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t+pazolite Feat. Rizuna - Distorted Lovesong [Osu|Taiko]

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OnosakiHito
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 14. Mai 2014 at 17:24:36

Artist: t+pazolite Feat. Rizuna
Title: Distorted Lovesong
Tags: rizna HARDCORE SYNDROME 4
BPM: 240
Filesize: 8759kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extreme (4,9 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 660 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 875 notes)
  4. Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 1878 notes)
  5. Taikosaki (4,78 stars, 2336 notes)
Download: t+pazolite Feat. Rizuna - Distorted Lovesong
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Reviewed one of my old Projects. This is for rank.
Oni (finished)
Taikosaki (finished)
Normal (unfinished)
Hard (remap?)
Insane (remap?)
Extreme (making: 20%)
Backfire
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Most moe map ever.
But you might want to make change combo color black to something else.
Lots of people dont like black notes ;~;
Loctav
Leaving you a star, modding this later. Huehueueueuehuehueheue
Cristian
Fast mod

[General]
- Right now i don't see this for app, is just for rank
- Black note in little of black BG is not good, maby you need to chanche the color
- The taiko volume are 80% need to be 100% imo

[insane]
- Don't need to chanche the bpm to 120,000 in 01:00:875

Really Good Hitsounds, i like that, keep it up 8-)
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Fast mod

[General]
- Right now i don't see this for app, is just for rank <- The map will be 5min long. over 4:30min is approval. Ou sh*t, it is under 4:30min xD - Ah it has over 20million points, so it is APP
- Black note in little of black BG is not good, maby you need to chanche the color <- people told me that too, but to be honest, I want to keep it.
- The taiko volume are 80% need to be 100% imo <- Dosen't need to be 100% and it's too loud for my taste. Will keep it to 80%. (Also written down in the draft for the Taiko rules. :P)

[insane]
- Don't need to chanche the bpm to 120,000 in 01:00:875 <- I will keep that in mind!

Really Good Hitsounds, i like that, keep it up 8-)
Thank you Backfire, Loctav and Chris-chan for star~
Taiko_old

Even a noob like me passed it, ww

There is a ranking criteria for taiko, what?
SapphireGhost
Jenny
Volumemodding ftw:

19:41 <Jenny> : 00:41:125 (1) - würde für den part nen volume von 30-45% vorschlagen
19:41 <Jenny> : 00:47:125 (1) - den entsprechend 15-20% lauter
19:42 <Jenny> : 00:49:125 (1) - wenn wirklich normal sampleset was zwischen 15-25%
19:42 <Jenny> : 01:01:125 (2) - 40% normal is ok denk ich
19:42 <Jenny> : 01:03:125 (1) - für den eher 50-60%
19:44 <Jenny> : 01:33:125 (3) - *COUGH*
19:44 <Jenny> : 0.25x via .osu-editen *COUGH*
19:44 <OnosakiHito> : ich gucks mir gleich an.
19:45 <Jenny> : 01:52:125 (4) - würde eher auf 1.75x velocity zurückgreifen für den slider, mag aber an mir liegen
19:45 <Jenny> : ich schreib dir einfach was mir so auffällt^^
19:45 <OnosakiHito> : jo
19:46 <Jenny> : 02:06:500 (3,4,5) - klingt zu leise, kannst du die hitsounds nochmal in lauter beschaffen? (ggf. auch dann volume auf 100% für die, die
19:46 <Jenny> : müssen dominanter sein find ich)
19:46 <Jenny> : 02:08:750 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hier auch eher 100% benutzen, weil softsampleset is halt von natur aus leiser
19:48 <Jenny> : 02:17:125 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - die eher auf was zwischen 30-45%
19:49 <Jenny> : 02:24:125 (1) - 65%, 02:24:375 (2) - 75%, 02:24:625 (3) - 85% (imo)
19:49 <Jenny> : 02:31:125 (2) - das sliderende auch eher auf 50-65% legen
19:50 <Jenny> : 02:36:250 (4,5) - die pause zwischen den beiden kommt etwas unerwartet, wirkt so als wär da eig. noch nen circle zwischen der
19:50 <Jenny> : irgendwie verschütt gegangen is
19:51 <Jenny> : 02:41:125 (6) - würd sagen für den kleinen abschnitt ~35%
19:51 <Jenny> : 02:43:125 (4) - hier dann auf 50% hoch
19:53 <Jenny> : 02:45:125 (1) - finish aufs ende legen, nen inheritpoint (kiai) setzen [90-100% volume, nur aufs spinnerende], direkt auf den 1/4 dahinter
19:53 <Jenny> : nen 80%, 1.0x nonkiai-inherit
19:53 <Jenny> : klingt für mich einfach danach als ob da ne kiaifontain hingehört :x
19:54 <Jenny> : 03:07:500 (2) - hier circleslider undso, werden die leute noch rumzicken, vlt. mal was alternatives probieren was um sich selber rumgeht?
19:54 <Jenny> : (schwer zu beschreiben, guck mal danach was dir so einfällt aber das kreisförmige beibehält)
19:58 <OnosakiHito> : wow so viel.
19:58 <OnosakiHito> : dankr dir~
19:59 <Jenny> : ~
Linco
Magst du vielleicht Rizna zu den Tags hinzufügen? :O
Auch wenn es リズナ (rizuna) ist, scheint Rizna wohl eine ebenso gebräuchliche Variante ihres Namens zu sein, daher wäre es vielleicht gut, sie in die Tags zu packen, damit man es auch unter dem Namen findet.
Zlew

