Hi~
My First Pets
00:44:516 (2,3,4,5,6) - place this set of notes right beside the end point of the prev slider, like this http://puu.sh/kWVA as it is feels like the notes are closer to the slider than they really are and is a bit confusing.
My First Time
00:06:386 (1) - this 1/2 note is a bit confusing for beginners, you should make it a slider and place it 1/2 beat earlier, end point at 00:06:386
My First Pets
00:44:516 (2,3,4,5,6) - place this set of notes right beside the end point of the prev slider, like this http://puu.sh/kWVA as it is feels like the notes are closer to the slider than they really are and is a bit confusing.
My First Time
00:06:386 (1) - this 1/2 note is a bit confusing for beginners, you should make it a slider and place it 1/2 beat earlier, end point at 00:06:386