-Your offset sounds pretty early at the moment, I get approx 637 for it but it might need double checking (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)
-The custom whistles are pretty hard to hear on this map, increase the volume on them slightly?
-25 seconds is way too long for a break, try and cut it down to 15 or less
Hinata:
AR -1 for the easiest difficulty?
00:07:239 (1,2) - separate from each other slightly more
02:39:515 (3,4) - try and avoid overlaps like this
Sayoko:
00:54:412 (2,3) - don't overlap if possible
01:05:377 (4,7,8,1) - ^
01:57:101 (3,5,6) - ^
02:46:136 (1,2) - ^
04:40:343 (1) - fade out or add a hitsound to the end of this?
Tomoka:
00:50:914 (2,3) - stack?
01:20:087 (2,3) - there are a few overlaps like this around the map if you want to clean them up slightly
02:09:515 (11,1) - ^
02:55:860 (9) - sounds better extended to the white tick
04:40:343 (1) - fade out or add a hitsound to the end of this?
Not too bad, just a few design issues to check over
Deserves a star~
-The custom whistles are pretty hard to hear on this map, increase the volume on them slightly?
-25 seconds is way too long for a break, try and cut it down to 15 or less
Hinata:
AR -1 for the easiest difficulty?
00:07:239 (1,2) - separate from each other slightly more
02:39:515 (3,4) - try and avoid overlaps like this
Sayoko:
00:54:412 (2,3) - don't overlap if possible
01:05:377 (4,7,8,1) - ^
01:57:101 (3,5,6) - ^
02:46:136 (1,2) - ^
04:40:343 (1) - fade out or add a hitsound to the end of this?
Tomoka:
00:50:914 (2,3) - stack?
01:20:087 (2,3) - there are a few overlaps like this around the map if you want to clean them up slightly
02:09:515 (11,1) - ^
02:55:860 (9) - sounds better extended to the white tick
04:40:343 (1) - fade out or add a hitsound to the end of this?
Not too bad, just a few design issues to check over
Deserves a star~