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Topic Starter
Giffen

Naryuga wrote:

Giffen wrote:

とても丁寧なmodding、大変ありがとうございます! :)
細かい所まで指摘して頂いて嬉しいです :lol:
taiko譜面のmoddingは自分がプレイ、Edit共に初心者なためとても参考になりました ありがとうございます><! 役に立てたなら自分としても嬉しいです

厚かましいですがNaryugaさんがよろしければ、太鼓BGを作成して頂けたら嬉しいです... :roll:
 了解です!


(Edit:)完成ー


何か問題点があれば言ってください。 Star~☆彡
thanks alot for taikobg and star~ :oops:
spboxer3
from #modres

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Tags:[Piscis' Easy] : piscis, [other] : shuffle piscis
  2. Stack Leniency is too lower... you at least need to use 0.3
  3. this song's timing have a bit off~you need find timmer to help you mod this!

[Piscis' Easy]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:40:850 -
mapping

[Normal+]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:06:004 -
    00:06:234 -
    00:06:927 -
    00:07:157 -
    00:07:850 -
    00:08:542 -
    00:18:696 -
    00:26:081 -
    00:43:619 -
    00:48:234 -
    00:53:773 -
    01:00:234 -
    01:03:004 -
    01:03:927 -
    01:21:465 -
    01:22:388 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:19:157 (2,4) -
  2. 00:26:773 (2,3) -
  3. 00:42:696 (1,3) -
mapping

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:05:542 -
    00:18:696 -
    00:26:081 -
    00:53:773 -
    01:00:234 -
    01:03:004 -
    01:03:927 -
mapping
  1. 00:26:081 (1,3) - Umm... you can make it stack, I think.
  2. 00:29:081 (8,1,2) - spacing? it look like a kinda over
  3. 01:15:465 (2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:06:696 -
    00:17:773 -
    00:18:696 -
    00:26:196 -
    00:32:773 -
    00:39:927 -
    00:49:157 -
    00:53:773 -
    01:00:234 -
    01:03:004 -
    01:03:927 -
    01:21:465 -
    01:22:388 -
    01:25:157 -
    01:27:927 -
mapping
  1. 00:35:081 (5,6,7,1) - spacing :o

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
Topic Starter
Giffen

spboxer3 wrote:

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[general]


  • Settings
  1. Tags:[Piscis' Easy] : piscis, [other] : shuffle piscis Done
  2. Stack Leniency is too lower... you at least need to use 0.3 Done i changed "0.7"
  3. this song's timing have a bit off~you need find timmer to help you mod this!i recheck this song's timig, i can't find the timing's gap... :(

[Piscis' Easy]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:40:850 -
mapping

[Normal+]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:06:004 - Done
    00:06:234 - Done
    00:06:927 - Done
    00:07:157 - Done
    00:07:850 - Done
    00:08:542 - Done
    00:18:696 - Done
    00:26:081 - Done
    00:43:619 - Done
    00:48:234 - Done
    00:53:773 - Done
    01:00:234 - Done
    01:03:004 - Done
    01:03:927 - Done
    01:21:465 - Done
    01:22:388 - Done

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:19:157 (2,4) - Done
  2. 00:26:773 (2,3) - Done
  3. 00:42:696 (1,3) - Done
mapping

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:05:542 - Done
    00:18:696 - Done
    00:26:081 - Done
    00:53:773 - Done
    01:00:234 - Done
    01:03:004 - Done
    01:03:927 - Done
mapping
  1. 00:26:081 (1,3) - Umm... you can make it stack, I think. Done
  2. 00:29:081 (8,1,2) - spacing? it look like a kinda over Done
  3. 01:15:465 (2,3,4) - ^ None

[Insane]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:06:696 - Done
    00:17:773 - Done
    00:18:696 - Done
    00:26:196 - Done
    00:32:773 - Done
    00:39:927 - Done
    00:49:157 - Done
    00:53:773 - Done
    01:00:234 - Done
    01:03:004 - Done
    01:03:927 - Done
    01:21:465 - Done
    01:22:388 - Done
    01:25:157 - Done
    01:27:927 - Done
mapping
  1. 00:35:081 (5,6,7,1) - spacing :o Done

