1. Easy (1.87 stars, 78 notes)
2. Flask's Normal (4.24 stars, 143 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 297 notes)
4. Potential's Hard (4.91 stars, 272 notes)

suirenn05 wrote:

hi~~MIZUKI~~MOD dayo~!!!!:3

pantu no yousei san<3


Easy
✩00:08:342(1)-kokokara spin!? henkou→00:08:508spin 0.< fixed!
✩00:10:828(1.2)-slider ga mijikai...henkou suru to iikamo? http://puu.sh/l0DW gomen no change ;_;
✩kiai timega nai!! irete kudasai:D added!


Nice song>~< 加油！！！



Insane
✩NC motto huyasu(多い）toka doukana? 1~14 kurai toka... some fixed~



totemo Nice MAP<3dayo~~!!Ranked加油!!!

normal制作、我一定努力!!!! MIZUKI to MAP制作 高兴~>////<

Insane wrote:

00:10:497 (10) - NC
00:17:292 (2,3,4,5) - 最好不要这个哦
00:26:740 (10) - NC
00:35:359 (9) - NC
00:45:801 (2) - KPY也没那么会跳啊

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Insane wrote:

00:10:497 (10) - NC ok
00:17:292 (2,3,4,5) - 最好不要这个哦 change
00:26:740 (10) - NC
00:35:359 (9) - NC
00:45:801 (2) - KPY也没那么会跳啊

那么就先这样了~下了顺便STAR

ay6859 wrote:

嗚快rank >w<

Potential wrote:

完成... HARD
乎...

ay6859 wrote:

嗚快rank >w<

Potential wrote:

完成... HARD
乎...

jesse7419 wrote:

ay's Normal
音量Vol.很100%太多了 建議40-60%左右
00:00:221 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 我覺得加Clap 先等人吐槽
00:06:353 (2,4,7) - 滑條的頭跟尾都加上Clap或是00:05:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整個都加上 一樣等人吐槽
00:08:508 - 加Circle OK
00:14:723 (1) - 轉圈有點怪? 可以00:14:143 (2) - 延長到00:14:640 - 滑條尾巴加Finish 然後00:15:303 - 加個滑條到00:15:801 - 結束 滑條開頭加Finish

SPOILER

一樣先保留
00:23:425 (2) - 距離 (x0.88不是基本的x1.0) 咦 OK
00:25:165 (1,1) - 太遠了 對於Normal有點難 哇有人吐槽了 轉盤縮短了
00:30:552 (5,1) - 距離 OK
00:33:038 (4) - ^ OK
00:56:574 (1) - 加Finish
00:59:226 (5) - 加Finish
01:01:546 (6) - 尾巴加Finish
01:02:209 (7) - NC
01:04:198 (1) - 消NC
01:09:502 (5) - 尾巴加Finish
01:12:486 (1) - 開頭加Finish
01:14:475 (4) - 加Finish Finish跟nc都OK囉
01:20:939 (1) - 這裡我覺得把後面全部滑條都往前到白線上 滑條開頭加Clap 01:22:928 (4) - 這滑條可以刪掉 把01:22:265 (3) - 多拉出一個反向滑條 01:23:093 - 加Circle加Clap (不然節奏從白線跑道紅線有點怪)

SPOILER

跟歌曲有些出路...等人吐槽吧lol

jesse7419 wrote:

HI Hi ></
意外逛到這張圖
其實是看到BG被吸過來? www

General
資料夾的.OSB檔請刪除 除非有需要用到SB done

Easy
Easy距離基本上是不可以變動的 這Easy距離有x0.8-x1.2 請修正到同一個distance 修正到大概一致了..

