Nyar wrote:

reqからきました～
不束者ですが宜しくお願いします :3

Normal

SPOILER

00:04:442 (4,4) - にがwhistleがあるのに00:09:495 (4) - にwhistleがないのが気になりました 追加しました
00:10:126 (1,2,3,4) - のwhistleを優先させるのであれば、00:04:442 (4,4) - のwhistleｈいらないと思います　00:10:126 (1,3) - whistle削除
00:12:653 (1) - add whistle　　　　　　　　　
00:12:969 (2) - remove whistle
00:15:179 (1) - add whistle
00:15:811 - remove clap そこのヒットサウンドはclapでなくてwhistleだったので一時保留～
00:17:074 (3) - remove whistle, add clap　すいません 1つ前のModでそこにはclapを入れないようにしています･･･
00:17:705 (1) - add whistle
00:18:021 (2) - remove whistle
00:44:727 (1) - add nc
00:49:636 (1) - ^　　　
00:50:181 (2) - remove nc
01:06:545 (1) - add nc
01:13:091 (1) - remove whistle
01:14:181 (2) - add whistle
01:15:272 remove whistle
01:36:430 (3) - add nc sorry..no change for now(スタックしつつ色が変わるとSVの変化の為のNCが分かり辛いかもしれないので、保留で！　スタックさせない配置に変えた場合はNC追加します！！)
01:36:975 (3) - remove nc　sorry...no change(SVの速さが変わるので・・・)
02:14:066 (1) - add whistle
02:17:339 (4) - add whistle
02:30:430 (2) - ^
02:30:975 (1) - このnoteを02:31:521 (1) - へ移動した方が聞こえが良いような気がします

Hard

SPOILER

00:08:232 (3) - 反復スライダーの1番目にwhistle追加
00:09:179 (5) - add whistle
00:09:811 (7) - ^
00:18:811 (4) - のスライダー前後のwhistle削除
00:19:284 (5) - add whistle
01:24:293 (4) - add clap
01:36:975 (3) - remove nc
01:58:112 (7) - add calp
02:08:748 - ^
02:28:793 (1) - ^　sorry... no change(clapを入れると少しうるさいと思ったので・・・)
02:46:248 (5) - ここは02:41:884 (5,6) - と同じようにはしないんでしょうか？気になりました。間奏だから入れてないのでしたらごめんなさい＞＜　　見事に忘れてました！！！！！！！

good song & map :3

Darksonic wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my queue as you requested.

SPOILER

General:

Fine.

Normal:

00:44:727 (1): Remove NC. Fixed~
00:49:636 (1): ^ hmm...some people were divided in their opinions here. ok!!Fixed~
00:50:181 (2): NC Fixed~
01:54:975: This feels a little empty, maybe add a slider here?, if you do it, finish it at 01:56:066. Fixed!!

Hard:

00:47:454 (2): This note seems a little bad here, maybe stack with 1 and 3?
00:49:091 (1): Remove NC. Fixed~!
00:50:045: If you add a note here it will fit better with the voice, if you do it add NC on it. Fixed~!!
01:10:091 (1): Remove NC. sorry...no change(spacing x1.2 change)
01:12:272 (1): ^ ^
01:14:454 (1): ^ ^
03:32:507 (7): A slider here fits better with the voice. Fixed~

That's all for me. Good luck~

1. 00:06:337 (3) - remove this note, add at 00:06:653
2. 01:13:091 (1) - last slider point move 3 grids up
3. 01:16:909 (1) - clap
4. 02:15:157 (2,3,4) - finish at end of slider
5. 02:20:066 (2,4,6) - finish it's great

1. I think OD-1 because i got many 100s when playing ...
2. 00:08:232 (3) - move the 3rd slier point to x:52 y:188 ?
3. 00:33:818 (3) - move 2nd slider point -> x:384 y:180 3rd point -> x:392 y:104
4. 00:36:000 (3) - ^ 2nd point x:92 y:176 3rd point x:60 y:240
5. 00:45:954 (1) - spacing should be larger ... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282287
6. 01:29:884 (1) - 2nd slider point -> x:188 y:160 3-> x:252 y:172
7. 01:36:430 (1,2,1,1,2) - how about this pattern ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282289
8. 02:43:248 (3,4,5) - larger spacing?