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
Thank you for modding :)
You've given me an idea! :oops:
Piscis

spboxer3 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:40:850 -
Fixed~

mapping
tagsについてですが、SourceにShuffle!が入っているので
tagsのshuffleは消していいと思います

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [Piscis' Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

spboxer3 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:40:850 -
Fixed~

mapping
tagsについてですが、SourceにShuffle!が入っているので
tagsのshuffleは消していいと思います
確かにそうですね
修正しました :D
BeatofIke
Nice map. :D
Topic Starter
Giffen

BeatofIke wrote:

Nice map. :D
thanks alot! :)
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this through #modreqs

General:
Add "opening" in the tags because this is the opening theme of the anime
i was gonna say why isn't there a vid but i understand why.
change the white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know whether a slider is a repeat or not.

Easy:
00:44:542 (1) - how about making a curved so that it'd blanket sort of around the previous slider. like this
00:46:388 (3) - make this look the same as (1) if you follow the suggestion above.
01:13:157 (3) - ooh i think beginners might let go after the first repeat. this is why i mentioned about the white combo color. suggest that you remove the repeats and add another 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners.

Normal+
remove the + on normal+. it looks bad and there's users who won't mod your map because of that.
try this setup? if you ignore this, then you can use this as a reference.
00:17:773 (7) - the hitburst is covering 1 of the repeats on this repeat slider. this would be ok for hard and insane diffs, but on a normal diff it's not. and plus it'd be hard for players to know when this slider ends because of the number of repeats. try to do something easier.
00:47:311 (2) - ^
00:56:081 (2) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
overall this is too hard for a normal diff. replace some of the circles for sliders or delete notes to make it easier.

Hard:
00:56:542 (1) - remove the NC here because the lyrics are sill going.

Insane:
Try AR9. i think it flows nicer than AR8.
00:17:773 (7) - make this a NC because it follows the drums.
00:27:927 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
00:39:927 (4) - same as 00:17:773
00:47:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about a stream to challenge players?

This is the best I can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
Giffen

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Found this through #modreqs

General:
Add "opening" in the tags because this is the opening theme of the anime Done
i was gonna say why isn't there a vid but i understand why.
change the white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know whether a slider is a repeat or not. Done

Easy:
00:44:542 (1) - how about making a curved so that it'd blanket sort of around the previous slider. like this
00:46:388 (3) - make this look the same as (1) if you follow the suggestion above.
01:13:157 (3) - ooh i think beginners might let go after the first repeat. this is why i mentioned about the white combo color. suggest that you remove the repeats and add another 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners.

Normal+
remove the + on normal+. it looks bad and there's users who won't mod your map because of that. Done
try this setup? if you ignore this, then you can use this as a reference. Done
00:17:773 (7) - the hitburst is covering 1 of the repeats on this repeat slider. this would be ok for hard and insane diffs, but on a normal diff it's not. and plus it'd be hard for players to know when this slider ends because of the number of repeats. try to do something easier. Done
00:47:311 (2) - ^ Done
00:56:081 (2) - make this a NC because of new lyrics. Done
overall this is too hard for a normal diff. replace some of the circles for sliders or delete notes to make it easier. okey, i think so :? i tried it.

Hard:
00:56:542 (1) - remove the NC here because the lyrics are sill going. Done

Insane:
Try AR9. i think it flows nicer than AR8. hoo! its wilder than AR8 8-) Done
00:17:773 (7) - make this a NC because it follows the drums. Done
00:27:927 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics. Done
00:39:927 (4) - same as 00:17:773 Done
00:47:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about a stream to challenge players? Done

This is the best I can do. GL :D
Thank you very much for modding :D
your polite modding is a big help for me :oops:
NewRulerNA
Mod reqより

[General]
提案ですがTVsizeの曲なので動画を追加してみては?

