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camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays [For Approval]

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Kuzino
8-)
Ondrasen
>_<
KDS
>w</~☆
[Easy]Artdikcen
Star~ :)
SweetBloodyLove
star~
SS_Kanzaki
Star~

Good Beatmap :3
-v-
++star
Nyan

Shino wrote:

*Waiting Guest Taiko.
레알요?
C R E A M
별투척! 1/3 어려워서 못치겠음 ㅠㅠ
Blackiris
Touhou and dubstep, huh? However strange it may sound, it actually sounds bloody good - catch a star. You'd better rank it, mate - it's well worth it.
Topic Starter
Shino

Nyan wrote:

Shino wrote:

*Waiting Guest Taiko.
레알요?
일절이랑 합작한다면 봐줄께.

Blackiris wrote:

Touhou and dubstep, huh? However strange it may sound, it actually sounds bloody good - catch a star. You'd better rank it, mate - it's well worth it.
Thx for the star, mate (-_-)b
woodrockman
:D
Ayeen_old
First of all, your timing is not correct:

BPM: 141.013, offset 13666

Timing sample:
Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [timing].osu

Attachment is for your referrence. Listen to it at 25% and you should hear the beat drop right where the notes placed.

After that you should resnap and fix some notes that was drop on blue ticks before the timing changed. I take a second check after you fix it :)
Not sure how long it will take to reccheck, I dont promise
Mapper 31
지상최악의리듬난보면

Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [31's Taiko].osu
Bye
star >.<d

great map +_+
minyeob
읭 묻히다니
사실 군대 가신거 보고 모딩 하는거 아주 미뤘는데 이런 결과를 초래하게 되었네요 <(_ _)>
Topic Starter
Shino
Next update date - the end of March
Topic Starter
Shino
Decided to use Case 2. ("Remove Original" Update will be in March 24th)
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. I'll mod Heaven case 2 as you requested.

General:
besides the 2 diffs that are the same everything looks good.

Heaven(case 2):
Having a slidertick rate of .5 is unrankable. here's proof.
01:17:916 (4) - make this a curved slider to form a blanket around the next note.
01:18:980 (2) - ^ previous note.
01:35:361 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to 50% so that it goes in sync with the cymbals.
01:44:720 (1) - remove the NC because the instrumental is still going.
01:45:571 (6) - make this a NC because of the new instrumental and it starts at the downbeat.
01:47:273 (1) - add a finish on the spinner? same reason as 01:35:361
02:41:738 (1) - ^
03:28:860 - add a circle to follow the piano?
03:56:091 - ^
04:03:432 (1) - same as 01:47:273
04:18:748 (1) - what the...why is this speeding up all of a sudden? i think u want this to slow down but for some reason this speeds up all of a sudden.
04:24:705 (7) - add a clap here? sounds nice IMO
04:25:131 - add a circle to follow instrumental.

This is the best i can do. GL :D
OnosakiHito
Okay, I finnaly converted the Taiko map and have expand it.
I'm really sorry that you have need to wait so long, but I had much to do these days. orz

I really like the SB and it fit's to taiko as well, so I leaved it how it is and added one more thing you will see as attachment.
Please add my name into the TAG's so I can check out your newest updates.

Nice osu! diff and SB, so I will leave a star here!☆



Download: camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (Shino) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Shino

OnosakiHito wrote:

Nice osu! diff and SB, so I will leave a star here!☆
Thanks a lot, Ono! *hi5*


Edit for Baykugan249's mod wrote:

Heaven:
Having a slidertick rate of .5 is unrankable. here's proof. < changed to 1.
01:17:916 (4) - make this a curved slider to form a blanket around the next note. < nope.
01:18:980 (2) - ^ previous note. < also no.
01:35:361 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning but reduce the volume to 50% so that it goes in sync with the cymbals. < yup. but I don't think it have to reduce volume.