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Normal

1. 00:06:337 (3) - remove this note, add at 00:06:653
2. 01:13:091 (1) - last slider point move 3 grids up
3. 01:16:909 (1) - clap
4. 02:15:157 (2,3,4) - finish at end of slider
5. 02:20:066 (2,4,6) - finish it's great

Hard

1. I think OD-1 because i got many 100s when playing ...
2. 00:08:232 (3) - move the 3rd slier point to x:52 y:188 ?
3. 00:33:818 (3) - move 2nd slider point -> x:384 y:180 3rd point -> x:392 y:104
4. 00:36:000 (3) - ^ 2nd point x:92 y:176 3rd point x:60 y:240
5. 00:45:954 (1) - spacing should be larger ... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282287
6. 01:29:884 (1) - 2nd slider point -> x:188 y:160 3-> x:252 y:172
7. 01:36:430 (1,2,1,1,2) - how about this pattern ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/282289
8. 02:43:248 (3,4,5) - larger spacing?

that's all

Good luck~

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Source should read "Noripii" as opposed to just "NoriP".
Add "vocaloid season collection snow songs" in the tags, since that's the album this comes in.

I try to find his(her? ) name.
NoriP call own name noripy.So fixed "noripy"

and Add "vocaloid season collection snow songs" in the tags
[Normal]
01:58:521 (1,2,3,4) - spaced a bit too closely (0.75x) fixed~!!

[Hard]
01:22:112 (4,5) - Fixed?
01:26:475 (4,5) - Fixed?
01:28:657 (4,5) - pick one spacing and stick with it Fixed?
02:21:021 (3,4) - try x:285 y:176 to maintain spacing 0.15x fixed?

Good luck :3

• 
  ソースはNoriPが正しいです。

1. 00:33:818 (1) - 始端にfinish。
2. 01:29:884 (1) - 終端にfinish。
3. 01:58:248 (4) - 一番下の難易度では、スライダーの終端にスタックさせるのは避けた方が良いです。また、01:54:975 (1,1,2)もそうなのですが、スタックとそうじゃない単発が混ざる配置は初心者を混乱させてしまうので、これも出来たらスタックを含まない配置にしましょう。
4. 02:18:702 (2) - 終端はclapじゃなくてfinishでは。
5. 02:30:430 (2) - できればスタックさせない方が初心者には易しいです。
6. 02:48:975 (3) - ここのfinishは始端ではなく終端。
7. 02:59:339 (1,2,3,4) - この配置は初心者が混乱しやすいです。(2,3,4)が(1)と連続して見えてしまうので、離した配置にしましょう。
8. 03:32:907 (3) - 03:33:452からスピナーを置くのなら、ここにノートを置いておきたいです。

1. 00:33:818 (3) - 始端にfinish。
2. 00:45:954 (1) - もう少し00:45:136 (2)と離した方が、タイミングの空きがあるのがわかりやすいです。
3. 00:50:181 (2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。特に(5,6)はプレイ時にstack leniencyの分ズレることで(4)とも重なってしまうので、見えづらくなってしまいます。
4. 00:54:954 (x) - バックサウンドに合わせてここにもノートを置きましょう。
5. 01:24:975 (6) - clap削除。
6. 01:30:430 (2) - finish追加。
7. 01:36:975 (1) - 01:37:384までのスライダーにした方が音楽に合っていると思います。
8. 01:56:612 (1) - finish追加。
9. 01:57:702 (5,6,7) - (6)の音取りで少し違和感があるので、削除してしまって良いと思います。もし削除したら(7)をDS通りに置き直して下さい。
10. 02:05:339 (1) - 始端にfinish。
11. 02:47:884 (5,6) - もう少しスペーシングを空けた方が綺麗に見えます。
12. 02:48:975 (3) - finishの音が浮いているので削除しちゃいましょう。
13. 02:49:521 (5) - finishつけるならこっちですね。
14. 02:57:703 (2) - finish。
15. 03:05:066 (4) - このclapはあんまり合わないです。
16. 03:08:339 (x) - ここにもノートが欲しいです。
17. 03:10:521 (x) - ^
18. 03:10:793 (1) - finish。
19. 03:12:703 (x) - ここにもノート。