音付けが優れているように思えません
私はそちらの指摘が得意では無いので他の人に任せる形になってしまいますが、音付けに関してのModをより多くしてもらった方が良いと思います

[Piscis's Easy]
気になったのは細かな1点のみ

00:05:773 (1) - スライダーの形が歪んでいるので修正を


[Normal]
Normalなので全体の完全なDistanceの統一をするべきだと個人的に思います
このままで行くとしても、間を置くのかどうかがかなり分かりにくく、目押し前提の譜面となっているように感じます

00:08:542 (1) 00:11:773 (2) - ヒットバーストが被ってしまいそうなので移動させたほうがいいかも
00:21:927 (5,1) - 被っているのがNormalとしては見にくいので被らないように移動
00:31:619 (1,2,3,1,2) - ゴチャゴチャした配置で非常に分かりにくく感じました
01:16:157 (2,3) - 始点に戻る配置はNormalでは難しいかな

[Hard]

00:08:542 (1) - ここの速度低下は分かりにくいのでは?
00:15:004 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに揃える
00:34:850 (6,7) - ^
00:36:465 (10) - あくまでも個人的になのですが、下の方に行き過ぎかと
00:40:388 (8,1) - 8のスライダーのヒットバーストが隠れていて1のスライダーのターンが分かりにくいです

[Insane]
AR-1
00:18:696 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一
00:36:465 (5,8,11) - ^
00:48:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りが優れているようには思えません、叩くタイミングをもっと分かりやすくなるように工夫をするか、別の音取りをするのが良いと思います
01:15:465 (2,4) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一

スライダーの形が全体を見ると統一されておらず、譜面として綺麗ではないように思えました
もう少し使うスライダーの種類を減らすべきだと思います

かなり厳しい指摘もありますが、がんばってください
Topic Starter
Giffen

NewRulerNA wrote:

Mod reqより

[General]
提案ですがTVsizeの曲なので動画を追加してみては? None

音付けが優れているように思えません
私はそちらの指摘が得意では無いので他の人に任せる形になってしまいますが、音付けに関してのModをより多くしてもらった方が良いと思います

[Piscis's Easy]
気になったのは細かな1点のみ

00:05:773 (1) - スライダーの形が歪んでいるので修正を


[Normal]
Normalなので全体の完全なDistanceの統一をするべきだと個人的に思います Done
このままで行くとしても、間を置くのかどうかがかなり分かりにくく、目押し前提の譜面となっているように感じます

00:08:542 (1) 00:11:773 (2) - ヒットバーストが被ってしまいそうなので移動させたほうがいいかも Done
00:21:927 (5,1) - 被っているのがNormalとしては見にくいので被らないように移動 Done
00:31:619 (1,2,3,1,2) - ゴチャゴチャした配置で非常に分かりにくく感じました Done
01:16:157 (2,3) - 始点に戻る配置はNormalでは難しいかな Done

[Hard]

00:08:542 (1) - ここの速度低下は分かりにくいのでは? Done x0.75にしました
00:15:004 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに揃える Done
00:34:850 (6,7) - ^ Done
00:36:465 (10) - あくまでも個人的になのですが、下の方に行き過ぎかと Done
00:40:388 (8,1) - 8のスライダーのヒットバーストが隠れていて1のスライダーのターンが分かりにくいです Done

[Insane]
AR-1 None
00:18:696 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一 Done
00:36:465 (5,8,11) - ^ Done
00:48:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りが優れているようには思えません、叩くタイミングをもっと分かりやすくなるように工夫をするか、別の音取りをするのが良いと思います Done
01:15:465 (2,4) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一 Done

スライダーの形が全体を見ると統一されておらず、譜面として綺麗ではないように思えました
もう少し使うスライダーの種類を減らすべきだと思います

かなり厳しい指摘もありますが、がんばってください
moddingありがとうございます ;)

NewRulerNA wrote:

スライダーの形が全体を見ると統一されておらず、譜面として綺麗ではないように思えました
もう少し使うスライダーの種類を減らすべきだと思います
確かにそうですね
減らしてみます :?
Piscis

Byakugan249 wrote:

Easy:
00:44:542 (1) - how about making a curved so that it'd blanket sort of around the previous slider. like this fixed
00:46:388 (3) - make this look the same as (1) if you follow the suggestion above. fixed
01:13:157 (3) - ooh i think beginners might let go after the first repeat. this is why i mentioned about the white combo color. suggest that you remove the repeats and add another 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners. fixed


NewRulerNA wrote:

[Piscis's Easy]
気になったのは細かな1点のみ

00:05:773 (1) - スライダーの形が歪んでいるので修正を 直しました
thank you modding ~ ;)
アップデートお願いします

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [Piscis' Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

thank you modding ~ ;)
アップデートお願いします
アップデート完了です :oops:
CXu
Hi there :)
I love this song~~ >w</

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!


