forum

Horie Yui & Yuzuki Ryoka - Emerald Radiation

posted
Total Posts
19
Topic Starter
DeadAlready
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月27日 at 上午 08:22:03

Artist: Horie Yui & Yuzuki Ryoka
Title: Emerald Radiation
Source: Kaitou Tenshi Twin Angel 3
Tags: Pachislo ave;new feat. Tesla & Nine
BPM: 138
Filesize: 8124kb
Play Time: 04:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.38 stars, 409 notes)
  2. Normal (2.97 stars, 221 notes)
  3. Violet (4.92 stars, 606 notes)
Download: Horie Yui & Yuzuki Ryoka - Emerald Radiation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My 41st map.
This song is from the game of Japanese Pachislo "快盗天使ツインエンジェル3".

ave;new feat. テスラ&ナイン(堀江由衣&柚木涼香) - Emerald Radiation

Hmm ok same with my 25th map,
the artist is long, so I put the character name to tag and use CV name for artist.
And also same with 25th map, very thanks for ponsaku gives me this nice song to map xD
But A little differnt is this time I changed [Normal]'s circle size to the biggest size. :3
Then also same with before maps, hope everyone will enjoy it too. \:D/

[Normal] Done.
[Hard] Done.
[Violet] Done. / Use this twins' last name to the name of this highest diff. :3

12/02/05 Change a combo color of all diffs and Change a pattern of [Hard]. Thanks for BELIAL and dragonxcz's suggestions :3
12/02/22 Change some patterns of [Hard] and [Violet], thanks for nekonomitsu and aesopl19193's advice. xD
12/03/04 Change some patterns of all diffs, thanks for Byakugan249's mod~:3
12/03/11 Change hp drain of [Hard].
ponsaku
作ってくれてありがとう!
thank you very much! :)
namazun
くいんちてむくいんちてむうわ~~~~~~~○○
Nymph
哈……终于可以送星了
Topic Starter
DeadAlready
> ponsaku

いえいえ~ :)
Thanks for your song and star too >w</


> namazun

:OO なまずちゃんだなまずちゃんだ~
☆ありがとー :3


> Nymph

送星:O 我本來想順便去modding queue求mod啊xD(誤)
太感謝了>w</
Wafu
Here is my mod. (Request in modding queue)

It's hard to mod your maps, because they are perfect :o

[-Hard-]

I'd use approach rate 7.
04:06:764 (3) - NC
04:06:764 (3,4,5) - Jumps?

[-Normal-]

00:16:112 (3) - NC

It's very nice map. Good luck and enjoy new ranked map ^.^
Topic Starter
DeadAlready
> dragonxcz

dragonxcz wrote:

Here is my mod. (Request in modding queue)

It's hard to mod your maps, because they are perfect :o >w< Thanks for compliment~

[-Hard-]

I'd use approach rate 7. :O But ar6 in this diff is better imo... so I don't change this, sorry ><
04:06:764 (3) - NC ok, fixed~
04:06:764 (3,4,5) - Jumps? hmmm sorry I don't want to use half beat jump in this diff, so don't change this. Orz

[-Normal-]

00:16:112 (3) - NC D: I know this appear on aimod, but I think it's better for no newcombo and I think it's ok to read too... so also don't changed, sorry D:

It's very nice map. Good luck and enjoy new ranked map ^.^
>w</ Thank you for mod too~ kds for you :3
Wafu
Uhm... you didn't must give me kds, but thanks ;)
Mitsuneko
My mod~ Sorry for taking so long.

Normal
00:14:373-remove new combo
01:00:025-remove new combo
01:06:981-^
01:12:633-New combo
01:13:938-Remove NC
01:16:546-NC
01:16:981-Remove NC
03:04:807-Remove NC
03:06:112- New combo
03:09:916-Remove new combo
03:13:503-^
03:16:981-^

Hard
00:59:590-Remove NC
01:02:851-^
01:03:503-Add NC
01:15:677-Remove NC?
01:16:764-Add New combo?
01:19:155- Remove NC?
01:20:242- Add new combo?
01:23:720- Remove NC
01:24:373- Add NC
01:41:112- Remove NC
02:29:807-^
02:30:459-Add NC
02:47:199- Remove new combo
03:04:590-^
03:15:025-^
03:15:677- NC
04:06:764-Remove NC
03:43:612- Your Kiai time shouldn't stop there if it's the last one.It should start here-> 03:43:503 and possibly end here->04:14:386.

