wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
#3 kiai time end at 02:03:391 in tutuhaha's Normal , it is different with other diffs
#4 kiai time end at 03:41:058 in tutuhaha's Normal , it is different with other diffs
and #5 kiai time start and end both different with other diffs , it's better to make kiai al the same in all diffs
waiting for tutuhaha's opinion

plz change code "Sliderborder : 180,180,180" to "SliderBorder : 180,180,180" , in .osu files
fixed

[sb]
I strongly suggest you to change bg5.jpg file , it looks really odd to me o.o changed and remake the effect here, i think it's much better now

[Easy]
00:44:725 - I think this tick should use S2 hitsound fixed
04:11:725 - spinner end at here? same with other diffs fixed
nothing to point out , but this diff's rhyme is really toooooo boring.. only 1/1 and 1/1 and 1/1 .. Yes because it is a EASY diff that i don't wanna make it seems hard to find rhythm..there's a normal isn't it ?

[tutuhaha's Normal]
difficulty setting is kinda low imo , HD+1 at least?
00:22:058 (3) - ctrl+> , then fix the spacing , flow better imo
01:40:502 (2) - try this rhyme? http://puu.sh/iJkW
01:55:614 - here shouldn't has notes imo , remove (3) and move (2) to 01:55:836 - ?
04:11:725 - silence spinner end?

[Hard]
00:33:280 (2,3) - slider first and circle later , rhyme much better okay
00:38:280 (1,2,3) - try this rhyme? http://puu.sh/iJnd i'd like to follow the vocal here and i use such a pattern in many places so i think it's okay
02:11:169 (4) - remove and add note at 02:11:169 - , add slider from 02:11:280 - to 02:11:614 - ? nice~
02:49:836 (2,3) - this jump is too huge imo , nearly Insane diff now try to make them closer
04:02:058 (1) - this sldier's reverse arrow is kinda invisible , change direction of the sldier plz triplet or reverse slider ...emm.. i pick later so i rotate it by 90 degree XD

hitsound really boring imo , try to add more finish at least? all right...u asked me to remove a lot of finishes before...now ask me to add some again.... okay, let me see where i can add them lol
good luck

1. 04:02:502 (tutuhaha's Normal)-Kind of odd ending the kiai time here really. Try to end the kiai time on 04:09:614 like on Hard and Easy.

1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you decrease the Approach Rate by one.
2. 00:41:614 (1)-It sure does sound like there should be a finish here.
3. 00:44:280 (5)-Well, a finish on the end sure sounds fitting in my opinion.
4. 00:48:725 (4)-A finish here sounds alright here.
5. 01:22:502 (1, 1)-Both finishes here don't sound right. Consider removing them.
6. 01:27:836 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
7. 01:42:058 (1)-^
8. 01:54:502 (5)-Don't mean to sound picky but can you make this slider going into a proper curve?
9. 02:13:169 (4)-A finish on the end sure sounds fitting.
10. 02:15:836 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider doing that.
11. 02:28:280 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting on the beginning perhaps?
12. 02:31:836 (1)-Consider adding a finish here.
13. 02:58:502 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
14. 03:02:058 (1)-Care to explain on why you didn't add a finish here? ):
15. 03:04:725 (5)-Consider adding a finish on the end.
16. 03:06:502 (1)-Looks sort of like an anti-jump really. Its not really a good idea to do that on an Easy difficulty. ): So, use the distance snap on it so the spacing on that can be fixed.
17. 03:09:169 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting really.
18. 03:16:280 (1)-^
19. 04:02:058 (1)-A finish on the reverse arrow would sound alright.

1. 00:09:614 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? o:
2. 00:30:947 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
3. 01:50:058 (1)-A whistle here sure sounds nice here. In fact, I like how you used that on the second kiai time section. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't put a whistle here on the third kiai time section. o.o
4. 01:52:725 (1)-A custom hit-clap would sound pleasing here? o:
5. 02:28:280 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning here too?
6. 02:31:836 (1)-^
7. 02:35:391 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting perhaps?
8. 03:00:280 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the end?
9. 03:09:169 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
10. 03:16:280 (1)-^
11. 03:27:836 (1)-Pretty much the same thing I talked about on 01:50:058.
12. 03:51:836 (1)-Consider adding a custom hit-clap here.