[Color guide]
  1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
  2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black text is a regular suggestion.
[General]
  1. Kiai times in [Insane] and [Taiko Muzukashii] differs from the other difficulties. Please make them the same. (Actually not sure if it's completely unrankable, but putting it as red anyway.
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav has a bit of silence in the beginning. This means the hitsound sounds late. Try using this one.
  3. Also, lower the volume on your soft-hitclap.wav a bit? It's very high.
[Piscis' Easy]
  1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
  2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
  3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
  4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
  6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
  7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
    etc etc
  8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581
There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.

[Normal]
  1. Please don't use so many finishes everywhere. It's like you're using them instead of claps, and it hurts my ears ;w;
  2. 00:03:004 - This 1.30x section doesn't fit here in Normal at all. Remove it, then remove repeats from 00:03:004 (1,2). Remember that the sliderend is unsnapped after you deleted the inherited section, so resnap it.
  3. 00:05:536 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. this should be at 00:05:542, though if you remove the previous timing section, this one is not needed anymore.
  4. 00:13:157 (4) - Spacing.
  5. 00:14:081 (5) - This would be better if you did like this imo:
  6. 00:15:927 (2) - Line up with 00:15:004 (1)
  7. 00:24:234 (4) - New combo
  8. 00:25:273 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/6, starting at 00:25:311 (or rather 00:25:081). I don't recommend using 1/6 in a Normal though. You could supplement this section by making a slider instead like this:
  9. 00:29:773 (5) - New combo
  10. 00:28:619 - Add note here?
  11. 00:30:696 (8) - Remove this, and move 00:30:927 (9) to 00:30:696 instead. Then add note at 00:31:388
  12. 00:39:004 (5) - New combo.
  13. 00:40:388 (8,1) - This is hard to read for a [Normal] Can you not stack them?
  14. 00:44:542 (5) - New combo
  15. 00:58:388 (4) - Extend this so the repeat is on 00:58:734 - instead.
  16. 01:02:081 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack under such a short slider.
  17. 01:04:388 (5) - ^
  18. 01:11:773 (2,3,1,2) - A bit hard for normal?
  19. 01:15:465 (9,1) - Swap new combo.
  20. 01:17:773 (5) - Move it out like this? http://puu.sh/lwEM
  21. 01:22:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern might be a bit confusing.
A bit hard for a [Normal] (not that I can say anything, I make kinda hard Normals myself xD)

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part sounds very weird imo. Could you try another rhythm pattern here?
  2. 00:25:273 (1,2,1,2) - The pattern here is confusing even for a hard. Sliders stacked on each other in different beats. You should space this out.
  3. 00:40:850 (1) - You don't have a long time to react to the 2nd repeat on this slider. Consider unstacking this?
  4. 00:58:388 (4) - New combo?
  5. 01:03:004 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend
  6. 01:21:465 - Why this 1.50x section? Feels very weird.
I like this diff :D But finishes ;_;

[Insane]
  1. OD -1. OD9 doesn't fit with a song like this.
  2. 00:09:927 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel this mapping is uneccesary. There is nothing here in the song that this is mapped to.
  3. 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - This section should be 1/6
  4. 00:34:388 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here so it looks more even with the rest of the pattern~
  5. 00:37:157 (6,10) - Overlap ;_;
  6. 01:25:157 (1) - Extend to 01:25:619?
  7. 01:26:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very randomly placed. Maybe put in some kind of pattern?
I like this too xD But yeah finishes ;_;

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Both [Hard] and [Insane] are good, only [Normal] had a few things that I felt was weird. Good job :D
Nice mapset!
Good luck~ :)
Long modpost is long
Topic Starter
Giffen

CXu wrote:

Hi there :)
I love this song~~ >w</

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!


