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Katsuri
General
Nothing~
Kantan~
01:14:422 (1,1) - This spinner end and the next note are so close to the next note on Timeline, I suggest you finish the Spinner here 01:17:566 -and add a Finish on :3

Fuutsu~
Good atm, but those 4000 points spinners on an 2,5 stars difficulty makes the map Hard for new players.
Muzukashii~
I'm not that good on sliderart, but I tryed to make a heart for you :3


00:11:967 - Don't know about break, but I think it's just spamming the play screen, I suggest you remove :3

Oni~
00:05:267 (5) - Hard to see on the first time I play.
Tanmak
Hello~ ;)

[Kantan]
01:18:393 (1) - 왕초보에게는 조금 어려운 부분일지도 모르겠네요. 제 생각에는 스피너 한참 돌릴 때 갑자기 노트가 나타나면 당황할수도 있을겁니다.

[Futsuu]
00:46:627 (1) - 위의 [Kantan]과 같은 내용입니다. 위 난이도 보다 수준은 높은 난이도이지만 그래도 영 그렇네요.
00:49:274 (1) - 위와 동일. 다만 이것은 많이 헷갈릴지도 모르겠네요.

[Muzukashii]
01:28:318 (3) - unsnapped.

[Oni]
Taikosu의 특성인지는 모르겠지만 일반노트가 슬라이드 노트에 비해 상당히 많은 것 같네요. 하지만 이것은 굳이 안고치셔도 됩니다. :P

01:28:318 (3) - unsnapped.


Star~
Topic Starter
arien666

Katsuri wrote:

General
Nothing~
Kantan~
01:14:422 (1,1) - This spinner end and the next note are so close to the next note on Timeline, I suggest you finish the Spinner here inb4, Taiko authentic and It doesn't matter well ;_; Since just bonus scorez orz
01:17:566 -and add a Finish on :3 sorry orz

Fuutsu~
Good atm, but those 4000 points spinners on an 2,5 stars difficulty makes the map Hard for new players.
Muzukashii~
I'm not that good on sliderart, but I tryed to make a heart for you :3 Thanks for working but I'm not sure if this would be good... (Actually, stacking would be broken if I use this orz)


00:11:967 - Don't know about break, but I think it's just spamming the play screen, I suggest you remove :3 Okay :3

Oni~
00:05:267 (5) - Hard to see on the first time I play. Okay :3 Moved

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~ ;)

[Kantan]
01:18:393 (1) - 왕초보에게는 조금 어려운 부분일지도 모르겠네요. 제 생각에는 스피너 한참 돌릴 때 갑자기 노트가 나타나면 당황할수도 있을겁니다. 일단 고쳤습니다...

[Futsuu]
00:46:627 (1) - 위의 [Kantan]과 같은 내용입니다. 위 난이도 보다 수준은 높은 난이도이지만 그래도 영 그렇네요. 이 이상은 타협점을 보기가 좀 힘든 ㅜㅜ
00:49:274 (1) - 위와 동일. 다만 이것은 많이 헷갈릴지도 모르겠네요. 이 이상은 타협점을 보기가 좀 힘든 ㅜㅜ

[Muzukashii]
01:28:318 (3) - unsnapped. lol missed

[Oni]
Taikosu의 특성인지는 모르겠지만 일반노트가 슬라이드 노트에 비해 상당히 많은 것 같네요. 하지만 이것은 굳이 안고치셔도 됩니다. :P 점수배점때문입니다 ㅜㅜ

01:28:318 (3) - unsnapped. lol missed


Star~
Pizza :3
Kanon
sry for the late,have been busy with exams.

Kantan
00:34:715 (1) - delete? it dont play well here
00:49:274 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - symmetrical?

Futsuu
01:22:364 (4) - new combo?
01:23:687 (7) - ^

Muzukashii
00:45:304 (1) - delete the spin and remake this part? dont play well after the spin
00:48:116 (1,2,3) - use reverse slider here?with speed change slider is better.use note here is not good imo.
01:07:805 (1) - i dont like the shape ._.
01:27:879 (1,2,3) - wrong timing ?try put like this http://puu.sh/2jPy

Oni
a bit hard for me
01:27:879 (1,2,3) - same with Muzukashii

is this anime for small children? :D but song is nice . star~
Topic Starter
arien666

Kanon wrote:

sry for the late,have been busy with exams.

