terametis wrote:

:)

Starry wrote:

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:57:418 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:43:418 (2) - Clap? not, fix

[Insane]

00:04:751 (1) - Remove new combo? not, fix
00:06:084 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:32:751 (1) - Clap? not, fix
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - This position look more interesting. http://puu.sh/wJxc not, fix.

[Hard]

00:58:084 (1) - Finish? not, fix
01:03:418 (1) - ^ not, fix

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That's it.

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

>Easy

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

>Hard

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

>Insane

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Eh... I think this mapset is very good already. I can't really find any obvious mistakes.

Good luck on the way

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Jupiter ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change AudioLeadIn for 2500(3000 a bit long).

[Easy]

1. 00:44:751 (2) - Maybe change a circle on 00:44:751 much better.
2. 01:09:418 (3) - Add new combo looks better.

That's all ~ Really cool mapset i can't find more issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

terametis wrote:

yeahhhhh ~~<3
add tag terametis lol

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Good luck~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Pretty good.

Ranked~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Omedeto :3

terametis wrote:

いえええええええええええええええええええ

djpleiades wrote:

bootleg ;o
can i get the download to 320k plox?

tottori wrote:

HARD please [AR8] pleeeeeeeeeez