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Weez
Nyan-Zapo
n1 saten >~<!
sallygwizz38
do me an insane, I'll do something for you. please accept.and make it hard... features:
600 bpm, plus deathstreams.
a speed up to 7,500 for few sec in the song in the middle then slowing down leaving 600 at the start and end.
the stuff that banned forever had.
extra line going 2,500~9,400 bpm of notes
going down and up notes.
4 minutes in length.
enough for cookiezi to score 1,000,000,000+.
enough for cookiezi to score 75,000,000 in a few sec.
Hamuko

sallygwizz38 wrote:

do me an insane, I'll do something for you. please accept.and make it hard... features:
600 bpm, plus deathstreams.
a speed up to 7,500 for few sec in the song in the middle then slowing down leaving 600 at the start and end.
the stuff that banned forever had.
extra line going 2,500~9,400 bpm of notes
going down and up notes.
4 minutes in length.
enough for cookiezi to score 1,000,000,000+.
enough for cookiezi to score 75,000,000 in a few sec.
This made my day.
Trauma-
Ok, my mod4mod part.
There is still enough to improve if yo utake a close look on it.

Easy:


  1. 00:34:259 (1) - make it symmetrical
  2. 00:59:259 (X) - Add a note here ?
  3. 01:14:259 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to many finishes here imo.
  4. 02:04:259 (X) - somehow i miss a note here...
  5. 02:13:926 (1,2,3,4) - this might be to hard for beginners to play
  6. 02:35:592 (3) - lol just some random stuff i found but i think this red sliderpoint isnt needed...
  7. 03:15:592 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - to many finishes here imo. (you should at least make them a bit more quiet)
  8. 03:20:925 (1,2) - if you want this to be symmetrical please make it symmetrical unfortunately this slidershape is spread all over the map, however i noticed it most here
  9. 03:55:592 (1) - you should end kiai time at the end of the slider where the "finish" is. i know its the same on the previous ones however only this one bothered me, maybe because there is no break after it.
  10. 04:00:925 (1,2) - you should fix slider & spacing here
  11. Also most spinners MAY be to short for beginners...
Normal:

(I'll just set Nazi-mod off here...)

This one seemed a bit hard to me, maybe its just me because i recently suck in playing normal maps however i recommend to set OD on 4

  1. 00:38:259 (1,2) - i think this nc isn't needed...
  2. 00:47:592 (5) - i think you can add a nc here
  3. 00:52:925 (5) - ^
  4. 00:54:259 (7) - hm, i think this is pretty much the limit maybe you should move it a little to the center
  5. 02:02:259 (5) - ^^^
  6. 02:07:592 (5) - ^^^^
  7. 02:11:592 (2) - ^^^
  8. 02:17:592 (1) - this one MIGHT be unrankable as reversearrows must not be covered by anything. Imo. it is readable however im not a BAT...
  9. 02:18:259 (3) - also i don't like the snare on this note, i suggest you delete it here.
  10. 02:51:592 (5) - nc ?
  11. 03:29:259 (5) - nc
  12. 03:29:425 (2) - delete nc
  13. 03:35:925 (6) - im not sure if that short slider really fits here...
Same kiai suggestion as in easy
Here also the kiai sections feel slightly to "overfinished"

Hard:

Imo. the best diff in this mapset

Actually you can increase HP drain by 1. The parts with less notes won't be that easy to pass then but should be doable.

Well you have pretty much offbeat sliders in this map ill count those which felt really bad for me while playing, not every of those felt bad on every play but i still suggest to change them.