Kantan
00:34:715 (1) - delete? it dont play well here No need to delete ;_;
00:49:274 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - symmetrical? Sorry, It's just Finish-Finish-Normal triangle set so no need of symmetrical thing ;_;

Futsuu
01:22:364 (4) - new combo? As last part, okay.
01:23:687 (7) - ^ As last part, okay.

Muzukashii
00:45:304 (1) - delete the spin and remake this part? dont play well after the spin Long voice, also Taiko-authentic orz
00:48:116 (1,2,3) - use reverse slider here?with speed change slider is better.use note here is not good imo. Actually, 3/4 distance would be hard so fixed :3
01:07:805 (1) - i dont like the shape ._. Why everyone hate heart ;_;???
01:27:879 (1,2,3) - wrong timing ?try put like this http://puu.sh/2jPy Yeah... It sounds better orz, damn Namco

Oni
a bit hard for me
01:27:879 (1,2,3) - same with Muzukashii Yeah... It sounds better orz, damn Namco

is this anime for small children? :D but song is nice . star~
:3
Zelos
ALRITE LETS DO THIS :D

Folder:
All good here!

Kantan:
01:13:098 (7) - this slider is just a bit ugly, maybe try something more like this?


01:21:701 (2) - this is touching the hp Bar. if possible try to fix?

Futsuu:
00:28:098 (3,4,5) - move these to the right one so its centered with notes 1 and 2?

Muzukashii:
01:24:845 (7) - make this slider like slightly prettier? (optional lulz)


01:26:665 (8) - align this directly under the end of slider 7?

Oni:
I saw nothing wrong here!

Star.
Topic Starter
arien666

Zelos wrote:

ALRITE LETS DO THIS :D

Folder:
All good here!

Kantan:
01:13:098 (7) - this slider is just a bit ugly, maybe try something more like this? Okay :3


01:21:701 (2) - this is touching the hp Bar. if possible try to fix? Okay but not sure ;_;

Futsuu:
00:28:098 (3,4,5) - move these to the right one so its centered with notes 1 and 2? Okay :3

Muzukashii:
01:24:845 (7) - make this slider like slightly prettier? (optional lulz) Okay :3


01:26:665 (8) - align this directly under the end of slider 7? Okay :3

Oni:
I saw nothing wrong here!

Star.
:3
kanpakyin
:3
Catch me back to mod this after my exam (18/6 will finish all of the exam)

Edit:
I promised I'll mod this.
So here..

[General]
  1. IMO,1s Lead in is enough.Think about it..
  2. I'm wondering what is yuuka orz...
Other stuff fine..

[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:215(3)-Too noisy if you put a finish here,so remove it?(It's a slider in Taiko mode,so that's fine if you change it,i guess :>)
  2. 01:11:775(3)-New combo here to consistent the play flow
Ok,fair enough.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:46:628(1)-Move this note to central?Because it can reduce the spacing between spinner and note also newbie can catch it easier.
  2. 00:47:290(2)-Stack it if you done the prvious one.
  3. 01:07:805(6)-This slider is a little bit...weird,change another shape if you can?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:116(6)-Add a new combo here because this combo is quite long,new combo it and reduce the length of combo.
  2. 00:05:763(4)-How about Horizontally with (3)-?
  3. 00:48:117(1)-I don't know this slider should snap in 1/3 or 1/4..please check it..
  4. 01:03:090(3)-I just feel weird of a short slider here..probably make it to notes?
  5. 01:07:805(1)-Here has a imperfection heart...Make it more beautiful ;_;?
  6. 01:27:823(1.2.3)-How about reduce spacing?I saw you overall didn't put many jumps on this difficulty.
[Oni]
  1. 00:11:113(1.2.3.4.5.6)-Please snap these notes in 1/3 properly,I can see some notes was snap in 1/6 and it doesn't fit the music(Playback Rate:25%)
  2. 00:40:010(1.2.3)-How about make a jump here?I think it can make more fun.
  3. 01:13:099(1)-Orz..this shape..change another shape if you can.
  4. 01:13:882(1-12)Triplet jump is extremely weird during gameplay,you can reduce the spacing of this or change it to slider triplet.Then may feel better.
:3?
Lissette
Hi~