[Color guide]
  1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
  2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black text is a regular suggestion.
[General]
  1. Kiai times in [Insane] and [Taiko Muzukashii] differs from the other difficulties. Please make them the same. (Actually not sure if it's completely unrankable, but putting it as red anyway. Done
  2. soft-hitfinish.wav has a bit of silence in the beginning. This means the hitsound sounds late. Try using this one. Done
  3. Also, lower the volume on your soft-hitclap.wav a bit? It's very high.
[Piscis' Easy]
  1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
  2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
  3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
  4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
  6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
  7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
    etc etc
  8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581
There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.

[Normal]
  1. Please don't use so many finishes everywhere. It's like you're using them instead of claps, and it hurts my ears ;w; Done
  2. 00:03:004 - This 1.30x section doesn't fit here in Normal at all. Remove it, then remove repeats from 00:03:004 (1,2). Remember that the sliderend is unsnapped after you deleted the inherited section, so resnap it. Done
  3. 00:05:536 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. this should be at 00:05:542, though if you remove the previous timing section, this one is not needed anymore. Done
  4. 00:13:157 (4) - Spacing. Done
  5. 00:14:081 (5) - This would be better if you did like this imo: Done
  6. 00:15:927 (2) - Line up with 00:15:004 (1) None
  7. 00:24:234 (4) - New combo Done
  8. 00:25:273 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/6, starting at 00:25:311 (or rather 00:25:081). I don't recommend using 1/6 in a Normal though. You could supplement this section by making a slider instead like this: Done
  9. 00:29:773 (5) - New combo Done
  10. 00:28:619 - Add note here? Done
  11. 00:30:696 (8) - Remove this, and move 00:30:927 (9) to 00:30:696 instead. Then add note at 00:31:388 Done
  12. 00:39:004 (5) - New combo. Done
  13. 00:40:388 (8,1) - This is hard to read for a [Normal] Can you not stack them? Done
  14. 00:44:542 (5) - New combo Done
  15. 00:58:388 (4) - Extend this so the repeat is on 00:58:734 - instead. Done
  16. 01:02:081 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack under such a short slider. Done
  17. 01:04:388 (5) - ^ Done
  18. 01:11:773 (2,3,1,2) - A bit hard for normal? Done
  19. 01:15:465 (9,1) - Swap new combo. Done
  20. 01:17:773 (5) - Move it out like this? http://puu.sh/lwEM Done
  21. 01:22:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern might be a bit confusing. Done
A bit hard for a [Normal] (not that I can say anything, I make kinda hard Normals myself xD)

yeah,i think so... :P i try to change to easy :roll:

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part sounds very weird imo. Could you try another rhythm pattern here? Done
  2. 00:25:273 (1,2,1,2) - The pattern here is confusing even for a hard. Sliders stacked on each other in different beats. You should space this out. Done
  3. 00:40:850 (1) - You don't have a long time to react to the 2nd repeat on this slider. Consider unstacking this? Done
  4. 00:58:388 (4) - New combo? Done
  5. 01:03:004 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend Done
  6. 01:21:465 - Why this 1.50x section? Feels very weird. Done

I like this diff :D But finishes ;_;

[Insane]
  1. OD -1. OD9 doesn't fit with a song like this. Done
  2. 00:09:927 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel this mapping is uneccesary. There is nothing here in the song that this is mapped to. Done
  3. 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - This section should be 1/6 Done
  4. 00:34:388 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here so it looks more even with the rest of the pattern~ Done
  5. 00:37:157 (6,10) - Overlap ;_; Done
  6. 01:25:157 (1) - Extend to 01:25:619? Done
  7. 01:26:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very randomly placed. Maybe put in some kind of pattern? Done

I like this too xD But yeah finishes ;_;


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Both [Hard] and [Insane] are good, only [Normal] had a few things that I felt was weird. Good job :D
Nice mapset!
Good luck~ :)
Long modpost is long
Thank you for great modding!
okey, i did reduced finishes in all diff :roll: you are right, its too much finishes... :o
Piscis

CXu wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
  1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
  2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
  3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
  4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
  6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
  7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
    etc etc
  8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581
There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.
All fixed! thank you~ :D