  1. 00:21:092 (1,2,3) - offbeat sliders which doesn't play good :/
  2. 01:01:759 (1) - i admit it was 3 am and i was very tired when i played this but i still suggest to add a nc so it wont be misread. Therefor you can add a nc here 00:59:592 (6) and delete the nc here 01:01:092 (1)
  3. 01:13:425 (8) - offbeat slider that plays bad
  4. 02:28:092 (8) - ^
  5. 02:42:425 (2) - suggesting to add nc here instead of 02:42:259 (1)
  6. 03:12:925 (2) - suggesting to add nc here instead of 03:12:258 (1)
  7. 03:25:425 (4,5) - defenitely a thing that would be fun in coop modus, nc on both notes
  8. 03:32:091 (3) - offbeat slider that plays bad
  9. 03:33:758 (2) - again a offbeat slider that plays bad
  10. 04:06:426 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Also same kiai and finish suggestion than in easy and bla...°-°

Insane:


  1. 00:39:759 (1) - actually nc isn't needed here
  2. 00:58:426 (1) - ^
  3. 01:03:759 (1) - ^^
  4. 01:06:926 (2) - suggesting to set nc here instead of 01:06:759 (1) -
  5. 01:10:926 (2) - suggesting to set nc here instead of 01:10:759 (1) -
  6. 01:33:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you should use copy&paste like you did here not on such a part, not 2 times...
  7. 01:48:925 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I highly recommend to remap this part, it doesn't plays good and imo. big jumps doesn't fit here AT ALL which is probably the reason that it doesn't plays good ^^
  8. 01:54:259 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 01:53:592 (1) - this note isnt needed
  10. 01:58:925 (1) - ^
  11. 03:10:259 (1) - this isnt perfect, however it is ok the one on "insanity" is much worse...but you can still make this better if you have the time for it...
  12. 03:31:926 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - i stopped counting how often you used this pattern now... :/
same hitsound suggestion bla...i think you got it now lol....tho kiai time seems to be ok on this map


Insanity:

Tbh. i don't know if this diff. is really needed, imo. it doesn't fit to the song, some parts were really fun to play but some weren't cool at all :/
(Btw. i smell much copy&paste here) o_o

Also sorry if i don't give you full mod for this diff but this mapset is pretty big and i can't even pass this diff, also i took a very close look on the other diffs and this mod took me around 3 hours or longer now (lol?) D:

However i'll tell you which stuff i noticed while playing. Which are actually only slider shapes.

  1. 00:32:925 (5) - If you want a "U" shape here please do it like this: http://puu.sh/8x8t
  2. 02:43:592 (1) - Please! make this one better, this looks just...bad :/
So after all i can call this a mapset which is okay. Not an awesome one tho...
Answer on this mod is welcome...

Edit: I modded my own mod °-° but it still might be not perfect sorry so just ask if something is not clear)
Topic Starter
Saten
did mostly everything, waiting for the guest diff mappers to reply~~
Mafiamaster
Remind me later~
Fiya
Just two little things~

Mafia:

03:51:591 (4,5,6,7,8) - The combo color blends with the sb here, so it's a little hard to read.

Insane:

03:10:259 (1) - This slider is not a circle lol
344,176,190259,6,0,B|336:256|272:296|192:280|152:232|136:160|184:96|256:92,2,400
I moved 03:09:592 (4) - down one grid after I fixed the slider cuz it looks better as well.

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Yousei Teikoku <3
Mafiamaster
Weez
wule
What the hell, great job!
Thatgooey
Really like the map! Lots of fun to play.
Mafiamaster
What happened!! :cry:
Topic Starter
Saten

Mafiamaster wrote:

What happened!! :cry:
I was planning on reviving it along with my other Yousei map. But I guess it'll be further delayed :(
Weez
:O is this alive again
HOLYWINNER
Why is insanity gone?
Kirino Kousaka

HOLYWINNER wrote:

Why is insanity gone?
Most likely, it's unrankable.
Wishy
Why?
Topic Starter
Saten
Remapped [Insanity]
kkleskk
I really liked the old Insanity that you made D:
But since you remapped i can't play it anymore ;_; , could you add the old file on this topic for us to play it again ? I really enjoyed playing it, and the new one feels so different, still great but not the same >.<

And i love your map btw :3
Topic Starter
Saten
Added~♪
Good thing I had it backed up
Dark Mummy
love this map
kkleskk

Saten-san wrote:

Added~♪
Good thing I had it backed up
thank you :D !!
zerothefallen


This is definitely one of my favorite maps, why was this old version unrankable?
Topic Starter
Saten
SPOILER

zerothefallen wrote:



This is definitely one of my favorite maps, why was this old version unrankable?
Stuff happened, and it's not unrankable D:
Frostmourne
leave a star here :D

I've an inspiration to SS when it get ranked \:D/


awesome map !
Fiya
Idk why you are asking me to mod this again, but now that I can actually fc every diff and pass insanity consistantly maybe I can actually help :P

[Weezy's Easy]
- SV changes are not really recommended for easier diffs

00:23:592 - The spacing during this slow down is not the same as earlier spacing and may confuse newer players. Recommend either removing slow down or remapping it so that the spacing is 1.25x that way it's the same as before just with slower sliders.
00:36:092 (3,4) - remove these two notes and place a note at 00:36:259 instead
00:57:425 (2) - move note to 00:57:592
01:59:592 - Again recommend removal of slow down or making the spacing the same as before (would use 1.5x here)
02:57:259 (3,4,5) - The first note of this stack will overlap with 02:58:259 (1), maybe just move the stack down and to the right a little so that doesn't happen?
03:03:592 - 0% volume is unrankable, must be at least 5%
03:42:259 (1) - add finish on slider start
03:59:592 (2) - add whistle to be consistant with the rest of that section
04:12:925 - You have a inherited section here that says 0%, but for some reason I can still here the spinner end anyway, so just remove it.

[Nekoo's Normal]
- Slider tick rate 1?
- OD -1?

00:52:925 (1) - Move the second slider anchor right one grid(grid lvl 3) to make the overlap smoother.
02:43:592 (3) - This slider randomly being normal hitsound is kinda wierd. Either make it soft or add nromal hitsounds on 02:46:259 (5) and 02:48:925 (3).
03:44:925 (3) - Add finish?
04:08:592 (1) - Move spinner start to 04:08:925 and add a double at 04:08:425 so that it looks like this http://puu.sh/CqL0 ? With clap on 5 and finish on 6 if you do.
04:12:925 - Remove 0% inherited section

[Mafia]

00:54:259 (3,4,5) - Add finish on 3 and 5?
02:08:926 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
02:09:175 - Remove unused inherited section.
02:09:342 - ^
02:09:509 - ^
02:09:842 - ^
02:43:592 (1) - Same thing I said in Nekoo's diff about the hitsound change here
03:02:259 - 0% hitsound volume is unrankable
03:15:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add claps on the start of slider 3, on 4, and on the start of slider 6
03:18:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add claps on the start of slider 3, on 4, and on the end of slider 5
03:24:925 (3,4,5) - make these finishes instead of whistles?
04:08:592 - add a note with finish here and start the spinner on the next red tick instead?
04:12:925 - Remove 0% inherited section

[Insane]

01:38:259 - extend the start of this break to here?
02:28:592 - add a note here, and possible one at the start of the spinner right after it too.
02:31:009 (2,3,4,5) - make this a triple instead of a quad
02:39:259 - add a note here? maybe make that entire combo move down slightly each note as well.
03:57:675 (2) - add clap?
03:58:092 (1,2) - add claps here as well if you did the above.
04:12:925 - remove 0% inherited section

[Insanity]

00:42:759 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:342 (2) - add whistle?
01:32:092 (1,1) - remove both of these new combos
01:35:009 (5) - add clap
02:20:092 (1) - remove new combo
02:41:675 (2) - add clap
02:55:009 (4) - add clap
02:57:425 (4,5) - add clap on start of 4 and on 5
03:47:009 (5,6,7) - add claps on 5 and 7
03:57:675 (5) - add clap
04:12:925 - remove 0% inherited section

I hope this mod is more helpful than the last one...
Topic Starter
Saten
Thanks Fiya!
Basically did all on my parts, except the 0% part. From what I know it acts like 5% (the minimum)
Yeah I mapped it before the limit got implemented.


