aabc271 wrote:

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:29:014 ( 151 ) - Blue note ? No /.w.\

01:09:680 ( 378 ~ 381 ) - I prefer using 1/4 instead of 1/6, as a single 1/6 looks quite odd.
I think it's okay 'cause the background is 1/6 beat too.

01:35:014 ( 511 ) - Blue note ? No /.w.\

01:35:680 ( 513 ) - ^ No /.w.\

02:52:347 ( 980 ) - ^ No /.w.\

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

• 02:09:194 (3,4,5,6) - These note should have the same hitsound settings than (1) and (2). They both sound exactly the same. there are background beats for them
• 02:13:194 (5) - Add a new combo on this note and remove it on 02:14:194 (1). It would really match the music better. i think mine works too

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]

• Kiai would really fit well in this map. Say, 01:19:694 - 01:40:861 & 02:37:028 - 02:58:528? not using kiai sry...
• I think the volume should just go up generally. It's really hard to hear the hitsounds at some points. increaced volume in few parts parts but overal, i want to keep same volume

[AAAH!!!]

• 00:52:778 - It would match the music better and feel much more consistent if you placed a note here. i dont hear triplet sound here.....
• 01:11:861 - A note here would go with the music a tad better. And it would match what you're mapping at 01:13:195 (1). added
• 02:14:361 (1) - 0.50x slow down does not fit well with this section. It would cause people to overjump half the time. Consider changing it to 0.75x. yep changed in both diffs


[AAAAH!!!!]

• 01:11:861 - It would be better if a note sounded off here. It would match what you're mapping to for 01:13:195 (1). yyyyyyy
• 00:12:861 (7) - New combo on this note to indicate a slider speed change. dont understand this.......i dont see any slider speed change o.o

• General

1. I dislike those custom Difficulty Names. The player has to count every "!" and "A"'s to know which difficulty is he going to play at the song selection menu? (well, maybe the player can figure out a bit by himself checking the star rating, but knowing this, I still don't agree).
   
   
2. Why you don't want to add Kiai Time? The map would be better. When a map doesn't have Kiai, I feel it "empty" without that emphasis at the chorus. You should consider adding it.
   
   
3. Why there are bookmarks here..? You changed the mp3 and after that you forgot to delete them, I guess:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. I also dislike the way you use some samples. They aren't noticeable. When I hear the map samples with the music at the editor, I honestly don't hear them. It just sounds like you didn't used samples. I removed some of them, and then heared that part without samples and I didn't found any difference. They sound just exactly like the song itself. What's the point of adding samples that sound exactly like in the song? I mean, they're good, you placed them well and all. I just don't like the custom samples you decided to use (soft-hitclap2, soft-hitfinish2, soft-hitwhistle); But in other hand.. I like the way you used normal-hitwhistles and that custom soft-hitfinish.
   
   
5. I agree with Louise, a [Easy] difficulty would be nice. I find that Normal difficulty a bit challenging for being the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

• [xsrs's AAH!!]

1. 00:38:528 (1) - How about adding a new combo here? Fits nice with the music. Short combos are better for easiest diffs. If you do this, don't forget to add a new combo at 00:51:861 (3), 01:55:528 (2) and at 02:09:194 (3) too, for consistency. I also want to agree that I see this useful because 02:07:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6) <- that combo number is high for a Normal/Easiest diff of the mapset, and doing this, the combo ends up being 02:07:861 (1,2,1,2,3,4), which is shorter and better.
2. 01:19:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is quite high. I suggest you to add a new combo at 01:21:861 (4). You should do this for consistency too, since you added a new combo at 02:39:695 (1).
3. 02:13:194 (5) - Unnecesary high combo number.. I think you should add a new combo here and remove nc at 02:14:194 (1). It also fits way better with the music to me.
4. 02:55:861 (6) - The new combo should be here instead of being at 02:56:695 (1) in my opinion. Also, if you do this, you should consider adding a combo at 02:57:361 (1) to avoid high combo numbers. It follows nice the vocals in my opinion.
   
   Nothing else, just some few new combo suggestions. Good difficulty.

• [AAAH!!!]
  
  This is a Hard difficulty..? If it is, there are various jumps that you should delete or al least reduce them.. such as 01:08:860 (3,1).. because I think that jumps like that are way too much for a Hard, and more when you have 2 Insanes in your mapset. You should leave those jumps for the hardest difficulties.