ヒットサウンドを色々と変えました~

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [Piscis' Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

CXu wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
  1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
  2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
  3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
  4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
  6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
  7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
    etc etc
  8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581
There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.
All fixed! thank you~ :D

ヒットサウンドを色々と変えました~
updated :roll:
Piscis
すいませんもう一回updateしてください :(
確認してみたら前と同じものっぽいので・・・

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [Piscis' Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

すいませんもう一回updateしてください :(
確認してみたら前と同じものっぽいので・・・
了解~
完了です ;)
CXu
Hi, sorry for taking so long. See if you like it ><

bg:
http://puu.sh/lVXC

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [CXu].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

CXu wrote:

Hi, sorry for taking so long. See if you like it ><

bg:
http://puu.sh/lVXC
okey, update done :D

wow! its a nice map :)
marvelous claps attract me ... :oops:
BeatofIke
Want a video with that?
Topic Starter
Giffen

BeatofIke wrote:

Want a video with that?
okey, i added opening video :roll:
Jdle
blue is for suggestion
red is recommended

[Timing]
change 2081 to 2098 (because the offset is bit off)

[Taiko Muzukashii]
I suggest that the diff's name must be change to "Oni" because it was bit hard for muzukashii
change the slider velocity to 1.4
00:07:619(1) - extend the slider to 09:465
00:09:465 - remove the spinner


great map :)
Topic Starter
Giffen

jdle07 wrote:

blue is for suggestion
red is recommended

[Timing]
change 2081 to 2098 (because the offset is bit off) Done

[Taiko Muzukashii]
I suggest that the diff's name must be change to "Oni" because it was bit hard for muzukashii Done
change the slider velocity to 1.4 Done
00:07:619(1) - extend the slider to 09:465 Done
00:09:465 - remove the spinner Done


great map :)
thanks for modding :)
your modding for taiko helps me greatful :oops:
riffy
hi~
i'm from modreqs >.<
I LOVE SHUFFLE!

Please, let me mod it. :3

keep consistency in kiai through all diffs? (CXu)

[CXu]
00:06:944 (7,10) - overlap -_-
00:28:636 (5) - re-shape slider? this shape looks a bit random
00:51:367 (4) - stack with (3)
01:14:558 (5) - overlap (01:15:943 (4) - )
01:20:905 (2,3,4) - x44 y 3288
01:24:482 (5) - new combo

[Insane]
loud hitsounds T_T
i can feel a lot spacing changes >< a bit hard to read
00:21:713 (6,2) - don't touch (2--) with 6! looks messy
00:23:328 (3) - a bit random shape. i suggest to change it somehow
00:24:251 (5,6,7,8,1) - looks like spam of circles on slider!
00:25:251 (2,3,4) - overjump D:
00:27:251 (3) - wrong shape. i think this slider should use same shape as (1, 2)
00:37:174 (6) - new combo here
00:37:174 (6,7,8) - don't cross it with 00:35:790 (1,2)
00:42:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - loud hitsounds! sounds like overstream. ><
00:44:559 (2,3,4) - ugly crossing
01:02:444 (6) - new combo
01:13:174 (3,6) - overlap.
01:18:713 (7,8,9,10,1) - don't put so many circles on 1 slider
01:25:174 (1) - booring shape
01:27:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Hard]

loud hitsounds
00:08:559 (1) - put it in the center of playfield?
00:21:482 (5) - jump here? why? yeah, jumps nice sometimes. but this jump ruins rythm
00:24:251 (5,6,7,8,1) - so many circles on one slider!
00:29:328 (1) - no need for jump
00:30:251 (5,6) - why stack?
00:40:867 (1) - trust me, it plays terrible :<
00:44:559 (1,2,3,4) - looks ugly
00:47:328 (5) - too many repeats
00:47:328 (5,1) - don't put slider on next slider like this
00:56:328 - forgot circle?
01:02:444 (1,2) - aren't looks good
01:03:713 (4,5,1) - crossing circle and slider! looks ugly
01:05:790 (1,4) - make them symmetrical?