Seriously, this is over a year old now. I need to get this ranked :o
zerothefallen
This is also one of my favorite beatmaps in all of osu! I want it ranked =w=
Fiya

Saten wrote:

Thanks Fiya!
Basically did all on my parts, except the 0% part. From what I know it acts like 5% (the minimum)
Yeah I mapped it before the limit got implemented.


Seriously, this is over a year old now. I need to get this ranked :o
Didn't know that about the volume, srry P:

And yes rank this already damnit lol
Mafiamaster
Loctav
Topic Starter
Saten
Done,

Changed Weezy's Easy to Weez's Easy since he changed name~
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:12:425 - it's significantly louder at 00:12:592 - so ddkdddd may fit the song better.
00:44:592 - don't make a slowdown on this note? looks better if kd moves in the same speed. (and less overlapping
01:13:592 - why not keep the x xxxxx mode? you can make variation on xxxxx as a progression too.
03:23:592 - finish as music indicated?

other than these stuffs, I also think that the middle stream is too hard comparing with the rest of the diff.
Loctav

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:12:425 - it's significantly louder at 00:12:592 - so ddkdddd may fit the song better. Yes.
00:44:592 - don't make a slowdown on this note? looks better if kd moves in the same speed. (and less overlapping) Moved green line on blue tick right behind it..
01:13:592 - why not keep the x xxxxx mode? you can make variation on xxxxx as a progression too. Okay. I didnt do many variations, the previous stuff stayed but I variated from the spot you suggested on.
03:23:592 - finish as music indicated? Yes.

other than these stuffs, I also think that the middle stream is too hard comparing with the rest of the diff. Reduced the complexity of the stream drastically..
Thanks alot!~
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/FSU5
Wafu
Star~
Weez

oh god my diff sucks D: I must remap this
Topic Starter
Saten
Go ahead then :P
Nidert
late-night mod as usual~~

