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the pillows - Comic Sonic (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月1日 at 下午 08:31:53

Artist: the pillows
Title: Comic Sonic (TV Size)
Source: SKET DANCE
Tags: gina91189 winber1 bossandy boss ending ed1
BPM: 150
Filesize: 9728kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 490 notes)
  2. Easy (1.99 stars, 87 notes)
  3. Hard (4.85 stars, 233 notes)
  4. Normal (4.15 stars, 133 notes)
  5. Winber1's Insane (5 stars, 346 notes)
Download: the pillows - Comic Sonic (TV Size)
Download: the pillows - Comic Sonic (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please Re-Download if you download this before 01/01/13 (GMT-8).

ED1 of SKET DANCE - Comic Sonic

10/05/11 - Submitted
11/10/11 - Sorry, I changed my username, so you guys need to redownload
06/11/12 - I changed my mind, this is TV Size right now and added some stuffs. Also, taking Insane guess diff
06/12/12 - Added video (Removed it on 06/17/12)
06/17/12 - Changed some images (including BG)
07/03/12 - Added an Insane and moved to pending
07/21/12 - Changed the name of bg to test if the preview image will show or not
01/01/13 - Added video, thanks to lovhin456 :D

Done
Easy - 100%
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Winber1's Insane - 100% by winber1
Boss Taiko Oni - 100% by bossandy
Last edited by GiNa , edited 30 times in total.
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
SKET DANCE<3
Random mod!

[overall]:
  1. looks fine~
[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:600 - fit music? suggestion
  2. 01:37:200 (1,2) - ugly slider.. change it?
[Hard]:
  1. 00:04:400 (1,2,3) - slider change? 00:04:400 - start 00:04:600 - repeat 00:04:800 - end
  2. 00:18:800 (6) - repeat Reduce for one
  3. 00:19:600 (7) - move to 00:19:400 - Add 1repeat
[Normal]:
  1. looks fine.
[Easy]:
  1. 01:11:200 (4) - end finish
Fight>A<
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

S o r d a wrote:

SKET DANCE<3
Random mod!
[overall]:
  1. looks fine~
[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:600 - fit music? suggestion　Fixed
  2. 01:37:200 (1,2) - ugly slider.. change it?　Fixed
[Hard]:
  1. 00:04:400 (1,2,3) - slider change? 00:04:400 - start 00:04:600 - repeat 00:04:800 - end 　Fixed
  2. 00:18:800 (6) - repeat Reduce for one 　Fixed
  3. 00:19:600 (7) - move to 00:19:400 - Add 1repeat 　Fixed
[Normal]:
  1. looks fine.
[Easy]:
  1. 01:11:200 (4) - end finish　Fixed
Fight>A<　Thanks for your mod >w</
abcdef_old
2 posts
Joined January 2009
abcdef_old
this map is so awesome!!! hope it gets to be ranked!!! :D
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi~! Here's my mod as you requested! :3

  • [General]
  1. If you're not gonna make a SB, delete the .osb file and do a full submission.
[Easy]

This difficulty feels like a Normal diff. You should make easier this. I'll leave you some suggestions to make this difficulty more simple and easy.

00:33:200 (1) - I think this part is hard for a Easy. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/atxO
00:36:400 (1) - ^ Again. Try this: http://puu.sh/aty5
00:46:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyv
00:49:200 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyE
00:58:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyU
01:02:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyV
01:10:400 (1) - I think you should copy the previous slider (1) here, so It will be something like this: http://puu.sh/atz1. Also you can try this spacing with these notes: http://puu.sh/atz3 ~
01:24:400 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/atzi
01:43:600 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzu
01:46:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzC
01:56:400 (1) - Don't place notes like this in a Easy difficulty.
02:04:200 - This break feels weird since it starts all of a sudden. Maybe think of mapping this break?
02:15:600 (1) - Try something more simple here like I told you above.
02:28:400 (1) - And here.
02:31:600 (1) - ^
02:44:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard. Try using long sliders to make it more simple :3

[Normal]

When I told you to delete a note or something it's because I think it makes some parts a bit too difficult.

00:14:000 (1,2,3) - Maybe try a spacing like this: http://puu.sh/atAn ?
00:19:000 (4) - Delete?
00:21:000 (2) - ^
00:22:000 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger and delete (4)?
00:24:200 (2) - Delete?
00:41:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)?
00:44:200 (3) - Delete?
01:30:800 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing: http://puu.sh/atAW
01:35:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)
02:04:400 - Same as in [Easy].
02:24:000 (2) - I think you shouldnt hide sliders like this in a Normal Diff.