Oni
00:09:072 (10) - new combo
00:09:568 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:127 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:458 - new combo
00:33:557 (6) - new combo
00:41:498 (6) - new combo

Muzukashii
00:49:274 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to do this: http://puu.sh/2IJT so is easier to follow (there's couple more like this, that I suggest the same~)
01:20:047 (8) - new combo?

Futsuu
00:40:009 (1,2,3) - what about do this instead: http://puu.sh/2IKB

Star~
Topic Starter
arien666

Lissette wrote:

Hi~

Oni
00:09:072 (10) - new combo Okay :3
00:09:568 (1) - remove new combo Okay :3
00:24:127 (1) - remove new combo Okay :3
00:24:458 - new combo Okay :3
00:33:557 (6) - new combo Okay :3
00:41:498 (6) - new combo Okay :3

Muzukashii
00:49:274 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to do this: http://puu.sh/2IJT so is easier to follow (there's couple more like this, that I suggest the same~) Changed except last 2 ones :3
01:20:047 (8) - new combo? Okay :3

Futsuu
00:40:009 (1,2,3) - what about do this instead: http://puu.sh/2IKB Okay :3

Star~
meow :3
Topic Starter
arien666

kanpakyin wrote:

Edit:
I promised I'll mod this.
So here..

[General]
  1. IMO,1s Lead in is enough.Think about it.. Except Kantan, note starts from 200ms so needs 2000ms lead-in orz
  2. I'm wondering what is yuuka orz... Oh, deleted :3
Other stuff fine..

[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:215(3)-Too noisy if you put a finish here,so remove it?(It's a slider in Taiko mode,so that's fine if you change it,i guess :>) Changed into normal :3
  2. 01:11:775(3)-New combo here to consistent the play flow Okay :3
Ok,fair enough.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:46:628(1)-Move this note to central?Because it can reduce the spacing between spinner and note also newbie can catch it easier. Oh, Okay <3
  2. 00:47:290(2)-Stack it if you done the prvious one. Oh, Okay <3
  3. 01:07:805(6)-This slider is a little bit...weird,change another shape if you can? Changed into normal arch
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:116(6)-Add a new combo here because this combo is quite long,new combo it and reduce the length of combo.
  2. 00:05:763(4)-How about Horizontally with (3)-? It's just aligned with (3)'s end point orz
  3. 00:48:117(1)-I don't know this slider should snap in 1/3 or 1/4..please check it.. 1/4 :3
  4. 01:03:090(3)-I just feel weird of a short slider here..probably make it to notes? Okay orz
  5. 01:07:805(1)-Here has a imperfection heart...Make it more beautiful ;_;? Well... It's orz hard to think more so sorry orz
  6. 01:27:823(1.2.3)-How about reduce spacing?I saw you overall didn't put many jumps on this difficulty. Reduced :3
[Oni]
  1. 00:11:113(1.2.3.4.5.6)-Please snap these notes in 1/3 properly,I can see some notes was snap in 1/6 and it doesn't fit the music(Playback Rate:25%) Okay :3
  2. 00:40:010(1.2.3)-How about make a jump here?I think it can make more fun. Okay.
  3. 01:13:099(1)-Orz..this shape..change another shape if you can. Well... This thime would be orz ;_; sorry.
  4. 01:13:882(1-12)Triplet jump is extremely weird during gameplay,you can reduce the spacing of this or change it to slider triplet.Then may feel better. Umm??? Where's that on that timing orz...?
:3?
Pizza :3
Lissette
Bubble~
James2250
-Not 100% if the artist should be 'Uchiyae Yuka' or 'Yuka Uchiyae' but I think the way you have it is correct
-I am guessing you can't change the tick rate on the 0.5 difficulties for authentic reasons?

