Hahaha it's a minor joke (it was on purpose)grumd wrote:
«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Hahaha it's a minor joke (it was on purpose)grumd wrote:
«Engrish version» in description?
maybe English?
Starry wrote:
Requested by TheVapor <3
[Easy]
01:56:716 (1) - Reverse this 1 more time. Fixed
02:38:455 (1,2,3) - Slider goes here way better. maybe you should make it the same as the next note. Fixed
01:17:586 - Add a note here. ?
[Normal]
01:28:020 (3,1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of the sliders only.
01:30:629 (4) - ^ and new combo here. Fixed
01:33:238 (4) - Add whistle to the beginning of the slider I think i'm okay now lol
01:40:629 (2) - Clap
01:42:369 (4) - ^
02:45:412 (2) - ^
02:46:064 (4) - ^
[Hard]
01:27:151 (4) - New combo Combos are fine i think xD
01:31:934 (4) - ^
02:55:846 (4) - ^
02:17:586 (2,3) - 1 slider?
[Vass's Devil]
00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^
[Lunatic]
01:14:108 (1) - Clap at the end
01:18:021 (10) - New combo Fixed
01:23:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap at 2,4,6,8? I did something else
01:26:064 (4) - Clap at 4?
01:27:477 (2) - Clap here?
01:27:912 (4) - ^
02:06:716 (5) - New combo here? Fixed
02:07:151 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
02:10:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding clap at the start of slider sounds nice :3 Okay i'll actually try this, Fixed
Nice map~
nothing changed, but thanksStarry wrote:
[Vass's Devil]
00:41:933 (1,2,3) - This can be very confusing because its too near, maybe separate just a bit. Just separate the 2
00:55:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:51:499 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:890 (2) - New combo?
02:17:586 (4) - ^
Roddie wrote:
GeneralStoryboard
- Since you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have to a slider border included.
Easy
- Add an epilepsy warning. Fixed
Normal
- 01:15:412 (5)-Considering that this is an Easy, I suggest move this slider somewhere else because stacking this on the previous note could throw off a newbie. ): Fixed
- 01:25:412 (1)-Perhaps add a finish on the beginning? Fixed
- 01:58:455 (2)-Left the spacing on this intentional or by mistake? If it was a mistake, fix the spacing on that by using the distance snap.oops, Fixed
- 02:47:151 (3)-Consider moving this one grid down.Fixed
Hard
- 02:42:151 (1)-I strongly suggest not having a spacing like that for this slider. It sort of looks like an anti-jump. And anti-jumps are no fun on normal difficulties. ): So, fix it by using the distance snap. Fixed
- 02:57:803 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? Fixed
- 01:21:933 (1)-Forgot to add a finish? Fixed
- 01:48:890-Perhaps add a new combo here? Fixed
- 02:43:564 (4)-It's probably best to delete this note and replace with a 1/4 slider. If you do leave the note like that, it could come out as a surprise, you know? Fixed (yeah someone told make to make it a note lol...)
- 02:55:846-It would make sense if you put a new combo here...Fixed
Vass' Devil
Looks good to me.
LunaticAnd that's about it.
- 00:52:803 (2)-I believe you forgot to add a clap on the beginning. Fixed
- 01:19:216 (x, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12)-First on 01:19:325, I don't find this stream here fitting for this part of the song... It's suggest I'm giving you but how about a note placement like this? http://puu.sh/h4lU And as for 01:19:216, add a note there. If you do that, you'll get a triplet. It's better that way. Here's a screenshot on how it would look. http://puu.sh/h4mU I got confused so I just remapped it xD hope its okay
- 02:19:542 (3)-It sounds like this note should be on 02:19:651... Consider placing it there. Or you could replace the note from 02:19:325 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:19:651. In my opinion, the second option is the best way to go.
