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ertyukjh010


正正式式來一次MOD了
新人圖的MOD是殘皓的,有心理準備才好看下去:3
General以外的都只是意見,如果您不喜歡的話,跳過它就可以 ~
希望可以寫下您的想法在您的回覆上,用這個方式:我的回覆方式

General

→ 您的.mp3的位元率是320kbps,換成192kbps;這是必須的,不然會unrank
換完之後,Offset是會有些微的變動,重新填寫Offset,還有綠線的位置也要跟著變動

→ 您的BG大小是795 x 640,換成800 x 600或者1024 x 768的大小吧。

→ "3,2,1,Go"的倒數應該是不需要的,取消勾選這個(雖然我不知道為甚麼默認是勾選,明明大部份情況都不會用到Otz...)

→ Offset要統一 :3 不要只是改INS,其他也要改

maroyaka

這個難度是INS,OD可以+1
00:21:070 (1) - 轉盤在00:21:170開始,並且在00:22:870結束;00:21:070放1個Circle;這是為了00:21:070也有打擊聲音,這是現代大部份人的做法
00:23:270 (1) - 節奏換成這樣子,位置不用理:3
↓ 以下藍色字這裡是跟著音樂的做法,00:46:470也有同樣的情況;要不要改看您自己了
00:26:470 (3,4,5,6) - 這個節奏如何??
00:28:270 (5) - 搬到00:28:370,這個可以重疊在(6)的上面
00:29:270 (2~10) - 跟著音樂的話,節奏是這樣
00:31:470 (5) - 搬到00:31:570,刪掉00:31:770的(7)
00:33:670 (1~3,4~11) - 首先(1~3)可以放在中間,突然在Slider旁邊出現很怪;(4~11)的排法並不常見,看看要不要換成普通的連點;這是我的放置版本: 00:36:670 (7) - 多餘的,刪掉
00:36:070 (5,6,1) - 這樣放比較方便讀譜,主要是拉開5跟6的距離
00:39:070 (4) - 這種形狀通常會被吐糟奇怪,Unrank的;還有就是在00:39:470結束,00:39:670放Circle看看
00:49:070 (4) - 試試別重疊: 00:54:670 (2) - 向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4)
00:54:870 (3) - 向右&向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4)
00:55:070 (4) - 向右&向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4) ← 這樣就是正方形了,善用右上角的距離和座標,正方形四邊相等=w=另外這4點也可以放在地圖正中間,我覺得這樣比較美觀
00:55:670 (8,9,10) - 同時選擇這3個note,按2次Ctrl+>,您會發現這跟(5,6,7)沒有對稱
00:56:470 (2) - 跟前面的(8,9,10)重疊太多,搬到其他地方看看
01:00:070 (3,4) - 距離有點遠,試試縮少之間的距離;當然最好是維持對稱:>
01:01:670 (5) - 與01:00:470(5)重疊
01:08:070 (5) - 看看這個會不會好一點,不過老實說還是不好看,建議換掉
01:28:070 (1) - 我覺得這首歌不適合有角的Slider,看看要不要畫個簡單的弧形
01:34:270 (8) - 刪掉感覺比較好
01:38:470 (1,2,3) - 重疊不好看,這樣如何:

vegetable

有跟INS同樣的問題,就是(1)都不在長白線上
AR和OD可以+1,Slider速度可以到1.2~1.4,只是這就要重排了
00:20:070 (1,2) - 這樣放如何?
00:34:470 (1) - 不好看,放棄這種形狀吧;半圓很難用來短的Slider上
嗯,基本上這個難度很好,我會這樣說是因為它大致跟著"距離"來做,所以讀譜上沒有問題