SPOILER
01:41 Nidert: : 01:01:425 - lägg till not
01:41 Nidert: : sen ta bort
01:41 Nidert: : 01:01:759 (2) -
01:41 Nidert: : flytta slidern dit
01:41 Nidert: : och gör den reverse
01:41 Nidert: : så passar det bättre med gitarren
01:42 Nidert: : lr?
01:43 Saten: : la till en not iallafall
01:43 Nidert: : xD
01:43 Nidert: : sveket
01:43 Nidert: : 01:11:592 (1) -
01:43 Nidert: : åh fyfan
01:43 Nidert: : vad ful
01:43 Saten: : XD
01:43 Saten: : ey
01:46 Nidert: : 01:24:259 (6,7,8) -
01:46 Saten: : gjorde den "finare"
01:46 Nidert: : vene varför det är 3
01:46 Nidert: : noter
01:46 Nidert: : när det är en stavelse
01:46 Nidert: : 01:29:425 (2) - partial overlapping fett fuuuult~~
01:46 Nidert: : xD
01:47 Saten: : xD
01:47 Saten: : ;_;
01:49 Nidert: : 02:31:009 (2,3,4,5) -
01:49 Nidert: : wat
01:49 Saten: : sup
01:49 Saten: : xXD
01:49 Saten: : vad är det med den
01:49 Nidert: : fett random xD
01:51 Nidert: : 03:22:259 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/375815
01:51 Saten: : xd
01:51 Saten: : idd
01:53 Nidert: : 03:20:259 (3) -
01:53 Nidert: : varför
01:53 Nidert: : börjar den dr
01:54 Saten: : vad menar du
01:54 Saten: : xd
01:54 Nidert: : alltså
01:54 Nidert: : tycker det ska
01:54 Nidert: : vara ett ljud
01:54 Nidert: : 03:20:092 -
01:54 Nidert: : här
01:54 Nidert: : och sen kand en där slidern börja när hon säger nästa ord
01:57 Nidert: : ELR
01:57 Saten: : xd
01:57 Saten: : vene
01:57 Saten: : det blir snabbare sen
01:57 Nidert: : me
01:57 Nidert: : n
01:57 Nidert: : fixa det då
01:57 Nidert: : xD
01:57 Saten: : xD
01:58 Nidert: : 03:43:592 (1) - jävla kokosnöt
01:58 Saten: : XD
02:01 Saten: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/407957
02:01 Saten: : vene om fixad
02:02 Nidert: : vad gjorde du med
02:02 Saten: : men den är symmetrisk nu
02:02 Nidert: : det inna
02:02 Nidert: : n
02:02 Saten: : 03:43:592 (1) -
02:02 Saten: : den?
02:02 Nidert: : aa
02:03 Nidert: : ne
02:03 Nidert: : va
02:03 Saten: : kokosnöten?
02:03 Nidert: : slidern som blev "snabbare"
02:03 Saten: : aha
02:03 Saten: : 03:20:925 -
02:03 Nidert: : aa
02:03 Nidert: : gjorde du någt
02:04 Nidert: : lr
02:04 Saten: : ne xd
02:04 Saten: : fick det inte o passa
02:04 Saten: : riktigt
02:06 Nidert: : 03:14:592 (4,5) -
02:06 Nidert: : varför
02:07 Nidert: : är alla de här noterna
02:07 Nidert: : inte i mitten
02:07 Nidert: : istället
02:07 Saten: : vene xD
02:07 Saten: : för att (4) fanns inte innan
02:07 Saten: : o (5) hade distance snap på
02:08 Nidert: : kk
02:08 Nidert: : centrera dem
02:08 Saten: : kk
02:08 Saten: : done
02:17 Nidert: : har du ändrat lr ska du hvar kvar
02:18 Saten: : har ändrat men den noten på röda linjen får det o bli konstigt
02:18 Saten: : xD
02:19 Nidert: : kanske en slider istället
02:19 Nidert: : xD
02:19 Saten: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/407970
02:20 Saten: : blev så
02:20 Saten: : xd
02:20 Nidert: : ah
02:20 Nidert: : kanske är bättre
02:22 Nidert: : aa
02:22 Nidert: : aja
02:22 Nidert: : går till insahnti
02:24 Nidert: : 00:36:259 (3,4,5,6) -
02:24 Nidert: : osymmetrisk
02:25 Saten: : va
02:25 Saten: : xd
02:25 Nidert: : ser sne ut
02:25 Nidert: : iaf
02:25 Saten: : ingen tanke om symmetri där xD
02:25 Nidert: : men
02:25 Nidert: : den är ful
02:25 Nidert: : ändå
02:25 Nidert: : så gör den finare
02:25 Nidert: : xD
02:25 Nidert: : aja
02:25 Nidert: : w/e
02:29 Nidert: : ey
02:29 Nidert: : 03:20:925 (1,1) -
02:29 Nidert: : bildar fett fin
02:29 Nidert: : hästsko
02:29 Saten: : XD
02:30 Saten: : gillar du inte hästskor
02:31 Nidert: : jo
02:31 Nidert: : fett söta
02:31 Nidert: : vene
02:31 Nidert: : 03:44:925 (1) -
02:32 Nidert: : kan inte du typ
02:32 Nidert: : göra något
02:32 Nidert: : med den
02:32 Saten: : xd
02:32 Nidert: : istället för att ha dne där fett fult
02:32 Nidert: : D
02:32 Saten: : visste att du skulle peta på den
02:32 Nidert: : xd
02:32 Nidert: : den bara sitter där
02:32 Nidert: : med en not snett på den
02:34 Saten: : la den imitten å den är inte sne längre
02:34 Saten: : xD
02:34 Nidert: : aja
02:34 Nidert: : har inte mkt mer
02:35 Nidert: : att säga
02:35 Nidert: : xd
02:35 Saten: : inga mer papayas?
02:35 Nidert: : ne
02:35 Saten: : bara hästskor
02:35 Nidert: : aa

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Saten
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