Hi!
[General]
[General]
- You have to add a reversearrow.png to complete the hitcircle skin set.
- It would be good if you map another difficulty by yourself. You only mapped 1 difficulty. This is your submission.
- 00:27:547 (2) - I suggest you to add a whistle at the start of this slider, because of that piano sound. I think that it sounds good~
- 00:29:214 (4) - This note sounds good, I agree, but this is a Easy difficulty so I suggest you to delete it. Leave this kind of notes at red ticks to the Normal difficulty.
- 00:32:881 (1) - Whistle at the repeat of this slider, again, because of the piano.
- 00:46:881 (1) - This whistle at the sliderbody sounds very noisy and bad to me. I suggest you to remove it. The song is very calm. A whistle like this sounds kinda out of place. I also suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider, to keep following the piano sound.
- 00:50:881 (1) - Try to map a bit of this spinner. It feels like you didn't want to map this part, so you placed a spinner to easily skip. Try to avoid very much.. long spinners. They're tiring for beginners.
- 00:55:547 (1) - Move this note a tad down. It gets overlapped by the spinner's hitburst. Also, I think that this note is way too early after that spinner. You didn't leave time for hand-recovery after spinning.
- 00:55:547 (1,2) - This is boring to play imo. You should replace this notes with a slider. It would follow way better the voice, and make this part less boring.
- 00:59:547 (3) - This slider shape looks ugly to me, to be honest. Try to put more effort in it! Perhaps make it more curved like this? (Also, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider to keep following the piano):
- 01:07:547 (2,3) - Boring and empty space between this 2 notes. Please replace this 2 notes with a slider to avoid emptyness and to keep the player following the music.
- 01:14:881 (2) - To follow the piano, add a whistle at the repeat of this slider.
- 01:16:881 (3) - ^
- 01:19:548 (5) - ^ At the start of this slider.
- 01:21:548 (7) - ^
- 01:19:548 (5) - ^ Whistle again, and also, add a new combo here, because of the change of the voice, and also because this combo is very long for a Easy difficulty.
- 01:21:548 (7) - Whistle at the start of this slider again.
- 01:27:548 (3) - ^
- 01:40:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not very sure about this, but when I select this notes, they don't seem to be snapped/spaced properly.
- 01:47:548 (1) - This slider is too far away from the spinner's centre. Move it more closer to the spinner's centre, to make it more easier for beginners to click it after recovering their hand.
- 01:55:548 (1) - That finish at the 1st repeat sounds weird and out of place. I suggest you to remove it and then add it to the start of the slider. Sounds better imo.
- 01:59:548 (3) - A finish at the start of this slider sounds good to me.
- 01:59:548 (3) - Wow wow wow. This slider shape is veeery weird. The points are placed very messy. Try to make more.. "regular" shapes, like the one that I suggested you to do before.
- 02:03:548 - For this drum sound, you should try to add a custom sample. Try using the taiko drum sound. It would sound pretty nice.
- 02:19:548 (1,2) - A slider here instead of this notes sounds much better to me. Also, place notes with distance snap. This is not the first time that you do this.
- 02:27:548 (1,2) - Boring space between notes, when the singer is still singing. Try this rhythm. It sounds better to me.
- 02:35:214 (2) - Again, leave notes at red ticks like this for Normal diffs. You should delete this note.
- 02:55:547 (1) - Same issue as before. Move this note a tad down, because it gets overlapped by the spinner's hitburst.
- 02:55:547 (1) - That finish at the end of this slider is very.. unfitting. I recommend you to remove it.
- 03:05:547 (4) - ^ (the finish at the 2nd repeat)
- 03:17:547 (2) - ^ (at the end of this slider)
- 03:19:547 (1,2...) - Boring again~ Try to fill up places like this that can be easily filled up. Try this pattern:
- 03:23:881 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after clicking 03:23:547 (3). Move it more away so beginners don't get surprised by it.
Wow that was long. This difficulty needs more work. Some notes aren't properly placed and the design can be improved.
This is a very calm and slow song, so I suggest you to decrease the approach rate by 2 (at least by 1).
- 00:23:548 (1) - This difficulty lacks hitsounds. I suggest you to use whistles to follow the piano. To do so, add a whistle here.
- 00:27:548 (1) - And here, at the start of this slider.
- 00:31:548 (1) - ^
- 00:33:548 (2) - ^
- 00:37:548 (5) - ^
- 00:39:547 (2) - ^
- 00:43:547 (3) - ^
- 00:45:547 (6) - Fix this spacing with distance snap. It's confusing for beginners. They will probably think that this is placed at the red tick (00:45:214) instead of here.
- 00:47:547 (3) - Whistle at the start of this slider to follow the piano.
- 00:49:547 (4) - ^
- 00:55:547 (1) - To emphatize this part, add a finish here at the start of this slider.
- 00:59:548 - Just the same as I said about this drum sound. It would be nice if the taiko drum sound is used as a custom sample in parts like here, and at 01:03:548, etc.
- 01:11:547 (2) - If you added the finish that I suggested you already, you should add a finish here too for consistency.
- 01:31:548 (3) - To emphatize, add a finish here, specially because of the kiai time.
- 01:35:548 (1) - A finish would fit nice here.
- 01:39:548 (1) - ^
- 01:41:548 (5) - ^
- 01:47:548 (1) - To emphatize again, add a finish.
- 01:50:214 (1) - Why in the world do you make jumps in a Normal difficulty? That's not acceptable. It's confusing. Also, this nc shouldn't be here, because the vocals change is at 01:51:548 (2), not here, so remove nc here and add it to 01:51:548 (2).
