This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月3日 at 5:42:32

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Hitohira no
Source: NoriP
Tags: vocaloid season collection snow songs Butterfly short ver.
BPM: 95
Filesize: 5540kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.81 stars, 490 notes)
2. Normal (2.44 stars, 216 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hitohira no
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first Ranked map!!!!

Normal:finished
Hard:finished


01/14 started?03/19 Pending

1st timeline:
BPM: 95.000
Offset: 2548

2nd timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 24000

3rd timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 25091

4th timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset:81703

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor btw, not 1/3

Selee wrote:

1st timeline:
BPM: 95.000
Offset: 2548

2nd timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 24000

3rd timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 25091

4th timeline:
BPM: 110.000
Offset:81703

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor btw, not 1/3

thank you for your help~!!

hitohira no(Short ver) hitohira no(Short Ver)

So cool song

Ruiz02160 wrote:

hitohira no(Short ver) hitohira no(Short Ver)

So cool song

sorry I made mistake. fixed~

ついったーからきました(照

5th timeline
BPM 85
Offset 203884

6th timeline
BPM 80
Offset 206707

7th timeline
BPM 75
Offset 209707

8th timeline
BPM 55
Offset 212907

適当にノート置きながら感覚で取ったので間違ってる可能性大です

タイトル: Hitohira no (Short Ver.)
まにまにとかも Manima niになってるのでこっちの方がいいかも

プレイして気になったとこが一つあったのでついでに
[Hard]
01:36:975 (3)　このアンチジャンプは分かりづらいかも

[Hard]

00:24:021少し寂しい気がするので1.2のどちらかに一瞬KiaiTimeを入れてみるのはどうでしょうか。
01:10:091ここでNewComboに切り替えてるのであれば01:14:727など(他の場所)もNewComboに変えてみるのはどうでしょうか。
01:19:363 Spinnerが短いと思うので[01:20:181→01:20:727]まで伸ばしてみるのは如何でしょうか。
02:09:430DistanceSnapを用いて均等な距離感にすることをお勧めします。
02:14:066 曲調が盛り上がってるので[02:14:066~02:14:203]の間に一瞬[KiaiTime]を入れてみるのはどうでしょうか。(もう少し盛り上がりがあったほうがいいかも、という提案なので、その後の場所も応用させてみてください )
02:16:657 [02:16:248]と同様にスライダーの向きを同じ方向に向けたほうがいいと思います。
02:17:748 [同上です]
02:38:066 NewComboはどうでしょうか。
02:48:975 Volume70%→90％はどうでしょうか、それなりにHitsoundも盛り上がるので試してみてください。


Normal

00:57:272 座標を前置00:55:091と同様に[座標x128　y40→x128 y48]
01:10:909 NewComboはどうでしょうか。
01:13:091 ここでNewComboにしてみてそのあと01:16:363まで同色でどうでしょうか。
02:14:066 Hard同様少し何かしら盛り上がりを入れてみてはどうでしょうか。[Volume or Hitsound]
02:38:066 Hard同様NewComboはどうでしょうか
02:48:975 Hard同様にVolume70％→90％はどうでしょうか。


PS:とてもいい譜面だと思います!!ぜひRanked目指して頑張ってください!!

terametis wrote:

ついったーからきました(照

5th timeline
BPM 85
Offset 203884

6th timeline
BPM 80
Offset 206707

7th timeline
BPM 75
Offset 209707

8th timeline
BPM 55
Offset 212907

適当にノート置きながら感覚で取ったので間違ってる可能性大です

タイトル: Hitohira no (Short Ver.)
まにまにとかも Manima niになってるのでこっちの方がいいかも　　　　　　　Fixed!!

プレイして気になったとこが一つあったのでついでに
[Hard]
01:36:975 (3)　このアンチジャンプは分かりづらいかも

Fixed!!!(x1.8にDSを修正)

timing help thank you !!!!<3 ついったーやっててよかった（照


terametis timing help and Mod thank you!!!

