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DJPop
~General~
- Delete tag "candy"
- Delete timing section at 01:39:820
- play-warningarrow.png is barely visible, add a white circle as a background


~Normal~
00:54:303 (1,3) - add finish at start
01:59:682 (1,3) - ^

~Vicho_Gu's Hard~
00:29:889 (5) - add new combo
00:59:269 (5) - ^
01:07:544 (5) - ^
01:10:855 (4) - ^
01:14:165 (5) - ^
01:20:786 (5) - ^
01:45:406 (3,4) - too tricky here
02:20:578 (4) - add new combo
03:49:337 (5) - ^
03:53:888 (1) - use 1/6 snap

~Rika~
00:36:303 (6) - add new combo
00:54:303 (1) - add finish
00:55:958 (5) - add new combo
01:04:234 (6) - ^
01:07:751 (6) - ^
01:24:096 (5) - ^
01:27:406 (6) - ^
01:52:027 (8) - ^
01:52:234 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:682 (5) - add new combo
01:56:993 (6) - ^
01:59:682 (1) - add finish at start
02:10:441 (1) - remove new combo
02:11:268 (3) - add new combo
02:12:096 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:924 (3) - add new combo
02:16:234 (6) - ^
02:19:958 (7) - ^
02:22:855 (5) - ^
02:26:165 (7) - ^
02:29:475 (5) - ^
02:52:648 (6) - ^
03:05:889 (6) - ^
03:08:993 (6) - ^
03:12:510 (5) - ^
03:23:682 (7,8) - change to this pattern
03:25:751 (5) - add new combo
03:29:475 (5) - ^
03:48:717 (7) - ^
03:53:889 (1) - use 1/6 snap
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
DJPop

DJPop wrote:

~General~
- Delete tag "candy" :arrow: removed
- Delete timing section at 01:39:820 :arrow: Really need tming section here,because accent start to here.
- play-warningarrow.png is barely visible, add a white circle as a background :arrow: I see this is fine.


~Normal~
00:54:303 (1,3) - add finish at start
01:59:682 (1,3) - ^

~Vicho_Gu's Hard~
00:29:889 (5) - add new combo
00:59:269 (5) - ^
01:07:544 (5) - ^
01:10:855 (4) - ^
01:14:165 (5) - ^
01:20:786 (5) - ^
01:45:406 (3,4) - too tricky here :arrow: tested here guess fine.
02:20:578 (4) - add new combo
03:49:337 (5) - ^ :arrow: not need NC here.
03:53:888 (1) - use 1/6 snap

~Rika~
00:36:303 (6) - add new combo
00:54:303 (1) - add finish
00:55:958 (5) - add new combo
01:04:234 (6) - ^
01:07:751 (6) - ^
01:24:096 (5) - ^
01:27:406 (6) - ^
01:52:027 (8) - ^
01:52:234 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:682 (5) - add new combo
01:56:993 (6) - ^
01:59:682 (1) - add finish at start
02:10:441 (1) - remove new combo
02:11:268 (3) - add new combo
02:12:096 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:924 (3) - add new combo
02:16:234 (6) - ^
02:19:958 (7) - ^
02:22:855 (5) - ^
02:26:165 (7) - ^
02:29:475 (5) - ^
02:52:648 (6) - ^
03:05:889 (6) - ^
03:08:993 (6) - ^
03:12:510 (5) - ^
03:23:682 (7,8) - change to this pattern
03:25:751 (5) - add new combo
03:29:475 (5) - ^
03:48:717 (7) - ^
03:53:889 (1) - use 1/6 snap

Other all fixed thanks DJpop <3
DJPop
00:13 <DJPop> : I've some questions, are these skin allowed?
00:13 <DJPop> : http://puu.sh/tsxS http://puu.sh/tsy7
00:13 <Garven> : The spinner circle, no
00:13 <Garven> : It needs something to show that it's spinning
00:13 <Garven> : I'm not sure what that first thing is for
00:13 <DJPop> : warning arrow
00:14 <Garven> : It's fine
00:14 <Garven> : Just add lines that are visible when the circle is spinning and it'll be fine too
00:14 <DJPop> : but the bg is white
00:14 *DJPop is editing (Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49759]
00:16 <Garven> : mm
00:16 <Garven> : Maybe a little shine mark
00:16 <Garven> : Kind of like what Shinde's water themed skin had
00:16 <Garven> : I think
00:16 <DJPop> : alright, thx
00:16 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/tsAr
00:16 <Garven> : Something like that
Sums up, you need to fix spinner circle.png and play-warningarrow.png