- 01:51:548 (2) - Is this another change of spacing? Also, add a finish here to keep emphatizing
- 01:55:548 (1) - ^ Here too.
- 01:57:548 (4) - ^ And here.
- 01:59:548 (1) - Add finish to this spinner to emphatize more the end of the kiai time?
- 02:20:881 (2,3) - Why a jump here!? WHY!? .-. The spacing between notes in the timeline is the same, so, this shouldn't happen.
- 02:33:548 (3) - Why do you add a whistle here, when you didn't added any hitsounds before? It doesn't make sense. Also, the whistle at the sliderbody sounds noisy and very unfitting imo.
- 02:35:548 (3) - Finish to emphatize and add some hitsounds, because this part lacks lots of hitsounds.
- 02:39:547 (3) - ^
- 02:55:547 (3) - Spacing.. I honestly don't get which spacing did you used when you mapped this difficulty. In some parts, I change the spacing to 1.4x and it seems to be OK, but I check other parts with 1.4x and they seem to be all wrong. Be consistent with your spacing. Ah and also, you forgot to add a finish here.
- 02:59:547 (1) - Finish here too.. again, to emphatize and add some hitsounds.
- 03:03:547 (1) - ^
- 03:11:547 (1) - ^
- 03:13:214 (2) - I personally dislike how this slider sounds. It doesn't fit with the music at all because it is at a red tick and ends at a red tick.
- 03:15:547 (1) - Finish. Same reason as always.
- 03:19:547 (1) - ^
- 03:21:547 (4) - ^
- 03:26:881 (1,2) - Move this notes down. They get overlapped by the spinner-osu, making them difficult to see for beginners:
- 03:27:547 (1) - I think that it sounds better if this spinner ends at the big white tick.
Reaaaally weird difficulty. I don't know if you change of spacing or what, but it's really weird. Check and fix all the spacings. This will be not rankable unless you fix them. Also, this difficulty lacks a lot of hitsounds. Consider adding some specially to kiai times.
- 00:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - To be honest, this sounds very very bad. Don't place notes at blue ticks unless it is really necessary, and if you're very sure that it fits the song and sounds good. This part, should be more like this:
- 00:30:548 (5,6) - This notes sound bad because there's no sound there, so I don't get the purpose of this notes.
- 00:27:548 (1,2) - The singer is still singing in that space between this 2 notes, so you should replace this notes with a slider instead, to follow better the voice.
- 00:29:548 (4) - This slider end sounds off so you should replace this slider with a circle.
- 00:30:548 (5,6) - Notes at places with no sound. You should delete them.
- 00:31:548 (1) - It fits more the voice if you end this slider at 00:32:547 imo.
- 00:45:547 (6) - The end of this slider sounds off because there's no sound, so I suggest you to replace this slider with a circle.
- 00:37:881 (5,6) - More notes when there's no sound. You should delete this ones too.
- 00:51:547 (1) - This spinner's end sounds bad. It should end at 00:51:547 (1) to fit good with the music.
- 00:55:547 (1,1) - Unnecessarily empty space. This should be more like this to follow better the vocals and to avoid empty space:
- 00:59:547 (1,1) - ^
- 01:01:547 (4) - Another slider that sounds bad because it ends in a place that has no sound. Please replace this one with a circle too. There's no need to place notes when there's no sound.. notes are supposed to follow the music.
- 01:03:547 (1) - To follow better the voice, end this slider at 01:04:548. Sounds way better to me.
- 01:11:547 (4) - ^ (end at 01:12:548)
- 01:13:881 (7,8) - You should delete this notes (same reason as always).
- 01:17:881 (8,9) - ^
- 01:23:548 (1) - This spinner sounds way better if it ends at 01:23:548 (1).
- 01:35:548 (1) - Again, to follow better the voice, end this slider at 01:36:214.
- 01:43:548 (1) - Listen carefully. This spinners end sounds off and weird. Do something about this. End it earlier or something to make it sound better.
- 01:48:381 (2,3,4) - (2) and (4) sound.. overmapped because that part doesn't have any sound. I suggest you to delete them.
- 01:51:548 (1) - To follow better the voice end this slider at 01:52:214.
- 02:01:548 (5) - Why do you change the slider velocity all randomly.. all off a sudden? I sincerely don't get those velocity changes. Noone of them. >.<
- 02:19:548 (1) - This doesn't follow the vocals at all. A slider with an end at 02:20:548 fits and sounds better to me.
- 02:23:548 (1) - ^ with an end at 02:24:214.
- 02:27:214 - There's a sound so I don't see why you didn't added a note here when you add notes even when there's no sound.
- 02:45:047 (5) - There's not really a sound here, so I suggest you to remove this note.
- 02:59:547 (1) - Again, to follow better the voice, end this slider at 03:00:214.
- 03:01:714 (4) - Another note in a place that there's no sound. You should remove this one too.
- 03:12:381 (2,3,4) - The same as before. (2) and (4) are at places when there's no sound so you should delete them. It sounds a bit overmapped.
- 03:15:547 (1) - To follow better the voice once again.. end this slider at 03:16:214.
- 03:22:214 (7) - In my opinion, it sounds better if this note is replaced by a 1/2 slider, like this:
- 03:27:714 (1) - Why did you changed the samples at the end of this spinner? it sounds bad because you never used normal samples in all the diff.
This can be improved too. I hope that this was helpful. I'm very tired if typing right now lol. Just, don't place notes when there's no sound. That sounds bad and unfitting