[Hard]

00:15:600 (7) - Remove new combo.
00:16:400 (1) - New combo.
00:34:600 (7) - New combo.
00:34:800 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:800 (4) - New combo.
00:38:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:200 (1) - New combo.
00:52:000 (3) - Move this note somewhere because its being behind 00:50:800 (1). Try this: http://puu.sh/atBP ?
00:54:000 (4) - Remove new combo.
01:00:400 (1) - ^
01:06:800 (4) - ^
01:22:800 (1) - New combo.
02:04:200 - Same as in [Normal] and [Easy]. I think you should map this break. At least map it in this difficulty because it's a [Hard].
02:27:600 (1) - New combo.
02:29:000 (2,3) - Move this notes somewhere because they're placed where the previous notes were.
02:30:000 (5) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

00:03:100 (4) - Add a note.
00:07:600 (1) - Jump?
00:26:800 (1) - ^
01:40:200 (11) - New combo.
01:40:400 (1) - Remove new combo.

________________________


Nice beatmap overall :3 Good luck!
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
the only thing i can say is that some red tick notes could make the rhythmn better like this at 00:15:600 (1,2,3) - or similiar, but as now is just fine :3
01:44:400 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - a symmetric pattern like
SPOILER
could do tha work :3
02:44:400 (1) - New Combo bug, manually add New Combo
[Normal]
-Rhythmn
01:01:400 (x) - Adding a circle here could make a cool rhythmn ;3 (01:00:800 (4,5,x,6)) with Clap-Normal Normal-Clap)
-Graphic
00:23:000 (6,1,2) - Curving the pattern look surely better :3
SPOILER
00:24:400 (3,4,5,6) - ^
SPOILER
00:34:000 (2) - A nice blanket work
SPOILER
01:18:000 (1,2,3) - Could curve them for an illusionary simmetry with the slider :3
SPOILER
01:19:800 (2) - A very small curve :3
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:04:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - curvize
SPOILER

00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - an hex? tower stacks don't look so good >.<
SPOILER
00:16:400 (4) - try deleting it and see if the rhythmn gain something :3(you did use the rhythmn you'll obtain afterward too :3)
00:23:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Octagonize
SPOILER
00:50:800 (1,2,3,1) - the(3) of the group was overlapped by an hitburst... so... do this?
SPOILER
01:23:200 (9) - Use a blanket?
SPOILER
01:43:600 (1) - remove the overlapping by making it a little curvy :D
SPOILER
01:45:200 (1) - You may as well copypaste ^ to make the pattern symmetrical (but flip horizontally and vertically :3)


[Insane]
00:01:500 (x) - Add a Circle, even if you partially mapped some other streams at the start too... but well those circle will make some patterns more repeated, so that part will become more readable...
00:04:500 (x) - ^
00:17:800 (2,4) - Fully Blanketize
SPOILER
00:35:000 (6) - Blanket ?.?
SPOILER
00:35:600 (8) - Seems offbeat, Suggestion
SPOILER
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
Kei's Mod

Kei wrote:

Hi~! Here's my mod as you requested! :3

  • [General]
  1. If you're not gonna make a SB, delete the .osb file and do a full submission.
[Easy]

This difficulty feels like a Normal diff. You should make easier this. I'll leave you some suggestions to make this difficulty more simple and easy.

00:33:200 (1) - I think this part is hard for a Easy. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/atxO
00:36:400 (1) - ^ Again. Try this: http://puu.sh/aty5
00:46:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyv
00:49:200 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyE
00:58:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyU
01:02:000 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atyV
01:10:400 (1) - I think you should copy the previous slider (1) here, so It will be something like this: http://puu.sh/atz1. Also you can try this spacing with these notes: http://puu.sh/atz3 ~
01:24:400 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/atzi
01:43:600 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzu
01:46:800 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/atzC
01:56:400 (1) - Don't place notes like this in a Easy difficulty.
02:04:200 - This break feels weird since it starts all of a sudden. Maybe think of mapping this break?
02:15:600 (1) - Try something more simple here like I told you above.
02:28:400 (1) - And here.
02:31:600 (1) - ^
02:44:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard. Try using long sliders to make it more simple :3

[Normal]

When I told you to delete a note or something it's because I think it makes some parts a bit too difficult.

