Nymph_ wrote:

OK recheck request~

有的NOTE没SNAP好.
OFFSET改变了 所以各个时间线需要对好 很多时间线错开了
KIAL在01:08:944 (1) - 02:24:074 (4) - 开始更好一点？

Normal：

滑条速度1.6有点太快了= =
Spacing用的多少?有点迷惑 开头是0.6？
00:04:509 (6) - 这有点太难了 个人觉得要不改成一个来回的滑条 要不就把这3个叠起来 像这样?

后面的三连建议也叠一下 其实有不少三连都没必要 变成2个NOTE更舒服 试试看吧 本来用多了三连 这也不像NORMAL了..
00:07:379 (1) - 这里建议做个慢速的滑条？在两个白线中间 应该很适合歌曲 可以做个0.5的BPM TIMING SECTION在这里
00:12:102 (1) - 太直了 不好看..排列是个问题呢 我也不擅长 看别人MOD慢慢学吧
00:52:900 (3) - 这里..我今天刚被训过 说歌声不是这么跟的 这样会很别扭...所以现学现卖 我也觉得有点别扭了...蓝线放到红线上？后面也是（奇怪了。。在HARD难度就没出现这个问题了 都是在红线放的。。）

Hard:

也是有NOTE没有SNAP
有HITSOUND小错误 检查一下吧？我不太指的出来..
NEW COMBO
01:40:770 (1) - 转盘01:42:857结束？
节奏感觉都很好呢 听起来挺舒服的。

嗯 先这么多了~

H-Miku wrote:

我就先改去了~
等你的回话真不容易啊
都等了24小时了 度日如年啊

Nymph_ wrote:

OK recheck request~

有的NOTE没SNAP好.
OFFSET改变了 所以各个时间线需要对好 很多时间线错开了
KIAL在01:08:944 (1) - 02:24:074 (4) - 开始更好一点？

Normal：

滑条速度1.6有点太快了= =
Spacing用的多少?有点迷惑 开头是0.6？
00:04:509 (6) - 这有点太难了 个人觉得要不改成一个来回的滑条 要不就把这3个叠起来 像这样?

后面的三连建议也叠一下 其实有不少三连都没必要 变成2个NOTE更舒服 试试看吧 本来用多了三连 这也不像NORMAL了..
00:07:379 (1) - 这里建议做个慢速的滑条？在两个白线中间 应该很适合歌曲 可以做个0.5的BPM TIMING SECTION在这里
00:12:102 (1) - 太直了 不好看..排列是个问题呢 我也不擅长 看别人MOD慢慢学吧
00:52:900 (3) - 这里..我今天刚被训过 说歌声不是这么跟的 这样会很别扭...所以现学现卖 我也觉得有点别扭了...蓝线放到红线上？后面也是（奇怪了。。在HARD难度就没出现这个问题了 都是在红线放的。。）

Hard:

也是有NOTE没有SNAP
有HITSOUND小错误 检查一下吧？我不太指的出来..
NEW COMBO
01:40:770 (1) - 转盘01:42:857结束？
节奏感觉都很好呢 听起来挺舒服的。

嗯 先这么多了~

1. 音乐应该是剪过的吧，因为结束的很突然，建议把结尾部分变成音量逐渐减小
2. 前面已经很多人说过了 - snapping!!!
3. 有些地方note之间距离不是很均匀(不是因为跳而产生的)，可以用most precise调节一下

1. 请将后面不用的timing point删掉

1. 0.4X的distance spacing很郁闷呐
   

   Nymph_ wrote:

   滑条速度1.6有点太快了= =

   ^很同意
2. 02:22:960 这个note根据音乐是没有的，而02:23:743应该加一个note
3. 02:28:177 ~ 02:39:134 形式好单一哦~ 而且不是很美观(虽然说是三个note摆的很整齐)
4. 没有spinner呢，虽然没有也是可以的，但是总是有点奇怪

1. 如果没看错的话slider velocity - normal是1.6，hard是1.4???
2. 00:42:786 (9)(10)(11)(12)这个地方很纠结，大概也是因为snapping

JoJo wrote:

我去..

居然把坟图重新包装成新图了=A=/

节操掉光了..