Ruiz02160 wrote:

[Hard]

00:24:021少し寂しい気がするので1.2のどちらかに一瞬KiaiTimeを入れてみるのはどうでしょうか。 2に入れてみました。Fixed~
01:10:091ここでNewComboに切り替えてるのであれば01:14:727など(他の場所)もNewComboに変えてみるのはどうでしょうか。 Fixed~!
01:19:363 Spinnerが短いと思うので[01:20:181→01:20:727]まで伸ばしてみるのは如何でしょうか。 そこに伸ばすと後ろの音と合わないのですいません･･･　でもSpinnerの短さは少しだけ調整しました！Fixed~!
02:09:430DistanceSnapを用いて均等な距離感にすることをお勧めします。 Fixed~!
02:14:066 曲調が盛り上がってるので[02:14:066~02:14:203]の間に一瞬[KiaiTime]を入れてみるのはどうでしょうか。(もう少し盛り上がりがあったほうがいいかも、という提案なので、その後の場所も応用させてみてください ) 一応ハードとノーマルはKiaiTime統一しておきたいので、一応保留で　どちらにも合う場所が見つかったらKiaiTime入れてみます！
02:16:657 [02:16:248]と同様にスライダーの向きを同じ方向に向けたほうがいいと思います。 fixed
02:17:748 [同上です] fixed~
02:38:066 NewComboはどうでしょうか。 Fixed~
02:48:975 Volume70%→90％はどうでしょうか、それなりにHitsoundも盛り上がるので試してみてください。 90%は大きすぎる感じがしたので80%に修正しましたー！Fixed~


Normal

00:57:272 座標を前置00:55:091と同様に[座標x128　y40→x128 y48]　Fixed~
01:10:909 NewComboはどうでしょうか。 Fixed~!! (NC無かったら分かり辛かったですね・・)
01:13:091 ここでNewComboにしてみてそのあと01:16:363まで同色でどうでしょうか。 Fixed~
02:14:066 Hard同様少し何かしら盛り上がりを入れてみてはどうでしょうか。[Volume or Hitsound] すいません　ハードと同じで合うところが見つかるまでは一時保留で
02:38:066 Hard同様NewComboはどうでしょうか Fixed~!
02:48:975 Hard同様にVolume70％→90％はどうでしょうか。 ハード同様に80%に上げました！


PS:とてもいい譜面だと思います!!ぜひRanked目指して頑張ってください!!

ganbarimasu!!

星ありがとうございます！！

Ruiz02160 thank you Mod and star~!!

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:24:409, ends on 00:24:681 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:21:681, ends on 01:38:203 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:48:975, ends on 03:06:566
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:24:409, ends on 00:24:681 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:21:703, ends on 01:38:203
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:48:975, ends on 03:06:566

[Normal]

02:48:430 (1) - close to end of spinner
00:24:745 - The break here is 16480 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
01:39:157 - The break here is 15862 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
03:06:630 - The break here is 15934 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

[Hard]

More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map.
01:36:975 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:745 - The break here is 17050 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
01:39:157 - The break here is 16432 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
03:06:630 - The break here is 16504 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.


GL~

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:24:409, ends on 00:24:681 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:21:681, ends on 01:38:203 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:48:975, ends on 03:06:566
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:24:409, ends on 00:24:681 Not On Downbeat
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:21:703, ends on 01:38:203
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:48:975, ends on 03:06:566 Fixed~ (unification Kiai time)

[Normal]

02:48:430 (1) - close to end of spinner Fixed~(spinner delete)
00:24:745 - The break here is 16480 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~
01:39:157 - The break here is 15862 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~
03:06:630 - The break here is 15934 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~

[Hard]

More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map. Fixed!!!!
01:36:975 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed!
00:24:745 - The break here is 17050 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~
01:39:157 - The break here is 16432 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~
03:06:630 - The break here is 16504 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. Fixed~



GL~

popner thank you Mod~

Alright let's see what I can find. found this on #modreqs

General:
i guess it's clear.

Normal:
00:04:442 - add a circle to follow vocals?
00:05:074 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:06:969 - same as 00:04:442
00:09:495 - ^
00:17:705 (1) - since you have the whistle at the end, add a finish at the beginning.
00:33:818 - oh c'mon you can add notes over this break right? it'd look fun if you do so.
01:19:636 (6) - having something like this is unrankable because the arrows appear before the note is hit. so remove the break because i think it's unnecessary.
01:28:793 (4,5,6) - maybe replace this for a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider to make it easier or fun for players?
02:17:339 (5) - maybe add a repeat or a circle to follow vocals?
02:31:248 - extend the break till 02:31:521 because that's where the vocals start.
02:39:430 - same as 00:33:818
02:50:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - change up this pattern because going back and forth looks boring IMO
02:56:066 (4,5,6) - same as 01:28:793
02:57:703 (2) - add a finish at the beginning to go in sync with the vocals?
03:06:703 - add a spinner and end it till 03:09:157 to follow the long pause in vocals.
03:09:703 - if you follow the suggestion above, add a 1/1 slider here
03:10:793 - if you follow both suggestions then add a spinner and end it till 03:12:410