[Taiko]


[Normal]

you really want to use 1/4 here? feels a bit off
4.09 stars? are you sure? i think it's a bit hard :<
too fast sliders?
many short repeat-sliders maybe change some of them to make easier map?
00:03:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ALL this sliders have boring shape. i suggest to change something
01:09:482 (3) - stack with 01:11:328 (1)
01:27:944 (1,2) - 1/4 here! on normal? lol u mad

[Easy]
00:05:790 (1) - put in the center
00:05:790 (1,2) - make symmetrical
00:13:174 (2) - nazi x256 y280
00:17:790 (3,1) - will it be covered by online-records? also: make more interesting slider shape
00:26:098 (1,2) - put in the center @ make symmetrical
00:32:559 (1) - in the middle of playfield
00:39:021 (4) - maybe you can put it like this somehow
00:56:098 (1,1) - wtf? NC-spam?
01:11:790 (2,3) - a bit random shape. you can make it better
01:15:021 (1,2) - not symmetrical
01:22:405 (1) - x288 y 216 looks better but still needs more work on this pattern


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Overall: i think needs a bit more modding. but pretty fine for me.
About my modding: i want you to make perfect map. if something looks wrong for me i tell you to fix it. but it's up to you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Star!
Reason: map is fine. and song is awesome~!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
P.S. forgive me my poor english.
Topic Starter
Giffen

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~
i'm from modreqs >.<
I LOVE SHUFFLE!

Please, let me mod it. :3

keep consistency in kiai through all diffs? (CXu) mm... i changed kiai time in the same as CXu

[CXu]
00:06:944 (7,10) - overlap -_-
00:28:636 (5) - re-shape slider? this shape looks a bit random
00:51:367 (4) - stack with (3)
01:14:558 (5) - overlap (01:15:943 (4) - )
01:20:905 (2,3,4) - x44 y 3288
01:24:482 (5) - new combo

[Insane]
loud hitsounds T_T
i can feel a lot spacing changes >< a bit hard to read
00:21:713 (6,2) - don't touch (2--) with 6! looks messy Done
00:23:328 (3) - a bit random shape. i suggest to change it somehow Done
00:24:251 (5,6,7,8,1) - looks like spam of circles on slider! Done
00:25:251 (2,3,4) - overjump D: Done
00:27:251 (3) - wrong shape. i think this slider should use same shape as (1, 2) Done
00:37:174 (6) - new combo here Done
00:37:174 (6,7,8) - don't cross it with 00:35:790 (1,2) None
00:42:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - loud hitsounds! sounds like overstream. >< None but i changed the sound volume
00:44:559 (2,3,4) - ugly crossing Done
01:02:444 (6) - new combo Done
01:13:174 (3,6) - overlap. Done
01:18:713 (7,8,9,10,1) - don't put so many circles on 1 slider Done
01:25:174 (1) - booring shape Done
01:27:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Done

[Hard]
Done
loud hitsounds
00:08:559 (1) - put it in the center of playfield? Done
00:21:482 (5) - jump here? why? yeah, jumps nice sometimes. but this jump ruins rythm Done
00:24:251 (5,6,7,8,1) - so many circles on one slider! Done
00:29:328 (1) - no need for jump Done
00:30:251 (5,6) - why stack? Done
00:40:867 (1) - trust me, it plays terrible :< Done
00:44:559 (1,2,3,4) - looks ugly Done
00:47:328 (5) - too many repeats Done
00:47:328 (5,1) - don't put slider on next slider like this Done
00:56:328 - forgot circle? Done
01:02:444 (1,2) - aren't looks good Done
01:03:713 (4,5,1) - crossing circle and slider! looks ugly Done
01:05:790 (1,4) - make them symmetrical? none, I didn't mean it :roll:

[Taiko]
Done

[Normal]

you really want to use 1/4 here? feels a bit off
4.09 stars? are you sure? i think it's a bit hard :< see, i changed it easy
too fast sliders?
many short repeat-sliders maybe change some of them to make easier map?
00:03:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ALL this sliders have boring shape. i suggest to change something Done
01:09:482 (3) - stack with 01:11:328 (1) Done
01:27:944 (1,2) - 1/4 here! on normal? lol u mad Done