1. 01:11:694 (6) - I'm really surprised that noone noticed this but.. here are 2 notes on the same tick.. delete that hitcircle, and leave the slider, I guess..
2. 02:14:361 (1) - This slider shape looks weird. How about improving it a bit? This isn't really necessary to change, but I think that this slider feels like off of place because your previous sliders were curved and with a good-looking.
3. 02:31:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is inconsistent with your previous combos.. (01:14:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2). You should add new combo at 02:32:528 (5) and at 02:33:194 (7) for consistency.
4. 02:35:194 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - And again, this is inconsistent with your previous combo (01:17:361 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2)). You have to add a new combo at 02:34:694 (6), remove nc at 02:35:194 (1) and also at 02:35:861 (1), and after that add a new combo at 02:36:528 (3), for consistency again.
5. 02:45:195 (6) - Aaaand again, for consistency, I think you should add a new combo here and remove new combo at 02:45:695 (1).
   
   I hope I didn't missed any combo inconsistencies. Just in case, you should check the combos of the difficulty.

• [('(oo)')]

1. 00:50:195 (8) - A new combo here would fit nice with the music.
2. 01:58:361 (6) - How about improving this shape.. making it more.. curved? Maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Nothing else, really. And again, I hope I didn't missed anything here.. I'm feeling sleepy >.< but I checked this difficulty several times just in case. Nice artistic patterns.

• [AAAAH!!!!]

1. 01:10:695 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.
2. 02:58:195 (5) - For consistency, you should add a new combo here since you did that at 01:40:861 (1).
   
   Nice difficulty. I hope once again lol that I didn't missed anything here. I have to recheck this anyways, so it is not a big deal if I did.

Kei wrote:

[AAAAH!!!!]

S h i a wrote:

Hi mod request via my queue~ Hi ></

[overall]
~已经有很多很好的MOD了而且也看不出有问题 所以以下都是建议～
添加1个easy diff? i wanted to keep 5diffs mapset, thats why no [Easy] ><
Normal虽然3star但似乎难了点;_;

[AAAH!!!]
02:55:861 (1) - new combo? ok~

[AAAAH!!!!]
Fine <3

really good mapset ~ star
and no KDS Orz

Kei wrote:

Hi once again! Uhmmm I took a look at your mapset and I didn't saw anything that should be changed or fixed. I think that it is ready to pass to the next layer of the queue. Good luck ranking this map :3

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ Hi~ ></

AAAAH!!!!
02:52:694 (4) - weird anti jump, make the spacing even in this combo no one had problems during test plays, so i guess its fine
add spinner to vary scores? i dont know where to add it (;´д`)

AAAH!!!
00:28:204 (2) - make it a 1/2 slider, sounds and play better both fine for me
add spinner to vary scores? (;´д`)

Climbb & Kana's Taiko
why no kai on taiko diff? forgot to add it after reuploading (/ω＼)


xsrs's AAH!!
how about if you name this AAH!! and put the guest mapper in a SB? i dont think its necessary, also i cannot make SB (;´д`)
easiest diff should have less than 3 difficulty star there are a lot of maps with 3+ stars on easiest diff, this diff only +0.1......
decrease AR and lighten the diff reducing the 1/2 notes that are kinda hard for the easier diff

Thats all~

Lissette wrote:

('(oo)')
00:12:861 (7) - this speed change is not predictable, and the slider shape doesn't help at all I have got at least 5 players test it, seems quite playable. in fact the change of speed hardly affect anything if you follow the flow
01:02:195 (1) - same (not the shape part)
01:08:028 (4) - start the triplets here?, and they should go like this http://puu.sh/jc5l (ignore the placement) the two triplets you have there 01:08:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are off not mean to follow the music here, I'd rather have some new rhythm
01:19:694 (1) - an 1/1 slider fits better here, try it changed this
01:40:861 (1) - I like this one, maybe you should do the same with the other one, new combo on it, and don't put it right after 1/4 notes this will make it a lot easier to read/follow
02:19:361 (6) - add new combo due to speed change added
02:25:361 (4) - triplets, where are you?? same suggestion as 01:08:028 (4) -
02:26:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this combo, i find it a bit random don't understand what "random" means...
add spinner to vary scores?

tort wrote:

good map!:D

ikari_kyon wrote:

Kei wrote:

[AAAAH!!!!]

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Leorda wrote:

OMG IT'S CRYU!!!! Someone will burn in hell ヽ(●-`Д´-)ノ Hi :3

[AAAH!!!]
01:11:694 (5) - Why finish at head slider? sounds funny xD
02:23:028 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with head slider while gameplay (look this pattern during test mode) changed~


[AAAAH!!!!]
01:11:694 (7) - New combo? added NC but little bit earlier to show SV change


[('(oo)')]
* That's a naughty pig....

01:47:194 (2,3) - If you do this, some players will confusing about which is beginning slider and end slider. I suggest you to spread this pattern....


Once you done, Forum PM me for recheck