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谢谢modhoLysoup wrote:
hi Breeze~
all suggestions~
[Breeze]
00:15:905 - 為什麼不把這移到00:16:114?k
00:51:149 (3,1) - 這個spacing讓我以為是1/4因為前面spacing比較大. 把他們分開一點比較好我覺得like this or something:
00:58:282 (1) - 要不要把這分開一點比較好馬上了解rhythm http://puu.sh/6BrS
02:08:352 (1,2,3) - 排直一點? 不然彎一點?
03:07:325 (1) - 這是發生甚麼事? inherited section offset: 187325才對啊
.. 我才發現從這條線開始03:07:325, 把offset 全部 -1 然後樓上的offset也會沒事
03:14:038 (1) - 這個也會修正
03:49:283 - 但未甚麼這條offset是+1??? 還是把每條後面的都檢查一下吧
03:19:912 (1,2,3) - ˊ這個rhythm不一樣就不要排方形比較好 雖然有NC
03:35:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以排得更好 五角形
04:08:584 - resnap green line
welcome back saymun <3saymun wrote:
saymun came back
00:22:828 (1,1) - I know you can make these look better. Just look at 00:21:149 (3) -
00:54:086 (2) - ^
00:59:751 (1) - Tiny overlap with 00:59:331 (6) -
01:06:464 (1) - You know it
01:10:450 (2) - Please don't stack under slider ends for and easy diff.
01:12:128 (6) - ^
01:33:317 (3) - ^
01:19:891 (1,1,1,2,1) - I'm getting the feeling that you're relying too heavily on these short repeating sliders. Too many isn't very fun, and it could be kind of confusing as to when they are going to end for new players.
01:33:737 (4,1) - As you have such a low distance snap, this spacing is a little deceiving. Also the three hits is probably going beyond an Easy difficulty.
01:51:149 (3,1) - Yeah, tone down these types of rhythms.
01:56:814 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:04:576 (3,4,5,1) - ^ etc. I'm sure you can find the rest on your own.
02:49:051 (1) - I'm not really fond of this really short spinner following a really long delayed break.
And a lot of the same things I mentioned earlier are repeated. Fix at your discretion.
Eh, you said you'd give a better look on your own for this and Hard, so yeah, hehe.
[Normal]
Wow, huge spacing for a Normal.
00:17:373 (4,1) - Way too big of a jump for a Normal.
00:24:086 (5,1) - ^
00:42:968 (5) -
00:46:324 (1) - Too soon after a spinner.
..yeah, this difficulty is just way beyond what a Normal should be. Rhythms are in general too quick and the spacing is way too high. It might make an okay Hard if you changed a few things around. Otherwise, please tone down a lot of the 1/2 rhythms and give around 2 beats after a spinner for a new note.
[Insane]
00:44:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These hitsounds were a stark contrast to the mapping prior.
00:58:177 (2,3) - It'd be nice to have these not stacked with the 1
01:25:345 (3) - The rekiai isn't really necessary...
02:37:093 - ^
02:47:163 (1,2) - Why normal finishes now?
04:09:423 (1) - Does this really need to be that long? q:
Nothing really -wrong- per se, though it does have a really old-style feel to it. The patterns don't flow together very well, and there's a lot of returns to stacks which is a fairly antiquated style, hehe.
Yes, i am an old-style mapper back from the pastGarven wrote:
[Insane]
00:44:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These hitsounds were a stark contrast to the mapping prior.
00:58:177 (2,3) - It'd be nice to have these not stacked with the 1
01:25:345 (3) - The rekiai isn't really necessary...
02:37:093 - ^
02:47:163 (1,2) - Why normal finishes now?
