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[General]
[General]
Kiais&SB:
- 00:41:640 - This fountain, combined with the SB in that part, almost left me blind xD (I play with shader effects on) I suggest removing this fountain, the SB is more than enough imo.
- 01:13:515 - Well I guess there's nothing to do with this one xD Maybe make the white image in the storyboard a little more transparent? Perhaps you could do that with the previous suggestion, too.
Tags: - Just asking, 'cause I don't know... What is the "Eiru" in the tags?
- 00:02:265 (1,2) - This doesn't really fit the music. I think you should be emphasizing the vocals, and for that, (1) should finish at 00:02:499 -
- 00:09:765 (1,2) - (^)
- 00:33:202 (3,4) - This jump doesn't really flow so well, because of the direction in which (3) finishes. If you're gonna do it, try something like this:
- 00:40:468 - How about adding a circle here, stacked with the end of the slider? I felt that it would fit the music very well!