- 02:26:499 (3)-^Pretty much the same thing. You could place this note on 02:26:607 or you could replace the note from 02:26:281 with a slider and have that slider end on 02:26:607.Fixed
Call me back once you've looked through my mod post~
Leorda wrote:
Vass' Devil
00:29:542 (1) - New combo for preventing of bugwhy there's bug? between this circle and spinner big interval, how can it be? (if it's so importantly, i will fix it)yep
00:57:586 (5) - I suggest you to not silenced this one, because it's just only spinner to silenced there's a sound change, that's why i won't change it
01:24:216 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much stacked notes, should to unstack it don't see a big trouble to read it
All fixed ^^ Thanks!Leorda wrote:
Sorry if I already mod this one D: <3
Storyboard
* It is just me or the lyrics are offscreen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251466 Fixed
Skin
* spinner-background.png is over 1MB, consider to lower it Fixed
* comboburst-0 should rename it to "comboburst" since there is only one comboburst in this mapset Fixed
* fruit-ryuuta isn't needed in this mapset Fixed
* spinner-osu dimension should not over 423x128, unless if you have a good reason Well it's supposed to come out at the bottom so yeah, I guess that's my reason xD
Hard
00:43:673 (2) - Why finish on tail slider? I have no idea, Fixed
01:04:542 (1,2) - This slider should using a soft hitsound Fixed, including the spinner right?
Vass' Devil
00:29:542 (1) - New combo for preventing of bug Fixed
00:57:586 (5) - I suggest you to not silenced this one, because it's just only spinner to silenced
01:24:216 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much stacked notes, should to unstack it
Popped , due to missing new combo at post spinner, and SB & skin issues. Sorry ;_;
Everything fixed A tiny part in the beginning of Lunatic is remapped if that's okay. Vass' diff updated as well. Thank you for your time!!IceBeam wrote:
hello
fine in general
though,are you sure that artist's name should be capitalized?
could you provide some links,cause there're both senya and Senya maps ranked,I'd like to found out what's correct
"senya" is correct, I saw that the Koakuma Map had it capitalized so I was confused xD I changed it
[Easy]
01:38:890 - could you use soft sampleset/lower volume here,I don't like how it sounds Fixed
02:06:281 - ^ Fixed
nice easy,though a bit unusual spacing for my tastes,but that's ok..I'd also add another break,but can't suggest a good spot for it,so nvm Thanks, I tried also xDD
[Normal]
00:56:716 (3,4) - as in Easy,these notes don't sound nice,soft sampleset + whistles sound better to me Fixed
01:16:716 (5) - that's honestly doesn't sound good either,I think such rhytm would be much better: Fixed
01:30:629 (1) - touches hp bar a little,move it down for some grids Fixed
02:06:282 (4,5) - you got it,soft is better Changed to soft sampleset
02:34:977 - oho,you should have a note when kiai starts/ends actually,so please a note here
something like this again: Fixed
all in all,I don't really like the last part,because you mostly base your notes at vocals,I'd rather followed both music and vocals and won't missed notes at downbeats,but it's up to you Fixed, hope it works
[Hard]
00:34:542 (1,2,3) - why it's so close to previous objects? it doesn't make any difference between previous spacing :s so move farther please Fixed, kinda remapped
00:56:716 (2,3) - soooft Fixed
01:17:803 - I think the note is missing here Fixed
01:55:847 (4,5) - err..to close from each other,fix the spacing here Fixed
02:06:282 (4,5) - soft Fixed
02:34:977 - a note please Fixed
02:40:846 (5,6) - huh..why it's silenced? I can't hear notes here,you can't have such things Fixed
02:42:151 (1,2,3) - spacing is really bad here,fix it,show that there's a 1/1 space Fixed, is this okay? http://puu.sh/lSUH
[Vass' Devil]
00:56:716 (3,4) - Васик,ты не хочешь тоже сделать тут софт? слишком громко
02:06:281 (3,4) - мех
02:35:412 (1) - вообще не слышу ноты погромче софт секции и свисточков чуток?
[Lunatic]
00:51:934 (1,2,3) - spacing Fixed, i hope this spacing is okay between (3,4): http://puu.sh/lSWb
00:56:716 (3) - soft Fixed
02:06:282 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
02:18:890 (7,1) - that 1/4 jump..that's werid,really..I'd suggest to reduce it Fixed, is the extra note there okay too? http://puu.sh/lSYh