00:14:000 (1,2,3) - Maybe try a spacing like this: http://puu.sh/atAn ?
00:19:000 (4) - Delete?
00:21:000 (2) - ^
00:22:000 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger and delete (4)?
00:24:200 (2) - Delete?
00:41:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)?
00:44:200 (3) - Delete?
01:30:800 (1,2,3) - Try this spacing: http://puu.sh/atAW
01:35:200 (3) - Make this slider 1 tick larger with a repeat and delete (4) and (5)
02:04:400 - Same as in [Easy].
02:24:000 (2) - I think you shouldnt hide sliders like this in a Normal Diff.

[Hard]

00:15:600 (7) - Remove new combo.
00:16:400 (1) - New combo.
00:34:600 (7) - New combo.
00:34:800 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:800 (4) - New combo.
00:38:000 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:200 (1) - New combo.
00:52:000 (3) - Move this note somewhere because its being behind 00:50:800 (1). Try this: http://puu.sh/atBP ?
00:54:000 (4) - Remove new combo.
01:00:400 (1) - ^
01:06:800 (4) - ^
01:22:800 (1) - New combo.
02:04:200 - Same as in [Normal] and [Easy]. I think you should map this break. At least map it in this difficulty because it's a [Hard].
02:27:600 (1) - New combo.
02:29:000 (2,3) - Move this notes somewhere because they're placed where the previous notes were.
02:30:000 (5) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

00:03:100 (4) - Add a note.
00:07:600 (1) - Jump?
00:26:800 (1) - ^
01:40:200 (11) - New combo.
01:40:400 (1) - Remove new combo.

________________________


Nice beatmap overall :3 Good luck!

Fixed almost everything (except NC).
Thanks for your mod :3.
Haku's Mod

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
the only thing i can say is that some red tick notes could make the rhythmn better like this at 00:15:600 (1,2,3) - or similiar, but as now is just fine :3
01:44:400 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - a symmetric pattern like
SPOILER
could do tha work :3
02:44:400 (1) - New Combo bug, manually add New Combo
[Normal]
-Rhythmn
01:01:400 (x) - Adding a circle here could make a cool rhythmn ;3 (01:00:800 (4,5,x,6)) with Clap-Normal Normal-Clap)
-Graphic
00:23:000 (6,1,2) - Curving the pattern look surely better :3
SPOILER
00:24:400 (3,4,5,6) - ^
SPOILER
00:34:000 (2) - A nice blanket work
SPOILER
01:18:000 (1,2,3) - Could curve them for an illusionary simmetry with the slider :3
SPOILER
01:19:800 (2) - A very small curve :3
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:04:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - curvize
SPOILER

00:20:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - an hex? tower stacks don't look so good >.<
SPOILER
00:16:400 (4) - try deleting it and see if the rhythmn gain something :3(you did use the rhythmn you'll obtain afterward too :3)
00:23:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Octagonize
SPOILER
00:50:800 (1,2,3,1) - the(3) of the group was overlapped by an hitburst... so... do this?
SPOILER
01:23:200 (9) - Use a blanket?
SPOILER
01:43:600 (1) - remove the overlapping by making it a little curvy :D
SPOILER
01:45:200 (1) - You may as well copypaste ^ to make the pattern symmetrical (but flip horizontally and vertically :3)


[Insane]
00:01:500 (x) - Add a Circle, even if you partially mapped some other streams at the start too... but well those circle will make some patterns more repeated, so that part will become more readable...
00:04:500 (x) - ^
00:17:800 (2,4) - Fully Blanketize
SPOILER
00:35:000 (6) - Blanket ?.?
SPOILER
00:35:600 (8) - Seems offbeat, Suggestion
SPOILER

Don't really remember what I changed, but thanks for your mod and star :D.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ahhh, the GiNa.... Haku-chan's wife.....

General
* Hmm, I feel the timing feels off for me. Try set the offset to 1210? You should check my timing, sometimes my timing is late or early

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Easy
00:37:600 (2) - End this slider to 00:38:600 for following vocal?
00:44:800 (3) - I don't think this slider is fit to music....
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....

-------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
* AR +1? A bit slow for me.....

00:47:600 (1) - Remove new combo for following vocal? Like other combo pattern?
01:01:600 (1) - Remove new combo? It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo is single object, unless it has a good reason
01:35:200 (3) - I feel that repeating slider snap at red tick is not fit to the song..... Try snap it to white tick? Just my opinion
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....

