KayeSara wrote:

Easy没问题，就是稍微感觉有点难

[Normal]

1. 00:54:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这地方我宁愿跳 哈哈 不过有点难
2. 01:08:026 - 根据前面的节奏感觉少了个音

Hard没问题，就是稍微感觉太简单

[Insane]

1. 00:43:411 (3) - 间距可以变大，玩着舒服些，不然有个感觉停顿了

soga 原来就mod完了

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from PM request
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[Nymph's Hard]
00:55:975 (2,3) - 作为送分hard难度 这里可以考虑删掉
01:08:539 (2) - 这里正常点行么。。要么后面跟一个note 要么延长(感觉都没啥问题)


[Normal]
00:49:821 (1) - 不要这么奇葩。。(fixed,这个纯属意外.....)
01:15:975 (2,3) - 和中间的线对称更好(这样下一个NOTE就不对称了orz...)
01:20:847 (1,3) - 没拉好 中间不圆(已重拉)


[Insane]
AR-1(这样就不叫insane了吧...)
00:19:308 (3) - 距离与前面的(1)和(2)看上去不相等(fixed)
01:01:616 (3,4,5) - 最好不要和之前的重叠 感觉略坑啊(应该不会吧,试过图都能打到)
01:28:026 (1) - @.@ 要不要做点SB提示之类的 (这个可以考虑下..)
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这曲好
star了~ww

Sumisola wrote:

没啥用的mod，捡着看吧

[General]

打开你的.osu 将leadin全统一成1000(fixed)

[Insane]

响板（soft-hitclap2.wav)音效别加在长白线，加在第三条白线好了(我觉得还好...)

01:27:000 (1) - 去掉slider头的finish

01:28:026 (1) - ^

01:28:026 (1) - 尾巴加finish(感觉有点奇怪..)

[Nymph's Hard]

00:55:975 (2,3) - 去掉 notes 然后把1 弄在这个位置 256,352,55718,5,0

01:28:026 (6) - finish？(fixed)

[Normal]

不nazi slider了，总之slider 没抱住 circle不那么好看

删掉长白线的C2 clap

00:03:667 (2,3) - 1/2 stack的话，第一个circle在红线，打起来感觉不那么好

00:04:693 (1,2) - ^

00:08:795 (2,3) - ^

00:14:436 (3,4) - ^

00:21:103 (1,2) - ^

00:22:129 (3,4) - ^

00:29:308 (1,2) - ^

00:49:821 (1,2) - ^

找其它地方塞或者stack在前一个slider的尾巴

00:27:000 - 这里音乐有节拍点，加个circle(已加)

00:43:411 - 加一个circle保持流动性，跟Insane一样(已加)

01:20:847 (1) - ctrl+r （那么一点点的DS增大没问题的(感觉原来的更顺手)

[Kanon's Easy]

00:03:923 (2,3) - 这种slider的overlap很不好看

00:07:000 (5,6) - overlap

00:08:026 (6,2) - ^

Kanon原谅我，我不想找nazi了 orz(等kanon.....)

哇......1/2好多.......

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洗脑爆了这曲子

Kanon wrote:

Insane
00:02:898 (1) - 补个finish(前面有4个finish再加感觉不太好)
00:19:052- 这段减小一点音量吧 hitsound太吵了(降低了10)
00:50:077 (3,4,5,6) - 说实话我不太喜欢这种节奏 这样下我觉得可以换一个转盘了

Nymph's hard
没问题

Normal
没问题

nazi两句 no kudo plz

kyuten wrote:

说好的mod呢 (´・ω・`) ww

[General]
Kanon's Easy的LeadIn和其他三个不一样(fixed)
Insane的kiai和其他三个不一样(fixed)

[Kanon's Easy]
-Timing-
00:27:513 - 无用绿线(已删)
-Beatmap-
00:02:898 (1) - 这里应该也要用S1的音效吧(fixed)
00:47:770 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一段对Easy来说会不会太难？
00:58:282 (1,3) - 这样不好吧...(这些给kanon看- -)

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:21:359 (2,3,4) - 节奏和00:19:308 (1,2) - 这里一样呢，repeat的话有些吵(fixed)
00:48:795 (1,2,3) - 和00:47:770 (1) - 这个对称，用repeat ww(这个我是特意放的)
01:08:026 - 这里缺一个节奏的感觉....(加了一个note)