Hard:
00:02:548 (1,2,3,4) - again with going back and forth. change up this pattern. same reason as before. it's ok to use these patterns, but don't use them constantly.
00:38:181 - add notes here to make it fun?
00:50:181 (1,2,3,4) - make this an anti-jump instead. IMO this challenges players.
01:23:884 (3,4) - why claps at the end of (3) and the beginning of (4). this ruins the consistency you're following.
02:30:975 (1) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier, a 1/2 repeat slider to make it fun, or 3 circles. same reason as the 1/2 repeat
02:39:430 - same as normal.
03:06:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i find it odd that the notes are at the blue line. it makes it even harder for players to hit. try to do something that flows better. i'd give you a screenshot but i don't have time >.<

This is the best I can do. GL

よ~

Normal

02:07:248 (4) - Start slider at 02:07:521 instead, fits vocals
02:17:066 (4) - Delete
02:17:339 (5) - Add reverse
02:19:521 (1) - Spacing
02:51:157 (3,4) - Move somewhere else for variety in pattern
02:52:793 (1) - Make curvy slider http://puu.sh/lG6C and try to blanket (5) (and there's supposed to be a NC oops xD)
02:59:339 (1) - Delete one reverse

Hard

00:34:227 (4) - Don't stack, confusing at first
00:36:409 (4) - ^
00:54:000 (3) - Spacing

01:12:818 (3) - Pull out to make triangle http://puu.sh/lG9N
01:19:091 (1) - Start spinner earlier, right after (7)
01:22:112 - Add note
01:36:702 (2) - Feels a bit odd
01:48:975 (3) - NC

02:56:066 (5) - Spacing


Beautiful song and background <3 Good luck!
Edit:Byaku why you ninja me

LunarSakuya wrote:

よ~ よ~＼:D/

Normal

02:07:248 (4) - Start slider at 02:07:521 instead, fits vocals
02:17:066 (4) - Delete
02:17:339 (5) - Add reverse
02:19:521 (1) - Spacing
02:51:157 (3,4) - Move somewhere else for variety in pattern
02:52:793 (1) - Make curvy slider http://puu.sh/lG6C and try to blanket (5) (and there's supposed to be a NC oops xD)
02:59:339 (1) - Delete one reverse

Hard

00:34:227 (4) - Don't stack, confusing at first
00:36:409 (4) - ^
00:54:000 (3) - Spacing

01:12:818 (3) - Pull out to make triangle http://puu.sh/lG9N
01:19:091 (1) - Start spinner earlier, right after (7)
01:22:112 - Add note
01:36:702 (2) - Feels a bit odd
01:48:975 (3) - NC

02:56:066 (5) - Spacing


Beautiful song and background <3 Good luck!
Edit:Byaku why you ninja me

all fixed~
LunarSakuya thank you Mod~ :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. found this on #modreqs

General:
i guess it's clear.

Normal:
00:04:442 - add a circle to follow vocals?
00:05:074 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:06:969 - same as 00:04:442
00:09:495 - ^
00:17:705 (1) - since you have the whistle at the end, add a finish at the beginning.
00:33:818 - oh c'mon you can add notes over this break right? it'd look fun if you do so.
01:19:636 (6) - having something like this is unrankable because the arrows appear before the note is hit. so remove the break because i think it's unnecessary.
01:28:793 (4,5,6) - maybe replace this for a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider to make it easier or fun for players?
02:17:339 (5) - maybe add a repeat or a circle to follow vocals?
02:31:248 - extend the break till 02:31:521 because that's where the vocals start.
02:39:430 - same as 00:33:818
02:50:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - change up this pattern because going back and forth looks boring IMO
02:56:066 (4,5,6) - same as 01:28:793
02:57:703 (2) - add a finish at the beginning to go in sync with the vocals?
03:06:703 - add a spinner and end it till 03:09:157 to follow the long pause in vocals.
03:09:703 - if you follow the suggestion above, add a 1/1 slider here
03:10:793 - if you follow both suggestions then add a spinner and end it till 03:12:410