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Hard
00:46:200 (2,3) - Replace this two object into one slider for a good flow?
00:51:600 (2,3) - This sudden 1/1 notes can makes player confusing. But, just my opinion
01:23:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider

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Insane
01:16:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with 01:15:000 (2) (Nazi)
01:37:200 (1) - I think this slider needs more waves (Nazi)
01:38:000 (2) - ^
01:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stacks are not stacked correctly in gameplay. Try to unstack or restack this stacks to fix this
01:52:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmmm, can you unstack this? When I was playing this pattern at first time, I feel it's hard to predict the beats.... since the timing on each notes are different. But, just my opinion.....

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Big apologize for long mod. I'm sorry D:
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
Leorda's Mod

Leorda wrote:

Ahhh, the GiNa.... Haku-chan's wife.....　Eh !!!???

General
* Hmm, I feel the timing feels off for me. Try set the offset to 1210? You should check my timing, sometimes my timing is late or early　1210 feels better, changed.

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Easy
00:37:600 (2) - End this slider to 00:38:600 for following vocal?　Fixed
00:44:800 (3) - I don't think this slider is fit to music....　Fixed
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....　Sorry, I won't fill this break since this is an Easy.

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Normal
* AR +1? A bit slow for me.....　Added

00:47:600 (1) - Remove new combo for following vocal? Like other combo pattern?　Fixed
01:01:600 (1) - Remove new combo? It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo is single object, unless it has a good reason　Fixed, I didn't know there's a NC lol
01:35:200 (3) - I feel that repeating slider snap at red tick is not fit to the song..... Try snap it to white tick? Just my opinion　Fixed
02:06:000 (B) - You should fill this breaks from previous object to this timeline. Because the previous object is doesn't feels want to start the breaks.....　Nope ><

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Hard
00:46:200 (2,3) - Replace this two object into one slider for a good flow?　Fixed
00:51:600 (2,3) - This sudden 1/1 notes can makes player confusing. But, just my opinion　No changed
01:23:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with previous slider　Fixed

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Insane
01:16:000 (8) - Not stack perfectly with 01:15:000 (2) (Nazi)　Fixed
01:37:200 (1) - I think this slider needs more waves (Nazi)　No, but thanks for your suggestion
01:38:000 (2) - ^　^
01:46:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stacks are not stacked correctly in gameplay. Try to unstack or restack this stacks to fix this　Fixed
01:52:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmmm, can you unstack this? When I was playing this pattern at first time, I feel it's hard to predict the beats.... since the timing on each notes are different. But, just my opinion.....　Fixed

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Big apologize for long mod. I'm sorry D:　No problam, as long as they help.
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Hi! As you requested in my modding queue.

Only suggestions.

[General]
Remove "Letterbox during breaks", i think it is not necessary.
This map has many whistles...I suggest you remove some. I'll take some from Easy as an example.
00:01:210 (1)
00:02:010 (2)
00:02:810 (3)
I think these whistles sound bad.

[Easy]

00:50:810 (3): End the slider in 00:51:410 to following vocal? Suggestion.
02:23:610: Suggestion, move this slider to 02:33:410 and end in 02:34:010? I think follow more the vocal.
02:41:210 (1): Remove finish? Suggestion.
02:43:610: Add a note here, and in 02:44:010? Another Suggestion.



[Normal]
Here I didn't see many problems with whistles...

00:19:210 (5,6,7): Like this?

00:24:210: Add a note here?
01:09:810: Like this?
01:23:610 (3): Delete this note?
01:56:410 (1): Remove NC.
02:17:410: Add a note here?
02:24:210 (3): Delete?
02:38:010 (1): Delete finish?

[Hard]

00:22:610 (3,4): I suggest this:

After, add clap in 00:23:410.
00:35:610 (4): Remove this note? and add note in 00:35:810 and 00:36:210.
00:38:810 (3): Move this slider to 00:39:010, end the slider in 00:39:210 and then add a note in 00:39:410.
00:41:810: Same as I suggested in 00:22:610.
00:43:410: Add a note here?
00:46:210 (2): Remove clap here.
00:51:610 (2): Remove this note. After, add a note in 00:51:810.
01:04:410 (8): Same as I suggested in 00:51:610.
01:20:410 (3,4): Remove this note? After, add a note in 01:20:610 and another note in 01:21:010.
01:26:810 (8): Same as I suggested in 01:20:410.
01:29:210 (7): Remove one repeat.
01:36:410 (8): Remove this note? After add a note in 01:36:610.
01:38:810 (4): End the slider in 01:39:210, and add note in 01:39:410.
01:46:010 (3): Delete slider. After, add notes in 01:46:210, in 01:46:410 and 01:46:610.
01:49:210 (4): Delete note.
01:53:210 (1): Add Finish?
02:18:210: Add a note?
02:27:410: ^
02:24:410 (6): Same as 01:46:010
02:30:810 (3): ^
02:34:010 (5): ^
02:37:210 (5): Delete note.

