1. Timing:well,the offset I got: 1546(-7) ,please renap all note if you want to change it xD also please check the mod before consider this!
2. Oh man,you need to disable the countdown!

1. 00:36:335 (1,2) - This slider overlap seems ugly imo,change it if you want.
2. 00:39:813 (1,2) - ^Same! (oh,I won't note this again)
3. 01:23:292 (4) - Too follow your new combo pattern,please add a new combo here and remove new combo at 01:24:161 (1) - .
4. 01:58:944 (4,1,2) - This pattern might make confused to newbie because (2)- will be coverd by (4)- 's skin elemet!Oh,please look at the photo!
   
   look at this

   
5. 01:52:422 (2,1,2) - Forgot this lol This may make confused also.

1. 00:25:900 (x) - Spinner doesn't fit here too much!Please use note/slider to instead of spinner D:
2. 00:41:118 (4,1) - If I were you,I would use note instead of slider I'm sure it's not that hard to play with 1/2 click in Normal diff.
3. 00:55:031 (4,1) - ^Same!
4. 01:14:161 (1) - Please add a new combo here!Because this combo length is longer than others,you should consistent the combo length!
5. 02:15:248 (4) - A little nazi here,try to make (4)- align with (3.5)- ?It'll looks better imo.

1. 00:39:813 (4) – Oh,this triplet seems really weird!It extremely not fit the music at all,I think some simple 1/2 is good enough here.
2. 00:57:639 (2,3,4) – Well,probably align with (1)- the end of the slider?That should be looks better.
3. 02:22:422 (1) –I have a tiny suggestion here: Probably try to symmetrical with 02:21:552 (4) -?
4. I highly recommend you map this diff to the end because you did a full-mapping in Insane diff and half mapping in Easy and Normal diff,so I you you should do a full mapping in Hard diff.

1. 00:09:813 (2) –Please remove soft-finish here because here doesn’t have a accent beat so it doesn’t fit for a finish.
2. 00:23:618 (4) –To follow your hitsound pattern,please add a whistle here!
3. 00:27:096 (4) -^ Same!
4. 00:43:183 (x) –Probably add a note here to follow the instrument but you need to adjust the spacing if you do that!
5. 01:58:944 (7) –New combo here to consistent your combo pattern.Totally my suggestion only,ignore it if you disagree.
6. 02:10:031 (3,4) – Man,the spacing are inconsistent here,did you make it on purpose?If not,please make it.
7. 02:12:857 (5,6,7,8) – Little nazi here:This is a unperfect square,probably replace 02:13:509 (8) - ?
8. 02:34:596 ~ 02:47:639 (x) – No please!These finish doesn’t fit the music and you put them too much…

kanpakyin wrote:

ignore it if you disagree

NotShinta wrote:

All things are suggestions unless explicitly stated otherwise, as always.

General:
- You could use tick rate 2 in all difficulties. It adds a nice subtle sound to sliders longer than 1/2 and generally makes them look more even.
- 01:24:596 - It'd be nice if you dragged the break to here or 01:25:031 (literally drag the start of the word "Break" until it's just after the beat). Either of those give the break a nice lead in which fits the song gorgeously.
I'll discuss these with IceBeam and Vass_Bass. But I agree with you

Hard:
- 00:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These 1/4 triples are quite surprising within the context of the map, considering the others are 1/4 repeats. In fact, none of them seem to follow anything in the song and would work better as 1/2, but as they're repeats I'll let them pass.

Normal:
- Long as it is, it'd be great if you mapped the rest of the song, like in Hard and Insane. It's a bit of a wasted opportunity and Normal players might feel a bit cheated if a lot of this difficulty is unmapped.
- 01:45:031 (4,5) - With in-game stacking, this overlaps the slider more than it should. To fix this, you could respace 5, like the previous combo.

all fixed~!
I enjoyed each difficulty of this map very much. These are the only real problems that stuck out to me, consider them all and PM me if you want a recheck.

NotShinta wrote:

All things are suggestions unless explicitly stated otherwise, as always.

General:
- You could use tick rate 2 in all difficulties. It adds a nice subtle sound to sliders longer than 1/2 and generally makes them look more even.
- 01:24:596 - It'd be nice if you dragged the break to here or 01:25:031 (literally drag the start of the word "Break" until it's just after the beat). Either of those give the break a nice lead in which fits the song gorgeously.