Insane
00:12:633- Remove NC
00:16:112-^
00:18:177-NC
00:18:728- Remove NC
00:20:459-^
00:21:546- NC
00:23:089- Remove NC
00:38:068- ^
00:39:155- NC
01:02:851- Remove NC
01:03:286- NC
01:06:546- Remove NC
01:10:894- ^
01:13:938-^
01:17:851-^
01:23:720^
01:23:938-NC
01:51:546- Remove NC
01:52:090-NC
01:55:025- Remove new combo
01:55:242- NC
01:58:503- Remove new combo
02:16:981-^
02:19:590-^
02:24:155-^
02:29:807-^
02:30:459- NC
02:31:981- Remove NC
02:37:633-^
02:41:112-^
02:41:112-^
02:47:851-NC
02:51:546- Remove new combo
02:52:416-^
02:54:155-NC
02:54:807- Remove NC
03:02:851-^
03:04:590-^
03:11:329-^
03:11:764- NC
03:14:807- Remove NC
03:15:568-NC
03:30:894-remove NC
03:34:373-^
03:37:851-^
03:43:612- Same with insane, start here-> 03:43:503,end here->04:14:386.
03:45:025-Remove NC
03:47:633-^
03:49:373-^
03:50:351-NC
03:56:764-remove NC
03:57:416-NC
03:58:068-remove NC
04:01:546-^
04:03:068-^
04:10:677-^
04:13:938-^
04:14:699-NC
04:27:416- Remove new combo
04:28:503-NC

Phew~ never written a mod that large. Hope it helps! (And I would star it but I have no kudosu :( )
aesopl19193
From BAKAKanaRin's Queue (Don't ask me why lol)

I will mod something with my style, so,
feel free to ignore my mod if you don't like my comments.:D

[General]
SPOILER
I think combo number should not larger than 10, but you are following vocal so, i don't know..

[Violet]
SPOILER
00:26:329 (4) - change whitle to finish
00:31:764 (1) - start the newcombo at (9)00:31:329 ?
^ also in other similar pattern such as 00:45:677 (1) - .....and so on,
00:31:764 (1) - add finish at start?
00:35:242 (1) - ^
00:35:894 (2) - ^
00:36:329 (3) - add finish at the end?
00:45:677, 00:46:546, 00:47:416, 00:48:286, - add finish ?
00:54:373 (2,5) - finish?
01:29:155, 01:29:590, 01:29:807 - add finish?
02:35:242 (1,4) - ^
02:37:633 (1) - 02:41:112 (1) - no newcombo?
02:41:981 (5,7) - add finish ?
02:57:851, 02:58:720, 02:59:590 - add finish?
03:01:329, (3), (4) , (1) - ^?
03:04:590 (1) - finish at the end?
04:01:981 (2) - finish at start
04:12:633 (2) - finish?
04:29:373 (4) - change into 2 notes to make "click" follow vocal?

[Hard]
SPOILER
I think Distance Snap x1.0 is better for good looking.

[Normal]
SPOILER
Use slidertick to add clap?
00:45:677 - like this ?

00:54:373, 00:55:025 - add finish?
01:42:416 (3) - add finish at the end?
01:43:068 (4) - move to 01:43:286
01:56:329 (2) - add finish at the end?
02:30:025, 02:30:677, 02:31:329 - add finish?
02:33:503 (1) - finish?
02:41:981 (4,6) - add finish and at start?
02:46:981 (4) - finish at the end?
02:48:068, 02:48:938, 02:49:590 - finish?
02:48:938 (4) - like this?

Very nice and enjoyable map!
Good luck!

Topic Starter
DeadAlready
> dragonxcz

quintitem wrote:

04:06:764 (3) - NC ok, fixed~
I fixed this from your mod, so you deserve the kds :3


> nekonomitsu

nekonomitsu wrote:

My mod~ Sorry for taking so long.
.
.
.
Phew~ never written a mod that large. Hope it helps! (And I would star it but I have no kudosu :( )
Can write large mod post is nice because I really can't do that lol
So I only can remember I read this post concentrately and do some fixed xD
Thanks for mod and kds for you~


> aesopl19193

aesopl19193 wrote:

feel free to ignore my mod if you don't like my comments.:D
I see xD so I only changed this -> 04:29:373 (4) - change into 2 notes to make "click" follow vocal? on [Hard] and [Violet]. :3

Very nice and enjoyable map!
Good luck!
Thank you too!
Sure
\:D/
spboxer3
送星來著的~~
Topic Starter
DeadAlready
> ykcarrot, spboxer3

\:D/ thanks for star~
minyeob
soba ni ite kikasete ano hi no 約束 ;)
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
CLEAR!

Normal:
00:01:329 - is there a reason why a green line is here?
00:10:894 (1,2) - i'm concerned about the spacing for this. are you sure that beginners/amateurs can reach this?
00:42:633 (1,2) - how about moving it here so that it forms a blanket around the previous slider?
00:48:286 (3) - make this a curved slider? same reason as above.
01:40:025 (3,4) - maybe like this as it not only forms a blanket around (2), but it'll flow a lot nicer to the next note.
03:16:112 (2,1) - same as 00:10:894
03:18:720 (1) - since the vocals are still going, try this to follow vocals and start the spinner at 03:20:459 and end it till 03:22:199 so that it follows the long pause.