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko people may be shocked for a moment, lol.
Not only they may be. :O
Card N'FoRcE
Little SB fix.
Replace the original lines with these ones:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\love_girl.png",323,260
F,0,-3125,0,1
F,0,0,266413,1
S,0,0,,0.8
Hatate Himekaidou
<3
Taiko_old


My hands, Y U SO SLOW :<
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito
Thank you for now for your help guys!
@Taiko: You are really good, dude. хорош!

I have finished the Insane and the osu! SB finnaly!
Just Hard leaved and I can move the project into pending.
[Luanny]
I Just LOVE it <3
Fiya

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko people may be shocked for a moment, lol.
You're right, this taikosaki is fucking scary ono ;_;

Edit: lol at least now I can read it \:D/
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito
Thank you guys for star! :)
@Fiya: Yeah, it was. Updated right now. So it is now easier.
I will soon make some pattern changes to make everything more smooth.
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito
Finnaly reached the pending status!
pekos
I love this song
t+pazolite is god
DoKito
General
  1. Schwarze Hitcircles sind nicht so dolle... Die meisten löschen den BG und haben dann ein dickes Problem: Schwarze Circles + schwarzer BG. Spielt sich wie Hidden <,<'
  2. Warum hast du verschiedene Kiai-Times in den Diffs?
  3. Ich würd die beiden Diffs gleich enden lassen. Am besten du verkürzt die Insane.
[Hard]
  1. 02:09:125 - Inherited Point ist überflüssig, da er keinerlei Änderung bringt.
  2. 00:02:500 (x) - Circle hinzufügen
  3. 00:06:500 (x) - ^
  4. 04:05:875 (4) - Strg + R

[Insanel]
  1. 01:33:125 (3) - Der slowdown ist irgendwie ziemlich random und unvorhersehbar.
  2. 01:36:125 (1) - Das gleiche mit diesem Speed up.
  3. 01:39:125 (1) - Ich würd an deiner Stelle die Pause nach dem Circle mappen.
  4. 01:44:875 (1) - Ich bin mit den ganzen Speed ups nicht so sehr zufrieden <,<' Weiß nicht wieso. Die passen da irgendwie nicht hin und sind ziemlich unvorhersehbar. Naja ich hör mal besser auf die rauszuschreiben.
  5. 03:36:125 (1) - Okay sorry aber DER ist wirklich EXTREM unvorhersehbar. Den musste ich einfach rausschreiben.

Das wäre alles. \:3/
Viel Glück!
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito
@pekos: true.
@DoKoLP: Thank you for mod an star!!
jossieP
hi <: as requested Ill just annoy with standard diffs
as I see some random hitsoundings Ill try to make it moar interesting, you must check the suggest, listen it, and if you like it keep the change, if you dont like it give a solid reason for reject it.

