Kei wrote:

Hi hi!

[Normal]
Everything looks fine here. I personally don't like some sliders placed in red ticks, since this is your easiest difficulty of your mapset.
keep them for now, but maybe i should think of it once again
01:25:297 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:775. oh yes. sounds much better

[Insane]
00:12:688 (5) - To follow your clap pattern, I suggest you to add a clap here. Sounds good! fixed
00:13:558 (10) - ^ at the start of this slider. ^ also applied them to Normal diff as well
00:27:906 (1,2) - This sounds weird. It doesn't follow the guitar sound at all. How about replacing the note (1) with a short 1/2 slider? like this: hmm, i can see your point but it's really hard to replace it with a long slider and players may need break because of previous jumps. so no change for now

SPOILER

00:36:601 (1,2) - To follow better the vocals, you should replace this notes with a slider. fixed!
00:51:166 (4,5) - That empty space between this notes feels.. awkward. I suggest you to try this: next jump should be emphasized, so this pattern should be simple

SPOILER

01:06:166 (1) - This doesn't follow your previous combos (00:52:253 (1) and 00:53:123 (1)). To follow them you should add a new combo to 01:07:036 (5). in previous part, i put a newcombo for readability of jumps. but this one doesnt need it.
01:22:688 (5) - ^ For consistency with your previous combos, add a new combo here. ^
01:25:297 (9) - I'm not really.. sure about this. Maybe a new combo here to end the difficulty? both are fine, but current one looks better to me
01:25:406 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:775. Sounds way better to me at least. yes.
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That's all! I like your mapping style. Good luck! thank you :3

banvi wrote:

[Kitsuneko]

1. 00:12:688 (2,1,2,3) - 曲に対してhitsoundが静かなので音が欲しいと思いました
   00:12:688 (2) と 00:13:558 (2) の先頭にもclapかwhistleつけても良いかなって思いました つけましたー
2. 00:40:732 (2) - 後方にwhistle? Added
3. 01:07:906 (1) - ↓のようにひし形作るとより良いかなあって思います 移動させました！
   
   SPOILER

   

Miya wrote:

Kitsuneko

1. Because it's a Hard diff, i suggest you rename this diff into Kitsuneko's Hard since people maybe mistaking this for super insane map. I also thought that, wait for the decision by melo
2. 01:08:340 (3,6,1,2) - Where the clap pattern go? It's missing here >.< I suggest you add clap at all this note. But just add clap at slider startpoint at slider 1 and 2. Added
3. 01:23:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Ok
4. 01:25:406 (1) - Like insane Changed

Kei wrote:

[Kitsuneko]
00:00:949 (3,4) - I think that it sounds better if you replace this 2 notes with a slider. Fits more with the music imo, just like you did at 00:04:427 (3,4). Changed to slider
00:33:123 (1,2,3) - This sounds kinda empty. It lacks.. emphasis.. according to the music. I suggest you to add some hitfinish samples like you did at 00:24:427 (1,2,1,2). Added more sounds and changed volume
01:25:406 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:775 instead, according to what I hear. Changed

LunarSakuya wrote:

I love this anime!!

General
Nice

Normal
00:24:427 (1) - Finish on beginning, puts emphasis on this section of the song i think Normal hitnormal is enough, finish is too much
00:25:297 (2) - ^
00:52:253 (1,2) - ^
01:06:166 (1,2) - ^
01:21:818 (1,2) - ^
Good!

Insane
00:04:862 (5) - Whistle on end to match the "ting" whistles are mainly following the piano
00:08:558 (6) - Whistle on beginning, delete whistle on reverse ^
00:16:384 (4) - Start a 1/2 slider to match vocals? need triplet here to follow music
00:24:427 (1) - Finish same as Normal
00:25:297 (5) - ^ ^
00:31:166 - Maybe add notes here, felt a bit empty http://puu.sh/x9dG replace it with a 1/2 slider instead
00:52:253 (1) - Finish
00:53:123 (1) - ^ ^
01:06:166 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:036 (5) - ^ ^
01:08:775 (5) - NC, you did it before at 00:27:036 (1) in previous part, i put a newcombo for readability of jumps. but this one doesnt need it.
01:24:427 (5) - ^ ^

I like your maps thx

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Finally the TV Size \o/

Random pick mod!