04:09:423 (1) - Does this really need to be that long? q:
Nothing really -wrong- per se, though it does have a really old-style feel to it. The patterns don't flow together very well, and there's a lot of returns to stacks which is a fairly antiquated style, hehe.
nobody remembers me anymore. Anyway, can you fix up what you think is good Breeze? I've quit osu! again D:
Topic Starter
OK, if you allow it, I'll fix your diff for you, sad you quit again 
悠久的史前玩意么o.o
[General]
timing有点问题，总体的offset我感觉需要+5左右，然后从第二个kiai开始offset就差的有点远了，有些地方打出来20+ms late。。 我个人感觉offset是从02:45:905 - 附近开始变化的，建议找点timing高手看看0.0
除了Insnae，其他难度都是kiai喷泉，不过喷的次数都不同，最好弄一样
其实我感觉sliderborder似乎太白了o.o
不去掉letterbox么，有4:3的视频
[Normal]
00:19:471 (1,2,3) - 这spacing不一样啊
01:56:814 (1,2,3,4) - 这太难了，请至少换成两个sldier
02:04:576 (3,4,5,1) - 这个虽然叠起来了不过感觉还是有点难o.o
后面很多这种就不再提了0.0
03:49:283 (4) - ctrl+j，flow好点
[BexXz no Hard]
00:37:723 - better to fill this break imo , for example add note here? and here 00:38:982 - ?
00:51:149 - ^
00:59:751 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is really confusing , cuz the spacing is totally random.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255896
01:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:079 - spinner end at here?
01:48:212 - fill this bread?
02:01:639 - ^
02:08:352 - ^ , maybe add a spinner?
03:21:801 (1,2,3) - remove some claps , or change to whistle plz , it sound really odd now
[Insane]
00:16:324 (2) - 可以考虑换成1/6折返slider
00:18:003 (2) - ^，后面的不提了，随带说下如果后面的三连circle改成1/6的话记得最好用slider，不然在这难度里会显得太难
00:24:296 (7) - remove？前后的同样节奏都没note，唯独这里有一个，略违和
00:50:520 - 我建议把这个NC挪到00:50:310 - 这里，好读点的感觉
01:30:800 (5,1) - 这个anti-jump感觉不合曲，打起来也违和，最好换个pattern
03:02:080 (7) - remove？
03:25:787 (3) - 这个shape真的可以再弄好点。。
[saymun no Insane]
set slider tick rate to 1 plz , 0.5 is now unrankble
00:16:324 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest change this to slider
00:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - and this , it is hard to play 1/6 beats at song's starting , cuz players don't know there are 1/6 rhyme at here
00:23:037 - if you fix ^ , then keep here as circles is fine , cuz players already know here is 1/6 rhyme
01:46:954 - move newcombo to 01:46:744 - plz , or the jump is really too hard to read
03:38:794 (2,1) - this anti-jump feel reall odd , stack or move them far a bit plz
04:00:192 (1,2,3) - this jumps are kinda huge imo , reduce spacing a bit?
04:06:905 (1,2,3) - ^
好长orz
没什么大问题，不过感觉很多小地方有很大的完善空间，比如slider shape，几何大跳的shape之类的
加油o.o
[General]
timing有点问题，总体的offset我感觉需要+5左右，然后从第二个kiai开始offset就差的有点远了，有些地方打出来20+ms late。。 我个人感觉offset是从02:45:905 - 附近开始变化的，建议找点timing高手看看0.0
除了Insnae，其他难度都是kiai喷泉，不过喷的次数都不同，最好弄一样
其实我感觉sliderborder似乎太白了o.o
不去掉letterbox么，有4:3的视频
[Normal]
00:19:471 (1,2,3) - 这spacing不一样啊
01:56:814 (1,2,3,4) - 这太难了，请至少换成两个sldier
02:04:576 (3,4,5,1) - 这个虽然叠起来了不过感觉还是有点难o.o
后面很多这种就不再提了0.0
03:49:283 (4) - ctrl+j，flow好点
[BexXz no Hard]
00:37:723 - better to fill this break imo , for example add note here? and here 00:38:982 - ?
00:51:149 - ^
00:59:751 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is really confusing , cuz the spacing is totally random.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255896
01:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:079 - spinner end at here?
01:48:212 - fill this bread?
02:01:639 - ^
02:08:352 - ^ , maybe add a spinner?