Hard:
00:02:548 (1,2,3,4) - again with going back and forth. change up this pattern. same reason as before. it's ok to use these patterns, but don't use them constantly.
00:38:181 - add notes here to make it fun?
00:50:181 (1,2,3,4) - make this an anti-jump instead. IMO this challenges players.
01:23:884 (3,4) - why claps at the end of (3) and the beginning of (4). this ruins the consistency you're following.
02:30:975 (1) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to make it easier, a 1/2 repeat slider to make it fun, or 3 circles. same reason as the 1/2 repeat
02:39:430 - same as normal.
03:06:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i find it odd that the notes are at the blue line. it makes it even harder for players to hit. try to do something that flows better. i'd give you a screenshot but i don't have time >.< hmm...


This is the best I can do. GL

almost fixed~
Byakugan249 thank you Mod~

忘れてました
(Short Ver)→(Short Ver.)

Ruiz02160 wrote:

忘れてました
(Short Ver)→(Short Ver.)

（´・∀・`）fixed~~

Hi ~ Lizsig ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions




That's all ~

Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Lizsig ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 01:21:703 - Remove this unused green line, and red line add KIAI time.

[Hard]

1. 00:12:021 (4) - Move 2 grid down(symmetry).

[Normal]

1. 00:25:091 - Change break time to here.
2. 01:17:454 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.
   
3. 02:04:248 (4) - Move 2 grid left(symmetry).
4. 02:05:339 (1) - Move 2 grid up(symmetry).

That's all ~

Good luck ~

all fixed~

Kawayi Rika thanks your Mod~

from #modreqs


red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

good luck

spboxer3 wrote:

from #modreqs

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 01:21:703 - you still not remove green line and add kiai to red section.

uwaaaaaaaaa... forget Nomal Diff.... I'm embarrassed Fixed~

[Normal]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:23:863 -
   01:37:657 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 03:02:612 (2,4) -

mapping

1. 02:07:521 (5) - NC. It's too over combo in this part. It's easiest diff for your map. so I think you need add NC for this way

[Hard]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:23:863 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:34:227 (4,1) -

mapping

1. 00:08:232 (3) - remove whistle at reveerse and add at slider end?
2. 01:24:975 (6) - clap?
3. 02:30:975 (1) - finish at slider end?
4. 03:05:066 (4,6) - clap?

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

good luck

all fixed~
spboxer3 thank you Mod~ <3

(；ﾞﾟ'ωﾟ')☆凄い増えてる!!
Ruiz02160 thank you star~!!

From our modding queue.

[General]
Slider Tickrate 1.

[Normal]
HP/Drain/AR all -1.
00:39:818 (1) - I think if you move this spinner to the next white tick, it'll sound better.
01:17:454 (2) - Change to repeat and remove 3? Blue tick ends aren't that great in easier diffs.
01:56:339 (1) - I think a note here is better, with a slider from the next white to white tick.


[Hard]
00:33:818 (3) - Repeat slide from here to where 5 is? Too many notes in a row isn't that fun. Same for the ones after.
03:06:430 (1) ~ 03:14:885 (8) - Everything gets extremely confusing from here. Avoid stacking notes on awkward beats like this please.
Try to avoid going in circular motion next time..

Good luck~

Mythol wrote:

From our modding queue.

[General]
Slider Tickrate 1. Fixed~

[Normal]
HP/Drain/AR all -1. Fixed~
00:39:818 (1) - I think if you move this spinner to the next white tick, it'll sound better. Fixed~
01:17:454 (2) - Change to repeat and remove 3? Blue tick ends aren't that great in easier diffs. Fixed!!
01:56:339 (1) - I think a note here is better, with a slider from the next white to white tick. Fixed~!


[Hard]
00:33:818 (3) - Repeat slide from here to where 5 is? Too many notes in a row isn't that fun. Same for the ones after. ok~ Fixed~
03:06:430 (1) ~ 03:14:885 (8) - Everything gets extremely confusing from here. Avoid stacking notes on awkward beats like this please.
Try to avoid going in circular motion next time.. umm... This stack is difficult for Hard diff.... ok!!!fixed!!!!

Good luck~

Mythol thank you Mod~!!