[Hard]

  1. 00:45:125 (1) - personal prefference, I dont like the whistle on start of slider, as you have used no hitsounded sliders previously
  2. 00:48:125 (5) - I preffer the whistle here, just personal prefference
  3. 00:49:125 - hmm the silent part sounds a bit stained by slider slide sound, maybe add a 0byte file for slider slide?
  4. 00:54:125 (3) - whistle on end of slider, for make whistles a bit moar constant
  5. 01:01:125 (8) - whistle on repeat and end of slider
  6. 01:03:125 (1) - finish for spinner?
  7. 01:06:000 (4) - no finish on end of slider, feels a bit out of the pattern
  8. 01:07:875 (4) - finish on repeat
  9. 01:08:625 (7) - finish on second repeat arrow
  10. 01:09:375 (2) - no finish, sounds a bit out of pattern for me
  11. 01:12:000 (4) - finish?
  12. 01:12:625 (7) - finish on start of slider?
  13. 01:13:625 (3) - finish on repeat
  14. 01:14:125 (4) - finish on start and end
  15. 01:19:875 (8) - finish on end of slider?
  16. 01:30:125 (5) - missed clap on start of slider, you was trying to make moar constant on previous pattern
  17. 01:32:125 (4) - ↑
  18. 01:33:125 (1) - whistle instead clap on start of slider
  19. 01:34:125 (5) - clap on start of slider
  20. 01:37:125 (1) - whistle maybe
  21. 01:53:375 (2,3) - nice AWESOME PATTERN!!!!!!!! YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
  22. 02:05:875 (4) - no finish?
  23. 02:17:125 (1) - clap, listen it
  24. 02:21:125 (1) - ↑
  25. 02:24:125 (5) - try normal default finish for start of slider, also maybe considerate whistle on slider body if dont like the sound of whistle slider body dont add it
  26. 02:59:125 (1) - finish~
  27. 03:01:125 (1) - ↑ on start of slider?
  28. 03:03:125 (1) - finish on start, repeat and end of slider?
  29. 03:16:625 (5) - maybe make it a bit less covered by previous slider
  30. 03:19:125 (1) - whistle?
  31. 03:35:125 (3,4,5) - clap for this 3? make a nice effect with that bouncing slider with many claps
  32. 03:36:125 (6) - add a finish on start of slider and maybe a same soundset as the pattern used on the last part of 03:52:125 (3,4,5,6,7)
  33. 03:52:125 (3) - normal default finish to start of slider? following suggest from up
  34. 04:04:625 (5,6,7,8) - soft custom 1?
  35. 04:06:625 - soft custom 1?
    also maybe make this diff of same lenght of Insane, just by concistant

[Insane]

  1. 00:11:125 (3,4,5,1) - I had to watch this pattern on editor like 15 times for can get how to hit it, is really confusing on an unnecesary way, just star the new combo on 00:11:375 (4), and it will be absolutelly readable
  2. 00:16:938 (8,9,10) - no whistle for this 3 also ↓
  3. 00:17:125 (1) - whistle on start of slider
  4. 00:24:000 (4) - lonely whistle on start of slider, maybe remove it or make a nice pattern for support it
  5. 00:45:125 (1) - same whistle stuff as pointed on Hard >v<
  6. 01:00:125 (3) - no whistle
  7. 01:00:625 (1) - whistle
  8. 01:01:125 (2) - whistle on end of slider
  9. 01:02:625 (4) - whistle
  10. 01:03:125 (1) - whistle on end of slider
  11. 01:04:375 (2) - whistle
  12. 01:33:125 - hmm looks like you had added a x0,25 green timeline by notepad, that is an unrankable stuff, see

    Odaril wrote:

    Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.
    obviously the minor slider multiplier that can be setted by editor is x0,50
  13. 01:37:000 (6) - if you are trying to support the vocal with this note this should be where the next spinner starts, move to there and spinner forward
  14. 02:04:625 (2,3,4,5) - soundset change as [Hard] or remove that whistles >w<
  15. 02:33:000 - x0,25 multiplier again
  16. 03:05:125 - add som finishes ;D
  17. 03:33:125 - multiplier again >_<
  18. 03:37:000 (6) - same vocal support as 01:37:000 (6)
  19. 03:57:625 (5) - no finish on start of slider
  20. 04:09:125 (1) - place on centre of y axis? is completally readable like that
and that is the best I can make for try to help you

must edit for new forum codes D:
XK2238
Scary song D: (and the XXX...)