Kantan:
-Doesn't really need to have the HP Drain at the minimum setting, do at least +1 for it. (I would probably do AR +1 as well but up to you)

Futsuu:
01:13:098 (1) - has the slider tick hidden when playing...not sure how to solve this seeing as you can't change the slider or the tick rate but it isn't a good idea staying as it is

Muzukashii
01:07:805 (1) - looks very while playing odd at the moment, would look better if redone slightly so the start/end points align
Topic Starter
arien666

James2250 wrote:

-Not 100% if the artist should be 'Uchiyae Yuka' or 'Yuka Uchiyae' but I think the way you have it is correct http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109000 'Uchiyae Yuka' is like Japanese style :3.
-I am guessing you can't change the tick rate on the 0.5 difficulties for authentic reasons? Yes orz But I'll consider changing [Muzukashii]'s one :3

Kantan:
-Doesn't really need to have the HP Drain at the minimum setting, do at least +1 for it. (I would probably do AR +1 as well but up to you) AR,HP +1 :3

Futsuu:
01:13:098 (1) - has the slider tick hidden when playing...not sure how to solve this seeing as you can't change the slider or the tick rate but it isn't a good idea staying as it is It's some like osu! glitch so I can't do anything with this ;_; sorry orz

Muzukashii
01:07:805 (1) - looks very while playing odd at the moment, would look better if redone slightly so the start/end points align Re-designed :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/109004
X3
Zekira
[Misc]
-A Kirara BG would fit better IMO.

[General]
-It may just be me but I feel that the vid quality is a bit too high, IDK. That's probably just me though. (10MB for a 90 second vid)
-Offset : 298 (-6 from current)
-I still disapprove of the SV discrepancy. That's just me however. You've established your own TaikOsu rules already and I won't bother with that.

[Kantan]
01:07:804 (4) - saudfhoasdiuf teach me how to make complex sliders like these ;_;

[Futsuu]
00:45:304 (1,1,2,1,1) - one of the reasons why people hate TaikOsus. Unfortunately we can't do anything to change this.
00:53:079 (4) - extreme nazi; seeing as how you have good sliders everywhere else, maybe you can make this a little bit prettier? IDK
01:03:668 (4) - ^

[Muzukashii]
You are center-hugging. AGAIN. I thought you already got out of your syndrome of that o_o
00:49:606 (2,3) - for some reason I don't like this at all. note-slider-slider instead of slider-slider-note, perhaps?
00:52:253 (2,3) - ^
01:00:193 (2,3) - just like this one, yeah.
01:03:090 (3,4) - you are beginning to confuse me with your inconsistency, lol.
01:07:805 (1) - [opinion]can't you revise the stuff here to make the center of this slider centered?[/opinion] Also you have to teach me to awesomeslider please ;_;

[Oni]
Center-hugging. AGAIN.
No awesome sliders? lol
Topic Starter
arien666

Zekira wrote:

[Misc]
-A Kirara BG would fit better IMO.

[General]
-It may just be me but I feel that the vid quality is a bit too high, IDK. That's probably just me though. (10MB for a 90 second vid)
-Offset : 298 (-6 from current) So, that's why you should come back to MAT ;___;
-I still disapprove of the SV discrepancy. That's just me however. You've established your own TaikOsu rules already and I won't bother with that. Since it's good for grid-snapping orz

[Kantan]
01:07:804 (4) - saudfhoasdiuf teach me how to make complex sliders like these ;_;

[Futsuu]
00:45:304 (1,1,2,1,1) - one of the reasons why people hate TaikOsus. Unfortunately we can't do anything to change this.
00:53:079 (4) - extreme nazi; seeing as how you have good sliders everywhere else, maybe you can make this a little bit prettier? IDK Moved tick little but I dunno orz
01:03:668 (4) - ^ Moved tick little but I dunno orz

