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Hatsune Miku - Renritsu Houteishiki

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S o r d a
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月8日 at 0:38:31

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Renritsu Houteishiki
Source: papiyon
Tags: Apricot Thite mizuki m_i_z_u_k_i y_u_c_a yuca sorda CyoucyouP vocaloid collab collaboration
BPM: 139
Filesize: 6790kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.83 stars, 442 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 684 notes)
  3. Normal (2.49 stars, 194 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Renritsu Houteishiki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#15
初音ミク 恋率方程式
Map for my Birthday


Insane Collab
S o r d a
m i z u k i
Apricot

Hard Collab
S o r d a
y u c a
Thite

SB by JoJo
miku
:) :) :)
Orgol
hi.

(Notice)
* All Suggestionn~
** r means Remove
*** ^ means Same things

- Normal
SPOILER
00:26:020 (2) - r finish
00:29:473 (1) - add finish
00:32:927 (1) - r clap add clap for slider end
00:50:193 (3) - nc and add finish
00:53:646 (1) - add clap for slider end
00:55:373 (3) - ^

00:56:236 (4) - r finish and 00:57:099 までスライダーのほうがいいような
01:21:272 (1) - add clap for slider end
01:23:430 (4) - add clap
01:23:862 (5) - add clap for slider end
01:30:768 (6) - 01:31:200 - までスライダーのほうがいいような
01:34:869 (1) - add finish for slider end

01:41:128 (3) - add whistle
01:41:991 (4) - ^
01:45:445 (4) - add finish
01:50:624 (3) - sugg http://puu.sh/976C

02:07:027~02:18:250 reduce volume
02:07:027 (1) - r end clap
02:07:891 (2) - ^
02:08:754 (3) - r clap
して、(1)(2)(3)の最初にadd whistle

02:13:071 (1) - r finish add whistle
02:19:977 (1) - add finish
02:26:452 (1) - r clap (or reduce volume slider end)

02:31:848 (6) - nc
02:32:495 (1) - rnc
02:33:790 (2) - nc

02:35:517 (1) - add whistle
02:38:538 (3) - add clap
02:39:833 (5) - add clap (slider end)
02:42:855 (3) - add clap (slider head & end)
02:51:057 (1) - add whistle
02:52:783 (2) - ^
02:54:510 (3) - nc , add finish

03:00:553 (4) - add clap , r finish
03:04:869 (4) - add whistle (slider head)
03:06:164 (5) - add whistle
03:08:323 (4) - add finish
03:13:502 (3) - same as 01:50:624 (3)

03:15:229 (1) - add finish
03:25:804 (7) - nc
03:27:639 (1) - spinner end is 03:30:337
- Hard
SPOILER
00:28:394 (9) - add clap
00:29:905 (2) - ^
00:30:553 (4) - ^
00:35:517 (7) - ^
00:43:286 (1) - add finish

01:38:538 (3) - ^
01:52:891 (2) - add whistle ?
02:27:747 (1) - r clap

02:33:790 (3) - add finish
02:45:445 (4) - add clap
- Collab
SPOILER
00:24:294 (1) - add clap
00:39:833 (1) - ^
00:43:286 (1) - add finish
01:33:358 (4) - r finish

01:53:106 (5) - r finish and add whistle
01:56:452 (3) - ^
02:01:632 (2) - ^
02:30:337 (4) - slider end is 02:30:768 ?
03:02:171 (3) - r finish
03:03:898 (6) - ^
03:09:078 (2) - r finish add whistle
03:10:804 (8) - ^
03:11:560 (1) - r whistle add finish
03:12:531 (4) - r finish add whistle

03:27:639 - spinner end 03:30:337
:idea: :idea: :idea:
m i z u k i
なんで私の名前だけ蛍光色なんです?
Topic Starter
S o r d a
Normal Almost fixed~ thnaks lune~

>>m i z u k i
ありあからパクってきた
KanaRin
fight>w<
kanpakyin
Giving a ton of star as present :3
Rare
リクエストありがとう~ :)
気に入らないところは全部無視でお願いします。
NormalとHardは更新する前からModしてたので少し違うかもしれません。
Insaneは更新後にModさせていただきました。


