Garven wrote:

[Insane]
00:44:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These hitsounds were a stark contrast to the mapping prior.
00:58:177 (2,3) - It'd be nice to have these not stacked with the 1
01:25:345 (3) - The rekiai isn't really necessary...
02:37:093 - ^
02:47:163 (1,2) - Why normal finishes now?
04:09:423 (1) - Does this really need to be that long? q:
Nothing really -wrong- per se, though it does have a really old-style feel to it. The patterns don't flow together very well, and there's a lot of returns to stacks which is a fairly antiquated style, hehe.

wcx19911123 wrote:

悠久的史前玩意么o.o

[General]
timing有点问题，总体的offset我感觉需要+5左右，然后从第二个kiai开始offset就差的有点远了，有些地方打出来20+ms late。。 我个人感觉offset是从02:45:905 - 附近开始变化的，建议找点timing高手看看0.0 之前也很多人看过timing了, 现在这个已经是我能找到的最合适的了, 这歌鼓点不准, 所以是按基本对应歌词来的
除了Insnae，其他难度都是kiai喷泉，不过喷的次数都不同，最好弄一样 我的难度保持一致, GD就没必要了吧?
其实我感觉sliderborder似乎太白了o.o 还好吧...
不去掉letterbox么，有4:3的视频 k

[Normal]
00:19:471 (1,2,3) - 这spacing不一样啊 fixed
01:56:814 (1,2,3,4) - 这太难了，请至少换成两个sldier k
02:04:576 (3,4,5,1) - 这个虽然叠起来了不过感觉还是有点难o.o 改了
后面很多这种就不再提了0.0
03:49:283 (4) - ctrl+j，flow好点

[BexXz no Hard]
00:37:723 - better to fill this break imo , for example add note here? and here 00:38:982 - ?
00:51:149 - ^
00:59:751 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is really confusing , cuz the spacing is totally random.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255896
01:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^ changed
01:11:079 - spinner end at here? k
01:48:212 - fill this bread?
02:01:639 - ^
02:08:352 - ^ , maybe add a spinner?
03:21:801 (1,2,3) - remove some claps , or change to whistle plz , it sound really odd now changed to custom 1

[Insane]
00:16:324 (2) - 可以考虑换成1/6折返slider 确实是1/6拍, 不过感觉1/6太难抓了, 还是1/4拍好了
00:18:003 (2) - ^，后面的不提了，随带说下如果后面的三连circle改成1/6的话记得最好用slider，不然在这难度里会显得太难
00:24:296 (7) - remove？前后的同样节奏都没note，唯独这里有一个，略违和 声音也不大应该还好吧, 主要是想更顺点
00:50:520 - 我建议把这个NC挪到00:50:310 - 这里，好读点的感觉 行
01:30:800 (5,1) - 这个anti-jump感觉不合曲，打起来也违和，最好换个pattern 标错时间了么?
03:02:080 (7) - remove？
03:25:787 (3) - 这个shape真的可以再弄好点。。 k

[saymun no Insane]
set slider tick rate to 1 plz , 0.5 is now unrankble k
00:16:324 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest change this to slider
00:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - and this , it is hard to play 1/6 beats at song's starting , cuz players don't know there are 1/6 rhyme at here
00:23:037 - if you fix ^ , then keep here as circles is fine , cuz players already know here is 1/6 rhyme
01:46:954 - move newcombo to 01:46:744 - plz , or the jump is really too hard to read k
03:38:794 (2,1) - this anti-jump feel reall odd , stack or move them far a bit plz
04:00:192 (1,2,3) - this jumps are kinda huge imo , reduce spacing a bit?
04:06:905 (1,2,3) - ^
其他没怎么改, 我感觉也没什么问题, saymun做图风格就这样

好长orz
没什么大问题，不过感觉很多小地方有很大的完善空间，比如slider shape，几何大跳的shape之类的
加油o.o

Garven wrote:

Sorry I took so long. I suck as a BAT, haha.

[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds great with this song

[Normal]
01:15:695 - Move this delayed break to 01:14:856 -
01:39:821 - Move this delayed break to 01:40:030 -
02:50:310 - Move this delayed break to 02:50:520 - all done

[Hard]
00:29:541 (1) - Extend this to 00:31:429 - and delete the break. Maybe add whistle too. k
01:18:842 - This kiai is badly positioned. removed
01:36:254 (2,3) - Really bad spacing changed
02:23:667 (4) - I'm really hesitant about these spiral sliders because of the mm effect. I'm not exactly sure what do to here. Applies to 01:13:177 (4) - too. worked fine here...maybe just for your skin?

02:30:380 (1,2) - Wha- why are these in 1/3 snap?
02:32:058 (1,2) - These too. Sounds really bad. :/ Hmm, changed
02:41:289 (3,4,5) - Spacing
02:42:968 (2,3,1) - ^ /o/ fixed
02:47:163 (3,4) - Those finishes stick out bad changed
03:47:500 (2,3) - Snapped wrong. Use 1/6 snap and add an extra circle. changed

[Insane]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there fixed
03:52:640 - Extend break to 03:52:640 -

「saymun]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there k, fixed
03:21:801 (5,6,7) - Move 1.5 grids right and down to adjust for stacking. done
03:50:961 (1) - Extend to 03:52:640 - k

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