This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 27 juni 2009 at 21:17:17

Artist: DJ Contacreast
Title: Melody From Heaven
BPM: 142
Filesize: 7453kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Heavenly (4,1 stars, 187 notes)
2. Heavy (4,65 stars, 551 notes)

Download: DJ Contacreast - Melody From Heaven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I just love this song!~

Edit: Working, working

Edit: Mapping this was actually pretty easy and fun to do, waiting for mods..

Edit: Changed, according to post #1 - [ Fufe ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #2 - [ JInxyjem ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #3 - [ Doomsday93 ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #4 - [ Larto ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #5 - [ Saturos-fangirl | I did not follow all the changes ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #6 - [ Saturos-fangirl | I did not follow all the changes ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #7 - [ Takuma ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #8 - [ Supergarlic I did not follow all the changes ( yet ) ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #9 - [ Blissfulyoshi I did not follow all the changes ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #10 - [ Takuma ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #11 - [ Osuplayer111 ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #12 - [ Saturos-fangirl | I followed all the changed except the clap issue ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #13 - [ Tieff | I liked it, added ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #14 - [ EEeee | Ty =D ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #15 - [ Strager | Only changed the patern on Heavenly ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #16 - [ JInxyjem | Changed ending on heavenly and the triangles on Heavy.
Thx again man! ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #17 - [ Saturos-fangirl | Again, and again xD thx!! ]

Edit: Changed, according to post #18 - [ Sir Minelli | Sweeeet!]
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Edit: Fixed Storyboard error.
Edit: Changed, some notes in "Heavy" becouse it didnt fit with the timing.
Edit: Deleted some Breaks [Heavenly] and replaced by more click fun =D [ Idea from post #10 Takuma ]
Edit: Changed Heavenly allot with Sir_Minelli on IRC chat | TY!!
Edit: Changed Heavy allot with Sir_Minelli on IRC chat | TY more!!

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- Ty all, for your time and efford

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Fun map. Very simple style but still fun.

Both Difficulties: 01:24:494 Kiai- consider activating when the combos actually start? unless you want the burst to go off right before the break. It kinda wierds me out a little the way it does that now.

Hard: +1 difficulty tick imo.

Normal:
01:35:90 (3,4,5) - sounds kinda off. Try reversing the order to go hit - hit - slider. I think that sounds better
01:59:98 (1,1,2,1,2,3) - boring. looks kinda lazy too. Maybe some megaslow spinners here? a pattern? if you keep it it could use some tidying up (restack)

[Heavenly]

01:17:52 (5) - Is this really needed?


[Heavy]
01:14:14 (5) - Deja vu. Is this really needed?




A star for this epic map.

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[HEAVENLY]

nothing. nice, clean map.

[HEAVY]

01:44:776 (1, 2, 3, 4) - turn off grid snap and move these so they are bang on the centre. don't forget to move the beats after these so it doesn't mess the spacing up.

surprisingly good i have to say. hope this gets ranked soon. fun too
star'd

Offset: 6.777

Overall: Enable stacking please.

Awesome job I admit.

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Selectus wrote:

Ahh Melody from heaven.. soo sweet
The whole is well constructed and music sounds very good.
Star'd!

thanks ^^ i really do enjoy this song myself, i'm planning on making more beatmaps from Dj Contacreast. He made some verry nice songs for his age.. hehe

Solid~ I can only C Heavy, but that's because I've been on a break from osu! for a while and insane maps usually completely infuriate me. Yours does not, so it's a good sign to me. :3

Star'd.

[Heavenly]
01:44:77 (1) - a note on inherited timing sections: they should be placed slightly before the note sounds so as not to set early clickers in the previous timing section
01:53:64 (2) - doesnt flow well from 1


[Heavy]
00:11:84 (4) - improper stacking
00:57:48 (6) - finish
01:54:52 (7,8,1) - no specific reason but this looks visually unpleasing to me
02:16:91 (7) - clap end
02:29:91 (7) - stack under fading 4
03:13:53 (1) - bpm change is uncalled for
03:54:10 (8,9,10) - i feel like there should be a clap in here somewhere
only comment is theres rather a lot of break in here but meh

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Heavenly]
01:44:77 (1) - a note on inherited timing sections: they should be placed slightly before the note sounds so as not to set early clickers in the previous timing section
01:53:64 (2) - doesnt flow well from 1

^ changed

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Heavy]
01:54:52 (7,8,1) - no specific reason but this looks visually unpleasing to me

- Left it the way it was.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

03:13:53 (1) - bpm change is uncalled for

- It fits according to my feelings. Have to check it out later again.