Hard:
02:10:894 - same as 00:01:329 on normal.
02:31:981 (1) - remove the spinner. i dont think it fits that good to the vocals. try this instead as it follows accurately and this is the combo. if loops arent your style then try to make a slider that's the same length as the loop slider.
02:35:677 (3,4) - if you follow the suggestion above then move (3,4) here as it forms a zig zag pattern and (4) forms a blanket(sort of) around (3)
03:18:286 (1) - same as normal but i'm sure you get the idea.
04:08:286 (3) - I'm gonna regret this in the future *nazi* align this to (1) so that it forms a proper triangle pattern
04:24:373 (1) - same as 03:18:286 but just remove the spinner and add notes.

Violet:
00:20:459 (1,2) - hmm like this as it gives a nice flow to the next note.
00:22:416 (4) - make this look the same as (2) if you follow the suggestion above.
00:45:242 (11) - make this a NC because this is following the drums. 1-10 is following vocals.
02:10:894 - same as hard.
02:50:242 (7) - same as 00:45:242

This is the best i can do. this mapset is fun to play, so Star and GL :D
Topic Starter
DeadAlready
> minyeob, Suzully

\:D/ Thanks for your star~


> Byakugan249

Byakugan249 wrote:

Normal:
00:01:329 - is there a reason why a green line is here? 0.75x slider D:
00:10:894 (1,2) - i'm concerned about the spacing for this. are you sure that beginners/amateurs can reach this?
Sure. I already find some beginner to try, 1+ second is long enough for beginner to reach this :3
00:42:633 (1,2) - how about moving it here so that it forms a blanket around the previous slider?
Hmmm I think it's not a big deal for me...
00:48:286 (3) - make this a curved slider? same reason as above. oh this time I found it's better way xD so ok fixed~
01:40:025 (3,4) - maybe like this as it not only forms a blanket around (2), but it'll flow a lot nicer to the next note.
looks good, fixed :3
03:16:112 (2,1) - same as 00:10:894 same as 00:10:894.
03:18:720 (1) - since the vocals are still going, try this to follow vocals and start the spinner at 03:20:459 and end it till 03:22:199 so that it follows the long pause.
Hmm how to say this...I like long spinner in the end of easy diff xD(?)

Hard:
02:10:894 - same as 00:01:329 on normal. to modify the volume of spinner spin.
02:31:981 (1) - remove the spinner. i dont think it fits that good to the vocals. try this instead as it follows accurately and this is the combo. if loops arent your style then try to make a slider that's the same length as the loop slider.
I think my idea is better...and if use that then how can I put claps? xD
02:35:677 (3,4) - if you follow the suggestion above then move (3,4) here as it forms a zig zag pattern and (4) forms a blanket(sort of) around (3)
Although I don't follow the suggestion, but this pattern looks better than mine :3 so changed this~
03:18:286 (1) - same as normal but i'm sure you get the idea. So same as normal too :3
04:08:286 (3) - I'm gonna regret this in the future *nazi* align this to (1) so that it forms a proper triangle pattern
You're right ww if I notice this in future then I really will get regrets lol. fixed~
04:24:373 (1) - same as 03:18:286 but just remove the spinner and add notes. Same as 03:18:286 too xD

Violet:
00:20:459 (1,2) - hmm like this as it gives a nice flow to the next note.
00:22:416 (4) - make this look the same as (2) if you follow the suggestion above.
Hmmm I think mine is better xD
00:45:242 (11) - make this a NC because this is following the drums. 1-10 is following vocals.
I think although it's following different stuff then also ok to use same combo for me...
02:10:894 - same as hard. Same as hard lol
02:50:242 (7) - same as 00:45:242 Same as...(ry

This is the best i can do. this mapset is fun to play, so Star and GL :D
Thanks for your mod, praise and star! kds for you too >w</
minyeob
I'm afraid that I can't make you understand what I mean by post :/
But I post first, since time is not enough for us Orz
If there's hard thing to understand, finding me is ok too~

[Normal]
01:03:068 (1,2,3,1,2) - This is fine, but thinking about deleting 01:06:981 (1,2) and trying other pattern is worth to do it too :D
03:15:242 (1,2,1,2) - How about adding a note on "3:16:546" and "3:18:286"...?

[Hard]
01:45:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - quin I think you didn't map this part lol I think you can make those placement better :p
Like, 01:31:329 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) or 02:37:416 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
Keeping yours is ok, too. But I think changing is better xD

01:23:720 (1,2,3,4,1) // 02:29:807 (1,2,3,4,1)
Try deleting 02:31:764 (1) and add circle/sliders instead~
and if you deleted spinner and fixed this, try this on normal too(But I think deleting spinner on normal is un-necessary)

[All diffs]
ーだけは (1:50:242, 4:02:416)
ーだけが (2:56:329)
You finished these lyrics with silders except [Hard, ーだけが]
(Normal also ended by slider)

I suggest ending [Hard, ーだけが] with silder by changing 02:56:329 (7,8,9) to increase 統一性(?) for a map lol
or thinking about adding this kind of pattern to other part is not bad too I think ><
For example, like this on [Violet] 01:49:373 (6,7,8,9,10)
(Changing 9 to circle)

All of those are suggestions, you don't have to fix it <_<
I just made a list for what I feel a bit strange(?)

:/
Mayoi Neko
( ^_ ^)/
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply