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Saitou Chiwa - Futakotome (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
kosiga

Yasora-chan wrote:

why the title is (TVsize) o.o
that should be (TV Size) right?
just sayin' ;3
wow

it is mistake :o

thank you ~ Yasora-chan :oops:
Leorda
Konnichiwa

Normal

01:09:284 (1) - This spinner is too short for normal diff, you need to extend this


Hard
00:31:557 (x) - Add note here with clap?
00:34:284 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen


Insane
00:28:375 (7) - Remove whistle at sliderbody
00:30:648 (5) - Jump pattern? Was intentional?


Nice map, anyway
Topic Starter
kosiga

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

Normal

01:09:284 (1) - This spinner is too short for normal diff, you need to extend this hmm..ok. change it. but this was 5000 points. Is it permitted to several points?

Hard
00:31:557 (x) - Add note here with clap? sorry, I do not want to put here :(
00:34:284 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen ok. move it


Insane
00:28:375 (7) - Remove whistle at sliderbody fixed~
00:30:648 (5) - Jump pattern? Was intentional? yea. This is intentional. There is no sense of incongruity to me and this matches the flow of the next slider :D

Nice map, anyway
Leorda Thank you for mod ~ :oops:
p3n
From my queue...you were not too late! I can't blame ppl for beeing #4 in there when it is full in less than a minute :o

[Normal]
00:37:012 (2,3) - just a suggestion: add a repeat to (2) and use a circle where (3) used to end to better match the vocals and to map the downbeat properly with a circle: http://puu.sh/jQAt


[Hard]
00:44:512 (4,5) - would fit the song much better if you add a repeat to (4) and use a stacked circle where (5) used to end: http://puu.sh/jQxL
01:27:239 (4) - maybe stack this note?
very very very very good


[Insane]
flawless ♥




Lovely song and really great mapset. Not really much to do here. Well deserved
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue.

[General]
-Video quality could be better. Oh well. :|

[Normal]
-Okay

[Hard]
-Okay. Although I'm not a fan fof small circles. :P

[Insane]
-Good, but maybe reduce Drain rate to 7?

Map is not bad imo. With a few more quality mods, I think it'll be fine for a bubble. Good Luck.
Topic Starter
kosiga

p3n wrote:

From my queue...you were not too late! I can't blame ppl for beeing #4 in there when it is full in less than a minute :o thank you ;x;

[Normal]
00:37:012 (2,3) - just a suggestion: add a repeat to (2) and use a circle where (3) used to end to better match the vocals and to map the downbeat properly with a circle: http://puu.sh/jQAt ok. change it


[Hard]
00:44:512 (4,5) - would fit the song much better if you add a repeat to (4) and use a stacked circle where (5) used to end: http://puu.sh/jQxL ok. change it
01:27:239 (4) - maybe stack this note? sorry, no change ><
very very very very good


[Insane]
flawless ♥


Lovely song and really great mapset. Not really much to do here. Well deserved
p3n Thank you for mod & Star☆~ :oops:

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

[General]
-Video quality could be better. Oh well. :| I think that do not have problem :D

[Normal]
-Okay

[Hard]
-Okay. Although I'm not a fan fof small circles. :P

[Insane]
-Good, but maybe reduce Drain rate to 7? I hear the opinion of other people ><!

Map is not bad imo. With a few more quality mods, I think it'll be fine for a bubble. Good Luck.
BeatofIke Thank you for mod ~ :oops:
Nichiyouki
Hi, kosiga

From my modding queue

[Normal]
I don't find the problem.

[Hard]
01:05:194 (4) - Move to x:244 y:332, order not to overlap with the slider in 01:05:648 (2).

[Insane]
00:12:466 (3) - Move to left 2 grid

That's all, that I can find them.
great map and nice song, give a star and I think that your map will have the opportunity to be ranked.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
kosiga

nich95 wrote:

Hi, kosiga

From my modding queue

[Normal]
I don't find the problem.

