I like this song, also I saw that you are searching some MAT, and I'm aiming for MAT, so I'll try to do my best [General:]-
Combo Colours: On a Map, I always prefer to see 3 Combo Colours, I think that make more sense. Try to add this Combo Colour (Copy this code in .osu notepad in Colours)
Combo3: 0,215,215
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Skin: Since you have a Skin, you have to force a SliderBorder, Copy this code below to Combo Colours in .osu notepad
SliderBorder: 255,255,255
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Slider Tick Rate: Slider Tick Rate in 2 Sounds too much in this difficulty because the Slider Velocity is very low. In this difficulty is better if you use Slider Tick Rate 1
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Settings:--> Reduce by 1 Tick the Approach Rate since the BPM and the Slider Velocity specially are very low. (AR-1)
00:41:463 (2): It's better and more readable to New Players if you delete this note and finish to map in 00:40:897, at the same position where the vocal end
00:52:501 (1,2): It's not recommended to have Stacked notes on an Easy difficulties because this kind of patterns cause confusion in New Players. So, Unstack them (Suggestion: If you move (2) to x:152 y:248 you don't have to make another change since it's according with the Distance Snap)
00:53:350 (3): Following the Instrumental, it's better if you replace the Finish at Slider end to a Clap and then add a Finish in 00:54:482 (1).
01:01:841 (1): Combo Bug. This note doesn't have a New Combo after the Spinner, you must to add a New Combo manually to fix this problem
01:11:746 (1,2): Unstack these notes because cause confusion in New Players
01:12:878 (3,4): (^)
01:15:992 (3): Move this note to x: 256 y:28 because the Overlap with Previous Slider (1) looks really weird and bad to play
01:16:558: Following the Vocal, it's better if you add a Slider here and finish in 01:17:124 and then move Spinner to 01:17:690 and it would finish in 01:19:954, Like this:
01:39:765 (1): Add a Finish on this note to emphatisize the Kiai Beginning
01:51:935 (2,1): Unstack these notes
01:53:350 (3): Sounds Really fine if you add a Finish at Slider Beginning because sounds like a cymbal sounds in the music and also to make a difference to this New Stanza.
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Why do not you map all the song? It's better if you do that. This kind of things reminds me old maps (2008/2009)-
Also in the mostly of Case I didn't like how do you play with hitsounds, I think that you could use more variable.[Normal:]-
Settings:--> Reduce the Approach Rate by 1 Tick because the Slider Velocity and BPM are low, and fit better with music AR4 (AR-1)
--> Also, try to Increase by 1 Tick in the HP Drain Rate, since the HP Life bar reduce a bit low looking that it's a Normal Diff. (HP+1)
00:27:312 (1): This Clap at Slider end sounds really weird, doesn't follow the music at all and it's not consitent with your other difficulties. For these reasons, try to remove it from here and then add a Clap on (2)
00:34:105 (1): Add a Finish to emphatisize the Cymbals
00:51:369 (2,3): In this kind of difficulties is better if you don't have staked notes below Sliders, is a bit hard to read in this kind of difficulties, so try to unstack them
01:27:878 (3): This Finish sounds Bad, try to remove it please
01:59:276 (4): (NAZI) It's better to play if you align this note with previous (3), so move this note to x:172 y:256
02:00:709 (3,4): I really don't like how to sound this rhythm. Try this one, sounds better:
02:22:784 (1): This kind of Kick Sliders is totally not recommended to a Normal Difficulty. Really, it's a very Hard pattern to read on a Normal Difficulty, I know that the BPM is low, but anyway is an 1/4 pattern with a lot of repetitions. You must to change this pattern, really and make an easier one
02:59:435 (3,1): Unstack this one please
03:02:690 (1,2): Fit better with music if you remove the Clap at the Slider Beginning (1) and then add it at Slider Beginning in (2)
03:03:359 (3): And in this case remark the Cymbals sounds at Slider Beginning and at the end remove the Finish and add a Clap
03:32:973 (1): Just a Note? This make no sense. So start to map it again from here after to Break and Remove the Break.
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Again, I don't like it how to use the Hitsounds[Hard:]00:33:963 (7,1): Move (7) 1 grid right to Stack it properly with (1)
00:38:350 (6,1,2): Move (6,1) 1 Grid Left to Stack it properly with (2)
00:39:916 (2): Reduce this Slider by 1/2 and then add a note in 00:39:482, fit better with the Instrumental
00:40:048 (x): Feels Empty. Add a Note
00:40:614 (x): (^)
00:44:010 (4,5): I guess that you want to follow the drums here, but you are not making that on a correct form. Try this, sounds much better (Also, don't forget to fix the Spacing between the Sliders after to do that):
01:13:727 (1,2,3,4,5): Your Actual pattern doesn't look very fine to play. Try to make something symetric, (1) at the same y axis as (3) and same position as (5), (2) same x Axis as (4), like this:
01:17:690 (3,5): The Whistle on these SliderBodies sounds really weird and Inconsistent because you never use this kind of things on your other difficulties. So, it's better if you remove them
01:21:369 (1): Combo Bug. This note doesn't have a New Combo after to Spinner. You have to add a New Combo manually to fix this problem.
01:33:822 (3): Finish at Slider end
01:38:067 (1,2,3,4,5): This pattern needs more Claps. Try to add Clap on all White Ticks during this Pattern
01:56:180 (1,2): (^)
02:51:510 (x): The drums Starts here, so it's better if you add a Note
03:22:643 (T): This Slider Speed Change kill the flow, specially because the music doesn't have any change on it . Try to Remove this Inherited Timing Point to mantain the Same Slider Velocity
[San's Insane:]Settings:--> AR9!!!?? Are you kidding me?? The BPM is low and the Slider Velocity is not very high, so AR8 is more than enough (AR-1)
--> The HP Drain Rate is a bit high, reduce it by 1 Tick (HP-1)
--> The same with Overall Difficulty (OD-1)
00:40:897 (T): This Slider Speed Change doesn't fit very fine with music and Really kill the Flow. Try to Remove this Inherited Timing Point to mantain the Same Slider Velocity
00:42:029 (T): (^)
01:49:812 (2): This note doesn't fit fine with music (Instrumental/Vocal), Remove it Please
03:06:793 (1): Move this note 1/2 Back, sounds much better
03:23:209 (6): (^)
03:46:558 (x): Remove a Repeat as a Previous Kick Slider and then add a Spinner with the same lehgth as Hard difficulty
Well, That's All.
In General Aspects, this map needs more mod before to have a MAT Check. Try to find more mods please, and then Contact a MAT. Also, I think that this Star Icon was a bit husty by Pop, I guess that this could be wait a little more
Good Luck with your map