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DJ Okawari - Flower Dance (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
LKs

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. 嗯...为啥太鼓是100BPM, 其他难度是200BPM 太鼓难度改到200BPM了
  2. sliderball透明的话再加上白色的slider完全看不到, 不建议用白色的combo color, 至少用灰色吧? 而且用白色的话slidertick也看不到
  3. 个人不是太喜欢第二段break和第三段break之间的那一个note, 感觉没啥意义, 这里音乐也不是这一个音特别强, 为什么不从02:12:290 (1) - 开始就map呢, 这里开始用比如0.75xBPMmap这一部分, 节奏松一点, 然后接后面那部分我感觉节奏会非常好 如果不加note 就是JPY的那张 break时间太长了 至于为什么没map 是因为02:12:290 (1) 前后旋律是一样的 都是过渡段 真正的后半部分[02:21:590]开始的
    custom soft finish1声音好诡异... 额 那应该是个多个音同时发声组成的长音 跟音乐不会显得不和声

Skin

  1. hitcircle那套还差个reversearrow.png 加入了

Easy

  1. 02:21:560 (T) - 没用的绿线
  2. 01:49:790 (1) - 中间折返的地方的clap感觉音量略大, 我觉得40%左右比较合适 40%有点太小了 改到44%了
  3. 01:54:590 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 01:59:390 (1) - ^ ^
  5. 03:05:090 (1) - 这个在03:05:690结束(加clap), 然后在03:05:990和03:06:290加note感觉更好 我没加俩note 加了03:05:990 加太多怕太难了
    [attachment=1:4f500]0.jpg[/attachment:4f500]
  6. 03:09:890 (1) - 加finish?
ok

Normal

  1. 02:21:560 (T) - 没用的绿线
删了

Hard

  1. 02:27:890 (1) - 这个第一次玩的时候没太想到会是2回转, 不如一回转再stack一个? 嘛, 2回转也没问题 嗯..
  2. 02:54:890 (1) - 为啥这里要NC? 删了

Insane

  1. 00:49:191 (1,2) - 虽然NC了, 不过我觉得玩的时候还是有点不太看得清, 被300的hitburst挡住大半了 这真没办法..
    [attachment=0:4f500]1.jpg[/attachment:4f500]
  2. 01:13:491 (1,2) - ^, 也可能只是我个人感觉:/ 这个我觉得可以通过approach circle看吧 AR不低哪个先出现比较好分辨
  3. 02:41:841 (3,4,5) - 我感觉这里三连不适合, 不如就弄成和后面一样的1/2跳, 不然这儿一个小间距的3连过了马上就是1/2跳也来得太猛了点, 后面02:46:641 (3,4,5,1) - 还好因为5到1间距不大, 好认得多 删了三连 改了下位置

Taiko

  1. 呃, 那些1/3拍的听着确实有点奇怪...我是不太懂太鼓, 光是从听节奏上来说的话.

嗯, 有回复后找我吧. 看看你怎么改

EDIT 白色改成灰的了 sliderball和slidertick应该都看得见了

EDIT2 offest变成25490
Breeze
Sadly, since red line changed, I could only rebubble it
Luvdic
I'm sorry, but I don't agree with the map's combo colours, it blends too much with the bg. >_>''
Topic Starter
LKs

ErufenRito wrote:

I'm sorry, but I don't agree with the map's combo colours, it blends too much with the bg. >_>''
you can delete it and use your own one, ok?
Ulysses

LKs wrote:

ErufenRito wrote:

I'm sorry, but I don't agree with the map's combo colours, it blends too much with the bg. >_>''
you can delete it and use your own one, ok?
金句XP
Alace
<Easy>
01:56:090 (2,3,4,5) - 真是鬼畜極了 把 (3) (4) 位子對調會不會比較好?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207042 不過還是不等距就是了XD

<Taiko>
前半段有滿多N S 的音效切換,因為N S 在太鼓裡的音量差非常大,打起來的驚嚇效果十足!!
要不要考慮移除那些綠線??
Topic Starter
LKs

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
01:56:090 (2,3,4,5) - 真是鬼畜極了 把 (3) (4) 位子對調會不會比較好?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207042 不過還是不等距就是了XD 间距改成一样了

<Taiko>
前半段有滿多N S 的音效切換,因為N S 在太鼓裡的音量差非常大,打起來的驚嚇效果十足!! 在等回应
要不要考慮移除那些綠線??
edit 更新了太鼓
spboxer3
Verdisphena
Awesome map
Alace
Alright looks good now (easy) and sounds fine now (Taiko)
ranked
Topic Starter
LKs

Alace wrote:

Alright looks good now (easy) and sounds fine now (Taiko)
ranked
thanks/
NatsumeRin
好顶
spboxer3
ya
Kotone
love this map
DarkRingSystem

又是一个
xsrsbsns
Finally.. grats!
wmfchris
congrats!!!!
OnosakiHito
I was allready, ready to complain why there is no Taiko diff. like every stupid time on this song.
But then, OH GOD, ishida and spboxer taiko! Congratulation for rank, and congratulkation to ishida for first ranked taiko guest diff!!
eveless
好顶~
JauiPlaY

OnosakiHito wrote:

I was allready, ready to complain why there is no Taiko diff. like every stupid time on this song.
But then, OH GOD, ishida and spboxer taiko! Congratulation for rank, and congratulkation to ishida for first ranked taiko guest diff!!
Ohai, guess what? My knee bingo an arrow.
Anyway congrats for ranked! :D
OnosakiHito

JauiPlaY wrote:

Ohai, guess what? My knee bingo an arrow.
Ah don't worry. I didn't complained about the Taiko diff. or map.
This song has been ranked a few times without taiko diff. and I was really sad about it.
But now we have finnaly one. :3 *happy*
Haruhi_sama
恭喜一下。可是8.6分怎么回事啊哈:D
Mantis
<3
wule
又来一个,恭喜
Pokie
=w= yesu/
_Kiva
好顶。
投一分的巨蠢。
Akiba Rika
nice map:3
Vi-key
:) nice~
Coffeezi
Nice map
I like it very much~~
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