Normal
00:10:481 (2) - 始点にadd whistle
00:13:934 (5) - http://puu.sh/976x Sliderにしてみては?
00:14:797 (6) - 終点にadd whistle
00:15:660 (1) - http://puu.sh/977k ここもSliderにしてみては? ※変更するなら始点にFinish,終点にadd clap
00:23:430 (5) - 1grid up
00:26:020 (x) - finishの大きさが気になったのでセクションを追加してボリュームを40~50にしてみてはどうですか。
00:29:473 (1) - 始点のClapをRemoveしてadd finish?,終点にadd clap
00:32:495 (x) - add note and add clap?
00:32:927 (1) - 始点のclapをRemove,終点にadd clap
00:35:517 (4) - add whistle
00:35:732 (5) - add clap
00:39:617 (3) - add whistle
00:39:833 (4) - remove whistle,add clap
00:40:696 (5) - 終点にadd clap
00:48:035 (x) - http://puu.sh/978z こういう音取りどうですか。
00:48:466 (2) - remove 上とセットでお願いします。
00:50:193 (3) - add finish
00:53:646 (1) - 終点にadd clap
01:10:912 (1) - 始点にadd finish
01:16:092 (5) - http://puu.sh/979c こんなんどうですか。
01:17:819 (1) - add finish
01:21:272 (1) - 終点にadd clap
01:34:869 (1) - 終点にadd finish
01:41:991 (4) - 始点にadd whistle
01:42:855 (5) - add whistle
01:45:445 (4) - 始点にadd finish?
01:51:056 (4) - whistleでも綺麗な音になりますよ。
02:07:027 (1) - 終点のclapをRemove,始点にadd whistle
02:07:891 (2) - 終点のclapをRemove
02:08:754 (3) - 折り返しのclapをremove,始点と終点にadd whistle
02:27:747 (2) - 終点にadd clap
02:30:384 (5) - 1つ目の折り返しにadd clap
02:31:848 (6) - add new combo
02:32:495 (1) - remove new combo
02:33:790 (2) - add new combo
02:57:963 (1) - 始点にadd finish,終点にadd clap
02:59:690 (3) - 終点にadd clap
03:08:323 (4) - 始点にadd Finish

Hard
00:01:848 (1,2) - 始点にそれぞれadd clap
00:08:754 (1,2) - ^
00:11:236 (6) - ^
00:21:596 (8,9,10) - http://puu.sh/97px 音取りの提案です
00:23:862 (x) - add note and add clap
00:28:394 (9) - add new combo
00:37:459 (3,6) - add clap
00:39:617 (1) - add whistle
00:39:833 (2) - add finish
00:40:481 (3) - add clap
00:43:286 (1) - 始点にadd finish
01:47:387 (2) - add clap
02:05:732 (4) - 折り返しのclapをremove
02:24:941 (3) - 始点にwhistle
02:29:042 (3) - add clap
02:53:646 (10) - add new combo
03:08:970 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/97rn 音取りの提案です。
03:15:229 (1) - 始点にadd finish,終点にadd clap
03:16:092 (2) - 終点にadd clap
03:22:135 (1,2) - ^

Collab
00:15:660 (2) - add finish
00:21:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/97sk 音取りの提案です。
00:36:380 (1) - 始点にadd finish
00:38:106 (1,2) - スペーシングが広いと思います。狭めたほうがいいと思います。
00:47:495 (1) - remove new combo
00:47:820 (2) - add new combo
00:53:214 (x) - add note
01:33:358 (4) - remove finish
02:24:617 (4) - 始点のwhistleをremove,終点にadd whistle
02:35:085 (x) - add note

いい曲だ~ :D
頑張ってください!!!
biwako
mod request from in-game

[General]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/185915
SBとLetterbox during breaksが重なっているので、SBの位置を移動したほうがいいかも?
mizukiさんのタグが2つあります。

[Normal]
00:16:524 (2) - 1 grid左(spacing)
00:22:567 (3) - finish追加
01:17:819 (1) - ^
01:31:632 (1) - ^ 始点に
01:43:718 (1) - finish削除
03:06:596 (1) - ^
03:08:323 (4) - finish追加
03:13:934 (4) - finish削除