03:21:801 (1,2,3) - remove some claps , or change to whistle plz , it sound really odd now
[Insane]
00:16:324 (2) - 可以考虑换成1/6折返slider
00:18:003 (2) - ^，后面的不提了，随带说下如果后面的三连circle改成1/6的话记得最好用slider，不然在这难度里会显得太难
00:24:296 (7) - remove？前后的同样节奏都没note，唯独这里有一个，略违和
00:50:520 - 我建议把这个NC挪到00:50:310 - 这里，好读点的感觉
01:30:800 (5,1) - 这个anti-jump感觉不合曲，打起来也违和，最好换个pattern
03:02:080 (7) - remove？
03:25:787 (3) - 这个shape真的可以再弄好点。。
[saymun no Insane]
set slider tick rate to 1 plz , 0.5 is now unrankble
00:16:324 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest change this to slider
00:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - and this , it is hard to play 1/6 beats at song's starting , cuz players don't know there are 1/6 rhyme at here
00:23:037 - if you fix ^ , then keep here as circles is fine , cuz players already know here is 1/6 rhyme
01:46:954 - move newcombo to 01:46:744 - plz , or the jump is really too hard to read
03:38:794 (2,1) - this anti-jump feel reall odd , stack or move them far a bit plz
04:00:192 (1,2,3) - this jumps are kinda huge imo , reduce spacing a bit?
04:06:905 (1,2,3) - ^
好长orz
没什么大问题，不过感觉很多小地方有很大的完善空间，比如slider shape，几何大跳的shape之类的
加油o.o
Topic Starter
谢谢modwcx19911123 wrote:
悠久的史前玩意么o.o
[General]
timing有点问题，总体的offset我感觉需要+5左右，然后从第二个kiai开始offset就差的有点远了，有些地方打出来20+ms late。。 我个人感觉offset是从02:45:905 - 附近开始变化的，建议找点timing高手看看0.0
除了Insnae，其他难度都是kiai喷泉，不过喷的次数都不同，最好弄一样
其实我感觉sliderborder似乎太白了o.o
不去掉letterbox么，有4:3的视频
[Normal]
00:19:471 (1,2,3) - 这spacing不一样啊
01:56:814 (1,2,3,4) - 这太难了，请至少换成两个sldier
02:04:576 (3,4,5,1) - 这个虽然叠起来了不过感觉还是有点难o.o
后面很多这种就不再提了0.0
03:49:283 (4) - ctrl+j，flow好点
[BexXz no Hard]
00:37:723 - better to fill this break imo , for example add note here? and here 00:38:982 - ?
00:51:149 - ^
00:59:751 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is really confusing , cuz the spacing is totally random.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/255896
01:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:079 - spinner end at here?
01:48:212 - fill this bread?
02:01:639 - ^
02:08:352 - ^ , maybe add a spinner?
03:21:801 (1,2,3) - remove some claps , or change to whistle plz , it sound really odd now
[Insane]
00:16:324 (2) - 可以考虑换成1/6折返slider
00:18:003 (2) - ^，后面的不提了，随带说下如果后面的三连circle改成1/6的话记得最好用slider，不然在这难度里会显得太难
00:24:296 (7) - remove？前后的同样节奏都没note，唯独这里有一个，略违和
00:50:520 - 我建议把这个NC挪到00:50:310 - 这里，好读点的感觉
01:30:800 (5,1) - 这个anti-jump感觉不合曲，打起来也违和，最好换个pattern
03:02:080 (7) - remove？
03:25:787 (3) - 这个shape真的可以再弄好点。。
[saymun no Insane]
set slider tick rate to 1 plz , 0.5 is now unrankble
00:16:324 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest change this to slider
00:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - and this , it is hard to play 1/6 beats at song's starting , cuz players don't know there are 1/6 rhyme at here
00:23:037 - if you fix ^ , then keep here as circles is fine , cuz players already know here is 1/6 rhyme
01:46:954 - move newcombo to 01:46:744 - plz , or the jump is really too hard to read
03:38:794 (2,1) - this anti-jump feel reall odd , stack or move them far a bit plz
04:00:192 (1,2,3) - this jumps are kinda huge imo , reduce spacing a bit?
04:06:905 (1,2,3) - ^
其他没怎么改, 我感觉也没什么问题, saymun做图风格就这样
好长orz
没什么大问题，不过感觉很多小地方有很大的完善空间，比如slider shape，几何大跳的shape之类的
加油o.o
fixed some stuff via IRC
and bubbbled
and bubbbled
Topic Starter
Thanks bro, 2 years old map wheaaaaaaaaa
Sorry I took so long. I suck as a BAT, haha.
