As requested (M4M)
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GeneralDerekku wrote:
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.
Rename Easy to Normal. 
fixed.I'm just lazy to make a Normal...
Everything else looks fine I guess, not my type of song through.
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Easy]
00:11:530 (1,2,1) - I personally prefer it if you do it like this.
http://puu.sh/8Lpt fixed
00:49:791 (1) - Wave slider fits much better with the flow of the song and is more interesting as well.
http://puu.sh/8LqZ fixed
00:53:704 (1,2,3) - I prefer like this, a bit more nicer to play imo then a box pattern
http://puu.sh/8Lrl.
fixed
00:56:313 (1) - This slider doesn't look good at all to me. just do a simple curve slider instead
http://puu.sh/8Lrz.
no
00:59:356 (5) - I think it's better if you ctrl+r and space it out. It flow nicer when the slider points to the next note and nothing in the music really feel it should be like how you put it
http://puu.sh/8Ls5.
no
Pretty nice map. Slider can look nicer through, try to make them better (use grid 4 or turn off grid slap). Also, be sure to rename to Normal for the reason mention in [General], it also feel like a Normal to me.
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Hard00:02:835 (5,6,7) - Something like this is nicer
http://puu.sh/8Lt3.
no
Don't really have anything to point out. Solid map, same comment about the slider as Easy, it can be better.
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tutuhaha's Insane]
00:03:704 (3,4,5) - Hm, I prefer it like this
http://puu.sh/8LtG for smoother flow. If you want to want to keep the pattern. Make sure to fix spacing between (4) and (5). I can see that it's uneven.
00:10:443 (3) - Move to x:200 y:320 to center it more between (4) and (5).
00:12:400 (4) - Can you space this out to 0.5x distant snapping. First time I play this map, I miss it since I didn't notice the stack so spacing it out make it more noticeable. Also for patterns like this like at 00:09:139 (5,6), you space it out to 0.5x so for consistency reason as well.
00:20:226 (1,2) - Hitting (3) felt weird with how you put (2). Can you try this instead?
http://puu.sh/8LvF. Feel much better to hit (3).
00:27:182 (8) - Same as 00:12:400, I find the stack hard to see.
00:50:661 (6) - I really think you should curve this, fits nicer with the song flow. You'll have to adjust the notes a bit to make it flow nicely, try something like this?
http://puu.sh/8LvZ01:12:400 (2) - Same as 00:12:400
fixed some.
Looks good, just for patterns like at 00:12:400 to space it out, since the stack is a bit hard to see.
Good map in general. just work on your slider a bit AoiX, will really make your beatmap feel a lot nicer. Have a star.
Good luck!
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