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  ソースはNoriPが正しいです。

[Normal]

1. 00:33:818 (1) - 始端にfinish。 Fixed
2. 01:29:884 (1) - 終端にfinish。 Fixed
3. 01:58:248 (4) - 一番下の難易度では、スライダーの終端にスタックさせるのは避けた方が良いです。また、01:54:975 (1,1,2)もそうなのですが、スタックとそうじゃない単発が混ざる配置は初心者を混乱させてしまうので、これも出来たらスタックを含まない配置にしましょう。 Fixed
4. 02:18:702 (2) - 終端はclapじゃなくてfinishでは。 忘れてました！Fixed
5. 02:30:430 (2) - できればスタックさせない方が初心者には易しいです。　　Fixed
6. 02:48:975 (3) - ここのfinishは始端ではなく終端。　　　Fixed(KIAI timeの開始には最初にFinishが必要だと思ってました・・・ )
7. 02:59:339 (1,2,3,4) - この配置は初心者が混乱しやすいです。(2,3,4)が(1)と連続して見えてしまうので、離した配置にしましょう。　　Fixed
8. 03:32:907 (3) - 03:33:452からスピナーを置くのなら、ここにノートを置いておきたいです。

　　　Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:33:818 (3) - 始端にfinish。　　　　　Fixed
2. 00:45:954 (1) - もう少し00:45:136 (2)と離した方が、タイミングの空きがあるのがわかりやすいです。　　　Fixed
3. 00:50:181 (2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。特に(5,6)はプレイ時にstack leniencyの分ズレることで(4)とも重なってしまうので、見えづらくなってしまいます。　　　Fixed
4. 00:54:954 (x) - バックサウンドに合わせてここにもノートを置きましょう。　　Fixed(偶数連打になるのは避けたいのでリバースに変更)
5. 01:24:975 (6) - clap削除。　　Fixed
6. 01:30:430 (2) - finish追加。　　Fixed
7. 01:36:975 (1) - 01:37:384までのスライダーにした方が音楽に合っていると思います。　　Fixed
8. 01:56:612 (1) - finish追加。　　　Fixed
9. 01:57:702 (5,6,7) - (6)の音取りで少し違和感があるので、削除してしまって良いと思います。もし削除したら(7)をDS通りに置き直して下さい。　Fixed(ここ周辺の配置を再配置してみました)
10. 02:05:339 (1) - 始端にfinish。　　　Fixed
11. 02:47:884 (5,6) - もう少しスペーシングを空けた方が綺麗に見えます。　Fixed(02:47:884 (5,6,1,2) - 一直線で再配置してみました)
12. 02:48:975 (3) - finishの音が浮いているので削除しちゃいましょう。Fixed
13. 02:49:521 (5) - finishつけるならこっちですね。Fixed
14. 02:57:703 (2) - finish。　Fixed
15. 03:05:066 (4) - このclapはあんまり合わないです。　Fixed
16. 03:08:339 (x) - ここにもノートが欲しいです。　Fixed
17. 03:10:521 (x) - ^　　Fixed
18. 03:10:793 (1) - finish。　　Fixed
19. 03:12:703 (x) - ここにもノート。　　Fixed

良い譜面です。
ただ、時計回りだとずっと時計回り、反時計回りだとずっと反時計回りだったりして、流れが単調になってしまっているのと、パターンのバリエーションが少ないのでプレイヤーを飽きさせてしまいます。
譜面の作り方は非常に良い感じなので、もっと譜面作りにチャレンジすればもっと良い物が作れるようになると思います！
頑張ってください

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[General]

Increase hitsound volume Fixed

[Normal]

03:09:703 (1) - Asymmetric, Move first and third point → 1 Grid. Fixed

[Hard]

01:03:136 (5) - Move second point ↓ 1 Grid. Fixed
Overall not a big problem, but the layout is a very casual hmm...01:00:000 - 01:04:091 (2) - remap

That all

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

[General]

vocaloid season collection snow songs ← change the "_" into space, also you can del “vocaloid” in this phrase since it is already in your previous tags. You can still search the song by typing this album name. Fixed~!!