[Hard]
00:01:848 (1) - 終点にclap追加
00:08:754 (1) - ^
03:01:848 (2) - 終点にclap追加
03:02:279 (3) - ^
03:02:927 (4) - ^ 始点に
03:03:358 (5) - ^
03:03:791 (6) - ^
03:04:222 (7) - ^
03:04:653 (1) - ^
03:08:538 (2) - ^
03:08:970 (3) - ^
03:10:696 (3) - ^
03:11:128 (6) - ^
03:11:991 (2) - ^
03:12:423 (3) - ^
03:12:855 (4) - clap追加
03:15:229 (1) - 終点にclap追加
03:22:135 (1) - ^
03:22:999 (2) - clap追加

[Collab]
00:21:488 - ノート追加?
00:21:812 - ^
01:36:812 (7) - 01:38:322 (1) - NC入れ替え
02:03:898 (1,2) - ^
02:26:668 - ノート追加?
02:44:365 (5) - 02:44:581 - に移動?
02:46:308 (6,7) - spacing
03:00:553 (5) - 03:00:768 (1) - NC入れ替え
banvi
[General]
enable countdown消しましょう
一応、蝶々P"CyoucyouP"もTagに入れると良いんじゃないでしょうか (Sourceはpapiyonで良いと思う)
SPOILER
[attachment=0:9ef32]8e665378a509630dd9ddeb95f7e159ad.png[/attachment:9ef32]
メモ帳でAudioLeadIn: 496 → 500 に変更
mapper名のSBがまだ設定されてないようですがこれはまだ途中ってことでいいですかね?_?

[Normal]
  1. 00:50:624 (2) - move 1 grid left (lv3)
  2. 00:56:236 (4) - 最初の方にclap?
  3. 01:36:812 (5,6) - これの白線ビートにあたる部分にclapいれるとどうでしょう
  4. 01:51:488 (4) - 最初の方と折り返しにclap入れるとどうでしょう
  5. 02:26:452 (1) - ここを音量30%にしてて僕にとっては聞こえづらくて違和感あるんだけど…まあ個人的な問題かと
  6. 02:27:747 (2) - 最後の方のclapの音が大きくて違和感が…ちょっと音量下げるとどうでしょう
  7. 02:46:740 (6,7) - add clap?
  8. 02:54:941 (2) - move 1 grid up
  9. 03:11:776 (1) - finishの方がいいかも
  10. 03:13:935 (4) - 全部にclap、最後の方のfinishは外した方がいいかも
  11. 03:25:589 (6,1) - ここはstackさせない方が良いと思います
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:848~00:15:229 clapが大きく感じるので音量下げたほうがいいでしょう
  2. 00:08:106 (T) - この緑線を00:08:214(一個先の青線)に動かしてください
  3. 00:21:596 (8) - これは重ねない方がいいかも
    理由としてはちょっと見えにくいのと、しかもこれは青線に置いてるのでタイミングが読みにくくてさらに混乱しそうだからです…orz
  4. 00:41:560 (4) - 最初の方にclap?
  5. 00:41:991 (5) - add clap?
  6. 00:43:286 (1) - 最初の方にfinish
  7. 01:38:538 (3) - 最初の方にfinish
  8. 02:45:445 (4) - add clap?
  9. 02:45:876 (1) - 最後の音量を小さくすると個人的にいいかな
  10. 03:07:459 (6) - add whistle?
  11. 03:15:229 (1) - 最初の方にfinish
[Collab]
  1. 00:12:855 (2) - なんだか(aim的な)流れにあってない気がするのでこう変えるとどうでしょう → http://puu.sh/98yU
  2. 00:15:660 (2) - 最初の方にfinish
  3. 00:22:567 (1) - ^
  4. 00:32:495 (8) - 後ろの方のfinishがあまり合ってないように感じられます
  5. 00:36:380 (1) - 最初の方にfinish
  6. 00:43:286 (1,2,3) - spacing整えたほうがいいかも
  7. 00:43:286 (1) - add finish
  8. 01:27:099 (2,3) - move 1 grid right? (lv3)
  9. 02:30:768 (n) - add a circle?
  10. 02:31:848 (6) - うむむ、finishが大きく感じられるので外した方が良いかと
  11. 02:36:812 (n) - add a circle? (もし入れるならclap音つけて)
  12. 02:57:963 (1) - add finish
  13. 03:06:596 (1) - ^
  14. 03:07:243 (4) - ここにfinishは合ってない気がするので(5)に入れるとどうでしょう
  15. 03:10:481 (7) - 最初の方にfinish?
  16. 03:11:560 (1) - 折り返しにfinish
  17. 03:15:229 (1) - 最初の方にfinish
  18. 03:27:099 (5) - whistleをsilder自身につけるのではなく両端にだけ入れたほうがいいかと(ジーって音が少し気になりました)
  19. 03:27:315 (T) - この緑線を03:27:423(一個先の青線)に移動
だいたいは提案です
Good job everyone ヾ(●´▽`●)ノ彡
Topic Starter
S o r d a
some fixed thanks All modders~
Also thanks stars Kana KPY R a r e banvi>A<
Muya
pro mappers
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ S o r d a chan ~ :)