[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds great with this song
[Normal]
01:15:695 - Move this delayed break to 01:14:856 -
01:39:821 - Move this delayed break to 01:40:030 -
02:50:310 - Move this delayed break to 02:50:520 -
[Hard]
00:29:541 (1) - Extend this to 00:31:429 - and delete the break. Maybe add whistle too.
01:18:842 - This kiai is badly positioned.
01:36:254 (2,3) - Really bad spacing
02:23:667 (4) - I'm really hesitant about these spiral sliders because of the mm effect. I'm not exactly sure what do to here. Applies to 01:13:177 (4) - too.
02:30:380 (1,2) - Wha- why are these in 1/3 snap?
02:32:058 (1,2) - These too. Sounds really bad. :/
02:41:289 (3,4,5) - Spacing
02:42:968 (2,3,1) - ^
02:47:163 (3,4) - Those finishes stick out bad
03:47:500 (2,3) - Snapped wrong. Use 1/6 snap and add an extra circle.
[Insane]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:52:640 - Extend break to 03:52:640 -
「saymun]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:21:801 (5,6,7) - Move 1.5 grids right and down to adjust for stacking.
03:50:961 (1) - Extend to 03:52:640 -
[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds great with this song
[Normal]
01:15:695 - Move this delayed break to 01:14:856 -
01:39:821 - Move this delayed break to 01:40:030 -
02:50:310 - Move this delayed break to 02:50:520 -
[Hard]
00:29:541 (1) - Extend this to 00:31:429 - and delete the break. Maybe add whistle too.
01:18:842 - This kiai is badly positioned.
01:36:254 (2,3) - Really bad spacing
02:23:667 (4) - I'm really hesitant about these spiral sliders because of the mm effect. I'm not exactly sure what do to here. Applies to 01:13:177 (4) - too.
02:30:380 (1,2) - Wha- why are these in 1/3 snap?
02:32:058 (1,2) - These too. Sounds really bad. :/
02:41:289 (3,4,5) - Spacing
02:42:968 (2,3,1) - ^
02:47:163 (3,4) - Those finishes stick out bad
03:47:500 (2,3) - Snapped wrong. Use 1/6 snap and add an extra circle.
[Insane]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:52:640 - Extend break to 03:52:640 -
「saymun]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:21:801 (5,6,7) - Move 1.5 grids right and down to adjust for stacking.
03:50:961 (1) - Extend to 03:52:640 -
Topic Starter
all fixed, thanksGarven wrote:
Sorry I took so long. I suck as a BAT, haha.
[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds great with this song
[Normal]
01:15:695 - Move this delayed break to 01:14:856 -
01:39:821 - Move this delayed break to 01:40:030 -
02:50:310 - Move this delayed break to 02:50:520 -
[Hard]
00:29:541 (1) - Extend this to 00:31:429 - and delete the break. Maybe add whistle too.
01:18:842 - This kiai is badly positioned.
01:36:254 (2,3) - Really bad spacing
02:23:667 (4) - I'm really hesitant about these spiral sliders because of the mm effect. I'm not exactly sure what do to here. Applies to 01:13:177 (4) - too.
02:30:380 (1,2) - Wha- why are these in 1/3 snap?
02:32:058 (1,2) - These too. Sounds really bad. :/
02:41:289 (3,4,5) - Spacing
02:42:968 (2,3,1) - ^
02:47:163 (3,4) - Those finishes stick out bad
03:47:500 (2,3) - Snapped wrong. Use 1/6 snap and add an extra circle.
[Insane]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:52:640 - Extend break to 03:52:640 -
「saymun]
02:48:842 (1) - Extend to 02:50:520 - or add a circle there
03:21:801 (5,6,7) - Move 1.5 grids right and down to adjust for stacking.
03:50:961 (1) - Extend to 03:52:640 -
Rebubbled~
又一张日本女团的MAP要上架了，前来支持
这首歌貌似很久以前听过
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2年快rank
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2年辛苦了 ~ 恭喜大大微风 :3
gratz~! :3
Old map!
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congrats :3~
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