mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Estoy aburrido asi que decidi hacerte un mod

General:
- Nada para destacar aqui

Easy:
- El Approach Rate se siente algo lento, creo que deberias agregarle +2, ademas juega bien con la velocidad de Slider
01:10:547 (3,4): Estas Notas estan muy separadas, con respecto al Spacing que venias llevando. Intenta arreglar esto con el distance Snap
01:28:960 (5): Me parece que este Slider debe ser de 1/1. Para esto, te sugiero que muevas este Slider 1/2 hacia atras (Tick Blanco, 01:28:687) y que luego termine en 01:29:233
01:35:324 (5): Con este Slider te sugiero lo mismo que arriba, entonces movelo 1/2 atras (Tick Blanco, 01:33:051), y que termine en 01:33:597

Verdi's Normal:
00:18:311 (3): El doble Whistle (Con el previo (2)) no me suena mucho, me gusta mas como suena si eliminas el whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:27:039 (3): (^)

Hard:
00:18:583 (1): Suena bien con un Whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:21:584 (5): Agregale un Whistle a esta Nota
01:37:689 (3): Whistle al comienzo del Slider
01:43:417 (1): Este Slider sonaria mejor si lo acortas 1/4, con el reverse va a terminar en un Tick Rojo y luego agregar una nota en el Tick Blanco que sobra. Algo asi seria:

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01:45:599 (1): (^)
01:47:781 (1): (^)
01:50:509 (2): En este caso, al tener 2 Sliders, te sugiero que muevas este 1/4 hacia atras y que luego termine en 01:50:782, Seria algo asi:

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01:56:101 (x): Quizas puedas agregar una nota aqui

Bueno eso es todo. Muy buen map en General
Asi que Star y Buena Suerte con el rank

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello!

Song's Info:
- I'm sure I have heard this song in Super Mario Galaxy too I mean smg1 lol so yeah maybe that's the source ? or it should be in tags ...

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- OD +1
- 01:21:049 (3,1) >> I know this might mess up your pattern but if possible please unstack these because novice players might find stacks hard to play.
- 01:41:780 >> I really think you should add a note here, it feels kinda empty without it and also the rhythm seems much better with it

Verdi's Normal:
- 00:18:311 (3,4) >> Sounds weird and off. Try moving (3) to 00:18:583 and shorten it by 2 ticks then add a note at 00:19:402
- 00:53:635 >> New combo ?
- 00:58:000 >> ^
- 01:12:866 >> Replace whistle with finish
- 01:21:595 >> ^
- 01:49:964 (1,2) >> Make the formation like this http://puu.sh/hAx0 instead ?
- Uh, the use of blue ticks is correct but I wonder if it is easy enough for normal players to well, play

Hard:
- 00:09:309 >> Is it me or this note sounds more accurate when snapped to 1/6 ? http://puu.sh/hAzn Uh, I can't say this goes for many notes but I think for some yes
- 00:11:764 >> Could you curve this more right now it's seem a little lazy lol I don't know if you understand what I mean by that
- 00:25:539 >> Move (3) here, the stream sounds better here instead of where it is now
- 00:37:361 >> ^
- 01:08:092 >> Add a note ?
- 01:39:189 >> Delete this note because this stream doesn't sound very well and doesn't fit imo
- 01:43:417 >> Shorten the slider by a tick that way it fits the music much better then fill the space left as you like
- 01:45:599 >> ^
- 01:47:781 >> ^

* Overall pretty good maps

Jacob wrote:

quick check here

[Verdi's Normal]

00:24:857 - Touches the HP bar, and this kind of slider only looks good when horizontal

[Hard]

00:44:496 - NC please, this is currently inconsistent with the combo changes in the beginning of the song

no kudosu

lovhin456 wrote:

Looks fine
Bubbled

Teddiursa wrote:

Woot. ♥

Nyanyanyanyanyanya!

IceBeam wrote:

hi!

maybe remove claps from easy and hard? they honestly don't fit at all ok fixed

[Easy]
00:07:399 (1) - finish is way too loud here,I don't think it fits well :\ fixed
00:49:134 (1) - looks a bit out of place here..you could use a reverse-slider instead,like this:

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done
01:12:866 (1) - spacing done
01:27:869 (3) - I was expecting this note at 01:27:596 honestly..I don't think such hard rhytm is acceptable in the easiest diff,I'd also make a slider to make it easier to hit:

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i change the pattern so
01:31:142 (2,3,4,5) - same,I wouldn't follow that bg music,but tried to focus on the main rhytm same ^

[Verdi's Normal]
00:18:583 (3,4,5) - moving (5) a little farther would be better
otherwise nice,though I got a little confused with blue ticks,I'd rather used 1/1 rhytm

I'm fine with Hard,though I don't think any jumps would fit this music I remember your "Don't Stop" map - there're really few maps like this nowadays,and I wish you mapped all your maps in that style,so I was a little dissapointed to see jumps here,but it's up to you~

IceBeam wrote:

alright,time to rank!

Derekku wrote:

Unranking for the time being; the timing here is definitely off... The offset is at least 20ms early (can especially be noticed early on in the song), and it seems that the BPM is too slow.

I've tested a bunch of times, and I feel that 110.00 BPM with +30 offset (thus 7,430) works best.

Note: If it turns out that only the offset is incorrect, then this can be reranked without needing scores wiped.

Quppa wrote:

Koji Kondo is credited with composition for this track, not Mahito Yokota, and the title on the soundtrack is 'Starship Mario 2' ('Starship Mario 1' and 'Starship Mario 3' have different instruments).

http://vgmdb.net/album/19454

MoodyRPG wrote:

Quppa wrote:

Koji Kondo is credited with composition for this track, not Mahito Yokota, and the title on the soundtrack is 'Starship Mario 2' ('Starship Mario 1' and 'Starship Mario 3' have different instruments).

http://vgmdb.net/album/19454

I'm pretty sure about the artist you know,like the others maps ranked from SMG and about the tittle,i'm not sure

Krisom wrote:

Hey there, I made you a BG that is somehow a tad more related to the music

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Good luck!