Nymph wrote:

可恶怎么插个楼失败3次3次3次
居然把那个坟改了无节操无节操无节操

athiota33 wrote:

Hi
Love this song!x3

[Insane]
00:34:954 (8) - NC?
00:44:195 (11) - ^
00:47:195 (11) - ^
00:52:195 (11) - ^
00:55:195 (11) - ^
00:59:070 (7) - ^
Overall nice! :3~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Easy

00:07:195 (1) - Remove NC??
00:19:195 (1) - 形狀好奇怪，複製 00:11:195 的Slider比較好
00:42:695 (2) - 分開??
01:27:195 (1,2) - 這2個Slider放在右半邊比較好，不然視覺上很多東西擠在左半邊= =
話說很多重疊的東西（例如 00:42:695 ），都沒有完全重疊，完全重疊的話，右上角的prev應該為0.00x
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/182567
不過以我的經驗，即使重新疊過，離開後再載入也會回到原來的樣子；如果您有辦法就去修改吧~

Insane

00:49:195 (1~5) - 我覺得這5點弄成 00:50:695 的花朵形狀會比較漂亮
00:50:695 (6) - NC
00:56:695 (9) - 搬到(8)的位置上，然後按Ctrl+H ??
01:03:070 (1,2,3) - 在(2)或者(3)才開始NC會比較適合；我的話會選擇後者
01:11:945 (6,7,8,9) - 這4點弄成這樣如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/182570
01:16:695 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/182573

Nice map, Good Luck

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

- -不清楚你有没有看规则。应该有写不接受WIP的。。 >_>对不起啊，我看了的，但是我以为马上就可以拿到hard难度，也不知道你改那么快
加的无声soft slider需要用绿线把soft 改成soft custom1才生效

Normal
00:08:695 加条绿线改normal 50-60%
00:09:195 (1) - 开头finish
00:25:195 (1) - 同上
00:26:695 (2) - 跟1结尾没对齐
00:41:195 (1) - 开头finish
00:49:195 (1) - whistle 换 finsih
01:12:695 Kiai结束到这里
01:13:195 (1) - 开头finsih




Insane
因为连打多了感觉排列较乱- -
00:02:945 (1) - 去NC
00:03:195 (2) - NC
00:04:945 (1) - 去NC
00:05:195 (2) - NC
00:09:195 (1) - 开头finish
00:31:945 (7) - NC
00:32:695 (11) - clap
00:32:945 (12) - 去clap
00:34:195 (1) - 弄直吧
00:53:195 这一段建议把4,5和9,10用slider
00:59:070 (1) - 去NC
00:59:195 (2) - NC
01:03:070 & 01:03:195 (1&2) - 同上
01:07:195 (7) - NC
01:28:195 (4) - finish 换 whistle

Kiai问题同normal

Breeze wrote:

General

1. combo color两个难度不一致, 虽然没说必须用一样的, 不过最好还是用一致的
2. 没tag, 考虑加些? GD来了就开加啦XD
3. 00:57:199 - 这条KIAI的绿线没snap, 应该在00:57:195

Normal

1. 00:16:445 (2,3) - 要么就都whistel要么就都clap, 感觉会比现在好, 个人感觉clap更好
2. 00:17:195 (1) - 考虑加个finish音
3. 00:48:445 (4,5) - 要么就都whistel要么就都clap, 感觉会比现在好, 个人感觉clap更好
4. 00:56:445 (5,6) - ^
5. 00:57:195 (1) - Finish
6. 01:04:445 (4) - Clap
7. 01:13:195 (1) - Finish

Insane

1. 00:16:445 (7) - 加clap
2. 00:25:195 (3) - Finish
3. 00:29:570 (9), 00:30:570 (1) - 这两个clap听着不顺, 换成whistle会更好
4. 00:41:195 (1) - Finish
5. 00:49:195 (1) - ^
6. 00:56:195 (8) - 这跳感觉略大了, 后面的9又那么近, 打起来不舒服
7. 00:57:445 (2,3,4) - 没在一个曲线上, (3)可以再往左边一点
8. 01:00:445 (8,9,10) - ^, ⑨往右一点 卖萌什么的我什么都不知道
9. 01:04:445 (9) - 这个跳也感觉大了
10. 01:13:195 (1) - Finish比whistle好
11. 01:20:445 (8) - 换用clap
12. 01:27:195 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing略奇怪(1,2)跟(3,4)是等拍距的但是spacing不同

整体还行

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ H - Miku ~ =。=不H啊。。。。你才是变态啊

Mod time for in-game ~

[General]