[General]
Nice

[Normal]
00:36:601 (3): Maybe...change slider shape? Example: the current one has nice flow imo so no change

SPOILER

00:38:340 (1): Make the same shape as (2) ok
01:06:166 (1,2,3): Change to this? ok

SPOILER

[attachment=1:9a511]screenshot050.jpg[/attachment:9a511]

Your normal is perfect, as always.

Well, Good Luck.

R a r e wrote:

Hi,（や）めろふぉびあ！！ 遅くなってごめんなさい！
リクエスト（だったはず）ありがとう～
全部提案です

[Normal]
00:07:036 (1) - 縦に90度とかにしてみたら？ 00:12:253 (2) - ここで配置被らないし

00:32:253 (3) - 終点のグリッド1~3あたりでいいから下げてみても綺麗かな
00:50:514 (3) - 終点のwhistleはずして(4)の始点にwhistle?

all fixed

[Insane]
00:08:558 (6) - 返しのwhistleはずして始点にwhistle Pianoの方に合わせたいのでreserve
00:13:558 (10) - x:280 y:144 スペーシング気になった fixed
00:28:340 (2) - もうちょっとスライダー曲げてみません? fixed
00:36:601 (1) - 00:40:079 (1) - ここの始点にwhistleついてるのでwhistleつけて統一感を… fixed
00:51:166 (4) - こんなんどうでしょ no

00:55:297 (4,5,6,7,8) - 見た目重視しました 中央に置けって事かな？プレイ画面だと今のままで中央に表示されるので大丈夫

01:02:253 (7,8,9) - 見た目がちょっと気になったので、(8)あたり調整してみませんか?　ぐぬぬｗ fixed
01:19:210 (2) - whistle追加 音取り変えた時に忘れてたlol added

Rankedはよ！！！
見づらかったらごめんなさい…

R a r e wrote:

[Kitsuneko's Hard]
00:06:166 (6) - 00:05:949 - ここからこういう音取りどうすか

00:23:993 (10) - 終点にwhistle追加?
00:30:297 (6) - 終点のグリッドを右に1つずらしたらもっと綺麗になると思います。
00:32:906 (4) - whistle追加?
00:39:210 (3) - whistle追加して00:45:732 (4)終点にadd whistleで統一感がでると思います。

other pattern

00:38:993 (2) - whistleはずして次の(3)の終始点にwhistle追加]

00:48:775 (1) - same as 00:23:993 (10) -
01:05:732 (9) - ^

Leorda wrote:

[Kitsuneko's Hard]
00:49:645 (3) - Reverse this slider (Ctrl+R) to make a pattern jump? -Changed
01:20:732 (6,7,8) - Remove (6,7) and move (8) to 01:20:732? Like 01:17:253 (4)? -Changed

B2IN wrote:

Hi ~ Melophobia

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
00:43:558 (3) - make curve slider. good suggestion, fixed!

SPOILER

Normal is no longer a need to fix it imo

[Insane]
00:23:123 (3) - I think it should overlapped perfectly 00:22:253 (5) at the end oops, fixed
00:53:123 (4) - remove nc ? it is nc for triangular patterns? hmm, okay. it seems pointless
00:53:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try this :d it's fine because of Stack Leniency

SPOILER

00:54:862 (3) - neatly stack to 00:53:340 (2) . it's fine, i think (1,2,3) should be triangle
01:07:036 (5) - nc no need imo
01:18:775 (1) - Consider moving.01:17:471 (3,4,5) - this stack touches it it's fine
01:22:688 (5) - nc no need imo
01:22:253 (3) - down a bit. why?

Good luck for rank.

B2IN wrote:

01:22:253 (3) - ただoverlapが気になった w w
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