[Nymph's Hard]
ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛MOD不出来

[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:47:770 (1,2,3) - 有些突然的连打l.l(1PC miss的位置Orz(1PC大丈夫=w=)
00:52:129 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 117BPM的话节奏会不会太难受._.(DT就可以了.....(死....)
01:10:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 需要重新排列一下的样子(也是特意摆的=w=)
01:17:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - 节奏和01:16:744 (2,3,4) - 这里一样吧(感觉这样比较有趣)
01:28:026 (1) - 之前那样的结尾不是挺好的嘛ww(因为已经没音乐了,不想突出2个note....)

SPOILER

[Overall]
音效的话鼓点和clap同时出现总觉得有点吵..(稍微降低音量吧orz.....)
Insane里5连打在117BPM总觉得有些难受...3连打可能好一些..?(不会吧应该...)
还有有些连打好突然啊><

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. 很好！

1. EZ超过3星了会不会太难！
2. 00:11:103 (1) - 这个slider没静音掉啊,看看怎么解决好.
3. 00:21:359 (3) - 歪了诶！（不要打我TwT
4. 00:35:718 (1) - 这个也没静音！好吵desu！
5. 00:56:231 (1) - ^
6. 01:04:436 (1) - ^

1. 00:11:103 (1) - 这是啥..是忘记加音效了吧？
2. 01:19:821 (3) - 这个重新拉一下吧，略丑~

1. Nothing！！！

1. 00:17:257 (1) - 建议ctrl+r？1/4连接1.7的DS略大了~
2. 00:18:282 (1) - 这个！完全无法预见的减速！STR+1或者干脆不减速拉成这样的slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
   CODE

   256,164,18282,6,0,B|260:152|260:152|252:152|252:152|260:144|260:144|252:144|252:144|260:136|260:136|252:136|252:136|260:128|260:128|252:128|252:128|260:120|260:120|252:120|252:120|260:112|260:112|252:112|252:112|260:104|260:104|252:104|252:104|260:96|260:96|252:96|252:96|256:84,1,170

3. 00:24:949 (3) - 往上面去一格比较对称.
4. 00:35:718 (1) - 这个slider没有静音.
5. 00:40:334 (5) - CLAP?
6. 00:40:847 (2) - 尾部CLAP? 后面的白线无所谓了,不过我还是觉得坚持白线CLAP听起来比较舒服.
7. 01:28:026 (1) - 同理~

JoJo wrote:

Hi ! >A</
Request from ingame PM ~

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. 很好！

[卡农]

1. EZ超过3星了会不会太难！
2. 00:11:103 (1) - 这个slider没静音掉啊,看看怎么解决好.
3. 00:21:359 (3) - 歪了诶！（不要打我TwT
4. 00:35:718 (1) - 这个也没静音！好吵desu！
5. 00:56:231 (1) - ^
6. 01:04:436 (1) - ^

(交给kanon看了)

[Normal]

1. 00:11:103 (1) - 这是啥..是忘记加音效了吧？(fixed)
2. 01:19:821 (3) - 这个重新拉一下吧，略丑~

(fixed)

[妮妮姐]

1. Nothing！！！

(妮妮姐巨萌!)

[Insane]

1. 00:17:257 (1) - 建议ctrl+r？1/4连接1.7的DS略大了~(应该没问题,毕竟都是只打中间的note)
2. 00:18:282 (1) - 这个！完全无法预见的减速！STR+1或者干脆不减速拉成这样的slider.(fixed,效果不错)
   
   SPOILER

   [attachment=0:1a113]{N7H]1CSB5$OVY[@MI]E4LY.jpg[/attachment:1a113]
   CODE

   256,164,18282,6,0,B|260:152|260:152|252:152|252:152|260:144|260:144|252:144|252:144|260:136|260:136|252:136|252:136|260:128|260:128|252:128|252:128|260:120|260:120|252:120|252:120|260:112|260:112|252:112|252:112|260:104|260:104|252:104|252:104|260:96|260:96|252:96|252:96|256:84,1,170

3. 00:24:949 (3) - 往上面去一格比较对称.(fixed)
4. 00:35:718 (1) - 这个slider没有静音.(fixed)
5. 00:40:334 (5) - CLAP?(fixed)
6. 00:40:847 (2) - 尾部CLAP? 后面的白线无所谓了,不过我还是觉得坚持白线CLAP听起来比较舒服.(fixed)
7. 01:28:026 (1) - 同理~

(fixed)

Good luck =V="

Faust wrote:

Hi.

