As requested
[ERT's Easy]
00:27:224 (1) - add clap or finish? i think need some hitsound here
00:33:770 (2) - *nazi* i grid up to make (1,2) perfect symmetrical
00:42:497 (3,4) - i think you should change rhythm into what like you did at 00:35:952 (1) - because there is no percussion at 00:43:588 -
01:06:497 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for change of melody. and use lower volume for these notes. the music gets quieter here than the previous part
also i'd suggest to remove finish from (4). i dont think it sounds that good.
01:19:588 (4,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
01:30:497 (1) - the drum sound sounds on every white ticks here, so you can add clap at the beginning of this slider. (if you follow this, add it to 01:31:588 - as well
01:32:952 (1) - clap sounds nice here imo because i can hear it in the music
01:37:043 - add note because of a downbeat? it'll makes it easier to get background music and sound nice imo
01:39:224 (3) - place this at x:260 y:100 instead so that spacing between (2) and (3)'s end looks same as your normal spacing (1.0x) it'll look better imo
http://puu.sh/B5dZ01:41:406 - add finish here (compare with 01:39:224 - ) it would be also better to remove finish from 01:39:224 - . but it's still your choice
01:45:224 (2) - finish at the end will sound nice to me, just suggestion tho
01:47:952 (3) - why not use shorter slider with a repeat to follow vocal better? the current one is kinda boring imo
01:50:679 (1) - same reason as 01:39:224 (3) - , 2 gird up
01:54:497 (1,2) - same reason as previous one, use lower volume for them
01:56:133 - why did you add clap here? there's no percussion and it sounds really bad. and you didnt put it at 01:08:133 -
02:18:497 (1,3) - add claps to these slider because of drum sounds which is coming every white ticks
02:20:952 (1) - same as 01:32:952 (1) - , add clap here
02:25:043 - make the break time start here? just suggestion
02:54:497 - remove clap. because background music disappears here and it doesnt sound that good
03:15:224 (1,3) - add claps to them
03:19:588 (1,3) - ^ same
03:38:133 (2) - copy and paste from (1) and ctrl+j? looks better imo
http://puu.sh/B5rp03:39:497 (1) - clap sounds nice to me
[Barry's Normal]
00:29:406 (1) - i dont think whistle on slider path sounds that good
00:30:497 - add clap here? i can hear it in music
00:57:224 (4) - change this into 1/4 slider to follow vocal and music better?
01:32:815 (1) - add clap
02:06:770 (4) - i prefer adding note at the middle of this slider to follow vocal and drum
02:19:315 (4) - ^
02:20:679 (1) - clap
02:25:043 - start break here
02:49:043 (1) - the partial overlapping is not good, especially when it has repeat
02:54:497 (3) - no drums in music so you should remove clap from the end
03:15:224 (1) - missing claps?
03:20:679 (3) - finish is too much and clap sounds better
03:41:406 (1) - add clap at the end or at least you should add whistle there like you did at 00:30:497 -
i'm not sure about 1/4 rhythm in Normal diff.. but it may not be problem due to the slow BPM
[Hard]
00:46:861 (7) - add newcombo because of a downbeat
00:54:361 (4) - this rhythm sounds better imo it'll be a bit hard though
http://puu.sh/B5Bv01:03:088 (3) - ^
01:07:588 (6) - what's point of this note? it follows nothing and sounds weird to me
01:06:497 (5) - add newcombo for change of melody. also it's better to use lower volume than previous part
01:15:224 (2) - finish sounds nice because i can hear it in music~
01:23:952 - ^
01:24:906 (3) - i prefer placing it like this
http://puu.sh/B5DX02:07:588 (1) - same reason as previous one, add finish here
02:11:952 - ^
02:39:497 - maybe put a 1/6 kick slider here?
02:55:588 (1) - add finish?
02:59:952 (1) - ^
03:01:179 - add note to follow music better? also rhythm will be nice imo
03:04:315 (1) - add finish at the beginning
03:08:679 (1) - add finish
03:29:406 (8) - maybe add whistle on slider path?
[Insane]
00:22:861 (5) - i dont think this clap sounds that good
00:30:497 (9) - i just wonder why you used slider here, it's really hard to read and sounds not that good because of slidertick.
maybe you should replace it with just a circle or at least add newcombo to warn change of SV.
00:41:679 (6) - missing clap? feels empty so i'd suggest to add it even if it's intended
00:45:224 (4) - ^
01:36:770 (2) - add finish at the end
02:18:497 (2,3) - not symmetrical perfectly
02:45:770 (9) - clap is better
02:46:861 (1) - end this at 02:47:270 -
02:53:406 (3,4) - change rhythm into what you did at 02:49:043 (5) -
02:55:861 (2) - make this symmetrical slider?
03:16:315 (1) - sounds odd to me, it should start at 03:16:588 - instead
still dont know how to mod so creative maps like this. sorry