[Easy]
00:05:790 (1) - put in the center
00:05:790 (1,2) - make symmetrical
00:13:174 (2) - nazi x256 y280
00:17:790 (3,1) - will it be covered by online-records? also: make more interesting slider shape
00:26:098 (1,2) - put in the center @ make symmetrical
00:32:559 (1) - in the middle of playfield
00:39:021 (4) - maybe you can put it like this somehow
00:56:098 (1,1) - wtf? NC-spam?
01:11:790 (2,3) - a bit random shape. you can make it better
01:15:021 (1,2) - not symmetrical
01:22:405 (1) - x288 y 216 looks better but still needs more work on this pattern


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Overall: i think needs a bit more modding. but pretty fine for me.
About my modding: i want you to make perfect map. if something looks wrong for me i tell you to fix it. but it's up to you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Star!
Reason: map is fine. and song is awesome~!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
P.S. forgive me my poor english.
wow! i appreciate your considerate modding! :)
i changed it drastically, how about it...? :roll:
CXu

-Bakari- wrote:

[CXu]
00:06:944 (7,10) - overlap -_- - I don't have any ideas about how to keep the same moving pattern without overlap \o\
00:28:636 (5) - re-shape slider? this shape looks a bit random - Huh? It's straight, no?
00:51:367 (4) - stack with (3) - Stacking it would make it harder to tell if it's 1/4 or 1/2
01:14:558 (5) - overlap (01:15:943 (4) - ) - Hmm, yeah, well I moved 01:15:943 (4,5,6,7) a bit up. I think that should work out fairly well for this part.
01:20:905 (2,3,4) - x44 y 3288 - What?
01:24:482 (5) - new combo - Yes
Derp.

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [CXu].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen
update done :!:
kioukiou
I suggest you set a new offset at 56,559 ms.(Because of THIS.)

If you can not understand,take a look at CXu's diff.

And there have some weird sliders need you check.

[Hard]
01:27:944 (1) -

[CXu]
00:25:098 (1) -


That's all.
CXu
Right. I think this is alright?

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [CXu].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

kioukiou wrote:

I suggest you set a new offset at 56,559 ms.(Because of THIS.)

If you can not understand,take a look at CXu's diff. oh, you are right. i added a new offset at 56,559ms :D

And there have some weird sliders need you check.

[Hard]
01:27:944 (1) - Fixed. i reduced slider speed

[CXu]
00:25:098 (1) -


That's all.
Thank you for your important modding! :D


CXu wrote:

Right. I think this is alright?
updeate done :roll:
Piscis

-Bakari- wrote:

00:05:790 (1) - put in the center No change
00:05:790 (1,2) - make symmetrical No change
00:13:174 (2) - nazi x256 y280 Fixed
00:17:790 (3,1) - will it be covered by online-records? also: make more interesting slider shape No change
00:26:098 (1,2) - put in the center @ make symmetrical put in the center @ make symmetrical No change
00:32:559 (1) - in the middle of playfield No change
00:39:021 (4) - maybe you can put it like this somehow Fixed
00:56:098 (1,1) - wtf? NC-spam? remove to NC!
01:11:790 (2,3) - a bit random shape. you can make it better Fixed
01:15:021 (1,2) - not symmetrical Fixed
01:22:405 (1) - x288 y 216 looks better but still needs more work on this pattern Fixed
Thank you modding :D

Download: YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [Piscis' Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

00:05:790 (1) - put in the center No change
00:05:790 (1,2) - make symmetrical No change
00:13:174 (2) - nazi x256 y280 Fixed
00:17:790 (3,1) - will it be covered by online-records? also: make more interesting slider shape No change
00:26:098 (1,2) - put in the center @ make symmetrical put in the center @ make symmetrical No change
00:32:559 (1) - in the middle of playfield No change
00:39:021 (4) - maybe you can put it like this somehow Fixed
00:56:098 (1,1) - wtf? NC-spam? remove to NC!
01:11:790 (2,3) - a bit random shape. you can make it better Fixed
01:15:021 (1,2) - not symmetrical Fixed
01:22:405 (1) - x288 y 216 looks better but still needs more work on this pattern Fixed
Thank you modding :D
update done! :!:
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