EDIT: Bubble
wcx19911123
[Sp3's Taiko]
01:47:890 (1) - unsnapped note
02:19:028 (1) - ^
02:19:856 (3) - ^


顺带找个taiko mod吧
好了叫我 0.0/
wmfchris
o________________________________________o

無節操pause overlay! 怎麼抱住人家絕對領域 D:

[Taiko]
00:20:269 - 這個2連與附近的譜面不相符 後面的1拍也很虛 可以移掉2遭/用dd d k
00:45:613 - K K? the current one is ok tho
01:13:544 - dk (and this can make a contrast with kd before
01:39:820 - finish is appropiate here
02:24:716 - the vocal sounds significantly different from this one... kkddkkd would work well
02:40:440 - k
02:42:510 - broken slider
02:47:682 - this stream does not fit with the song
03:52:854 - like the pre-kiai sentence I would prefer finishing at these two notes

that's all, no big deal o3o
spboxer3

wmfchris wrote:

o________________________________________o

無節操pause overlay! 怎麼抱住人家絕對領域 D:

[Taiko]
00:20:269 - 這個2連與附近的譜面不相符 後面的1拍也很虛 可以移掉2遭/用dd d k 移
00:45:613 - K K? the current one is ok tho 我好像沒改
01:13:544 - dk (and this can make a contrast with kd before 沒改
01:39:820 - finish is appropiate here
02:24:716 - the vocal sounds significantly different from this one... kkddkkd would work well no
02:40:440 - k no
02:42:510 - broken slider 把這個slider改短
02:47:682 - this stream does not fit with the song 我覺得適合
03:52:854 - like the pre-kiai sentence I would prefer finishing at these two notes no change

that's all, no big deal o3o
Download: Kitamura Eri - Happy Girl (Kawayi Rika) [Sp3's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Update ~

另外对齐了下误差 1ms 的绿线 ~ 谢谢了 XD
wcx19911123
fine now
rebubbled
Hitoshirenu Shourai
I think the 1/3 sections on Taiko are weird. I'm fairly certain they'll just confuse people when they play. Please consider changing them.

Aside from that, I hold no qualms with the map.
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
yeah ~ thanks for check my map ~ also already got pro taiko modder wmfchris's mod

So i think fine ~
blissfulyoshi
Gah that play-warningarrow keeps on making me think of Kyubey.... could you please change it?

Normal:
T_T star rating. The map feels a little difficult for your easiest diff. (Need to ask a few more BATs, but it might be acceptable)

Style/Aesthetics mod:
00:01:338 (1,3) - this overlap looks terrible imo, please clean it up
02:08:785 (2) - it would look better if you followed the same curve as 02:07:957 (1,3)

Combo mod:
00:55:958 (1,3) - the combo fits the lyrics better if it starts on 3 instead, so remove 00:55:958 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 00:57:613 (3)
01:30:717 (1) - the new combo does not sound like it fits here, I would remove it
03:50:578 (4) - since the music picks up about here, I would add a new combo here (If you want to remove 03:52:233 (1)'s new combo, go ahead, but I can definitely make a case for either way)

Sp3's Taiko:
02:48:924 (1,2,3,4) - a little worried about the 1/6 notes here since this is the only time they are used in the mapset, but I can't say I know much about taiko.

