IceBeam wrote:

okay,after tonns of conversations,we came to conclusion that offset is 311

now time to check the map fully =3


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00:25:947 (3,4) - I got 100/50 here,seriously how about adding a reverse to 00:25:038 (2) and then another note to 00:26:492
you're free to remap it in other way,but please,fix it,rhytm is awkward now.. ok, fixed in another way
00:35:583 (1) - remove new combo? I don't see any reason to keep it,and stacked 00:35:038 (1,1) look horrible Well, it may look horrible for some but I think it fits the strong beat on that note and NC supports it
00:38:492 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it be symmetrical? nope, i think it's ok
00:58:129 (3) - shorten to 00:58:856? it would be perfect ok
01:01:038 (2) - ^ again shorten by 1/1 nope sry
01:07:038 (5) - it should be extended to 01:07:947 imo You mean shortened xD sure
01:33:765 (1) - fix distance,it's too close fix
01:44:856 (2) - I think reverse is wrong =\ use these notes? (look at the timeline) Fixed but in another way

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02:51:947 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier? ok
02:57:765 (1) - ^ ok

[Insane]
00:04:311 (2) - fix distance,and anyway,I wouldn't recommend to jump in slowdown parts..like 00:02:492 (7,1) - it breaks a spacing a bit The distance is properly distance snapped ^^ also I do prefer litlle jumps , especially in slowdown parts
00:04:674 (4) - also,yeah,it's sooo hard to read it..it's totally hidden by hitbursts,even an approach circle fix
00:39:947 (5) - stacking doesn't occur here. please,unstack them manually for 1 grid (lvl4) manually,I got a bub-pop because of that i don't understand orz
01:04:674 (1,2,3,4) - make them symmetrical,please
01:05:765 (1,2,3,4) - and these jumps pissed me off a bit I'd like to see something like this at least,it would improve the flow:

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Improved flow, just a little different
01:57:765 - add another note here,and start spinner from 01:57:947 then Nope, i want to keep the zig-zag 5 circle pattern, also "prayer" starts where it is right now
02:22:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it should be 1/3 stream actually oh didn't notice at all, thanks
02:24:311 - silence this note okay
02:29:765 (6) - place it a little farther please ok
02:47:220 - again a note here and start spinner 1/2 later? same like the other suggestion
03:05:947 - silence it,either It is silenced already lol

I think this is it
I use too much smiles in mod posts..

IceBeam wrote:

okay,after tonns of conversations,we came to conclusion that offset is 311

now time to check the map fully

[Kuro Easy]
first of all,have to say I have a different vision of mapping
it's easier to hit objects with sensible rhytm,personally..
so actually I can't mod this difficulty well,cause I'd remap almost every pattern.. =/
thus,only few suggestions and major issues

00:09:220 (3,4) - consider to stack them. the distance is totally wrong,you could solve this by using new combo mark at the (4)-th circle,but it won't help to read it well for beginners Stacked.
00:11:765 (x) - drag a break here No.
00:49:583 (1,1) - there's less then a second space between them :< not good for the easiest difficulty,so I'd suggest to remove the spinner and extend 00:47:947 ' slider up to 00:49:583 No.
01:28:674 (x) - there're lots of short breaks,but this one is totally unrankable,remove it Why? It has the same length of other breaks.
01:32:674 (4) - why 1/2 slider? :\ it doesn't fit with the rest of the map :\
01:44:856 (1) - same as 00:49:583 (1),extending 01:43:220 (1) to next red tick No.
02:01:038 (4) - again,a bit out and confusing,I'd rather make a reverse-slider from 02:01:038,repeating at 02:01:583
02:25:765 (x) - drag a break here Done.
02:56:310 (1,2,3) - it's a bad idea,you should remove (3)-rd object,and make a reverse-slider using (1,2,3) notes instead,and start spinner from 02:57:583 as always I've edited in another way.
03:00:674 (1,2,3) - again,in easier difficulties,try to keep mixing white-red ticks within sliders,not circles,especially between 2 spinners

IceBeam wrote:

Recheck time~

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00:32:129 (3) - it's not symmetrical,the middle tick should cross the "y" axis fix
00:38:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think it's ok >_> it doesn't look intentional,it looks untidy.. fix

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02:47:220 (4) - same..objects that used to be symmetrical should follow symmetria..if they don't it - it looks like a mapper's mistake fix..

[Insane]
00:39:947 (5) - during gameplay stack doesn't occur,and zero stacks are unrankable (I had a popped bubble because of that)

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switch off grid snap and manually unstack them
Looks perfectly fine for me

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all these issues aren't that hard to fix,just believe they're neccessary
otherwise it's fine for bubble

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Kuro Easy]
02:01:038 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty Changed.

1. fixed messed break at 00:11:765 in Kuro Easy
2. fixed inconsistent kiai sections in Kite's Hard

NotShinta wrote:

Kuro Easy:
-- Perhaps make the title possessive, i.e. 'Kuro's Easy'. Suggestion, of course. There is a reason behind it.
- 00:03:220 (3) - Whistle here, maybe, baby? Makes it slightly more interesting, in my opinion. Done.
- 01:07:038 (1) - I think this spinner is a bit too short for an Easy, as well as sudden (1/2 after hitcircle). I'm not sure Easy players can handle this. (In fact, most of the short spinners could probably replaced with s slider or something for the better. Think about it.) I did some try, but I didn't like it. (btw you can take 300 by spinning at ~150 spm, so I think that should be ok in that case )

Dangaard wrote:

goodjob

Arusha Shuna wrote:

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ARE YOU THAR?

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