[Insane]

Looks good for me.

Nice map!
And sorry for poor english ><

GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Hi! As you requested in my modding queue.

Only suggestions.

[General]
Remove "Letterbox during breaks", i think it is not necessary.
This map has many whistles...I suggest you remove some. I'll take some from Easy as an example.
00:01:210 (1)
00:02:010 (2)
00:02:810 (3)
I think these whistles sound bad.

[Easy]

00:50:810 (3): End the slider in 00:51:410 to following vocal? Suggestion.
02:23:610: Suggestion, move this slider to 02:33:410 and end in 02:34:010? I think follow more the vocal.
02:41:210 (1): Remove finish? Suggestion.
02:43:610: Add a note here, and in 02:44:010? Another Suggestion.



[Normal]
Here I didn't see many problems with whistles...

00:19:210 (5,6,7): Like this?

00:24:210: Add a note here?
01:09:810: Like this? [attachment=1:79c1b]screenshot016.jpg[/attachment:79c1b]
01:23:610 (3): Delete this note?
01:56:410 (1): Remove NC.
02:17:410: Add a note here?
02:24:210 (3): Delete?
02:38:010 (1): Delete finish?

[Hard]

00:22:610 (3,4): I suggest this:
[attachment=0:79c1b]screenshot019.jpg[/attachment:79c1b]
After, add clap in 00:23:410.
00:35:610 (4): Remove this note? and add note in 00:35:810 and 00:36:210.
00:38:810 (3): Move this slider to 00:39:010, end the slider in 00:39:210 and then add a note in 00:39:410.
00:41:810: Same as I suggested in 00:22:610.
00:43:410: Add a note here?
00:46:210 (2): Remove clap here.
00:51:610 (2): Remove this note. After, add a note in 00:51:810.
01:04:410 (8): Same as I suggested in 00:51:610.
01:20:410 (3,4): Remove this note? After, add a note in 01:20:610 and another note in 01:21:010.
01:26:810 (8): Same as I suggested in 01:20:410.
01:29:210 (7): Remove one repeat.
01:36:410 (8): Remove this note? After add a note in 01:36:610.
01:38:810 (4): End the slider in 01:39:210, and add note in 01:39:410.
01:46:010 (3): Delete slider. After, add notes in 01:46:210, in 01:46:410 and 01:46:610.
01:49:210 (4): Delete note.
01:53:210 (1): Add Finish?
02:18:210: Add a note?
02:27:410: ^
02:24:410 (6): Same as 01:46:010
02:30:810 (3): ^
02:34:010 (5): ^
02:37:210 (5): Delete note.

[Insane]

Looks good for me.

Nice map!
And sorry for poor english ><

I'll reply your mod during weekend, thanks for your mod & star for now <3
kageven
1 post
Joined October 2010
kageven
very good!! :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

kageven wrote:

very good!! :)
Thank you <3
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Oh, you changed to TV Size :D
take one star~
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Oh, you changed to TV Size :D
take one star~
Yeah ... too lazy for Full Ver. xD
Thank you for the star <33333
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
yea, i kinda got lazy, and i forgot, but here's my diff lol.

http://puu.sh/FIGS
GiNa
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Joined September 2010
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GiNa

winber1 wrote:

yea, i kinda got lazy, and i forgot, but here's my diff lol.

http://puu.sh/FIGS
Thank you very much
Added and moved to pending :3
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
8D

General
Pretty good
delete osb if you feel like it

Easy
00:05:410 (3) - Make this curvy like 00:02:210 (3) -
00:15:010 (1) - Delete NC, kinda useless imo
00:21:410 (1) - ^
00:53:410 (1) - ^
00:56:610 (2) - Make a 1/1 to follow the vocal's flow
01:00:210 (3) - Ctrl + J might be better contrast 00:58:210 (1) -
01:26:210 (1) - Maybe add a note with a Finish right before the spinner? idk

Normal
00:02:210 (3,4,5) - Try a 1/1 slider with reverse, it's easier for a normal http://puu.sh/I5RH
00:08:010 (3) - Try reverse slider to lessen the streams, bumps down the star rating hopefully.. up to you http://puu.sh/I5Tc
00:16:610 (1,2) - Try slider, fits the slurry vocals, maybe use 00:17:410 (3) - and Ctrl+ J
01:26:210 (1) - Same as Easy

Hard
00:37:810 (6) - NC? Kinda confusing after 00:36:810 (3,4) -
01:25:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase spacing, more exciting for the end of a song :lol:

Winber1's Insane
Change diff name to "winber1's Insane" since his name is lowercase?

00:16:610 (1) - Ctrl + R for better play imo
00:32:610 (1) - Finish
01:07:610 (11) - NC, delete NC 01:07:810 (1) -, probably easier to read when it's kinda clumped like that?
sexy streams

Cute skin xD Good luck meeeee
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

LunarSakuya wrote:

8D　xD

General
Pretty good
delete osb if you feel like it 　I'm too lazy to do a full submit LOL

Easy
00:05:410 (3) - Make this curvy like 00:02:210 (3) - 　Fixed
00:15:010 (1) - Delete NC, kinda useless imo　^
00:21:410 (1) - ^　^
00:53:410 (1) - ^　^
00:56:610 (2) - Make a 1/1 to follow the vocal's flow　Fixed
01:00:210 (3) - Ctrl + J might be better contrast 00:58:210 (1) - 　Fixed
01:26:210 (1) - Maybe add a note with a Finish right before the spinner? idk　Sure

Normal
00:02:210 (3,4,5) - Try a 1/1 slider with reverse, it's easier for a normal　Fixed
00:08:010 (3) - Try reverse slider to lessen the streams, bumps down the star rating hopefully.. up to you　Fixed
00:16:610 (1,2) - Try slider, fits the slurry vocals, maybe use 00:17:410 (3) - and Ctrl+ J　Fixed
01:26:210 (1) - Same as Easy　Fixed

Hard
00:37:810 (6) - NC? Kinda confusing after 00:36:810 (3,4) - 　Fixed
01:25:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - Increase spacing, more exciting for the end of a song :lol: 　TRUE

Winber1's Insane
Change diff name to "winber1's Insane" since his name is lowercase?　It's okay, he made a tons of diffs for me, and everything was with "W"

Cute skin xD Good luck meeeee　They are so CUTEEEEE. And THANK YOU ME
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
yay now i can have some fun :D. anyways mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
you have no breaks, so disable the letterbox during breaks.
can you do a full submission? there's no BG showing in the thumbnail for me...

[Easy]
idk about you but the settings don't fit with a mid bpm song like this...increase everything but the CS by 1. i think by doing this, it'll flow a lot smoother to the song, especially the guitar in the beginning.
00:00:610 (1,2) - how about to make it easier, remove (2), add a repeat on (1) and then a circle on (2). it'll represent the introduction to the song and a good one IMO.
00:03:810 (1,2) - ^
00:10:610 (2) - this overlap under (4) bothers me the most throughout the whole song. to make it neater, do Ctrl+H as the slider is fully visible to see for beginners since nothing is covering this slider.
00:46:210 (3,4,5) - i think that this pattern looks had for beginners, especially if the sliders are 1/2 sliders in a weird rhythm. i think it'd be easier if you can remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/1 since it flows to the vocals a bit smoother.
00:54:610 (4) - delete this circle. it'll be consistent with your other patterns in the song.
01:05:410 (2,3,1) - how about arranging these notes like this? basically, if you can make (2,3) curved sliders, the flow would continue from (1).
01:15:010 - add a 1/1 slider or 2 circles here? dw beginners have plenty of time to get to this note since there's a 1/1 gap.
hmm to keep the diff balance from normal, add notes and try to increase the star rating to 2 stars at least. since normal has 4 stars, i find it odd that this is less than 2 stars.

[Normal]
hmm how about increasing the OD by 1 to keep the diff balanced in normal?
00:05:410 (3) - hmm instead of doing the same pattern, try doing this: remove the repeat and add a circle in its place to change up the pattern in the song. i think doing the same pattern at least twice makes it a bit too boring for players IMO.
00:39:810 (2,3) - try doing this for a smoother flow and tell me what you think.
01:14:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm do Ctrl+J for these notes. that spinner-osu file is covering the 1st 3 notes which makes it hard for some players to see.
the patterns can be a bit neater. but i can feel in the flow in this diff. gj :).

[Hard]
same as normal about the OD in hard.
00:03:910 - since you did a 1/4 slider at the previous combo, add a circle here to represent a 1/4 triplet, similar to the 1/4 repeat slider.
00:04:710 - ^
00:24:010 (4,5) - i think a 1/1 slider would fit with this part since it's following the long pause in the vocals, so remove the 2 circles and add a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal in the song.
00:41:310 - remove this circle. there's nothing in the song that changes. just the long hold in the bass.
00:49:010 (3) - i don't like this repeat slider. it doesn't fit with the vocals at all for this part. remove this slider and i suggest adding a 1/2 slider and a 1/1 slider to follow vocals. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said.
00:57:410 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a a 1/4 kick slider to make it a bit easier for players, and it'll give off a nice pattern to the next slider since it's another 1/4 kick slider.

[Winber1's Insane]
00:13:410 (1) - i think you forgot a finish here. add it to match the cymbals in the song.
00:47:810 (9) - how about a NC here? it follows the instrumental in the song, and i feel that the combo is too long IMO.
00:51:010 (8) - ^
00:54:210 (10) - ^
01:06:010 (4) - remove this circle. it'll be consistent with the previous combo.
if you want, fix the combos at the next kiai like the ones i suggested. i can't say them all because i'm half asleep :(.

I guess that's it. GL :D
GiNa
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Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa
Byakugan249's Mod

Byakugan249 wrote:

yay now i can have some fun :D. anyways mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
you have no breaks, so disable the letterbox during breaks.　Fixed
can you do a full submission? there's no BG showing in the thumbnail for me...　Done, but there's no thumbnail to me still

[Easy]
idk about you but the settings don't fit with a mid bpm song like this...increase everything but the CS by 1. i think by doing this, it'll flow a lot smoother to the song, especially the guitar in the beginning.　Fixed
00:00:610 (1,2) - how about to make it easier, remove (2), add a repeat on (1) and then a circle on (2). it'll represent the introduction to the song and a good one IMO.　Fixed
00:03:810 (1,2) - ^　^
00:10:610 (2) - this overlap under (4) bothers me the most throughout the whole song. to make it neater, do Ctrl+H as the slider is fully visible to see for beginners since nothing is covering this slider.　Fixed
00:46:210 (3,4,5) - i think that this pattern looks had for beginners, especially if the sliders are 1/2 sliders in a weird rhythm. i think it'd be easier if you can remove (4) and extend (3) by 1/1 since it flows to the vocals a bit smoother.　Fixed
00:54:610 (4) - delete this circle. it'll be consistent with your other patterns in the song.　Fixed
01:05:410 (2,3,1) - how about arranging these notes like this? basically, if you can make (2,3) curved sliders, the flow would continue from (1).　Sure
01:15:010 - add a 1/1 slider or 2 circles here? dw beginners have plenty of time to get to this note since there's a 1/1 gap.　I added 2 circles
hmm to keep the diff balance from normal, add notes and try to increase the star rating to 2 stars at least. since normal has 4 stars, i find it odd that this is less than 2 stars.　I think it's okay, the star system is broken imo

[Normal]
hmm how about increasing the OD by 1 to keep the diff balanced in normal?　k
00:05:410 (3) - hmm instead of doing the same pattern, try doing this: remove the repeat and add a circle in its place to change up the pattern in the song. i think doing the same pattern at least twice makes it a bit too boring for players IMO.　Fixed
00:39:810 (2,3) - try doing this for a smoother flow and tell me what you think.　Fixed
01:14:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm do Ctrl+J for these notes. that spinner-osu file is covering the 1st 3 notes which makes it hard for some players to see.　Fixed
the patterns can be a bit neater. but i can feel in the flow in this diff. gj :).　Ty

[Hard]
same as normal about the OD in hard.　Fixed
00:03:910 - since you did a 1/4 slider at the previous combo, add a circle here to represent a 1/4 triplet, similar to the 1/4 repeat slider.　Nope D: I don't start a triplet on white tick
00:04:710 - ^　^
00:24:010 (4,5) - i think a 1/1 slider would fit with this part since it's following the long pause in the vocals, so remove the 2 circles and add a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal in the song.　Fixed
00:41:310 - remove this circle. there's nothing in the song that changes. just the long hold in the bass.　I don't get, no circle is there D:
00:49:010 (3) - i don't like this repeat slider. it doesn't fit with the vocals at all for this part. remove this slider and i suggest adding a 1/2 slider and a 1/1 slider to follow vocals. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said.　Fixed
00:57:410 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a a 1/4 kick slider to make it a bit easier for players, and it'll give off a nice pattern to the next slider since it's another 1/4 kick slider.　Fixed

I guess that's it. GL :D　Thank you for the mod !
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Winber1's Insane]
00:13:410 (1) - i think you forgot a finish here. add it to match the cymbals in the song. k
00:47:810 (9) - how about a NC here? it follows the instrumental in the song, and i feel that the combo is too long IMO.
00:51:010 (8) - ^
00:54:210 (10) - ^ no to the above. It feels weird to me to put a new combo there. doesn't really fit to be honest, and the combo isn't that long. 14 is ok.
01:06:010 (4) - remove this circle. it'll be consistent with the previous combo. no to this because this was purposely done, 1) to make to more interesting, symmetry yet slightly different and 2) because the suggests it imo. there's a small little note that's played on this beat.
if you want, fix the combos at the next kiai like the ones i suggested. i can't say them all because i'm half asleep :(.

I guess that's it. GL :D

LunarSakuya wrote:

Winber1's Insane
Change diff name to "winber1's Insane" since his name is lowercase? as gina has said... no. I do it on purpose :S

00:16:610 (1) - Ctrl + R for better play imo ok
00:32:610 (1) - Finishok
01:07:610 (11) - NC, delete NC 01:07:810 (1) -, probably easier to read when it's kinda clumped like that? I Ctrl+R'ed it. it was unclear in the first place so yea. Not sure if this makes it any more clear lol
sexy streams

Cute skin xD Good luck meeeee
http://puu.sh/J8VK

meh. i didn't forget about your request yet just saying. it's just that i have summer work and then i get home and i play osu for like 2 hours and then i'm like meh and i don't feel like doing anything anymore lolllll
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
GiNa

winber1 wrote:

http://puu.sh/J8VK

meh. i didn't forget about your request yet just saying. it's just that i have summer work and then i get home and i play osu for like 2 hours and then i'm like meh and i don't feel like doing anything anymore lolllll
It's alright. I'm fine with it.
Btw, I'll update your diff with the next update.
I'm so lazy to go on osu.
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
sorry for late Gina chan!

[overall]:
  1. AudioLeadIn change 2000
[winber1's Insane]:
  1. 00:47:810 (9) - Add new combo looks better to me combo 15 so long
  2. 00:51:010 (8) - ^
  3. 00:51:010 (8,9) - It is very random jump.. try to shorten the distance
  4. 01:00:610 (9) - Add new combo
  5. 01:03:810 (8) - ^
  6. 01:07:010 (7) - Add new combo
  7. 01:07:810 (1) - messy new combo because overlap note remove new combo?
  8. 01:26:310 (1) - doesn't fit soft finish change to Normal finish
[Hard]:
  1. 01:26:310 (1) - same to winber's Insane
  2. 01:28:310 - useless green line
[Normal]:
  1. Looks fine
[Easy]:
  1. 00:56:610 (2) - add reverse? and add note 00:57:810?
Good luck with ranked
Nice map!
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
As per your mod request via IRC.

[General]

Please use tick rate 2. It should be used for most non-1/3 maps and fits well with this one.
Timing is off. At the beginning of the song, the my hits keep getting registered as about 20-25 ms late. As the song progresses, that number gets lower and lower. Sometimes, it just becomes randomly offbeat. You may need to ask someone who's good at timing to help you with this.

[Easy]

00:17:810 (2) - This slider isn't following the vocals very well. I suggest dividing this up into a circle and a shorter slider, like this.
00:35:810 (1) - Having this placed at the reverse of the previous slider makes the flow choppy. Perhaps you could move it to the side of the slider.
00:37:010 (2) - This slider is also not following the vocals well. Do the same thing I suggested before.
01:00:210 (3,1) - The overlap between the ends of these sliders is uncharacteristic as to how you mapped the rest of the map. It's the only time it ever happens, making it stick out like a sore thumb.

[Normal]

00:02:210 (3,4,1) - Even though the spacing between (3) and (4) is technically correct, it looks odd unevenly spaced due to (4) being away from the end of (3). I suggest moving (4) to the middle, like this.
00:18:610 (3,4,5) - Since you are following the vocals, this beat placement does not fit at all. Move (4) to 00:18:810 (4) and delete (5) in order to fix this.
00:34:610 (3,1) - I love how you used delayed blanketing here. It's very neat!

[Hard]

00:12:810 (8) - Move this one grid down to be aligned with (7).

[Winber1's Insane]

00:57:410 (1,2,3,4) - Space these out a bit further so that they don't overlap. It looks a bit more aesthetically pleasing.

Good luck!
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