Normal.Insane 难度的 Countdown 删掉. Fix


[Insane]

HP+2
00:09:320 (2) - 往右一格.
00:32:945 (6) - 这里加NC，后面删掉.
00:34:070 - 这里可加NOTE.
00:37:695 (2) - 跟1不对称，移动到这里 X:384 Y:320
00:47:570 (4) - 删掉这个~ 不适合5连这里.
00:49:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距用一样的吧？
00:57:195 (1) - 加finish.
01:04:945 (11) - 建议删掉.
01:07:195 (7) - 加NC.
01:27:195 (1,2,3,4) - 这间距改改吧 2，3是 1/4节奏..
改了不少，除了加减note，原因是因为有些地方stream太多，所以给player一个喘气的时间

[cRyo]

挑不出问题 音效很好呀~


[Normal]

01:27:195 (1,2) - clap 删掉 2结尾加finish.
都改了！

加油RANK ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

good luck ~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

(●･ω･)ﾉ☆

1. Some adding-notes advice
   
   00:07:445 (x) - add note
   00:07:820 (x) - ^
   00:07:945 (x) - ^

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. (request from my queue)

Insane

1. Some adding-notes advice
   
   00:07:445 (x) - add note
   00:07:820 (x) - ^
   00:07:945 (x) - ^

Enough good map so no other suggestions...

no kd

Good luck~

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this map because of ur request

Normal:
00:47:193(3) - can u make this slider a bit nicer?
00:50:695(2,1) - remove the whistle at the beginning and add it at the end

Insane:
00:47:975(6) - i suggest that u move it away from the slider

this is the best i can do. GL

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:)
[Insane]
00:02:945 (10) - NC
00:03:195 (1) - 取消NC
00:04:945 (9) - NC
00:05:195 (1) - 取消NC

00:17:195至于这段break 表示TV SIZE 长度本来就短 还是填上的好 除了这个其它都改了，人懒了TAT


[Normal]
Fine

Good luck~

Aleks719 wrote:

General
cRyo[iceeicee] diff has another combocolors
set tickrate 1 in Normal, like in other diffs?
Normal diff starts later than others, but audio lead-in same is as in others. It's quite nazi, but you could change audio lead-in for decreasing delay
fix all of them

Insane
Long break here looks weird, because other diffs doen't have it :S ok, it's your solution, just said.
I'll try to finish it!
00:01:195 (3) - add whistle to the start
00:02:195 (5) - add whistle
00:02:570 (8) - ^
00:03:195 (2) - add whistle to the start
00:04:195 (4,7) - add 2 whistles
00:05:195 (2) - add whistle to the start
00:06:195 (4,7) - add 2 whistles
00:06:695 (8) - add whistle to the end
00:08:195 (5) - add whistle
00:08:445 (1) - add clap
00:33:445 (4,5) - *nazi* (4) - 1 grid down, (5) - 2 grids down
00:34:195 (8) - maybe not linear slider?

example

00:42:695 (6) - imo, add nc here
00:45:945 - add note
00:46:945 - add note too
01:11:945 (6) - add nc
01:16:945 (7) - imo, replace nc here from 01:17:195 (1) -
01:17:195 (1) - *unrankable* slider is a bit off screen:

img

01:27:570 (2,3) - add 2 whistles
fix all~!

Normal
00:16:445 (2,3) - hum, stack with end of slider is not a best idea in easiest diff, suggest unstack it, hard to read for newbies.
00:33:195 (1) - add finish to the start?
00:41:195 (1) - i would like to add sliderbody whistle
00:42:695 (2) - ^
00:49:195 (1) - whistle to the end + sliderbody whistle
00:50:695 (2) - add sliderbody whistle
00:56:445 (5,6) - stack with end of slider again
01:04:695 (4) - ^ here and around 3 similar stacks later.
staying something like stack with end of the slider, and the sliderbody whistle I'll add it in a few days

Good luck, star'd~

iMercurial wrote:

Hi! ^^

Normal

00.16.445 (2,3): Don't put circles under the slider... try to re-localize that.
00.48.445 (4,5): ^
00.56.445 (5,6): ^
01.04.445 (4,5): ^

It seems all the modder blame those part fix it

Insane

00.08.570 (2): Useless Circle.

I think it fine, then keep it XD

Nice map, I'll wait for ranking :3
Thx~
Go Bakemonogatari ^^

iMercurial wrote:

When you want