[Normal]

00:20:232 (1) - + whistle Fixed~
00:35:454 (3) - 1 grid ↑ Fixed~
00:56:727 (2) - hmm.. stack 1? sorry...no change.stacking under slider end,confusing...

[Hard]

Consider AR+1, will be more fun. But that doesn't really matter. Keep AR7 is still good. AR8 changed~

00:18:811 (4) - stack 3 feels better Fixed~
00:43:500 (5) - stack 4 Fixed~
02:07:521 (1) - 2 grids ↑ Fixed~

Hmmm. I'd like to say it's a very good first map. Really a great job. But I still ask you to think about making your map cleaner than how it looks now. Some of your part seems too messy.
thank you~ :3 I will try to fulfill it..

But, yes, a really great first map .

Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^

Hard

00:25:091 - maybe add note sorry no change for now
00:37:909 - ^ Fixed~
00:51:272 - ^ sorry no change for now
01:36:566 - add note and on 01:37:930
02:03:703 - add note Fixed~

01:03:818 - remove NC Hmm....spacing changed.. If this is Insane diff,I think remove NC. But it is Hard diff.So I think need NC...?
Sorry keeping for now
01:01:636 - ^
01:10:091 - ^
01:12:272 - ^
02:00:430 - remove NC

Normal

00:06:337 - add note sorry keeping
00:16:758 - ^ Fixed~
00:36:818 - ^ and on next red section Fixed~
02:01:521 - add note Fixed~
02:03:703 - ^ Fixed~

Good luck ~~

SkyDevil wrote:

Hatsune miku

Normal
01:20:727 - Break? can't...sorry
02:02:612 - Circle here? fixed~
02:18:157 - No new combo >< fixed~
02:30:430 - New Combo fixed~

Hard
Due to the slow bpm, Reduce your AR by 1 hmm.... sorry keeping for now
00:14:548 - Clap sorry. no change
00:47:454 - Place the circle somewhere else so it wont overlap the slider fixed~
01:37:793 - No New combo? fixed~
02:00:021- Reduce DS o_o oops...fixed~

Good luck~ >//v//<

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Above all

remove vocaloid2 or vocaloid in TAGS Vocaloid delete vocaloid2

Normal

00:37:363 (2) - add clap?
02:22:793 (1) - add finish
02:26:754 (T) - unsnapped
02:49:521 (T) - kiai start at here,it looks better

Hard

00:51:409 (T) - useless
01:21:136 (1) - add whistle
01:21:409 (2) - ^
01:30:430 (9) - NC
01:30:703 (1) - remove NC
01:56:612 (1) - Put a NC,it's representative of end of the previous spinner
02:09:566 (T) - useless
02:10:657 (T) - ^
02:11:748 (T) - ^
02:31:521 (1) - use soft hitsound and add finish

good luck!

Shino wrote:

Shino is here.
Congrats for you. I decided to make SB for this map.

- If you send the lyrics(of course, short version) to me, I would be more glad to working.
- If you want an "Effect for Single Letters" or a "Background Effect" or etc., please tell me and I'll follow that.
(Please send message before May 4th)

Melophobia wrote:

As requested

[General]
01:36:975 - sliderslideが煩いので無音のやつ入れた方がいいです～ はい！多分無音のヒットサウンドに差し替えました！

[Normal]
01:29:884 (1) - 終点finish
01:38:066 (2) - remove whistle
01:47:884 (1) - 始点finish?
02:17:339 (4) - newcombo

[Hard]
00:43:909 (6,7,8) - spacing揃えた方が見た目的にベターです
00:45:954 (1) - remove finish
00:46:909 (4) - add finish
00:53:863 (2,4) - ここにfinishは合わないと思います
01:08:727 (1) - finish
01:38:065 (3) - remove whistle
03:04:248 (3) - 終点を03:04:657 - に

banvi wrote:

こんにちはー
/modreq via in-game

[Normal]
00:50:181 (1,2,3,4) - 一番下の難易度でこの密度の4連続の単発はちょっときついかもしれないので2つのスライダーに変えたほうが良いかもです
00:55:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - うーん、スライダーが長すぎて見栄えがあまり良くないのでこんな風にするとリズム面もよくなると思います

01:12:000 (3) - move 2 grid up and 2 grid right. これで(1~3)の流れが直線的になります
01:19:500 - ここに音量10%の緑線追加
01:36:975 - kiai timeはここで終わらせた方がいいと思います
01:36:975 (1) - 01:37:793まで伸ばしてみては？
02:04:793 - ここにサークル入れるとリズムの流れ的にも良いと思うのですが…
02:30:430 (1,1) - これらのnew comboは正直いらないかと…
03:12:975 (1) - うーむ、スピナーの直後なのでできるだけ真ん中寄りに置いた方が良いです

03:23:884 (1) - 後方にwhistle
03:25:295 (2) - whistle外す
03:26:001 (3) - whistkeつける
03:26:707 (1,2,3)と03:29:707 (1,2,3)も上３つ同様にしたほうが自然で良いと思います

03:36:725 - ここに音量10%の緑線追加

[Hard]
AR8はBPM的にも譜面的にも早いです。AR -1した方が良いです
OD +1しても良いと思います
00:14:547 (7) - 先頭にclap
00:45:954 (1,2,3,4) - うーむ、正直ここはスペーシング狭くしなくても良い気がします
01:19:500 - 01:19:363の緑線を消して音量10%の緑線追加
01:36:975 - kiai timeはここで終わらせた方がいいと思います
03:36:725 - ここに音量10%の緑線追加

普通にいい譜面だと思います！
強いて言えばもう少しきれいに形作ったりすると良いのですが… 新人マッパーにしては全然良いと思います。
私も初期の頃は相当汚いゴミ譜面作ってましたしｗ
また、こういう曲は単純なリラックス譜面的なものが合っているので特別性とかは気にせず無理して変な工夫を入れる必要もないと思います
是非頑張って欲しいです！！ (*^-')b

CDFA wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, this week has been so busy!

Overall:
I'm assuming no is supposed to be lowercase. I don't speak japanese, so I'm not 100% sure about capitalization when translating it into arabic characters.

Hard:
00:12:653 (1) - Add finish?
00:46:636 (3) - Add clap
00:50:727 (4) - ^
03:04:248 (3) - A tad bit not moe~ ok!! change a little
03:15:157 - Add note with finish here~

Normal:
02:57:703 (2) - The slightest of not moe. Probably bring the 3rd sliderpoint down a bi6t.
03:15:157 - Add note with finish here~

Cool stuff, star for you >3<~

1. 00:10:126 (1) - 1grid right to be symmetry with 00:09:495 (4) -, because 00:10:758 (2) - is already symmetry with 00:08:863 (3) -
2. 00:19:600 (4) - how about centering? (256,192)
3. 00:55:091 (1,2) - switch NC, this combo seems start from 00:55:636 (2) -
4. 01:16:909 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:25:521 - whistle
6. 01:35:339 (2) - 1grid right to be symmetry with 01:34:248 (1) -
7. 03:00:703 (3) - 4grid up will be more playable
8. 03:03:157 (3) - copy/paste from 03:01:521 (1) - and ctrl+h,r plz or 1grid left,up
9. 03:15:157 (1) - this short combo is useless imo
10. 03:32:907 (1) - ^
11. 03:36:725 - use 10% volume plz