Shigure juice

00:21:070 (3) - 我看得出這花了很多心思去畫,但是這個形狀不適合用在Normal上,因為新手不會看懂這是甚麼東西= =這是Unrank的
00:43:270 (6) - 試試用(5)複製過來,按2次Ctrl+>,對稱會比較好看
01:04:870 (4) - 距離錯誤
01:08:070 (2) - ^
01:10:470 (3,4,5) - 這個節奏會較方便新人
01:12:870 (2) - 對於Normal來說,重疊並不是好主意
01:14:470 (5,6,7) - 同樣地變距也不是Normal應該存在的東西;試試用重疊
01:19:270 (2,3,4) - ^
01:20:870 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:870 (1~2,3~4,1~5) - 對於Normal可能有點太困難,要是保留也請用1.0x距離
01:32:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

fuwafuwa

有跟INS同樣的問題,就是(1)都不在長白線上
00:38:070 (4) - 不好看
00:44:070 (3) - ^
01:05:670 (1) - ^
01:09:670 (1) - ^
01:37:670 (2) - ^

vegetable跟fuwafuwa改好長白線位置和NC位置之後,我再過來看看吧
That all~ :)
要星星就叫我吧
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:



正正式式來一次MOD了
新人圖的MOD是殘皓的,有心理準備才好看下去:3 ww覺悟滿滿
General以外的都只是意見,如果您不喜歡的話,跳過它就可以 ~
希望可以寫下您的想法在您的回覆上,用這個方式:我的回覆方式

General

→ 您的.mp3的位元率是320kbps,換成192kbps;這是必須的,不然會unrank
換完之後,Offset是會有些微的變動,重新填寫Offset,還有綠線的位置也要跟著變動 換成192的了 可是offset怎麼動不太懂orz

→ 您的BG大小是795 x 640,換成800 x 600或者1024 x 768的大小吧。 done!

→ "3,2,1,Go"的倒數應該是不需要的,取消勾選這個(雖然我不知道為甚麼默認是勾選,明明大部份情況都不會用到Otz...)
[attachment=0:9e028]countdown.png[/attachment:9e028]
done!

→ Offset要統一 :3 不要只是改INS,其他也要改 offset 很苦手啊 我先按1670改了 再幫我看一下QAQ

maroyaka

這個難度是INS,OD可以+1 done!
00:21:070 (1) - 轉盤在00:21:170開始,並且在00:22:870結束;00:21:070放1個Circle;這是為了00:21:070也有打擊聲音,這是現代大部份人的做法 done!

00:23:270 (1) - 節奏換成這樣子,位置不用理:3
done!

↓ 以下藍色字這裡是跟著音樂的做法,00:46:470也有同樣的情況;要不要改看您自己了
00:26:470 (3,4,5,6) - 這個節奏如何??
聽您的了ww done!
00:28:270 (5) - 搬到00:28:370,這個可以重疊在(6)的上面 done!
00:29:270 (2~10) - 跟著音樂的話,節奏是這樣
done!
00:31:470 (5) - 搬到00:31:570,刪掉00:31:770的(7) done!
00:33:670 (1~3,4~11) - 首先(1~3)可以放在中間,突然在Slider旁邊出現很怪;(4~11)的排法並不常見,看看要不要換成普通的連點;這是我的放置版本: done! 可是不知道算不算工整誒QAQ
00:36:670 (7) - 多餘的,刪掉 done!
00:36:070 (5,6,1) - 這樣放比較方便讀譜,主要是拉開5跟6的距離
done!
00:39:070 (4) - 這種形狀通常會被吐糟奇怪,Unrank的;還有就是在00:39:470結束,00:39:670放Circle看看 done!

00:49:070 (4) - 試試別重疊: done!
00:54:670 (2) - 向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4) done!
00:54:870 (3) - 向右&向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4) done!
00:55:070 (4) - 向右&向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4) ← 這樣就是正方形了,善用右上角的距離和座標,正方形四邊相等=w=另外這4點也可以放在地圖正中間,我覺得這樣比較美觀 done!
00:55:670 (8,9,10) - 同時選擇這3個note,按2次Ctrl+>,您會發現這跟(5,6,7)沒有對稱 fixed!