00:00:221 (1,2,3) - 滑條開頭可以加上Clap 音量可以調跟後面一樣40% Fixed
00:02:872 (3) - NC Fixed
00:05:524 (5) - ^
00:07:016 (6) - 滑條開頭可以加上Clap Fixed
00:08:342 (1) - 加Finish
00:12:154 (3) - 第二個反向加Clap Fixed
00:13:480 (4) - NC Fixed
00:14:640 (5,6) - 加Finish Fixed
00:28:066 (7) - NC Fixed
00:31:878 (9) - 加Finish Fixed
00:38:176 (6) - NC Fixed
00:53:922 - kiai 後都沒上Clap音效? 加了觉得怪怪的(?
00:56:574 (5) - NC Fixed
00:59:558 (9) - ^ Fixed
01:07:182 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:10:165 (9) - ^ Fixed
01:24:254 (1) - 加Finish Fixed

Insane
00:00:221 - 到 00:19:779 - 無上Clap音效? 上了些~
00:26:077 (7) - NC
00:27:237 (1) - 消NC Fixed
00:31:795 - 加Circle
00:31:878 (5) - 加Finish Fixed
00:32:541 (8) - 滑條開頭加Finish Fixed
00:33:370 (1) - 消NC Fixed
00:35:359 (10) - NC 00:36:685 (6) - Fixed
01:13:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 加點什麼音效吧?
01:20:441 (5) - Finish比較好
01:21:436 - 不建議空拍
01:20:607 - 這邊之後加點Clap音效吧~ 加了个Finish Clap没加..O.O

That's all
圖好~歌好聽~ 加油

jesse7419 wrote:

star☆~

raririn wrote:

Hi M4M Request

[General]
*各个diff的tag不统一
*改clap……这个……orz



[ay's Normal]
*圆形slider同easy哦 其實我覺得還好耶
*这个normal赶上0108的hard了=,= ˙ω˙
00:14:723-1 强烈建议不要有1/4note……你bpm有180+啊…… O_O不懂
00:42:983-1 spinner后面半拍就有note了……normal太坑 改囉
00:47:292-1 ^ ^

raririn wrote:

Hi M4M Request

[General]
*各个diff的tag不统一 Fixed
*改clap……这个……orz

[Easy]
*Easy我建议用1/1的拍子 不过用点1/2问题也不大 但是建议位于红线上的圈不要出现...
*音量做的不好 50%到100%会突然变响很多 建议100%改成65%或者做50>60>70>85>100这样的渐变 做完忘调音量了..
*开头我觉得whistle会比clap好 Fixed Some
00:04:198-4 这样的slider不好看 建议做圆的时候参考这样

SPOILER

根据approaching circle改成

SPOILER

这样好看很多 建议是全diff的都尽量改成这样 改了变圆了些~
01:24:454-1 建议spinner整个往后1根线

[Insane]
00:13:314 (8) - 建议在这里NC以提示1/2-1/4的变化
01:07:513 (2) - 反一下吧~Ctrl+R 嗯这里改了下
ok finished 渣mod见谅 不渣阿O_O

先简单看一下啦sorry 有空补全
no kud this post for now

Byakugan249 wrote:

[ay's Normal]
00:09:005 (8,1,1) - this pattern would be a problem for players. after the repeat slider is complete, they have to spin, but with the spinner that close, players will most likely score a 100 or 50, and after the spinner is complete, they have to hit that slider. that slider is too far near the middle and that'll be hard for players, especially beginners since some of them play the normal diff first. try to do a different pattern than this because this 1 looks too hard for players IMO. OK thanks , i'll change it to some sliders or notes <3
00:14:143 (2,1,1) - ^yeah
00:45:635 (3,1,1) - same as above but spinner-osu is covering this note which makes it even harder for players to see where the note is. Umm ... i won't change it because i have no idea with that o.o
01:01:546 (6) - do Ctrl+H for a nicer flow to the next note. Thanks a lot , change it<3
01:26:243 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish since easy has it. good job <3
for this one, don't rely on your spinners too much. replace the spinner for notes. i'm sure if you can listen to the instrumental or follow the vocals, then it'll be a fun map and you'll give time for players to relax for a bit, and add more finishes. you kept your claps consistent but what's missing are the finishes. listen to the high points like the vocals or the cymbals and add finishes there. don't overdo your finishes or it'll sound bad if you play it.well,i've changed some spinner to some sliders . and add some Finishes . thanks a lot lol!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
Since you have a video for this mapset, disable the letterbox during breaks as the letterbox gets in the way in the middle of a video.
Fixed
the lead in time is inconsistent. make sure that they're the same in all diffs. Fixed
the kiai time is inconsistent. make sure they're the same for only easy and insane. normal and hard are GD so that means their kiai time can be inconsistent. Fixed