1. 00:18:725 (2, 3, 4)-A note triple here isn't really fitting. Turn it into a note double. You know, like this?
2. 00:48:725 (1)-A finish here would sound fitting.
3. 01:06:725 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
4. 01:38:502 (4)-A finish on the beginning sounds fitting. Consider adding one in
5. 01:42:058 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning?
6. 01:58:280 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
7. 02:03:614 (2, 3, 4)-^
8. 02:17:614 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider on doing that.
9. 03:44:947 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
10. 03:51:836 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?

Roddie wrote:

Timing Points

1. 04:02:502 (tutuhaha's Normal)-Kind of odd ending the kiai time here really. Try to end the kiai time on 04:09:614 like on Hard and Easy.

Asked tutuhaha and fixed it for she agreed,

Easy

1. Perhaps this difficulty would play better if you decrease the Approach Rate by one. tested and fixed
2. 00:41:614 (1)-It sure does sound like there should be a finish here. fixed
3. 00:44:280 (5)-Well, a finish on the end sure sounds fitting in my opinion. finish maybe heavy here...i try lower volumn and C:S1-clap, and choose clap
4. 00:48:725 (4)-A finish here sounds alright here. nice
5. 01:22:502 (1, 1)-Both finishes here don't sound right. Consider removing them. removed~~ and change the later one to clap
6. 01:27:836 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright. fixed
7. 01:42:058 (1)-^ fixed
8. 01:54:502 (5)-Don't mean to sound picky but can you make this slider going into a proper curve? okay ~~fixed
9. 02:13:169 (4)-A finish on the end sure sounds fitting. fixed
10. 02:15:836 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider doing that. okay
11. 02:28:280 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting on the beginning perhaps? ye...here should be a finish >.<
12. 02:31:836 (1)-Consider adding a finish here. added
13. 02:58:502 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright. yes~
14. 03:02:058 (1)-Care to explain on why you didn't add a finish here? ): fixed....that....for wcx said i add too many finishes, so I remove a lot...and then he said I need more finishes...i add some back...and that confuse myself...>.<...
15. 03:04:725 (5)-Consider adding a finish on the end. fixed T.T
16. 03:06:502 (1)-Looks sort of like an anti-jump really. Its not really a good idea to do that on an Easy difficulty. ): So, use the distance snap on it so the spacing on that can be fixed. spacing fixed....
17. 03:09:169 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting really.
18. 03:16:280 (1)-^
19. 04:02:058 (1)-A finish on the reverse arrow would sound alright. fixed >.<

tutuhaha's Normal tutuhaha asked me to fix hitsounds...so...I fixed all QAQ

1. 00:09:614 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? o:
2. 00:30:947 (1)-A finish on the beginning would sound alright.
3. 01:50:058 (1)-A whistle here sure sounds nice here. In fact, I like how you used that on the second kiai time section. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't put a whistle here on the third kiai time section. o.o
4. 01:52:725 (1)-A custom hit-clap would sound pleasing here? o:
5. 02:28:280 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning here too?
6. 02:31:836 (1)-^
7. 02:35:391 (1)-A finish here sounds fitting perhaps?
8. 03:00:280 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the end?
9. 03:09:169 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?
10. 03:16:280 (1)-^
11. 03:27:836 (1)-Pretty much the same thing I talked about on 01:50:058.
12. 03:51:836 (1)-Consider adding a custom hit-clap here.