00:56:470 (2) - 跟前面的(8,9,10)重疊太多,搬到其他地方看看 done!連後面的幾個就一起換掉了
01:00:070 (3,4) - 距離有點遠,試試縮少之間的距離;當然最好是維持對稱:> 我把左右都向中間移動了5格(Grid Lv4)
01:01:670 (5) - 與01:00:470(5)重疊 done!
01:08:070 (5) - 看看這個會不會好一點,不過老實說還是不好看,建議換掉
換啦!
01:28:070 (1) - 我覺得這首歌不適合有角的Slider,看看要不要畫個簡單的弧形
done!
01:34:270 (8) - 刪掉感覺比較好 done!
01:38:470 (1,2,3) - 重疊不好看,這樣如何:
嗯 我畫的三角形是不是有點大?orz

vegetable

有跟INS同樣的問題,就是(1)都不在長白線上 fixed 但是很多長白線都在折返點了QAQ
AR和OD可以+1,Slider速度可以到1.2~1.4,只是這就要重排了 其實我滑調速率幾乎通篇1.5X 還要重排么QAQ
00:20:070 (1,2) - 這樣放如何?
done!

00:34:470 (1) - 不好看,放棄這種形狀吧;半圓很難用來短的Slider上 fixed!

嗯,基本上這個難度很好,我會這樣說是因為它大致跟著"距離"來做,所以讀譜上沒有問題 這是我花時間最少的diff orz 雖然很爛 不過謝謝鼓勵ww


Shigure juice 這個難度不是我做的 所以我再去看看他的意見吧 下次再回覆您

00:21:070 (3) - 我看得出這花了很多心思去畫,但是這個形狀不適合用在Normal上,因為新手不會看懂這是甚麼東西= =這是Unrank的
00:43:270 (6) - 試試用(5)複製過來,按2次Ctrl+>,對稱會比較好看
01:04:870 (4) - 距離錯誤
01:08:070 (2) - ^
01:10:470 (3,4,5) - 這個節奏會較方便新人
01:12:870 (2) - 對於Normal來說,重疊並不是好主意
01:14:470 (5,6,7) - 同樣地變距也不是Normal應該存在的東西;試試用重疊
01:19:270 (2,3,4) - ^
01:20:870 (2,3,4) - ^
01:24:870 (1~2,3~4,1~5) - 對於Normal可能有點太困難,要是保留也請用1.0x距離
01:32:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

fuwafuwa

有跟INS同樣的問題,就是(1)都不在長白線上 done!

00:38:070 (4) - 不好看 fixed!

00:44:070 (3) - ^ fixed!

01:05:670 (1) - ^
changed!
01:09:670 (1) - ^ changed!
01:37:670 (2) - ^ changed!

vegetable跟fuwafuwa改好長白線位置和NC位置之後,我再過來看看吧 wwww hai~
That all~ :)
要星星就叫我吧
真是太感謝您教給我這麼多了:D!!!!!
ertyukjh010
改很很好,現在實在順了很多,GJ ^^

我1PC打出來自己也很驚訝 =口=


可是不知道算不算工整誒QAQ
您畫的比我畫的好很多了 :3

00:26:470 (3,4,5,6) - 這個節奏如何??
這個位置您改錯了,再看看

可是offset怎麼動不太懂orz
Offset我會設定為1700~1710左右

如果您覺得綠線要重新移動很麻煩的話,就全選然後按Ctrl來一次性移動

同樣記得要所有難度都改(GD的話,一般都是上傳者改,GD作者只會負責地圖版面上的東西)

Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:

改很很好,現在實在順了很多,GJ ^^

我1PC打出來自己也很驚訝 =口=


可是不知道算不算工整誒QAQ
您畫的比我畫的好很多了 :3

00:26:470 (3,4,5,6) - 這個節奏如何??
這個位置您改錯了,再看看 粗心了 orz 現在已經fixed ww

可是offset怎麼動不太懂orz
Offset我會設定為1700~1710左右

如果您覺得綠線要重新移動很麻煩的話,就全選然後按Ctrl來一次性移動

同樣記得要所有難度都改(GD的話,一般都是上傳者改,GD作者只會負責地圖版面上的東西) hai 移動完成www

[attachment=0:9c841]MoveLine.png[/attachment:9c841]
您的細心讓我有點不好意思啦
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Shigure juice 关于这个难度我先自己改一遍吧orz

