:

yahoo Star for Mod at n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
I think you should add tags sherrie__fay and Nagisawa cause sherrie__fay made the storyboard and Nagisawa for the skin elements c: ok
and I suggest you to use muted slider slide idk fixed maybe

Why the end point of each diff is different? try to make them same o v o" sorry but meh

[Easy]
- 00:58:214 : remove finish? no
- 01:07:548 : whistle? ok
- 01:09:548 : instead of finish, change it to whistle?ok
- 01:54:214 : move this? fixed


thats all I can found, rank good luck Thank you ^^

Added reversearrow.png and soft-sliderslide.wav , full submit, and fixed diffs [Easy and Hard] Credits to the person who created the reversearrow.png Fixed Tags also