1. 00:09:811 (7) - 3grid right,down to be soft movement
2. 00:14:547 (7,8) - i think, it's pretty busy now, not fit with music. how about delete 8 and add a arrow with 7?
3. 00:17:074 (7,8) - ^
4. 00:45:954 (1) - remove this useless NC
5. 00:55:091 (1,2) - switch NC, same reason with Easy
6. 01:07:909 (1,2,3) - to make perfect pattern, copy/paste from 01:07:091 (1,2,3) - and ctrl+h
7. 01:25:521 (1) - whistle
8. 01:32:612 (1,2,3,4) - pretty confusing, i'd like to find some other way but up to you
9. 02:00:429 (1,2) - follow the NC pattern from 01:58:248 (7,1) - (remove NC 1, NC 2 and remove NC 02:00:975 (1) - )
10. 02:04:793 (1,2) - ^
11. 02:16:657 (3) - 1grid down will be more symmetry with 02:16:248 (2) -
12. 02:21:022 (3,4) - it's really breaking your flow.. don't anti-jump, if i were you, i would use 0.9 distance with 02:21:022 (3) - , and stack 02:21:158 (4) - on it
13. 02:22:112 (3,4) - ^
14. 02:26:884 (1,2,4,5) - no anti-jump
15. 02:57:975 (1,2,3) - same as 01:32:612 (1,2,3,4) -
16. 03:00:157 (1,2,3) - ^
17. 03:36:725 - same reason with Easy

Shoily wrote:

Hi!~
From my mod queue :3
<33 I love this song!

[Normal]

Okay it seems that this diff is a little too easy for a normal, maybe raise the difficulty parameters a little bit? ^^ (AP,DR)

[Hard]
02:14:921 (4) - Add NC
02:17:121 (4) - ^


Nice map =u=
Sorry I couldn't find many mistakes. Star~

Midasmens wrote:

Hi~ Midas here....
Request from my queue

General
Maybe you can disable the "Letterbox during breaks" in the Song Setup>Storyboarding
~~

Normal
00:51:272 - add note? if you want
00:57:818 (4) - NC
01:18:545 (2) - end at 01:19:363 will be better
02:03:157 (3) - NC
02:12:975 (4) - remove whistler and add finish here
02:19:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try to set like this if you want

SPOILER

02:42:430 (3) - NC?
OK~

Hard
00:11:382 (3) - down 1 grid
00:10:750 (2) - remove clap too noisy here..
00:12:013 (4) - ^
01:07:909 (1) - remove NC
01:16:636 (4) - NC
01:19:363 (1) - I think spinner should end at 01:19:363 but it will be too short....so i think you can delect the spinner and add some notes or slider here.
01:24:975 (6) - remove clap
01:29:884 (8) - NC
01:36:430 (1) - remove NC
01:51:430 (1) - ^
02:28:521 (8) - move to x:340 y:108 and remember spacing the next notes.
03:14:066 (1) - remove NC.
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That's it.... Hope you like it.GL!!
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almost fixed~!!!

1. What I first notice from the map is that the sound of the objects are sometime overpowered by the music (especially for the soft hitsound). So you should increase the volume of EVERY section (if not, just the soft hitsound section) by another 10% to 15% (13% is quite enough imo)
2. I would rather see 3 diffs in the maps but asking you to make another diff this far is quite tedious so, I'm fine with only 2 (beside the diff spread between the diff is good enough)

1. Increase OD and AR by 1 to make it balanced with the Hard diff
2. 02:31:384 - This timing section should be increased to 80 or 90. I can barely hear the finish with the current volume
3. 03:15:703 (1) - Decreasing the volume of this spinner doesn't fit at all. It should be increase instead because of Miku's increasing voice or you can just remove those timing sections instead

1. 01:18:954 (6) - It's better if this slider follow the drum in the music and add 1 repeat to it. You can also remove 01:19:363 (7) then make 01:18:954 (6) into 2 repeats (if you want to make it easier)
2. 01:29:884 (4,5,1,2) - even though this plays nice the fact that 01:29:884 (4) stack closely under 01:30:839 (2) is worrying me. I'll try to confirm with BAT about this and if you can, please ask Suzully if this kind of pattern is ok
3. 02:30:839 - Same as 02:31:384
4. 03:15:430 (1) - Again, same as 03:15:703 (1)
5. I have to say the spacing change after the second kiai is quite surprising, but the object there follow the music very closely so it's not a big problem, just saying