00:21:070 (3) - 我看得出這花了很多心思去畫,但是這個形狀不適合用在Normal上,因為新手不會看懂這是甚麼東西= =這是Unrank的 换了个滑调
00:43:270 (6) - 試試用(5)複製過來,按2次Ctrl+>,對稱會比較好看 done!
01:04:870 (4) - 距離錯誤 fixed!
01:08:070 (2) - ^ fixed!
01:10:470 (3,4,5) - 這個節奏會較方便新人
done!
01:12:870 (2) - 對於Normal來說,重疊並不是好主意 fixed!
01:14:470 (5,6,7) - 同樣地變距也不是Normal應該存在的東西;試試用重疊 done!
01:19:270 (2,3,4) - ^ done!
01:20:870 (2,3,4) - ^ done!
01:24:870 (1~2,3~4,1~5) - 對於Normal可能有點太困難,要是保留也請用1.0x距離 done!
01:32:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ done!
Fionana

Fight~
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

MIZUKI LINA wrote:


Fight~
thank u for star~ i will do my best :D
BeatofIke
STAR~

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

BeatofIke wrote:

STAR~

Good Luck!
thank u for star!~
DarknessAngel
request from ★(o゚∀`从'∀゚o)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue ~ :)

我終於可以用中文mod了...orz


Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



General

  1. offset = 1688
  2. 每個難度開頭都改大寫字母吧,這是慣例
  3. 有SB的關係,請到song setup→Storyboarding裡取消Letterbox during breaks,這是為了不讓SB的效果打折扣

Desigh

  1. 我覺得這一定要吐嘈一下耶,歌詞一上一下間距太大,眼睛要花一點時間跟上,我覺得這樣不好

maroyaka

  1. 00:20:910 (3) - 用clap替代finish會更好,2個finish對我來說稍嫌吵雜了
  2. 01:00:510 (5) - 加個NC,[01:00:910 (1)]的刪掉,這是為了凸顯[01:00:310 (4)]的跳,而且這樣設定會更加美觀
  3. 01:17:110 (6,7) - ctrl+R之後會更好,試著跟著note移動看看就知道了
  4. 01:22:510 (3) - 往左移一格吧,沒對齊
  5. 01:38:910 (4) - 把這音效替換成finish比較有結束的感覺,況且3個whistle並不是很好聽
  6. 這難度不賴唷 ~ :3



vegetable

  1. 00:20:910 (2) - 替換成finish聽起來會比較好,因為是長 ~ ~ 的人聲
  2. 00:39:110 (5,6) - 放這裡就整個黏進slider裡了,不好看,放到吧 ~
  3. 01:11:310 (3) - 這slider的箭頭和尾部都放上whistle,強調音樂中那三個音
  4. 01:16:910 (1) - spinner的結束點在[01:18:110]比較合適,而且還能讓玩家有更充裕的時間接下一個note
  5. 01:23:310 (1) - 同上,結束在左邊的白線上
  6. 01:29:710 (1) - ^
  7. 01:34:310 (8) - 沒對好,向下一格
  8. 01:35:310 (2) - 我會希望你用0.0x的distance snap,然後取消grid snap來移動這note以達成完全重疊
  9. 01:38:910 (4) - 換成finish嗎 ? 理由同maroyaka難度中提到的
  10. 我最近mod到的Hard怎麼都那麼簡單(要不然就是太難)...中間難度的啥都沒有 囧

Shigure juice



  • 喂,這難度第一個字母居然是大寫啊
  1. 00:20:870 (2,3,4) - 你知道這距離已經比Hard大了唷 ! ? 結果之後的又縮小了,違和啊 ~ ~
  2. 00:43:270 (6) - 這尾部押藍線了,話說,你連Normal都來個加速啊...老實說最難的2個難度的加速我已經不是很認同了呢...(最難的兩個是因為時機不太對,簡單的2個是因為你有看過ranked的譜有哪個Easy和Normal在加速的呢 ? )
  3. 00:44:670 (1) - 音樂中的「叮」很明顯就是要你放個soft-whistle音效呢
  4. 00:52:870 - 喔喔,來了來了,比Hard的前面難的這段終於要開始啦 ! orz
  5. 00:58:470 (5) - 新手不善長於在短時間內判斷箭頭的數量,減少一個會比較好。把一個音效空出來不會覺得奇怪,放心 ~
  6. 01:12:070 (5) - 喂別開玩笑這對新手來說是大跳耶,保持一致的DS改掉它吧
  7. 01:21:670 (1) - 這距離怎麼又萎縮了 ? :O
  8. 01:33:670 (1) - 依照你[01:24:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)]的下法,你要把這NC刪除
  9. 01:38:470 (3) - 音效怎麼空下來了 ?
  10. 這難度的音效怎麼下的這麼隨便 ? :O 一下有一下沒有的