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The rest i changed to your suggestions

First off, I think its preferred that you capitalize the song title/author. When you do this, full submit.

Heavy:

• 1. 00:25:36 (1) - Extend by 1/4 and place the finish on the new end of the slider. Fix the spinner than comes straight after.
  2. 02:50:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1 level 3 grid down.

Heavenly:

• Flawless.

Nice map and song. <3

awesome song/map

what do you find when u look at heaven ??

stars


that what i give u

really a great map! Starred

nice mapped.
fumoffu star :3

Heavy:
00:16:07 (7,8,9) - make these into a slider because the spacing is hard to tell when playing
00:44:382 - Why dont you also mention the song name and artist. It looks empty with just your username

Heavenly:
00:44:382 - same as hard or heavy

-Make both maps have the same slidertick amount
-You should map Heavenly to the same extent as hard imo

garlicstar

Heavenly:
00:40:12 (6) - align with the end of 4 (1 notch to the right(3))
00:41:39 (4) - might want to align with 5 from previous combo
00:43:71 (10,11) - restack under 9 (few pixels off)
00:51:53 (2) - might want to make this a vertical reflection of 1
00:53:22 (2) - " "
00:54:91 (4) - align with 2 from 2 combos before
00:55:33 (6) - align with 1 from previous combo
00:55:76 (1,2,3) - align with 2 from 2 combos before
00:56:60 (4) - stack on 1 from previous combo
01:11:81 (2) - might want to make this an exact horizontal reflection of 1
01:12:66 (1,2) - align with previous combo
01:16:04 (3) - not an exact replica of 1
01:19:42 (5,6) - align with 3,4 respectively?
01:21:95 (2) - align with the end of 1
01:46:46 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - might want to make these exactly the same or reflections of the first 1
02:08:86 (2) - align with 7?

Heavy:
00:32:97 (9) - align with the end of 8?
00:33:60 (11) - not the same distance from 10 as 9 is from 10
00:50:72 (1,2,3,4,5) - center on the x-axis
01:47:34 (7) - this is placed wrong, so the rest of the circle is not lined up.EX: 2 and 8, 5 and 11
02:05:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like copy and pasted sections, but since its short, I guess it is okay
02:31:49 (5,6) - align 5 with 2 and 6 with 1
03:30:01 (7) - align with 5
03:41:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - more copy paste...

Mostly small issues. Star.

wtfstarlul

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Very fun, loved the ending. +1 from me!

Bmxant wrote:

Very fun, loved the ending. +1 from me!

Rofl. I know I'm probably taking that the wrong way, but, whatever. XD

Anyways. The song itself is repetitive, which doesn't make it very fun. Other than that, you did a great job on this.

- Heavenly:
Eh, I think you should map more of this. There are many breaks here, and you didn't map the majority of the song, so yeah.
Redo the breaks.

That's all. O:

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[Heavenly]
01:36:32 (3) - sounds kinda weird as the only set of 1/4 notes in the map thus far
01:56:60 (1) - i cant tell whether this is supposed to line up with 6 or continue the circley-curve pattern you have
02:11:81 (1) - finish?


[Heavy]
00:16:91 (1) - stack
00:20:50 (1) - maybe make a nice timing section here slightly louder to fit the music
00:34:76 (4) - clap sounds awkward
00:38:15 (4) - ^
yeah you get the idea
01:17:76 (1,2,3) - decrease hit volume a little? its kinda hard to hear the music
01:48:18 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and maybe hitsound
02:26:21 (9,10,13,1) - whistles maybe? i keep expecting them somewhere and im not finding them nvm theyre at the other end of this combo LOL
03:00:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1. hit volume is a bit high imo 2. can you look at your clap pattern here it seems off compared to the next green combo
03:13:53 (1) - inappropriate bpm change

have a nazi post! yay!