Mod time for PM In - game ~

[General]

PreviewTime : 43071


[Collab]

00:09:617 - add note will be better.
00:26:776 (4) - not perfect overlap.
00:54:401 (7) - Remove finish.
01:24:725 (1) - add finish.
01:32:063 - add note.Here are the lyrics.
01:36:812 (7) - add NC.
01:49:545 (4) - not perfect overlap.
01:50:840 (7,8) - ^
01:52:243 (4) - 1 grid down.
01:56:452 (3) - end point Remove finish.
02:01:632 (2) - Change the position,Scores touch the HP bar.
02:52:351 (4) - ^
02:32:927 (3) - add finish will be better.
03:14:365 (6) - add NC.


[Hard]

AR-1
00:43:286 (1) - start point add finish.
00:49:977 (1) - end point add finish.
01:32:927 - add note, Will be more consistent.
01:38:538 (3) - start point add finish.
01:45:229 (1) - end point add finish.
02:21:704 (5) - add NC.
02:26:883 (2) - start point add finish.
02:33:790 (3) - ^
02:40:481 (1) - end point add finish.
03:15:229 (1) - start point add finish.


[Normal]

00:32:495 - add note.
00:53:214 - ^
01:16:092 (5) - add NC.
01:51:488 (4) - end point add finish.
02:32:495 (2) - end point Remove finish.
02:45:876 (5) - add NC.
02:48:467 (2) - Use curve slider will be better.
03:23:862 (4) - add NC.
03:22:135 (1) - add finish.

Nice mapset ~

Please accept my Double star ( My heart ) >///<

ganbare sorda chan ~
;)
Takos
>w</ Hi~

General
Preview Time: -1 ?_?
ボーカロイドよく分からないのですが、P?作曲者?をSBに入れてはどうでしょうか
全体的にヒットサウンドが小さく感じます、僕だけかもしれませんが

Normal
00:38:106 (2) - 前のスライダーと少し触れているのでずらすとか?
00:50:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - 6角形にするとか? http://puu.sh/9btW
01:33:358 (2) - 微妙に縦になっていないです
03:24:725 (5) - 直前のスライダーに触っているので少し下に下げるとか?

Hard
00:28:394 (9) - NC?
00:41:344 - ノートを追加?
00:57:099 - ここまでBreakの青い部分を延ばすとか? http://puu.sh/9bud
01:13:071 (5) - 01:10:912 (1,2,3,4) - の始点と揃えるならもう少し左に動かすとか?
01:23:862 (8) - NC?
01:24:294 (1) - Remove NC?
01:52:783 - ここにノートを追加?一応ワンオクターブ下のキーボードの音があります
03:01:632 - ノートを追加?

Collab
00:04:222 (5) - 下に動かして滑らかなカーブにするとか?
00:20:409 (4) - 右に動かして(2)の終点と(5)と正三角形を作るとか?
00:36:380 (1) - リピートを一つ外しては?
00:42:207 (10) - 00:42:855 - にスライダーの終点を持ってきた方が自然な気がします
01:10:912 (5) - Finishの音をもう少し大きくするとか?
01:36:812 (7) - NC?
01:53:430 (6) - リピートを外すとか?
02:46:308 (6) - 右に動かして滑らかな連打にするとか?
03:15:229 (1) - このスライダーのスピードが急に遅くなってプレイしにくかったです、直前の連打のスペーシングを狭くするとやりやすくなるかも
03:19:977 (5) - ピアノの音に合わせているならNC?