[Easy]
00:00:221 (1) - maybe add a finish at the beginning with the clap as it goes well with the guitar?
00:02:872 (1) - ^, and also at the repeat arrow. you'll clearly hear the cymbals at the repeat arrow.
00:05:524 (3) - make this a NC because the guitar riff changes. Fixed
00:10:828 (1,2) - when you map easy diffs, you shouldn't stack notes because it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is or when to hit the note due to the hitburst covering it. unstack this so that it'd be easier for beginners. Fixed to a repeat slider
00:12:154 (3) - with a BPM this high, beginners won't know when this slider will end. i suggest that you make this a 3/1 slider out of this to make it easier. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this. Fixed
00:15:303 (3,1) - same as 00:10:828. Fixed
00:16:132 (1) - add a clap at the end. if you listen carefully, you'll hear the thump of the drums. Fixed
00:17:458 (2,3,4) - there's a few problems for this: the spacing is inconsistent. for easy and normal diffs, the spacing should be consistent throughout the whole map, since it's at the red lines it'd make it hard for beginners to hit, so replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners, and same as 00:10:828. Fixed
00:19:944 (1) - i feel that a finish is missing here. add it to match the guitar. Fixed
00:24:751 (4,5) - why did you stop the whistle pattern? i don't like how the hitsounds suddenly stop unless there's a finish. anyways, add whistle at both ends to keep the consistency. hmm i remove whistle..
00:27:237 (6,1) - same as 00:10:828 but replace this for a slider. Fixed
00:31:878 (3) - add a finish at the end to match the cymbals. Fixed
00:34:696 (3,4) - same as 00:27:237. Fixed
00:37:348 (5,1) - inconsistent spacing. it's at 0.72 and the default DS is at 1.0. Fixed
00:50:607 (4,5) - same as 00:27:237. Fixed
00:53:922 (1) - same as 00:31:878 but to match the vocals. Fixed
00:56:574 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:01:546 (2) - can you move this somewhere else? overlaps are fine to do, but at the same time, it might turn out to be bad during gameplay as beginners might get confused at a pattern like this. Fixed
01:02:872 (3,1) - same as 00:23:237. there's no way beginners would make a jump like this. Fixed
01:20:441 (1,2) - same as 00:10:828. Fixed
well i don't blame you. this is your 1st map, but add more hitsounds especially finishes and keep it consistent. you also need to stick with 1 DS for easy diffs. i saw 1 part with a DS of 0.8 and the other with 1.0. that might confuse beginners as they're used to only 1 DS. there's also several spacing errors. go back to the map and fix the spacing errors.

[Insane]
wth why 1/1? if you map this with 1/1 it'd feel awkward as the majority of the notes are unsnapped. aet it to 1/4 because it made me confused.
00:27:071 (5) - add a clap here to keep the consistency in claps. Fixed
01:24:254 (1) - same as hard.
all i hear are claps and that makes it boring. don't forget that there are also whistles, so replace some of the clap patterns for whistles. and again with the finishes.

I guess that's it. just work on your hitsounds, a bit on the placement, and a bit on the NCs and it'll be a good map. this has rank potential so don't give up on ranking this. GL

Quilt wrote:

hihi~~Fionana >w</ hi >v</

Easy
Please fix DS to one 直しました～

Insane
00:59:392 (5) - delete note? Fixed!

easy and normal diff are seen again,after DS is fixed~

Quilt wrote:

hihi~~Fionana >w</


Flask's Normal
Please fix DS to one