[Muzukashii]
You are center-hugging. AGAIN. I thought you already got out of your syndrome of that o_o
00:49:606 (2,3) - for some reason I don't like this at all. note-slider-slider instead of slider-slider-note, perhaps? Since 3/4 timing gap might be weird imo orz
00:52:253 (2,3) - ^ Since 3/4 timing gap might be weird imo orz
01:00:193 (2,3) - just like this one, yeah.
01:03:090 (3,4) - you are beginning to confuse me with your inconsistency, lol.
01:07:805 (1) - [opinion]can't you revise the stuff here to make the center of this slider centered?[/opinion] Also you have to teach me to awesomeslider please ;_; Sorry it's for note going I guess orz

[Oni]
Center-hugging. AGAIN.
No awesome sliders? lol

:3
phonic
Nice Map


Your map wishes Rnked certain.

This map lover ;)
Louis Cyphre
[Kantan]
01:28:314 - add note with finish sound?

[Fuutsu]
00:33:220 (3) - better like this? http://puu.sh/7eom
344,94,33220,2,0,B|316:40|256:25|196:40|168:94,1,216
00:46:621 (1) - too soon after spinner
00:49:268 (1) - ^
01:28:314 - add note with finish sound?

[Muzukashii]
Od-1?

00:11:632 - add some notes here?
01:07:799 (1) - place heart in the center ♥ ~
01:22:192 (7) - down one grid
01:22:854 (3) - right one grid

[Oni]
00:11:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read
01:13:093 (1) - i'm lovin' it

:>
Topic Starter
arien666

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Kantan]
01:28:314 - add note with finish sound? I don't think it is necessery ;___;

[Fuutsu]
00:33:220 (3) - better like this? http://puu.sh/7eom
344,94,33220,2,0,B|316:40|256:25|196:40|168:94,1,216
00:46:621 (1) - too soon after spinner Fixed spinner little early end
00:49:268 (1) - ^ Fixed spinner little early end
01:28:314 - add note with finish sound? I don't think it is necessery ;___;

[Muzukashii]
Od-1?

00:11:632 - add some notes here? Also, not necessery to add I guess ;___; [Taiko authentic is the farther orz]
01:07:799 (1) - place heart in the center ♥ ~ If do, It might cause spacing issues, sorry orz
01:22:192 (7) - down one grid Okay.
01:22:854 (3) - right one grid Okay.

[Oni]
00:11:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read Same distance,same timing distance and it is Oni ;___;
01:13:093 (1) - i'm lovin' it But I like pizza<

:>


:3
kanpakyin
Recheck here :3
Everything looks good,bubble oh I can't :p

[General]
  1. Everything seems great.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:886 (3) - I have another suggestion of this slider,hum,try this? :3
    220,152,10886,2,0,B|306:153|327:79|327:79|356:152|461:156,1,288,8|0
  2. 01:27:487 (x) - 0% volume seation is now unrankable,please change to 5 % at least.
  3. Everything is clear and sexy :3
[Futsuu]
  1. Tick Rate 0.5 is now unrankable,please change that to 1.
  2. 00:45:298 (x) - I know this is a authentic map T_T however this spinner is too short,I just think some newbie cannot follow TwT
  3. 00:47:945 (x) - ^
  4. 01:13:837 (x) - 0% volume seation is now unrankable,please change to 5 % at least
  5. 01:27:487 (x) - ^.
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick Rate 0.5 is now unrankable,please change that to 1.
  2. You need to fix the 0% volume seation in this diff.
  3. 00:30:904 (7) - If I were you,I would consider a new combo here due to the combo length of whole combo.
  4. 00:48:111 (1) - Yeah,please listen to playtack rate 25% this slider should stand for 1/3 ,so please move this slider to 00:46:787 (2) - and do sone adjust after that.
  5. 00:56:713 (9) - Add a new combo here then remove the new combo at 00:57:375 (1) - to follow the vocal :D
  6. 01:03:084 (3,4) - Would you use a slider instead of the notes?Because you did this in previous combo.
[Oni]
  1. You need to fix the 0% volume seation in this diff.
  2. 00:48:110 (1,2,3) - Same as hard.
  3. Everything seems good.
That's it!
Topic Starter
arien666

kanpakyin wrote:

Recheck here :3
Everything looks good,bubble oh I can't :p

[General]
  1. Everything seems great.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:10:886 (3) - I have another suggestion of this slider,hum,try this? :3
    220,152,10886,2,0,B|306:153|327:79|327:79|356:152|461:156,1,288,8|0
  2. 01:27:487 (x) - 0% volume seation is now unrankable,please change to 5 % at least.
  3. Everything is clear and sexy :3
[Futsuu]
  1. Tick Rate 0.5 is now unrankable,please change that to 1.
  2. 00:45:298 (x) - I know this is a authentic map T_T however this spinner is too short,I just think some newbie cannot follow TwT
  3. 00:47:945 (x) - ^
  4. 01:13:837 (x) - 0% volume seation is now unrankable,please change to 5 % at least
  5. 01:27:487 (x) - ^.
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick Rate 0.5 is now unrankable,please change that to 1.
  2. You need to fix the 0% volume seation in this diff.
  3. 00:30:904 (7) - If I were you,I would consider a new combo here due to the combo length of whole combo.
  4. 00:48:111 (1) - Yeah,please listen to playtack rate 25% this slider should stand for 1/3 ,so please move this slider to 00:46:787 (2) - and do sone adjust after that.
  5. 00:56:713 (9) - Add a new combo here then remove the new combo at 00:57:375 (1) - to follow the vocal :D
  6. 01:03:084 (3,4) - Would you use a slider instead of the notes?Because you did this in previous combo.
[Oni]
  1. You need to fix the 0% volume seation in this diff.
  2. 00:48:110 (1,2,3) - Same as hard.
  3. Everything seems good.
That's it!
All fixed :3
Andrea
[Kantan]

Use 1000 of Audio Lead-In on this difficulty, 2000 is a bit too much in my opinion.


Just that \:D/

EDIT: Bubbled~
Topic Starter
arien666

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Kantan]

Use 1000 of Audio Lead-In on this difficulty, 2000 is a bit too much in my opinion.


Just that \:D/
Yup :3
Fixed
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

Fuutsu

  1. 01:07:798 (6) - I feel this slider ends at 01:09:122 or 01:09:784 better, if ends at 01:09:122, add a note at 01:09:784

Oni

  1. 01:26:659 (1) - Hmm, ends 01:27:652 sounds kinda odd, why not ends at 01:27:817 then remove note (1)? Just add finish sound to spinner

Send a forum PM to me or connect me in game when you have reply then
Topic Starter
arien666

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

Fuutsu

  1. 01:07:798 (6) - I feel this slider ends at 01:09:122 or 01:09:784 better, if ends at 01:09:122, add a note at 01:09:784 Fixed as 2nd opinion since adding note would not be better than later one orz

Oni

  1. 01:26:659 (1) - Hmm, ends 01:27:652 sounds kinda odd, why not ends at 01:27:817 then remove note (1)? Just add finish sound to spinner Actually, spinner's end sound felt decreasing so I just kept note and reduced volume of spinner's end point ;___;

Send a forum PM to me or connect me in game when you have reply then
meow :3
Breeze
OK
RANKED
spboxer3
congratz :D
Winshley
lol @ rating spread



Someone need to vote 2, 4, and 8 to make it symmetrical. :lol:

EDIT: I don't mean to offend anyone. I only find it kinda funny (though a little ironic). Feel free to delete my post if it deems offending. I'll apologize in advance. :?
Topic Starter
arien666
Okay. Lock request for this thread to prevent 3 things

1. Trolling
2. Old mapset ranking blaming
3. TaikOsu haters(without reason)
lepidopodus
No haters in this thread yet.

Seriously, when you got a rating trolling, you need to think about why they are aggitated like that. It can be hatred towards you or just matter of mapping style, etc.
Topic Starter
arien666

lepidopodus wrote:

No haters in this thread yet.

Seriously, when you got a rating trolling, you need to think about why they are aggitated like that. It can be hatred towards you or just matter of mapping style, etc.
Yup, I reject to try to rank this song hard

And some techs might not be good for players ;___;
I know orz
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