Awesome, great job with the hitsounds. The song is repetitive, but catchy, so for a 4 minute map i think it balances out

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0_o wrote:

Awesome, great job with the hitsounds. The song is repetitive, but catchy, so for a 4 minute map i think it balances out

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Thx man, the map is indeed long and repetivly, but i did the best i can to make it as various as possible. I really hope it gets ranked soon, couse i wanna upload other Dj contacreast beatmaps that i've made. thx again for the quote

Ultimate

Why you don't use whistles? I think in some parts, like 01:24:49 (1) ~ 01:37:17 (1) whistles fit song.
But your hitsounds looks good.

[Normal]
02:02:31 (x) - Add note, maybe? Try it.
02:03:15 (x) - ^
02:04:42 (x) - ^

No other problems. Nice song, simple, but amazing storyboard.

St~a~a~arred. ^^

Heavenly
00:42:66 (8) - new combo
00:44:142 () - fix this break ^^
01:07:59 (6) - new combo
01:19:84 (6) - ^
01:38:226 () - fix break ^_^


Heavy

00:39:73 (9) - New combo?
02:07:62 (9) - ^ ?
02:14:38 (9) - ^ ?
02:18:819 () - for me, it would be pretty cool without the break, small hpdrain moment
02:29:59 (6) - new combo ?
03:00:01 (1,1) - new combo ?
03:14:38 (1) - clap?
03:43:96 (9) - new combo?
03:50:72 (9) - ^
03:56:42 (8) - new combo
04:00:22 (6) - new combo

kk, well most of my new combos are suggestions, but I think they are useful, I hope so
great map, +26, hahahaha how about +27

Dont see anything that strikes me as faulty. It IS a bit long, but for me, that is no problem, I believe long maps test your endurance. I like that kinda stuff.

+Star

General
Nothing really wrong. Star.

Heavenly
Feels a little weak on the hit sounds.

01:17:75 (1,2,3,4) - This would look better if the pattern were symmetrical along the y-axis.

Heavy
02:07:61 (1) - New combos like this are inconsistent with Heavenly. Not like it's easy to notice anyway. Just feels different.

Nice

Iz nice, I like
*star'd*

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[Heavenly]
02:15:21 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird with the song...

[Heavy]
03:42:25 (3,4,5) - Make this a more accurate triangle with 1 and 2?

Things haven't change. This map is still awesome. You should start to hunt find BATs.

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Offset -6

Nice map, starred

[Heavenly]
02:16:06 (2) - resnap the end of this


[Heavy]
alright, the very beginning might be a smidge too quiet but other than that it looks good


call me back for bubblez

So we meet again.
Haha, i remember your first map with the "Ultimate" Story board. Nice to see you have improved tons.
Nevertheless i will give you some suggestions that i bet will improve your map alot.


[Heavenly]

Mostly aesthetics~

00:42:25 (1) - undo new combo, 00:42:68 (8) - new combo. Doing this makes the pattern: 3 - 1 - 3 which looks cooler
00:59:15 (2) - match it with fading (6)
01:21:97 (2) - i feel like this takes away the smoothness in play. Find a better place for it?
01:32:96 (5) - make it curved?
01:53:87 (3,3,6,3) - Clap them all!
02:09:93 (5) - clap the beginning of this slider



[Heavy]

Mostly aesthetics~

00:20:49 (1,2,1) - these start too loud. Lower volume please
00:55:14 (3) - add clap sound also
01:16:06 (7) - new combo, and it also looks a bit dirty because of the previous (2) score image when playing.
01:17:64() - this timing section, i feel the volume is quite low compared to the previous one. Counting the first tick as number 1, increase the volume up to 9th tick!
01:19:44 (5) - match with fading (1)
01:21:97 (2) - de-activate both, distance snap and grid snap. Click and move one single time slightly to the left. Will look better when playing after doing so.
01:56:62 (3) - new combo
01:58:94 (3,6) - add clap sounds also
02:10:99 (8) - new combo
02:11:62 (12) - add finish sound
02:26:20 (9) - new combo
02:32:96 (9) - new combo
03:00:74 - the volume of this timing section is too low. Counting the first tick as 1, take volume up to 9th tick.
03:29:58 (5) - new combo
03:32:96 (6) - new combo
03:47:32 (8) - new combo
03:54:08 (8) - new combo
04:00:84 (4) - new combo


And that's all!

Sfg babe, you can bubble with a big smile now


Starred and + priority!

really nice tune and nice map

stär