Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 居然是中文歌, 背景图一点关系都没有 朋友"chu~"去走走 找不到合适的图片。
2. 没tag? 加点C-POP什么的也行啊 ……等等那是什么？会有人按着这个tag找图么._.

Walking

1. 1.5的spacing是要闹哪样啊
2. 00:17:838 (1) - 去finish, 00:18:338 (2) - 加
3. 01:38:338 (2) - 考虑加finish
4. 01:46:338 (5) - ^
5. 02:26:338 (1) - ^
6. 02:42:338 (1) - ^

Jogging

1. 00:18:338 (1) - finish
2. 00:58:338 (1) - ^
3. 01:14:338 (1) - ^
4. 01:38:338 (1) - ^
5. 01:46:338 (3) - ^
6. 02:18:338 (1) - ^
7. 02:26:338 (1) - ^
8. 02:42:338 (1) - ^
9. 02:50:338 - 02:55:838 - 这段加24whistle吧
10. 02:56:338 (x) - 从这里开始就用normal hitsound感觉会更好, 递增, 你懂的, 02:58:338 (1) 换回soft
11. 03:19:338 (3,4) - 建议跟歌词用3/4拍的, note或者reverse slider都行

Hiking

1. 00:18:338 (3) - Finish
2. 00:48:838 (6) - 这里clap听着略奇怪, 我建议在00:48:338 (2,5,7)加whistle来对应背景乐
3. 00:58:338 (5) - Finish
4. 01:06:338 (1) - ^
5. 01:13:338 (7) - 这个clap听着不顺, 建议去掉
6. 01:14:338 (7) - finish
7. 01:30:338 (1) - 加finish, 去不去whistle随你
8. 01:38:338 (4) - ^
9. 01:44:338 (1,2,3) - 感觉音量略大, 80%左右我觉得就合适了
10. 02:26:338 (5) - Finish
11. 02:42:338 (1) - ^
12. 02:47:338 (1,2,3,4) - 不加clap只用finish感觉更好, 另外我觉得3,4 stack更好
13. 02:50:338 - 02:55:838 - 24whistle

整体倒没什么, 排列略单调的感觉._.因为是老map么
嘛, 有回复再找我recheck吧

说实话我不会下音效。被sumi sp3他们喷了几次以后我不敢随便下了……听你的吧。顺便也学学怎么下finish

all fixed. Upload.

Let's do it

go♂go 菲姐

耶耶耶

中文歌耶，不错的说

Heya sherrie~

[General]
This song would be awesome with some bongo-like hit sounds.
Tick rate 2 fits this song better.

[Walking]
In general, the spacing felt really high. With a 1.5x general spacing, that would probably do it.
00:30:338 (1) - Two were okay, but 6 in a row? Can you try to think of something different to do here?
00:35:338 (2,1,2) - The general flow of this pattern doesn't feel natural. Try to arc around and feel where the cursor should be moving for the most intuitive feel. Even the shape of 00:36:338 (1,2,3,4) - is a little crushed on one end, if what you were trying to make was a square. Also, remove new combo on 00:36:338 (1) -
00:50:338 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. End the spinner at 00:49:088 - or so
00:56:338 (4,1) - Try moving in a different direction so it isn't as plainly obvious that the spacing is a lot higher than the SV.
01:06:338 (1) - Too soon after a shortish spinner... Might be better to map through it.
01:08:338 (2,1,2) - The spacing transition here really makes the 1.5x spacing decision feel a little bit over the top. Doing that fairly slow slider into fairly large jump-feeling movements just doesn't really jive with the easy/normal mindset here.
01:13:838 (3,1) - And please, no big jumps like this in the easiest of the set.
01:32:338 (2,1) - This overlap is pretty glaring. Can you try to reposition it?
01:38:338 (2) - Kind of the same thing from earlier: two times in a row was okay. Three in a row gets kind of dull to play. Try a different pattern, please.
01:46:338 (5) - New combo
01:48:338 (1) - Remove nc
01:50:338 (5) - nc
Mm, in general, try to stick with one pattern with your new combo usage. You struck a good pattern at the beginning of the map with a new combo at each second tall white tick. It's when you deviate from that that gives a sense of unbalance going through the song. See if you can line these up (applies to all difficulties)
02:02:338 (1) - Too soon after spinner
02:18:338 (1) - ^
02:42:338 (1) - ^
02:50:338 (1) - ^

[Jogging]
00:31:338 (4) - These wavy sliders kind of feel unnecessary...
01:17:338 (4) - Mm, I'd delete this and start again at 01:17:588 -
02:47:338 (1) - Finish doesn't feel appropriate for this point in the song

[Hiking]
Honestly, all of the 1/4 rhythms don't fit this song at all. It doesn't do a laid-back beat justice imo. You can compensate the less rhythmic difficulty with larger spacing and faster general velocity and this could turn out really nice.
02:15:088 (8,1) - Really don't like this spacing
03:06:338 (1,3,4,5) - Aaah too much finish spam ><
Mm, in general the combination of really low spacing/velocity, overmapping, and overlaps really made playing certain parts of this kind of harder than it needed to be. A song like this doesn't really need something difficult, and definitely not something hard to read after hitbursts cover everything. See if you can give the beats some breathing space. This will also allow you to use stronger patterns if you wish, as you'll be able to cover more area to create a fun and relaxing map.

