oh look, another hard-to-mod map from Mickey! :O
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-> Offset 1868 (+6ms)
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Star ^^
[General]
-> Offset 1868 (+6ms)
[Normal]
- 00:08:306 (4) - Make this encircle (2) like this? (it also flows well with (3)!)
- 00:18:750 (4) - Well, whistle on slider's start? It really fits the song's atmosphere imo. This applies for other parts like this
- 00:23:195 (1) - Err... Finish here? xD
- 00:28:084 (x) - There should be a note here, because this isn't a new part of the song. (the lack of note should only be placed on 00:29:861 to separate a new song part)
- 00:32:084 (3) - Move it as low as you can without moving it right (~2-3 grid down perhaps?) to create a better angle?
- 00:32:973 (4) - (optional) 1/1 slider plays much better here though rather than 1/2 repeating one, but if you don't wanna sacrifice the bass sound on 00:33:195 it's fine too
- 00:38:528 (2,5) - Uh.. I personally dislike these two overlapping. Maybe arrange like below? (notice : the curve on (2) is to build flow with the previous (1))
- 00:42:084 (2,4) - (optional) Hmm, I personally like if these two is slightly curved :3
- 01:15:195 (1,2,3,4) - Move all one grid up, so (3) can be stacked with the previous slider. I highly recommend this although it seems minor (:
- 01:23:195 (2) - Again, the silence here feels abrupt. Try this rhythm instead?
- 01:30:306 (2,3,4,5) - Definitely can be arc-ed neater rather than just random triangle placing (:
- 01:35:639 (3) - Hmm, finish sound on slider's end instead of whistle? Although almost inaudible, I can still hear a cymbal breezing through the song here ^^
- 02:08:529 (2) - I wonder... Why not just copy-paste the curve from 02:06:750 (2) here? Your previous one is more symmetrical (trust me ><)
- 02:11:639 (1) - For the ending, follow the piano instead? 1/2 repeating slider + a note 1/2 after. This way, you can put more whistles to fit the song's calmness ~
- 00:10:306 (5) - (optional) Unstack please >< Just let the map flow ~ One simple thing you can do:
- 00:18:306 (6,7) - You can do a cross-slider here *runs*
- 00:20:750 (2,3,4) - Overuse of whistle imo. Remove whistle on slider's start to emphasize the hitsounds after?
- 00:24:750 (3) - Slider wave plays beautiful here, especially with those encircling sliders xD
- 00:48:528 (2) - Try like this perhaps:
- 00:53:861 (5) - Unstack for flow (this one, you can simply move it lower)
- 00:54:750 (7) - Same as above (move to the right for this one)
- 01:16:973 (5) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid up
- 01:18:750 (1,2) - Hmm, why not curve both? This way, you can get BOTH flow and a blanket slider:
- 01:21:195 (5) - Curve this encircling (1) looks much better to me. Not a must, though (:
- 01:25:417 (1,2,3) - Well, this is indeed a really good place for a jump! Alter into this? Also, you can simply move the next (1) to the lower-left of (3) if you do this:
- 01:35:528 (6) - I highly recommend to put this lower (x:256 y:264) to avoid confusion because of overlap (:
- 01:49:750 (6) - Same as above, but for this case, put this more to the top
- 02:10:528 (3) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint and midpoint one (lv4) grid up for better encircle ~
- 00:08:306 (3,4,5,6) - Stacking four notes here is definitely too many, it causes such overlap and breaks the flow. 1/4 repeating slider + a note 1/4 after instead?
- 00:15:417 (6,7,8,9) - Same as above
- 00:17:639 (1,2,3,4) - This is just my crazy suggestion orz... Arrange the jump like this, to avoid overstacking?
- 00:22:973 (9) - Finish really fits on slider's end :3
- 00:23:417 (1,2) - Curve these two (if you see below, (2)'s curve will build more flow with the next (3,4,5))
- 00:34:306 (5) - Slider wave here, so (1) could be blanketed?
- 00:39:195 (1,2) - I suppose this slider's better if shortened by 1/4 and add a note 1/4 after? Not very sure though >_<
- 01:04:861 (4) - Start the slider here, make it 3/4, and add whistle to both start and end?
- 01:11:417 (1,2,3,4) - Tilt it slightly will play better imo:
- 01:18:973 (2) - To keep the clap pattern consistent : circle here, followed by 3/4 slider after rather than 1/1 slider?
- 01:38:973 (6,7,8) - You can alter these three into repeating slider (possibly facing (4)) to avoid the stack touching the notes above
- 02:04:528 (2,3) - (optional) Slightly curve these two?
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