fuwafuwa

  1. 00:26:510 (1,2,1) - Easy麻煩統一間距...這三個之間的距離太小了
  2. 00:33:310 (5) - 間距
  3. 00:36:910 (1,2) - 這兩個slider完全不符合節奏喔:O,換成三個note吧,這是最簡單的改法
  4. 01:16:910 (1) - 不好意思我得說,這slider好醜lol,重拉一下比較好
    這難度有滿多這種slider的,如果你覺得改很麻煩我也不勉強你,但是好好考慮啊,那真的不好看的
  5. 我暗中慶幸你沒有在這難度放加速

這首歌超讚萌斃了
我之後看看你改得怎麼樣再決定要不要給星
祝好運,加油 ~

:)


ertyukjh010 wrote:

Offset我會設定為1700~1710左右
...=A=
Kirino Kousaka
Ni hao~ :3 Here's my mod~ sorry for taking this for a while... >< (a forum PM request)

  • [General]
  1. Add "shigure" & "sakuya" to the tags of all diffs.
  2. Shigure Juice diff has a different Offset "1670" compared from the other diffs "1710". Please fix this.
  3. Disable countdown. I find it irritating.
  4. The song's BG resolution is quite low. If you can do something about this, please do. If not, meh, it's not that important.

    [fuwafuwa]
  5. How come the Beat snap Divisor for this diff is "1/1" and it has something like this:

    Make it at least "1/2".
  6. 00:20:910 (1) - Remove "clap" on end.
  7. 00:23:310 (1) - Turn this into 2 sliders, something like this:
  8. 01:08:110 (3) - I find this slider not good. Make it more look prettier.

    [Shigure juice]
  9. 00:30:470 (2) - This slider touches the HP Bar (as shown below). Notes that touch the HP bar are unrankable. Select this note and flip it vertically.
  10. 00:43:270 (6) - What's this? Make this slider end at "00:43:670".

    [vegetable]
  11. 00:20:910 (2) - Remove "clap" on end.
  12. 00:21:310 up to 00:22:910 - Add a spinner here.

    [maroyaka]
  13. 00:24:910 (5) - Add NC
  14. 00:34:110 (4) - ^
  15. 01:22:110 (2) - ^
  16. 01:22:510 (3) - ^
That's all~
Good luck with your map~
As far as I can see, it still needs more work. But it's nice :D
Star~ :D
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from ★(o゚∀`从'∀゚o)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue ~ :)

我終於可以用中文mod了...orz 中文看起來輕鬆多了ww


Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



General

  1. offset = 1688 fixed!
  2. 每個難度開頭都改大寫字母吧,這是慣例 fixed!
  3. 有SB的關係,請到song setup→Storyboarding裡取消Letterbox during breaks,這是為了不讓SB的效果打折扣
fixed!


Desigh

  1. 我覺得這一定要吐嘈一下耶,歌詞一上一下間距太大,眼睛要花一點時間跟上,我覺得這樣不好
fixed!


maroyaka

  1. 00:20:910 (3) - 用clap替代finish會更好,2個finish對我來說稍嫌吵雜了 fixed!
  2. 01:00:510 (5) - 加個NC,[01:00:910 (1)]的刪掉,這是為了凸顯[01:00:310 (4)]的跳,而且這樣設定會更加美觀 fixed!
  3. 01:17:110 (6,7) - ctrl+R之後會更好,試著跟著note移動看看就知道了 確實呢,fixed!
  4. 01:22:510 (3) - 往左移一格吧,沒對齊 好細心- -fixed!
  5. 01:38:910 (4) - 把這音效替換成finish比較有結束的感覺,況且3個whistle並不是很好聽 fixed!
  6. 這難度不賴唷 ~ :3
謝謝您的鼓勵!