It should be properly "Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco (TV size)". Do you see where you went wrong?(fixed)

This is perhaps the best single-tap map I've played in a while, it's quite addictive especially when the pace of the map feels perfect.(thanks)
About your "AraragiTsukihi" tag, you might want to space it so it's "Araragi Tsukihi" instead.(fixed)
Please mention what this "KKK1963" is exactly, because you haven't specified any reason as to why this should be in the tags.(fixed)

Willing to give you a bubble, but I'll put out these things beforehand anyway.

Kanon's Easy:

- 00:58:282 (1,2,3) - Seems fine to me, and hopefully the ranking BAT feels the same way about this. Just a head's-up.

- 01:27:000 (1,1,1) - Neat, though I prefer if it's 1, 2, 3. Don't mind this, really.

Normal:

- 00:33:667 (1,2) - Just a little suggestion:

SPOILER

(good idea)

- 00:54:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - Might want to drag down the pattern like this to avoid obscuring the notes due to the spinner hitburst:(fixed)

SPOILER

- 00:55:718 (1) - Flip vertically and set at x:216 y:336 perhaps.(fixed)

Nymph's Hard:

- 01:10:590 (1,1) - Spinner hitburst actually covers the next note (even if you can see the approach circle a while beforehand).(fixed)

I await your response.

Faust wrote:

Yay.

Faust wrote:

I see you've taken Elly's suggestion for kiai time and also fixed that little mistake.

Actually I have to apologize for that because I for some reason missed that as well, maybe I was careless.

But all is in order and hopefully you may receive a ranking on this very soon !

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:02:898 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy
00:34:693 (4,5,1) - Don't recommend this kind of rhythm for an easy.
00:41:616 (7,1) - Don't stack notes under slider ends in an Easy please.
00:42:898 (1,2) - Difficulty rhythm for an easy
00:47:770 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:026 (1) - This is also a really really long combo
01:02:385 (1,2,3,4) - Keep this sort of technique for a Normal please
01:10:334 (3,1,2,3) - Same thing as earlier. Simplify it.
01:25:975 (1) - Remove new combo
01:27:513 (1,1) - ^

[Normal]
00:27:000 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:411 (2,1) - That's a pretty big jump

[Hard]
Really nice. Good job on this one.

[Insane]
00:49:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The custom hitsounds make this sort of rhythm sound really bad. Use a soft hitnormal for the ends of the sliders or something.
01:28:026 (3) - Just make this a circle instead of a slider.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:898 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy.
00:39:821 (5) - New combo
00:41:872 (1) - Don't stack under slider ends in an easy please.
00:41:872 (1) - Remove new combo
00:42:898 (1) - ^
00:43:923 (2) - New combo
00:45:975 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:129 (4) - New combo
00:54:180 (1) - Remove new combo

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!

wmfchris wrote:

~

Remove countdown as this is unecessary and the pre-gaming time is not enough to countdown.

[Insane]
00:11:872 (4) - left 1 grid for correct spacing.
00:13:923 (4) - right 1 grid ^
00:17:770 (2) - down 1 grid so that (1,2,3) have equal spacing apparently

[Hard]
God mapper teach me how to map

[Normal]
01:19:821 (3) - Referring to 01:15:975 - it sounds nice with a whistle here


[Easy]
00:54:180 - avoid multi reversing tick of short slider in an easy
00:58:282 (1,3) - basically they overlaps a lot and is not preferred in an easy.
01:04:436 (1,1) - you can stack them properly

That's all. Popped due to the countdown problem.

wmfchris wrote:

normal 01:19:821 (3) - not yet fixed, the finish (not whistle sorry orz) is preferred on the middle tick (not the first tick)

fix this and we can rebubble the map~

Mei_coN wrote:

thx a lot> <,my first ranked map!!