Ok then
[General]
Nice map and Good Luck~
[General]
- Maybe add tags? well if you can't find any good tags well just leave the tags
- 01:13:756 - Hmm I don't see any reason why this timing section would be lower then the previous one. It still on the same kiai time and there is no change in the song whatsoever, so might as well increase it. The current volume is too sudden it's sounds strange
- The same also apply for the timing sections near the end no need to reduce the as the intensity of the song is not very different from kiai
- Again about the volume. I think you should increase the overall volume a bit probably around 10% as the current volume is a bit lower, imo that is~l
- 00:20:666 (2,3) - The rhythm is simple but it really doesn't fit well with the rhythm of the music. I suggest to just stick with the music like this
- 01:26:902 (3) - Add finish at the end
- 00:06:509 (4,1) - Hearing the previous objects stick to the vocal it's better if you make these 2 object to follow the vocal too. Maybe remove the repeat from 4 then move 1 back 1/2 beat (you might have to lengthen 1 more if you follow this though)
- 00:17:127 (1) - Based on the previous rhythm on 00:14:430 (1) Shouldn't the custom tick is on the first one?
- 00:21:172 (3) - Remove the clap. Soft-normalhit works better here
- 01:26:902 (3) - Add finish at the slider end? Seems to bland with no hitsound
- 01:26:902 (3) - Same as above, you should add finish here too
- 00:40:554 (2) - The different amount of repeat with the previous slider make this quite confusing, the next 1/4 beat circle just make this even harder to read. You can simply remove 1 repeat from 00:40:554 (2) or remove 1 repeat from it then add slider with 4 repeats like this
- 00:56:733 (2) - Hmm the mini jump doesn't feel quite right imo, maybe use normal spacing instead?
- 01:19:486 (3) - Again, this note is redundant as the 2 previous note already enough to compensate for the beat in the music. It's better if you remove it
- Increase OD by 1
- 00:11:228 (5,6,7) - The 1.4 jump to 6 then normal spacing to 7, doesn't flow good at all. It'll flow better if you also use jump from 6 to 7
- 00:14:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh this is nice~
- 00:22:436 (5,6) - Remove this 2 note to give more accent to the finish on the previous note, not to mention the 2 notes are very redundant
- 00:29:936 (4) - Hmm, add whistle on the start and the repeat? it sounds better then a plain soft hit and I also hear some kind of tick sound? in the music too
- 00:31:200 (4) - 1/4 note doesn't fit here, you should just remove it
- 00:43:672 (4) - ^
- 01:03:812 (3,4,5,6) - I suggest to remove the jump from here and use normal spacing instead. This will make the jump to 01:04:318 (1) and it'll give more stress to it
- 01:19:486 (3) - Same as in hard
- 01:27:070 (6) - Add finish at the end
Nice map and Good Luck~