vegetable

  1. 00:20:910 (2) - 替換成finish聽起來會比較好,因為是長 ~ ~ 的人聲 fixed!
  2. 00:39:110 (5,6) - 放這裡就整個黏進slider裡了,不好看,放到吧 ~ fixed!
  3. 01:11:310 (3) - 這slider的箭頭和尾部都放上whistle,強調音樂中那三個音 fixed!
  4. 01:16:910 (1) - spinner的結束點在[01:18:110]比較合適,而且還能讓玩家有更充裕的時間接下一個note fixed!
  5. 01:23:310 (1) - 同上,結束在左邊的白線上 fixed!
  6. 01:29:710 (1) - ^ fixed!
  7. 01:34:310 (8) - 沒對好,向下一格 fixed!
  8. 01:35:310 (2) - 我會希望你用0.0x的distance snap,然後取消grid snap來移動這note以達成完全重疊 fixed!
  9. 01:38:910 (4) - 換成finish嗎 ? 理由同maroyaka難度中提到的 fixed!
  10. 我最近mod到的Hard怎麼都那麼簡單(要不然就是太難)...中間難度的啥都沒有 囧
咱也覺得簡單了 是不是要remap呢?


Shigure juice



  • 喂,這難度第一個字母居然是大寫啊 噗 這個是gd啦 結果他沒動我的綠線 也有加速了- -
  1. 00:20:870 (2,3,4) - 你知道這距離已經比Hard大了唷 ! ? 結果之後的又縮小了,違和啊 ~ ~ fixed!
  2. 00:43:270 (6) - 這尾部押藍線了,話說,你連Normal都來個加速啊...老實說最難的2個難度的加速我已經不是很認同了呢...(最難的兩個是因為時機不太對,簡單的2個是因為你有看過ranked的譜有哪個Easy和Normal在加速的呢 ? ) 後面的加速全部刪掉了 重新排了orz
  3. 00:44:670 (1) - 音樂中的「叮」很明顯就是要你放個soft-whistle音效呢 fixed!
  4. 00:52:870 - 喔喔,來了來了,比Hard的前面難的這段終於要開始啦 ! orz 重排了的說QAQ
  5. 00:58:470 (5) - 新手不善長於在短時間內判斷箭頭的數量,減少一個會比較好。把一個音效空出來不會覺得奇怪,放心 ~ fixed!
  6. 01:12:070 (5) - 喂別開玩笑這對新手來說是大跳耶,保持一致的DS改掉它吧 fixed!
  7. 01:21:670 (1) - 這距離怎麼又萎縮了 ? :O 重新排了
  8. 01:33:670 (1) - 依照你[01:24:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5)]的下法,你要把這NC刪除重新排了
  9. 01:38:470 (3) - 音效怎麼空下來了 ? fixed!
  10. 這難度的音效怎麼下的這麼隨便 ? :O 一下有一下沒有的
我等等在仔細看一遍音效把 這個gd我自己有點馬虎對待了


fuwafuwa

  1. 00:26:510 (1,2,1) - Easy麻煩統一間距...這三個之間的距離太小了 fixed!
  2. 00:33:310 (5) - 間距 好像是向左挪動一格??fixed!
  3. 00:36:910 (1,2) - 這兩個slider完全不符合節奏喔:O,換成三個note吧,這是最簡單的改法 fixed!
  4. 01:16:910 (1) - 不好意思我得說,這slider好醜lol,重拉一下比較好這難度有滿多這種slider的,如果你覺得改很麻煩我也不勉強你,但是好好考慮啊,那真的不好看的 您這麼一說我也覺得好醜 還是用單純的曲綫吧
  5. 我暗中慶幸你沒有在這難度放加速
這個難度是最後補上去的orz


這首歌超讚萌斃了
我之後看看你改得怎麼樣再決定要不要給星
祝好運,加油 ~謝謝您這麼說 咱會繼續加油的ww

:)


ertyukjh010 wrote:

Offset我會設定為1700~1710左右
囧rz

...=A=
十分感謝您這麼仔細的mod
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Ni hao~ :3 Here's my mod~ sorry for taking this for a while... >< (a forum PM request) wow so gald to see your modding >~<
  • [General]
  1. Add "shigure" & "sakuya" to the tags of all diffs. fixed!
  2. Shigure Juice diff has a different Offset "1670" compared from the other diffs "1710". Please fix this. all fixed to 1688!
  3. Disable countdown. I find it irritating. fixed!
  4. The song's BG resolution is quite low. If you can do something about this, please do. If not, meh, it's not that important. meybe someday i can found a better BG

    [fuwafuwa]
  5. How come the Beat snap Divisor for this diff is "1/1" and it has something like this: fixed!