[Hard]
01:05:194 (4) - Move to x:244 y:332, order not to overlap with the slider in 01:05:648 (2). ok. but move to x244,y328 :D

[Insane]
00:12:466 (3) - Move to left 2 grid fixed

That's all, that I can find them.
great map and nice song, give a star and I think that your map will have the opportunity to be ranked.

Good luck.
nich95 Thank you for mod & star☆~ :oops:
Ch1ka
Hi, kosiga.


[General]
Nothing found.

[Normal]
00:54:625 - useless timing section, I guess (sorry for being nazi)
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Hard]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
01:18:603 (5,6) - Maybe my own preferences, but I don't like that tricks. If it good for you, you may leave as is.
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Insane]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
00:58:830 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not perfectly symmetrical (nazi again), if it good for you, you may leave as is.
01:27:012 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

That's all. Good song and map, I really can't find more. You must rank it!
Good luck and bye!
Topic Starter
kosiga

Ch1ka wrote:

Hi, kosiga.


[General]
Nothing found.

[Normal]
00:54:625 - useless timing section, I guess (sorry for being nazi) When a timing was not correct, hitsound may not show an effect. Therefore I put all them on the 1tick this side :D
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Hard]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
01:18:603 (5,6) - Maybe my own preferences, but I don't like that tricks. If it good for you, you may leave as is.
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Insane]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
00:58:830 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not perfectly symmetrical (nazi again), if it good for you, you may leave as is. This pattern is a pentagon. The symmetry is not necessary
01:27:012 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

That's all. Good song and map, I really can't find more. You must rank it!
Good luck and bye!
some fixed

Ch1ka thanks for mod~ :oops:
arien666
Just things are fine :3
meow
Topic Starter
kosiga

arien666 wrote:

Just things are fine :3
meow
Thank you~ >w<
Fenya
Hi~ :)

Normal:
is pretty good o.o

Hard:
00:59:057 (4) - 4 grid up

Insane:
Fine~

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something... sorry for late mod ):
Sorry for my bad English, good luck :)
Topic Starter
kosiga

Fenya wrote:

Hi~ :)

Normal:
is pretty good o.o

Hard:
00:59:057 (4) - 4 grid up

Insane:
Fine~

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something... sorry for late mod ):
Sorry for my bad English, good luck :)
Fenya Thanks~ :oops: but this map already has a bubble. so sorry, no change ><
Fenya

kosiga wrote:

Fenya Thanks~ :oops: but this map already has a bubble. so sorry, no change ><
Oh, sorry, I did not realize D:
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
kosiga

Fenya wrote:

Oh, sorry, I did not realize D:
Good luck :3
thank you~ :)
James2250
[Normal]
01:11:557 (1) - make sure this note has a new combo (not sure how it happened, but it will mess with the combo scoring how it is now I think)

Just that minor thing to fix and I can rank
(You don't need to kudosu this)
Topic Starter
kosiga

James2250 wrote:

[Normal]
01:11:557 (1) - make sure this note has a new combo (not sure how it happened, but it will mess with the combo scoring how it is now I think)
fixed~
Just that minor thing to fix and I can rank
(You don't need to kudosu this)
thank you~ :)
James2250
Sorry for the wait, anyway it looks like everything is good after that small fix and I don't see anything reason for this to stay bubbled any longer than it has so...

Ranked~
No_Gu
congrats
mochi
おめでと-
AIR315
Congratz~
Akemi_Homura
gratz~~! :3
terametis
おめでとーーーーーーーーー<333333
Sonico Makaron
gratz
0x57CB36
grats ~
Nichiyouki
Congrats~
AkiShizuha
grats~ good map~
Topic Starter
kosiga
thank you~ James2250 & everyone~ :) :)
Yasora
congratz :3~
Pastel
おめでとー!
Dino99
Gratz:>
Mythol
kosiga!!
congrats~ :)
suzutsukikanade
gratz!
Melophobia
おめでと!
phonic
おめ!
Topic Starter
kosiga
thank you~ :) :)
hoLysoup
omedetou~! :D
Topic Starter
kosiga

hoLysoup wrote:

omedetou~! :D
arigatou~ :D
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