Darksonic wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue.

Normal:

01:02:084 (1): Remove NC, and then try this, it fits a lot better with the music.　not fixed.
　
Hard:

00:19:751 (5): Remove repeat and add a note 00:20:084, fits better.　not fixed.
00:56:418 (2,3): Too much spacing, try to reduce it in both sliders.　not fixed.
00:58:084 (1): Reduce spacing.　not fixed.
01:03:418 (1): ^　not fixed.
01:07:084 (1,2,3): 2,99x and 2,85x spacing?, omg no, reduce them please, remember that is a "Hard" and not "Insane".　not fixed.

This diff is too much for being a Hard, you should work more on it reducing big spacings (2x+) and things like that.
hmm, Normal diff will be add or Hard Remake. Before long

Insane:

00:25:751 (2,3): These notes touching the slider doesn't looks good, do this instead. not fixed.


That's all for me. Good luck~

Hello!~ Here's my mod~

• [General]

1. Add "opening" to the tags even though its a remix XD
   
   [Easy]
2. 00:45:418 (3) - Add finish on the start and end of this slider.
   
   [Hard]
3. 00:13:918 (3) - I found a hard time reading this, maybe move it here?
   
   pic

   
   
   [Insane]
   it's perfect for me~ >w<

That's all, your map is too good OAO I wasn't able to point out that many things, I like your map and the song! Go and have this ranked! OAO Take a star~ Good luck!~

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[hard]
00:08:918 (4) - I prefer remove one repeat and add note at 00:09:418 not,fix
00:33:751 (2) - change 2nd point to whitle point not,fix
00:37:918 add note not,fix

[insane]
00:09:251 (6) - remove it not,fix
00:23:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why you changed spacing here it is not interesting if common.

why you skiped normal?...this song can be made for normal imo sorry...Now, normal diff is made.

terametis wrote:

:)

Starry wrote:

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:57:418 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:43:418 (2) - Clap? not, fix

[Insane]

00:04:751 (1) - Remove new combo? not, fix
00:06:084 (1) - ^ not, fix
00:32:751 (1) - Clap? not, fix
00:56:418 (1,2,3) - This position look more interesting. http://puu.sh/wJxc not, fix.

[Hard]

00:58:084 (1) - Finish? not, fix
01:03:418 (1) - ^ not, fix

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That's it.

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. 00:46:751 - Is this kiai flash/fountain intentional? I recommend you to make one solid kiai time section rather than a fountain, by the way.

>Easy

1. 00:53:418 (2,3) - Slightly overlapped. Looks weird, IMO.

>Hard

1. God, I just can't seem to even go over 20x max combo here. Must be me that sucks at notes placed on blue ticks, though...

>Insane

1. 00:23:751 (5,6,7,8) - What's with the sudden spacing change? Keeping it compressed should be fine, IMO.

Eh... I think this mapset is very good already. I can't really find any obvious mistakes.

Good luck on the way

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Jupiter ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change AudioLeadIn for 2500(3000 a bit long).

[Easy]

1. 00:44:751 (2) - Maybe change a circle on 00:44:751 much better.
2. 01:09:418 (3) - Add new combo looks better.

That's all ~ Really cool mapset i can't find more issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

terametis wrote:

yeahhhhh ~~<3
add tag terametis lol

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Good luck~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Pretty good.

Ranked~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Omedeto :3

terametis wrote:

いえええええええええええええええええええ

djpleiades wrote:

bootleg ;o
can i get the download to 320k plox?

tottori wrote:

HARD please [AR8] pleeeeeeeeeez