    Make it at least "1/2".
  6. 00:20:910 (1) - Remove "clap" on end. fixed!
  7. 00:23:310 (1) - Turn this into 2 sliders, something like this: good idea,fixed!
  8. 01:08:110 (3) - I find this slider not good. Make it more look prettier. fixed!

    [Shigure juice]
  9. 00:30:470 (2) - This slider touches the HP Bar (as shown below). Notes that touch the HP bar are unrankable. Select this note and flip it vertically. fixed!
  10. 00:43:270 (6) - What's this? Make this slider end at "00:43:670". fixed!

    [vegetable]
  11. 00:20:910 (2) - Remove "clap" on end. fixed!
  12. 00:21:310 up to 00:22:910 - Add a spinner here. good idea!done!

    [maroyaka]
  13. 00:24:910 (5) - Add NC fixed!
  14. 00:34:110 (4) - ^ fixed!
  15. 01:22:110 (2) - ^ fixed!
  16. 01:22:510 (3) - ^
fixed!

That's all~
Good luck with your map~
As far as I can see, it still needs more work. But it's nice :D
Star~ :D
thank u for encouraging!
turely wonderful modding,thank u in advance!:D
boxuan
目测nomod offset+5~+10
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

boxuan wrote:

目测nomod offset+5~+10
谢谢提醒:3
我会再找朋友重新测一下offset的
Topic Starter
AngelEyE
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Kirino Kousaka
Lol forgot to star this map,
Sorry for the late star orz.
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Lol forgot to star this map,
Sorry for the late star orz.
lol u r so kind thank u very much!
BeatofIke
Normal modding request from my modding queue. :|

[General]
-I don't understand your difficulty names. For your first map, you should start simple imo.
-Your Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties have the same slider velocity. Interesting.
-If you want your sliders to be identical. Why not Copy/Paste? Make use of the Edit menu, it helps.
-To make your notes are readable, I recommend that you know about polarity (as a a start). Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

[Fuwafuwa]
-It's rare to see circle size 4 on easy difficulty. Maybe reduce circle size to 3? It's up to you though.

[Maroyaka]
-00:23:288 (4) - Insert break time after this slider.

[Shigure juice]
... :o

[Vegetable]
... :o

Map needs work overall, but it's getting closer to potential. I might have to recheck this map for an In-Depth modding.
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

BeatofIke wrote:

Normal modding request from my modding queue. :|

[General]
-I don't understand your difficulty names. For your first map, you should start simple imo. OK all changed to "E N H I"
-Your Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties have the same slider velocity. Interesting. @@but hard diff has many many 1.5X slider veocity multiplier then should i still change the slider veocity? T_T
-If you want your sliders to be identical. Why not Copy/Paste? Make use of the Edit menu, it helps. I will use it more:D
-To make your notes are readable, I recommend that you know about polarity (as a a start). Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws thank u:D i learned something from this vedio i will do more changes in these days

[Fuwafuwa]
-It's rare to see circle size 4 on easy difficulty. Maybe reduce circle size to 3? It's up to you though. OK fixed![Maroyaka]
-00:23:288 (4) - Insert break time after this slider. i think maybe you want me to insert break time in shigure's gd, if its like that,i have fixed!