Hard:
Style/Aesthetics mod:
00:01:338 (1) - make this slider symmetrical please

Combo mod:
01:51:199 (1) - fits the song better if this note belonged with the previous combo, so I would remove 01:51:199 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 01:51:820 (2)

Rika:
Combo mod:
00:09:613 (5) - new combo for the high piano note?
00:17:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since most of the combos in the song are shorter combos, make these 1 white tick long?
01:44:579 (3) - new combo for the change in tone of lyrics?
03:19:131 (5) - why is there no new combo here when there were new combos in previous chrosues
03:28:855 (4) - fits the song better if this note belonged with the next combo, so I would remove 03:29:475 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 03:28:855 (4)
03:32:372 (5) - same as 03:19:131 (5)

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Not too many complaints. Jut a bunch of minor combo things. Tell me when you fix and I'll decide from there.
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
blissfulyoshi

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Gah that play-warningarrow keeps on making me think of Kyubey.... could you please change it? :arrow: I want keep change ~ can be seen this.

Normal:
T_T star rating. The map feels a little difficult for your easiest diff. (Need to ask a few more BATs, but it might be acceptable)
:arrow: yeah,it's a too easy diff,so i think playble for beginner.

Style/Aesthetics mod:
00:01:338 (1,3) - this overlap looks terrible imo, please clean it up :arrow: ok ~ changed
02:08:785 (2) - it would look better if you followed the same curve as 02:07:957 (1,3) :arrow: I think fine now :3

Combo mod:
00:55:958 (1,3) - the combo fits the lyrics better if it starts on 3 instead, so remove 00:55:958 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 00:57:613 (3) :arrow: ok,fixed
01:30:717 (1) - the new combo does not sound like it fits here, I would remove it :arrow: ^
03:50:578 (4) - since the music picks up about here, I would add a new combo here (If you want to remove 03:52:233 (1)'s new combo, go ahead, but I can definitely make a case for either way) :arrow: I think drum start for 03:52:233 ,so keep this.

Hard:
Style/Aesthetics mod:
00:01:338 (1) - make this slider symmetrical please :arrow: changed

Combo mod:
01:51:199 (1) - fits the song better if this note belonged with the previous combo, so I would remove 01:51:199 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 01:51:820 (2) :arrow: fixed

Rika:
Combo mod:
00:09:613 (5) - new combo for the high piano note? :arrow: ok,fixed
00:17:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Since most of the combos in the song are shorter combos, make these 1 white tick long? :arrow: I think not need NC for this part,Is not obvious lyrics.
01:44:579 (3) - new combo for the change in tone of lyrics? :arrow: Hmm,too short for 01:43:544 (1,2) combo.
03:19:131 (5) - why is there no new combo here when there were new combos in previous chrosues :arrow: ok,fixed
03:28:855 (4) - fits the song better if this note belonged with the next combo, so I would remove 03:29:475 (1)'s new combo and add a new combo to 03:28:855 (4) :arrow: ^
03:32:372 (5) - same as 03:19:131 (5) :arrow: ^

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Not too many complaints. Jut a bunch of minor combo things. Tell me when you fix and I'll decide from there.

Thanks for mod :3
blissfulyoshi
Ranked!
The 08 team_Bourdon
Congratulation!~~~ \:D/
Akemi_Homura
omedeto~! :3
YTYuyu
OMG YES :cry: congratz Rika-chan :D
Darksonic
Gratz Moe Rika ! :3
B2IN
랭크속도 돋네
Kotone
Gratz~
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Thanks bliss chan <3

Thanks all ~ >w<
Minty Gum
Oh, a map of the full version of this song is exactly what I was hoping for xD Congrats~ this map made me a happy girl.
bossandy
11days ... amazing ...
Melophobia
yay
No_Gu
Quilt
omedeto-!
Gamu
so fast Ranked! :O

Omedeto >w<
Aoriki
Congratz on getting ranked.
Meowcenaries
Grats on your ranked map!
Laurier
omedeto
AkiShizuha
congratz!~
Starry_old
Gratz
AIR315
Congratz~
spboxer3
哇~這次的Rate好高阿!!
HourglassO
这图好 8-)
Miya
so fast, just 3 days from bubble until get ranked :(
i must wait until 3 months but not ranked until now, orz

Anyway, congratz :D
S o r d a
maybe need tags collab?
if you can ask for BATs Add tags collab
anyway, gratz Rika~
Sure
congrats ;D
Garven
._.
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Thanks everyone <3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Rika map coloring plz ><
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