01:44:720 (1) - remove the NC because the instrumental is still going. < nope.
01:45:571 (6) - make this a NC because of the new instrumental and it starts at the downbeat. < sorry. this doesn't make sense for me.
01:47:273 (1) - add a finish on the spinner? same reason as 01:35:361 < yes.
02:41:738 (1) - ^ < yes.
03:28:860 - add a circle to follow the piano? < if I do, that part would be more difficult, and that was a concept.
03:56:091 - ^ < ^.
04:03:432 (1) - same as 01:47:273 < done.
04:18:748 (1) - what the...why is this speeding up all of a sudden? i think u want this to slow down but for some reason this speeds up all of a sudden. < I planned this part as most difficult part from the beginning. can't accept about speed issue.
04:24:705 (7) - add a clap here? sounds nice IMO < no.
04:25:131 - add a circle to follow instrumental. < that wouldn't connect with next combo, so nope.
Stefan
I'm not sure, but I heard the spinner-background must have a Size of 666x666. Ignore this if it's false.
It feels unconfortable without Lead-In Time. Set at least the time at 500.
00:47:279 (10) - Remove Clap, set Whistle.
00:50:684 (5) - Set Whistle at Start Point.
01:14:937 (1,2,3) - They don't fit with the Music IMO.
01:35:360 - 01:48:976 - Why no Kiai Time?
02:03:016 (2) - Set Clap at Start Point. (I know there's no Clap Hit at the Music on this time, but it would also fit there)
02:04:718 (2) - ^
04:24:705 (7) - Set Clap.

Besides of the original and the Metal Version by Len it is the only good mix version of U.N Owen was her? ! Starred this.
wmfchris
special queue

[General]
The image "pastel"(1.1MB) and "light" (800KB) is comparatively too large. Try to compress the quality like others (~400KB or below)
spinner-approachcircle.png is missing.

[Heaven]
00:50:683 (5) - This slider slow down is unexpected. NC this one
02:07:271 (4,2) - sliders covered each other
04:23:003 (3) - remove clap at the beginning [in such quiet section excess hitsounds may sound very odd]
04:28:109 (5) - ^
04:29:811 (3) - ^
technically ok but tbh it may not reach the approvable quality [for me] in terms of arrangement and variations (e.g. 01:28:552 - you can put sth other than simple trplet without any movement)

[Taiko]
00:09:968 - as a progression I think you can use 1/3 x x x instead of 1/6
00:25:287 - ^ in this quiet section I don't prefer 1/6
01:17:698 - use 1/6 duplet like before
01:47:273 - broken sliders, and no sliders on 1/3 tick because you use it on 1/4 ticks before
~

good luck >_<
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]
  1. try to decline the size by changing pictures form
  2. Missing Skin Files spinner-approachcircle.png
  3. red timing section isn't the same
  4. Warning: [Heaven] 01:21:744 useless section
    Warning: [Heaven] 02:16:207
    Warning: [Ono's Taiko Oni] 00:03:762
    Warning: [Ono's Taiko Oni] 00:54:507
[Heaven]

00:47:279 (10) - move the clap to the end or remove
01:07:704 (10) - moce the clap to 13 or remove
02:31:206 (4) - clap?

this map has a sense of abstraction, and the SB improves the sense too

have a star
Mercurial
Approval :D

General
Since you have that storyboard, I suggest to you put an "Epilepsy Warning" on Heaven.
spinner-approachcircle.png isn't used.
Why Taiko and Standard diffs have a different BPM?

Heaven
Soft Hitsounds at 100% and I can't hear anything.Only conceptual things like...
01:16:638 (1) This slider this touching the Hp-bar

No SS-able map, but nicely mapped.


Good Luck.
Topic Starter
Shino
Great. Now I have to consider with five mods. Yay. Take your kudosu, you modders!
[Notice] Sadly, update date will be May 5th or 6th, not now.
B-1B
[Heaven]
02:08:122 (2) - 여기 슬라이더 수평 유지하시던게 어긋났네요.

하나만 모딩하고 가서 죄송합니다 :(
KRZY
[Heaven]
*키아이 부분에서 곡을 너무 살리지 못한 느낌이 납니다. 야심차게 SV까지 높아져서 기대했는데 '에이 이게 뭐야' 하고 실망할듯한 패턴. 난이도를 조금 높이더라도 U.N.Owen 특유의 1/6박자를 살리는 게 더 낫지 않나 생각합니다.

01:20:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이렇게 변경
02:17:591 (1) - 뉴콤보
04:30:663 (1) - 04:35:981에서 끝내는게 나아보이네요.
minyeob
위에서도 나왔지만 타이코/스탠 BPM이 다른 이유가...?