Nice mapset :D
Fighto~
Thite
winber1
Sorry it took me a while. I actually just skipped the last two in my queue to mod this, cuz i care :3. But mostly cuz i promised to mod this soon and I know i'm lazy and I wouldn't mod those other two requests in my queue until later >_>. hope this helps a bit.

COllab

--start kiai time 00:43:286 to match other difficulties

00:13:503 (3) - I like it better if you just turned this into one note and started the spinner 1/2 tick earlier. The repeat slider just didn't fit imo. http://puu.sh/9C1L
00:28:178 (6,2) - i like it better if you added claps to these notes (but only the beginning of the slider)
[
00:29:258 (4) - replace finish with clap
00:29:365 - add note with clap
00:29:473 (1) - add finish to beginning of slider
]
00:43:718 - i like it better if you hitsounded this part to follow the drums, so that you have a clap every other beat but oh well
00:46:955 (6,7) - this is kinda hard to tell that combo 7 is on a blue tick. I for one did not read it correctly--i still hit it but got a 50. you could do something like this http://puu.sh/9C37
01:05:732 (1,2,3) - equally space this? D:
01:38:322 (8) - new combo for consistency, then remove combo from next note
01:45:337 - add note?
01:54:078 (3,4,5) - this is confusing.
02:03:574 (5) - new combo
02:03:898 (1) - remove combo
02:36:380 (6) - i'd rather start this slider at 02:36:272 and end in the same place
02:47:387 (9,10) - I would use 60% volume and clap hitsounds for these two

Hard

--I wouldn't use the custom clap you have in the beginning. It sounds a little weird to me.

00:24:078 (6) - new combo
00:28:394 (9) - something like this isbetter and easier to read imo. http://puu.sh/9C5B (combo 10 is stacked under combo 9)
00:41:560 (5) - add one more repeat
01:24:294 (1) - i would remove this new combo
02:45:876 (1) - i like it if you added a clap to this spinner
03:00:984 (1) - remove combo
03:01:632 - add note

Normal

00:05:301 (5) - new combo
00:12:207 (3) - ^?
00:22:567 (3) - ^?
00:39:617 (3) - ^
00:40:482 (5) - start 1/2 tick earlier but end in the same place?>

nice map! good luck getting this ranked soon! :3
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>winber1 Takos Rika
Some fixed
thanks really helpful mod>A<

Also thanks Rika Double star!
JoJo
OwO/

Sorry for long long delay I'm too lazy T_T
Topic Starter
S o r d a
Added Story board

>>baka JoJo
thanks for SB>~<
Also star thanks :P
Lissette
B-day gift.... I mean....

Bubble~~ ^^

IRC modded
Topic Starter
S o r d a
thanks Liss!
minyeob
Ranked~

There's too many 連立方程式 on school maths :;
But there's no koi in it lol


To peoples who saw this post
Hmm although I'm not 100.00%(converge) sure about this due to long absence of modding,
I'm ranking this in order not to get my mod feeling lost....
I'll countinue modding sometimes......
If there's part which has lots of ambiguity to appreciate for ranked map. I really apologize to you guys.
But at least maybe there's none of any kind of unrank issues.....
KSHR
gratz!!
and HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Sorda!!
Topic Starter
S o r d a
yey thanks miny~
today my birthday
I'm glad getting ranked!
banvi
Congratulation and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Cyril Scarlet
Gratz for ranked !!

and happy Birthday !!!!!
Suzully
What a wonderful day! :D
Congrats and happy birthday!!
y u c a
誕生日おめっとー :)
Amule
恭喜.
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto Sorda chan ~

and Happy birthday ~
:)
Apricot
誕生日プレゼントにお菓子作ってやるから住所教えろ
Faust
Congratulations and Happy Birthday, s o r d a !
Topic Starter
S o r d a
thanks All :P

>Apricot
住所晒しあるなあw
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