If you have questions, don't hesitate to ask~

Garven wrote:

Heya sherrie~

[General]
This song would be awesome with some bongo-like hit sounds.
Tick rate 2 fits this song better.

[Walking]
In general, the spacing felt really high. With a 1.5x general spacing, that would probably do it.
00:30:338 (1) - Two were okay, but 6 in a row? Can you try to think of something different to do here?
00:35:338 (2,1,2) - The general flow of this pattern doesn't feel natural. Try to arc around and feel where the cursor should be moving for the most intuitive feel. Even the shape of 00:36:338 (1,2,3,4) - is a little crushed on one end, if what you were trying to make was a square. Also, remove new combo on 00:36:338 (1) -
00:50:338 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. End the spinner at 00:49:088 - or so
00:56:338 (4,1) - Try moving in a different direction so it isn't as plainly obvious that the spacing is a lot higher than the SV.
01:06:338 (1) - Too soon after a shortish spinner... Might be better to map through it.
01:08:338 (2,1,2) - The spacing transition here really makes the 1.5x spacing decision feel a little bit over the top. Doing that fairly slow slider into fairly large jump-feeling movements just doesn't really jive with the easy/normal mindset here.
01:13:838 (3,1) - And please, no big jumps like this in the easiest of the set.
01:32:338 (2,1) - This overlap is pretty glaring. Can you try to reposition it?
01:38:338 (2) - Kind of the same thing from earlier: two times in a row was okay. Three in a row gets kind of dull to play. Try a different pattern, please.
01:46:338 (5) - New combo
01:48:338 (1) - Remove nc
01:50:338 (5) - nc
Mm, in general, try to stick with one pattern with your new combo usage. You struck a good pattern at the beginning of the map with a new combo at each second tall white tick. It's when you deviate from that that gives a sense of unbalance going through the song. See if you can line these up (applies to all difficulties)
02:02:338 (1) - Too soon after spinner
02:18:338 (1) - ^
02:42:338 (1) - ^
02:50:338 (1) - ^

[Jogging]
00:31:338 (4) - These wavy sliders kind of feel unnecessary...
01:17:338 (4) - Mm, I'd delete this and start again at 01:17:588 -
02:47:338 (1) - Finish doesn't feel appropriate for this point in the song

[Hiking]
Honestly, all of the 1/4 rhythms don't fit this song at all. It doesn't do a laid-back beat justice imo. You can compensate the less rhythmic difficulty with larger spacing and faster general velocity and this could turn out really nice.
02:15:088 (8,1) - Really don't like this spacing
03:06:338 (1,3,4,5) - Aaah too much finish spam ><
Mm, in general the combination of really low spacing/velocity, overmapping, and overlaps really made playing certain parts of this kind of harder than it needed to be. A song like this doesn't really need something difficult, and definitely not something hard to read after hitbursts cover everything. See if you can give the beats some breathing space. This will also allow you to use stronger patterns if you wish, as you'll be able to cover more area to create a fun and relaxing map.

If you have questions, don't hesitate to ask~

nearly all fixed except hiking's 1/4. sry but too difficult to do a remap. when i uploaded this near 1 year ago, i'm too young to do a good map :S
if there's a second one, i will do it better :3

[Walking]
00:49:588 (1) - Too soon after spinner still. Just delete this and it should be fine.
00:54:338 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of a difficult string to play for the easiest. How about something like this?

01:38:338 (2) - I don't like how much this slider is covered by by the previous slider and it's hitburst.
02:18:338 (1) - Too soon after spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:50:338 (1) - ^

[Jogging]
01:10:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a rather rigid and kind of boring pattern for such a smooth song.
02:38:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Hiking]
03:07:338 (3) - Remove finish

Garven wrote:

[Walking]
00:49:588 (1) - Too soon after spinner still. Just delete this and it should be fine.
00:54:338 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of a difficult string to play for the easiest. How about something like this?

01:38:338 (2) - I don't like how much this slider is covered by by the previous slider and it's hitburst.
02:18:338 (1) - Too soon after spinner for this level of difficulty.
02:50:338 (1) - ^

[Jogging]
01:10:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a rather rigid and kind of boring pattern for such a smooth song.
02:38:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Hiking]
03:07:338 (3) - Remove finish

aaaah
i never thinked about i can get a remod
thanks ;A;
you are a good man ;A;
and all fixed ;A;

Did a little more IRC modding concerning minor things like hit sounds and a small pattern change.

Rebubbled!

..............
what happened.
somehow it's a surprise when i'm playing minecraft/_\.

膜姐终于也有rank图了 泪目

恭喜~

終於!!
when i'm playing minecraft 我靠!! baka也有玩耶

Gratz! 膜姐赛高

又多了个神mapper，靠我混毛啊
恭喜

As for you, congratulations on first Ranked >w<

gratz！终于rank~

congrats~! Honey~ Honey~ Honey~

恭喜!!~~

哇 ～ 恭喜菲姐 ～>o<

congrats!!!

混蛋膜姐也先走一步了，什么时候才到我的1st rank啊QAQ

(´・ω・`)
膜姐终于破了第一张图

恭喜雪梨非~

YAY !! !sherrie__fAY !!!! \></ !!!!!!

grats!
膜姐碉堡了~~＞▽＜

Great map, favd

First blood!!!!!!!!!

i rated 10

我玩得很认真~

Orz我居然晚了。恭喜膜姐了

恭喜233~>v<

awesome,Sherrie:3