[Heaven]
01:36:956 (6) - 주관적으로 이 노트가 굳이 필요없다고 생각됩니다
00:47:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 박자 읽기 좀 어렵네요

제가 찾은 건 대충 이러한데
모딩 안 한지 오래여서 버블같은건 자신없네요 ㅜㅜ
Topic Starter
Shino

minyeob wrote:

위에서도 나왔지만 타이코/스탠 BPM이 다른 이유가...?
태고 bpm이 원래 내가 설정하던 거였는데 ayeen이 지적들어가서 스탠 바꿨지.
근데 오노사키는 원 bpm 141으로 매핑했더군.
휴가 나가면 바로 고칠 예정.
Topic Starter
Shino
---General---
  1. Spinner-approachcircle added.
  2. Less BG effect file size.
  3. Removed useless sections.
  4. Epilepsy Warning On.
---Heaven---
  1. New combo setting (for x0.5 sliders) arranged. - KRZY
  2. Shape of the slider in 01:16:639 changed. - iMercurial
  3. Edited hitsound of last quiet section. - wmfchris
  4. Adjusted stream shape a little to look better. - Self-mod
  5. Made new pattern for kiai time. - KRZY
  6. And *stuff*
--Taiko Oni--
  1. BPM adjusted.
All changes are in Newtype Diffs. If you mod this mapset, please do mod only Newtype version.
Topic Starter
Shino
Shino used Revival Potion to a Dead map!
That was super-effective!


...ah, no. Just "effective".
I'm planning to make a new taiko diff called "sc4r1et".
This revival is just a step before that.
pieguyn
hi there~

General:

-perhaps change spinner-circle.png so the center is visible? it makes it easier to play :P

Heaven:

01:18:660 (1,2) - spacing seems like a 1/2 note...perhaps space it farther?
01:28:765 (4) - add whistle?
01:29:616 (10) - ^
01:30:467 (2) - ^
01:31:318 (8), 01:32:169 (2), 01:33:020 (8) - ^
01:35:147 - add note?
01:45:571 (6) - add NC?
04:20:450 (3,5) - make it blanket (4) better? http://puu.sh/Bf8O
04:27:258 (3,5) - ^

Ono's Taiko Oni: fine

good luck~
Topic Starter
Shino
Changed Newtype diffs name as Original one.

Green Color - Accepted
Strike - No

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-perhaps change spinner-circle.png so the center is visible? it makes it easier to play :P

Heaven:

01:18:660 (1,2) - spacing seems like a 1/2 note...perhaps space it farther?
01:28:765 (4) - add whistle?
01:29:616 (10) - ^
01:30:467 (2) - ^
01:31:318 (8), 01:32:169 (2), 01:33:020 (8) - ^
01:35:147 - add note?
01:45:571 (6) - add NC?

04:20:450 (3,5) - make it blanket (4) better? http://puu.sh/Bf8O
04:27:258 (3,5) - ^