NotShinta wrote:

Beamsy:
- Long as it is, it'd be great if you mapped the rest of the song, like in Hard and Insane. It's a bit of a wasted opportunity and Easy players might feel a bit cheated if a lot of this difficulty is unmapped. Copypaste is awesome.
- You could rename this to "Beamsy's Easy" or similar to clarify what difficulty this is and that it's a guest mapper. It is kind of obvious though, so it's not too important.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Vass]
A lot of unsnapped inherited timing sections, make sure to double check your hitsounds! That's my fault~

[Normal]
03:23:505 (1,1,1) - These spinners dont fit at all, if they did normally they would be here in the other difficulties too. fixed~

I'm sorry but Vass' diff needs serious fixing (maybe might need remapping)I'm gonna talk with her

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Beamsy]
Why didnt you finish mapping the difficulty?, there's only like half a minute remaining ._.

IceBeam wrote:

I know it's not an excuse,but at the time I mapped easy - normal was the same length to mine
I don't even know how to map with this style now (it's a bit old,yep) and sadly I don't have much time now to map more..

[Taiko Collab]
Center Taiko difficulty settings, except HP drain, i'd suggest an HP drain of 4.
00:15:896 (65) - Katsu instead sounds better to me. fixed
00:19:483 (90) - ^ fixed
00:30:244 (168) - Big Katsu instead? If big note is used it sounds lonely, so no
00:42:201 (238,239,240,241,242) - Huh? i dont hear any stream on the music. There's a violin stream.

• 
  The green combo color is kinda ugly, it's so dark compared to the others.

1. 01:24:592 - It might be nice to drag this break out to the big white tick at 01:25:027.
2. 02:47:853 - Drag this break out to the next white tick? Right now it isn't dragged at all.
   
   beambeamBEAMBEAM

1. Tickrate 1
2. Diff settings are really low on this. In fact, the HP drain is less than the easy!
      AR +1 OD +1 HP +2 at least.
3. 01:24:592 - It might be nice to drag this break out to the big white tick at 01:25:027.
4. 01:38:940 (3) - New combo, this would better fit the song IMO
5. 01:45:896 (1) - This slider is colliding with the score in the top right. It would look better if it wasn't touching.
6. 01:57:635 (4,5) - These two objects are touching. It would look better if they weren't
7. 02:48:070 - Drag this break out to the next white tick?
8. 03:28:940 (1) - Remove new combo, no need for one here
   
   Lovely.

1. HP +1 and OD +1, the settings are very easy right now and this is a hard!
2. 00:38:940 (1) - This is overmapping, there isn't a distinct sound at 00:39:048. I highly recommend changing this.
3. 00:39:809 (4) - Same as above, the middle beat is overmapped.
4. 00:43:288 (1) - Same as above.
5. 00:48:505 (1) - Same as above.
6. 00:49:375 (4) - This one is okay because it has sound in the song to match it. The taiko'ers are using 1/6 to do these, but you don't have to.
7. 01:07:635 (3) - Overmapping again D:
8. 01:24:592 - It might be nice to drag this break out to the big white tick at 01:25:027.
9. 01:38:940 (3) - New combo, this would better fit the song IMO
10. 01:38:505 (2) - Replace this whistle with a finish.
11. 01:41:983 (5) - Add whistle? I think it would sound nice
12. 01:55:462 (1) - Overmapped repeat
13. 01:58:070 (2) - Same as above
14. 02:09:375 (1) - Same as above
15. 02:11:983 (1) - Same as above
16. 02:34:592 (3) - Same as above. Map's looking very nice, that's why these are the only things I'm mentioning.
17. 02:36:331 (1) - Same as above.
18. 02:48:070 - Drag this break out to the next white tick?
19. 03:12:853 (1) - This is the only double repeat slider in the entire difficulty. It's pretty unexpected; you might want to change it.
    
    Nice difficulty! Fun while not being over the top insane.

1. Beginning feels a little overmapped, you might want to consider using less dons and kats
2. Consider raising the HP drain +1.
3. Since backgrounds are shifted down in taiko, the bottom of the background isn't visible. If that part of the background were colored black, it would save about 90kb.
4. 02:34:375 - Remove these two inheriting sections, all they do is toggle the kiai and the other difficulties don't do that.

Beginning feels a little overmapped, you might want to consider using less dons and kats

1. 4 objects are not snapped! Check AIMod for details.

Charles445 wrote:

Don't give KD for this post.

Recheck number one!

Taiko Collab

1. 4 objects are not snapped! Check AIMod for details. OK fixed ~

Looking good besides those unsnapped.

Charles445 wrote:

Don't give KD for this post.

Recheck number one!

Taiko Collab

1. 4 objects are not snapped! Check AIMod for details.

Looking good besides those unsnapped.

Qliphoth wrote:

Haters gonna Hate, bla bla bla.

Really, More Bad Apple is too bad for osu!