Hey there!
[Insane]
00:11:640 (5) - Shorten it by 1/4, it sounds wrong like it is now. You have vocals landing on that tick I'm suggesting too.
00:57:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't understand why you want a stream here, it's not in the music. Mapping vocals with jumps would feel much better if you ask me.
01:07:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, sounds much better and follows the vocals better.
01:22:421 (4) - I think you're missing a finish at the end here. You used it at 01:07:421 (4) and this is the same thing. :p
01:22:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, same reason.
[Gu's Hard]
00:01:327 (1) - Completely silenced hitobjects are highly unrankable. Slider ends are allowed to be silenced only when they fit, this is not the case. You need to make this audible.
00:15:390 (1) - Same here. Here, however, a silenced slider end fits, so you can move your 5% volume timing section 1 tick forward, to 00:15:507.
00:57:577 (2) - End it at 00:58:046 instead, like it is now is very weird and I actually had a 100 here cause the music is different compared to this slider.
[Aisha's Normal]
00:56:640 (6) - Make this note louder, I can't hear it well.
[Easy]
AR+1, AR2 seems a bit too slow.
00:54:765 (1) - Make the end a bit louder please, otherwise that finish on it makes no sense as it's almost inaudible. I think it would give a nice impact too.
01:06:015 (1) - Some nazi, since you have to fix other stuff. Midpoint 2 grids right and 1 grid down, would make the slider look much better imo. Do the same change (but mirrored) to 01:08:827 (4) as well then.
Everything else looks good, nice SB too. Taiko rhythms seemed quite odd to me at a first glance but they do make sense (the kiai).
Apply the changes and I can rank this right away.
[Insane]
00:11:640 (5) - Shorten it by 1/4, it sounds wrong like it is now. You have vocals landing on that tick I'm suggesting too.
00:57:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't understand why you want a stream here, it's not in the music. Mapping vocals with jumps would feel much better if you ask me.
01:07:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, sounds much better and follows the vocals better.
01:22:421 (4) - I think you're missing a finish at the end here. You used it at 01:07:421 (4) and this is the same thing. :p
01:22:890 (1) - Also shorten it by 1/4, same reason.
[Gu's Hard]
00:01:327 (1) - Completely silenced hitobjects are highly unrankable. Slider ends are allowed to be silenced only when they fit, this is not the case. You need to make this audible.
00:15:390 (1) - Same here. Here, however, a silenced slider end fits, so you can move your 5% volume timing section 1 tick forward, to 00:15:507.
00:57:577 (2) - End it at 00:58:046 instead, like it is now is very weird and I actually had a 100 here cause the music is different compared to this slider.
[Aisha's Normal]
00:56:640 (6) - Make this note louder, I can't hear it well.
[Easy]
AR+1, AR2 seems a bit too slow.
00:54:765 (1) - Make the end a bit louder please, otherwise that finish on it makes no sense as it's almost inaudible. I think it would give a nice impact too.
01:06:015 (1) - Some nazi, since you have to fix other stuff. Midpoint 2 grids right and 1 grid down, would make the slider look much better imo. Do the same change (but mirrored) to 01:08:827 (4) as well then.
Everything else looks good, nice SB too. Taiko rhythms seemed quite odd to me at a first glance but they do make sense (the kiai).
Apply the changes and I can rank this right away.