Ono's Taiko Oni: fine
OnosakiHito
Allright, I will check everything today. Sorry =w=
Ra-s
SPOILER
22:09 <Shino> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30872
22:09 <Shino> : camellia - scarlet heaven of Delays (for app)
22:22 <Ra-s> : 이거 스킨 있음?
22:22 <Shino> : 지정스킨 없어
22:22 <Shino> : 그냥 요소만 몇개 박았고
22:22 <Ra-s> : spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 16x16).
22:22 <Shino> : 끙
22:22 <Ra-s> : SB Elements Not .png effect\pastel.jpg effect\light.jpg effect\blush.jpg
22:23 <Shino> : 어?
22:23 <Shino> : 헤븐에 쓰이는데
22:23 <Shino> : osb 문제생겼나
22:23 <Ra-s> : 나도 왜이런지는 모르는데
22:23 <Ra-s> : AIBat돌리면 이렇게 나옴
22:23 <Shino> : 역시 그거 돌렸군
22:23 <Ra-s> : 상관없나?
22:23 <Shino> : 뭐 서클은 처리하면 되지만
22:23 <Shino> : SB 지적은 이상한데
22:24 <Shino> : 그보다 노트
22:24 <Ra-s> : 파스텔,라이트,블러쉬가 안쓰였다는데
22:24 <Ra-s> : 무슨소리지
22:24 <Ra-s> : 멀쩡히 잘 쓰이고 있구만
22:24 <Ra-s> : 걍 무시하자
22:24 <Shino> : ㅇ
22:24 <Ra-s> : Ono꺼 태고
22:25 <Shino> : 어어
22:25 <Ra-s> : 01:35:145 - 초록선 언스냅
22:25 <Shino> : 그렇군
22:25 <Shino> : 내가 처리하면 되는거고
22:25 <Ra-s> : AIBat 관련된건 여기서 End
22:25 <Shino> : ㅇ
22:25 <Shino> : ai가 몇개 잘잡긴 잘잡네
22:26 <Shino> : 초록 언스냅..
22:26 <Ra-s> : 이거 내장AI가 아니라 다른거 ㅋㅋ
22:26 <Ra-s> : jar파일로 어떤유저가 만든거 있음
22:26 <Shino> : 알어 뭔지
22:26 <Ra-s> : 1년전 맵이라 안잡혀있던건가
22:26 <Ra-s> : 뭐 그 당시에는 초록선 언스냅으로 뭐라 안하고 랭크됬으니까
22:26 <Shino> : 태고 숙성은 딱히 1년이 아니지만
22:26 <Ra-s> : 초록선이 좀더 앞에 있으면 상관없었으니 ㅋ
22:26 <Shino> : 그건 패스
22:30 <Ra-s> : 01:20:679 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 위로한칸 오른쪽두칸? lv4
22:30 <Ra-s> : 도저히 박자모딩은 못하겠다 이 맵은
22:31 <Shino> : 음
22:31 <Shino> : 일단 위치는 맞네
22:35 <Ra-s> : 04:21:301 (5) - 오른쪽한칸 lv4
22:36 <Shino> : ok
22:36 <Ra-s> : 04:28:110 (5) - 이것도
22:36 <Shino> : 그럼 04:28:110 (5) -
22:36 <Shino> : 됐음
22:36 <Ra-s> : 아 겁나 천천히 봤는데도 이정도네
22:36 <Ra-s> : 다시 볼께
22:36 <Shino> : ㅇ
22:38 <Ra-s> : 00:54:513 (1) - 시작점 피니쉬
22:38 <Shino> : 콜
22:45 <Ra-s> : 00:51:960 (1,4) - NC 바꾸기?
22:46 <Ra-s> : 음 뒤에가 이상해지네
22:46 <Ra-s> : 00:53:450 (1) - 만약 제한 받아드렸으면 여기도 제거하는게 낫겠다
22:46 <Shino> : 서클을 없애라고?
22:46 <Shino> : 아니지?
22:46 <Ra-s> : 뉴콤보
22:47 <Ra-s> : 박자 다 맞는곡을 뭐하러 지우라함 ㅋㅋ
22:47 <Shino> : ㅋㅋㅋ
22:47 <Shino> : 나 되게 쫄았었음
22:47 <Ra-s> : 내가 만약에 제거하라하면 거절해야지 그런건 ㅋㅋ
22:49 <Ra-s> : 끝
22:49 <Shino> : 헐
22:49 <Shino> : 뭔가 더 있을줄 알았으나
22:49 <Shino> : 끝이군
22:49 <Shino> : 수고했어
22:49 <Shino> : 로그 올리면 쿠돗 바로 던져줄께
22:50 <Ra-s> : ㅇㅇ
Topic Starter
Shino
Ra-s's IRC Modding Results (Green = Accepted / Striked = Ignored)

[General]
- spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 16x16).
- SB Elements Not .png effect\pastel.jpg effect\light.jpg effect\blush.jpg Kind of an error in AIBat?

[Heaven]
01:20:679 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 1pt up, 2pt right(Lv4 Grid)
04:21:301 (5) - Move 1pt right(Lv4)
04:28:110 (5) - Move 1pt left(Lv4)
00:54:513 (1) - Add finish in start

00:51:960 (1,4) - Change NC Setting of each other
00:53:450 (1) - Remove New combo


[Ono's Taiko Oni]
01:35:145 - Green Section Unsnapped
OnosakiHito
Okay, took wmf's mod
and snapped the green section!
Also I have moved the blackbar with the song name a bit backward, that means it requiers one fullsubmission.
By the way @ Shino, you adjusted the timing with the taiko notes perfectly. Thank you!

Download: http://puu.sh/CPBD
Topic Starter
Shino

OnosakiHito wrote:

Okay, took wmf's mod
and snapped the green section!
Also I have moved the blackbar with the song name a bit backward, that means it requiers one fullsubmission.
By the way @ Shino, you adjusted the timing with the taiko notes perfectly. Thank you!
Updated!
SB script of Taikobar is diff specific, so didn't need to full uploaded.
Stefan
Fuck yeah! It's back. :D
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