[Shigure juice]
... :o T.T

[Vegetable]
... :o T.T

Map needs work overall, but it's getting closer to potential. I might have to recheck this map for an In-Depth modding. thank you for your helpful recormands and surpport:)
thank you for your nice modding and star in advance!:) i may change a lot in first 3 diffs these days
BeatofIke
Nah, you don't have to change the slider velocity.
...and don't worry, I will recheck your map eventually. That includes hard and insane difficulties.
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

BeatofIke wrote:

Nah, you don't have to change the slider velocity.
...and don't worry, I will recheck your map eventually. That includes hard and insane difficulties.
OK, i see,thank you!
ertyukjh010
2.29 Star ^^ 希望滿意

明天找您試玩(炸

記得別忘記在Tags裡填上我的ID QAQ




對囉,Kiai建議在 01:37:788 或者 01:38:888 結束,我也跟您就好了

總之一定要有一個結束Kiai的時間,不能無限延長XD




還有還有,我總是覺得您的BG失真有點嚴重(就是有點模糊,應該是您有將那張圖放大對吧??)

我找了原圖幫您切了張1024*768的(依足您的比例:3),如果您覺得需要就換這張和Full Submit一次吧
↓↓↓



Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:

2.29 Star ^^ 希望滿意

明天找您試玩(炸

記得別忘記在Tags裡填上我的ID QAQ




對囉,Kiai建議在 01:37:788 或者 01:38:888 結束,我也跟您就好了

總之一定要有一個結束Kiai的時間,不能無限延長XD




還有還有,我總是覺得您的BG失真有點嚴重(就是有點模糊,應該是您有將那張圖放大對吧??)

我找了原圖幫您切了張1024*768的(依足您的比例:3),如果您覺得需要就換這張和Full Submit一次吧
↓↓↓

[attachment=0:762d9]BG.jpg[/attachment:762d9]
先用手機回複了 嗯乃做的肯定好 bg我會換的啦 辛苦咯
Flask
這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/

-----
ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來


Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu

[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ )

[01:16:888]Spinner長一點

[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w )

Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點

[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo >

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish

[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO
(1)跟(3)對調位置

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 >


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!!

---------

以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< !
Insane有如跳圖
ertyukjh010

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
-----
ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
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以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
Flask

ertyukjh010 wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=

原來 :D !! 對不起小的不知道然後就 ... 亂Mod了 =w=
Flask

AngelEyE wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
-----
ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
---------

以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
不客氣 :D 希望趕快Ranked xD
DarknessAngel

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
DarknessAngel
我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~
哇 做的真好 我很喜歡 謝謝


ertyukjh010 wrote:

我也來更改了一點東西
嗯 我這就換好啦www
Flask

DarknessAngel wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
lol你才知道嗎 xd

我還是覺得滿跳的
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Easy

  1. 还好吧
Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle
Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好
D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@
  2. 感觉还好吧
Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336)
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queuehi thank u for modding
Easy

  1. 还好吧 :D
Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse done
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle done
Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好 fixed
D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@ 很大嘛QAQ
  2. 感觉还好吧:D


Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍 关于这里我把节奏改成2 2 1了
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍 同上
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing 先空出来吧 不知道会不会被吐槽orz
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336) fixed 可是为什么是这个点 要把girp snap 关了 才拉到的呢
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧 fixed
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg fixed
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点 嗯,我会再调整滑条的


that's all

Good luck~
谢谢您的 modding
SkyDevil
Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later

Hard
01:38:488 - Place somewhere else instead of stacking :3

D.N.Angel's Hard
00:29:688 - This part looks so bad D: Place circle 5 6 7 8 somewhere else D:
00:48:888 - ^

Insane
00:21:088 - Place this circle somewhere else :D
00:31:800 - ^
00:41:488 - Don't stack a slider under a triplet >w< Place slider somewhere else
01:23:488 - New combo here instead at the last circle?
01:25:288 - It looks pretty bad D:
01:34:488 - Put this slider farther away from the last circle :3

Anyway star for vegetable juice which i will never drink because it actually sounds kinda gross T.T
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later
OK take your time its not emergency:D
ertyukjh010

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3 It;s okay No change
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD ^
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko Well, Done
I suggest you write the time using this method
00:00:00 -
Not this ↓
00:00:00
Because it Inconvenient in the game.


Anyway, thank you for mod :)


Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
SkyDevil

ertyukjh010 wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3 It;s okay No change
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD ^
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko Well, Done
I suggest you write the time using this method
00:00:00 -
Not this ↓
00:00:00
Because it Inconvenient in the game.
[attachment=1:cc19c].png[/attachment:cc19c]

Ah okay, I will finish mod now anyway :3
Anyway, thank you for mod :)
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