Hard

1. 00:18:725 (2, 3, 4)-A note triple here isn't really fitting. Turn it into a note double. You know, like this? cool~~
2. 00:48:725 (1)-A finish here would sound fitting. fixed~
3. 01:06:725 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725. fixed~
4. 01:38:502 (4)-A finish on the beginning sounds fitting. Consider adding one in fixed~
5. 01:42:058 (1)-Forgot to add a finish on the beginning? fixed QAQ
6. 01:58:280 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725.
7. 02:03:614 (2, 3, 4)-^fixed both~/color]
8. 02:17:614 (1)-Adding a whistle would sound nice really. Consider on doing that.
9. 03:44:947 (2, 3, 4)-Pretty much the same thing on 00:18:725. fixed~~i overuse triplet....X.X
10. 03:51:836 (1)-Forgot to add a custom hit-clap on the beginning?

And that's about it. Nothing too serious really.

Give me a call when you two are done looking through my mod.

Roddie wrote:

Discussed with Scorpiour about minor fixing on Easy and a bit of a major fixing on the Storyboard. He also removed the cursor and cursortail png files, which is fine.

Everything seems fine from what I am seeing.

So... Rebubbled!

1. Skin: There is too little difference between hit300.png and hit100.png. You should definitely try to use a different color for the 100, that green is too similar to the yellow which 300 is using.

1. 00:43:725 (2) - This is very hard to see, because of a hitburst from 00:42:725 (6). Easy fix would be to change where 00:43:391 (1) points, so you can position it properly.
2. 01:12:725 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - A bit long for a [Hard], don't you think? Maybe make last few notes into a short repeating slider?
3. 01:34:947 (1) - A soft default finish would be better than your custom clap one because you used it in the next section frequently, and it starts with this note.
4. 01:57:169 (5) - You can make this slider look better by moving the middle point a bit left, it looks weird like it is now.
5. 02:42:502 (1) - In my opinion a soft finish would be better than your custom clap here.
6. 03:15:502 (5) - This slider makes no sense because both the drum and the vocal is on 03:15:614. You should start this slider there.

1. AR+1, OD+1. Looks much more lively with AR3.
2. 00:19:391 (5) - It would be best if this slider was more clear. The slider 00:17:614 (2) disappears when you are done clicking the circle 00:18:502 (3), and that would be too little time to notice that this was a slider. You should definitely change this, because this is not something you should be doing in [Easy].
3. 03:04:725 (5) - I think you're missing a whistle on the arrow.

lolcubes wrote:

Ok let's take a look.

[General]

1. Skin: There is too little difference between hit300.png and hit100.png. You should definitely try to use a different color for the 100, that green is too similar to the yellow which 300 is using.

color adjusted >.< increase Hue

[Hard]

1. 00:43:725 (2) - This is very hard to see, because of a hitburst from 00:42:725 (6). Easy fix would be to change where 00:43:391 (1) points, so you can position it properly. flip them to the left side i suppose it's better now~~
2. 01:12:725 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - A bit long for a [Hard], don't you think? Maybe make last few notes into a short repeating slider? okay~~ and adjust the shape of stream
3. 01:34:947 (1) - A soft default finish would be better than your custom clap one because you used it in the next section frequently, and it starts with this note. it's nice
4. 01:57:169 (5) - You can make this slider look better by moving the middle point a bit left, it looks weird like it is now. ah..fixed..>.<
5. 02:42:502 (1) - In my opinion a soft finish would be better than your custom clap here. yes it is~~ fixed~
6. 03:15:502 (5) - This slider makes no sense because both the drum and the vocal is on 03:15:614. You should start this slider there. fixed~

[Easy]

1. AR+1, OD+1. Looks much more lively with AR3. okay~
2. 00:19:391 (5) - It would be best if this slider was more clear. The slider 00:17:614 (2) disappears when you are done clicking the circle 00:18:502 (3), and that would be too little time to notice that this was a slider. You should definitely change this, because this is not something you should be doing in [Easy]. adjust the whole combo here, i suppose it's better now
3. 03:04:725 (5) - I think you're missing a whistle on the arrow. Yes...fixed >.<

Simple stuff, I should be able to rank after the fixes.

Colin Hou wrote:

title is 'Masquerade!'

congratz anyway