Btw Ono, I suggest changing the source name from SNYDROME to SYNDROME, because it's mispelled. Well, just saying :/

Evil Taikosaki... ==
Topic Starter
OnosakiHito

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi <: as requested Ill just annoy with standard diffs
as I see some random hitsoundings Ill try to make it moar interesting, you must check the suggest, listen it, and if you like it keep the change, if you dont like it give a solid reason for reject it.

[Hard]

  1. 00:45:125 (1) - personal prefference, I dont like the whistle on start of slider, as you have used no hitsounded sliders previously I will think about this
  2. 00:48:125 (5) - I preffer the whistle here, just personal prefference Don't like it.
  3. 00:49:125 - hmm the silent part sounds a bit stained by slider slide sound, maybe add a 0byte file for slider slide? I will test that soon
  4. 00:54:125 (3) - whistle on end of slider, for make whistles a bit moar constant Don't like it.
  5. 01:01:125 (8) - whistle on repeat and end of slider Cool!
  6. 01:03:125 (1) - finish for spinner? Don't like it.
  7. 01:06:000 (4) - no finish on end of slider, feels a bit out of the pattern Feels okay to me..
  8. 01:07:875 (4) - finish on repeat I will think about this
  9. 01:08:625 (7) - finish on second repeat arrow I will think about this
  10. 01:09:375 (2) - no finish, sounds a bit out of pattern for me I will think about this
  11. 01:12:000 (4) - finish? No, it's mostly because there are no finishes in the song, and I put allready two finishes into it were is none requiered. Would be too much.
  12. 01:12:625 (7) - finish on start of slider? ^
  13. 01:13:625 (3) - finish on repeat ^
  14. 01:14:125 (4) - finish on start and end Used start
  15. 01:19:875 (8) - finish on end of slider? Cool!
  16. 01:30:125 (5) - missed clap on start of slider, you was trying to make moar constant on previous pattern Cool!
  17. 01:32:125 (4) - ↑ Did so
  18. 01:33:125 (1) - whistle instead clap on start of slider Did so and much more!
  19. 01:34:125 (5) - clap on start of slider Did so
  20. 01:37:125 (1) - whistle maybe No, I will keep it how it is.
  21. 01:53:375 (2,3) - nice AWESOME PATTERN!!!!!!!! YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks!
  22. 02:05:875 (4) - no finish? no
  23. 02:17:125 (1) - clap, listen it ok
  24. 02:21:125 (1) - ↑ ok
  25. 02:24:125 (5) - try normal default finish for start of slider, also maybe considerate whistle on slider body if dont like the sound of whistle slider body dont add it Don't like it
  26. 02:59:125 (1) - finish~ cool!
  27. 03:01:125 (1) - ↑ on start of slider? cool!
  28. 03:03:125 (1) - finish on start, repeat and end of slider? cool!
  29. 03:16:625 (5) - maybe make it a bit less covered by previous slider Don't like it
  30. 03:19:125 (1) - whistle? I will think about this
  31. 03:35:125 (3,4,5) - clap for this 3? make a nice effect with that bouncing slider with many claps cool!
  32. 03:36:125 (6) - add a finish on start of slider and maybe a same soundset as the pattern used on the last part of 03:52:125 (3,4,5,6,7) did something like that
  33. 03:52:125 (3) - normal default finish to start of slider? following suggest from up ok!
  34. 04:04:625 (5,6,7,8) - soft custom 1? no
  35. 04:06:625 - soft custom 1? ok!
    also maybe make this diff of same lenght of Insane, just by concistant
Thank you for now, I will look through insane soon!


@XK2238: Oh, damn typo, did the same in kung-fu. lol
Thx.
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