1. Easy (1,17 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4,46 stars, 169 notes)
3. Normal (2,11 stars, 100 notes)

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions.

[General]

Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.

You should make normal diff~ Then move to WIP :3


[Eazy]

01:20:336 (1)~(2)　　 1grid left

[Hard]

00:14:880 (5)　　　　　　Make it prettier.

SPOILER

00:21:698 (5)　　　　　　IMO,ugly slider. How about this?

SPOILER

00:23:971 (5)　　　　　　Make it prettier.

SPOILER

00:32:149 (1)　　　　　　move 2nd point (x184,y144)
00:48:971 (8)　　　　　　I think,one reverse is better.

SPOILER

01:02:153 (x)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

01:16:224 (3)　　　　　　Remove whistle on the slider's rail.
01:22:380 (6)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

01:24:426 (x)　　　　　　Add a note or Slider's end move to 01:24:426.
01:25:335 (x)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

SPOILER

Good map! star~~
I wish your map is Ranked
Bye~

LaceWingfield wrote:

Mod incoming
[Easy]
00:24:427 (4): add whistle
00:25:336 (1): remove whistle?
00:34:427 (3): add finish~
00:48:372 (3): remove whistle add finish~
00:52:381 (4): add whistle
01:06:927 (4): add finish/whistle here.
01:21:699 (3): add whistle

it's nice.. but wow, whistles.

[Normal]
00:07:153 (2): add whistle
00:15:789 (3): add finish
00:23:517 (3): add whistle
00:24:653 (2): move note to 00:24:426 then add a note here.
00:34:198 (5): add whistle
00:43:062 (3): ^
00:46:698 (2): 2 grid left
00:50:335 (2): like this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:af674]screenshot056.jpg[/attachment:af674]

00:56:244 (6): add whistle
01:03:971 (5): ^
01:06:244 (4): 3 grid down
01:10:789 (2): add whistle
01:16:244 (1): ^
01:18:971 (4): ^
01:21:698 (4): add finish
01:28:062 (3): add whistle
01:38:142 : add finish in this spinner

Overall, it's nice xD

[Hard]
00:33:517 (4): add whistle
00:46:698 (1): remove whistle
01:07:153 (5): remove whistle and add finish
01:50:626 (spin): add finish~

wow great

nice map >< star
i want to make a guest diff but i suck xD

Star Stream wrote:

offset -> 2588

easy
01:37:268 (1) - > 01:37:154

normal
01:21:698 (4) - distance
01:30:562 (1) - little far from 01:29:426 (6)
01:43:629 (4) - new combo ?

hard
00:14:653 - delete ? If some moder say so, I'll change it
00:22:835 - ^ ^
00:27:153 (7) - new combo
00:43:744 (6) - ^
00:55:789 (5) - ^
01:17:607 (5) - ^
01:30:108 - add a circle If some moder say so, I'll change it
01:30:221 -> 01:30:335 ^

LaceWingfield wrote:

oh yeah i forget ==~
[Easy]
00:04:860 (2): 1 grid right and down
00:23:497 (3): 1 grid up~
00:33:042 (2): ^
00:50:769 (3,4): 1 grid down
00:53:497 (1): 1 grid up
00:54:860 (2): 1 grid left
01:06:678 (4): ^
01:21:678 (3): ^


[Normal]
00:33:497 (4): 1 grid left
01:04:406 (1): 2 grid up~
01:04:860 (2): 1 grid up
01:17:588 (3): 1 grid left

[Hard]
00:10:769 (3): 1 grid left
00:43:951 (2,3): 1 grid up
00:45:088 (4,5): ^
00:46:224 (6): ^
01:20:315 (2): ^

yup, all grid problem solved~

athiota33 wrote:

Fixed!x3
anda teliti sekali OwO~

LaceWingfield wrote:

athiota33 wrote:

Fixed!x3
anda teliti sekali OwO~

biasa aja o.o

1. Your mp3 file is en-coded in 256kbps , which is unrankable. Use something 192 (recommended) or 128 kbps. If you need a 192 one, feel free to ask me for that.

1. 00:22:360 (1) - This is really hard for new players to react correctly. Just use more sliders
2. 00:24:406 (4,1) - Change new combo
3. 00:33:497 (3) - Remove finish from this. It is loud imo.
4. 00:43:042 (3,4) - Relace a 1/2 length sldier with them
5. 01:01:678 (3) - finish on head ?
6. 01:28:951 (1,2,3) - Change new combo between (1,2) and (3)

1. Fine, but the fact that you followed too much vocal made it strange to play. The same to the Easy diff. I'd advise not following vocal all the time in order the have a good consistence through the whole diff.

1. Since it is a Hard , reduce HP drain rate by 1 please.
2. 01:30:201 (9) - Delete it
3. 01:41:739 (5,6,7) - Spacing , at least the same as 01:43:629 (3,4,5) imo

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. (From my queue)

General

1. Your mp3 file is en-coded in 256kbps , which is unrankable. Use something 192 (recommended) or 128 kbps. If you need a 192 one, feel free to ask me for that. Ok

Easy Fixed

1. 00:22:360 (1) - This is really hard for new players to react correctly. Just use more sliders
2. 00:24:406 (4,1) - Change new combo
3. 00:33:497 (3) - Remove finish from this. It is loud imo.
4. 00:43:042 (3,4) - Relace a 1/2 length sldier with them
5. 01:01:678 (3) - finish on head ?
6. 01:28:951 (1,2,3) - Change new combo between (1,2) and (3)

Normal Ok,I'll try to not following the vocal

1. Fine, but the fact that you followed too much vocal made it strange to play. The same to the Easy diff. I'd advise not following vocal all the time in order the have a good consistence through the whole diff.

Hard Fixed

1. Since it is a Hard , reduce HP drain rate by 1 please.
2. 01:30:201 (9) - Delete it
3. 01:41:739 (5,6,7) - Spacing , at least the same as 01:43:629 (3,4,5) imo

Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ athiota33 ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

You Mp3 file is 256kbps, this is unrankable, change 192 or 128 plz.

BG quality is not very good, try to find a better.

00:07:360 - add break time.


[Hard]

00:32:588 (2) - Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (2) - add finish.
01:01:224 (8) - end point Remove whistle and add finish.
01:16:224 (3) - start point add finish.
01:27:815 (4) - not perfect overlap.


[Normal]

AR+1,OD-1
00:06:224 (1) - Remove NC.
00:13:724 (4) - move to here 00:13:497.
00:29:860 (1) - Remove NC.
00:32:588 (3) - start point Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (1) - start point add finish.
01:01:678 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish.
01:11:224 (3) - add a reentry.
01:16:224 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish.
01:50:768 (1) - Remove finish.


[Easy]

00:31:678 (1) - end point Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (3) - start point Remove whistle and add finish.
01:11:451 (3) - move to here 01:11:678.
01:15:315 (1) - end point add finish.


that's all.

good luck ~

S h i o n wrote:

192 mp3 file : puu.sh/8RRU

Don't forget to change offset / resnap all notes / timing sections / ...

No kd

ikari_kyon wrote:

1st time line
offset: 2640

the others timelines looks good

tutuhaha wrote:

PreviewTime: 31730

Easy

HP-1
00:23:549 (2) - add whistle
00:35:367 (1) - space
00:43:549 (X) - add whistle
00:43:662 (1) - spinner begain to there
00:46:730 (2) - add whistle
00:49:912 (1) - add whistle
00:54:912 (2) - need revise
00:57:185 (4) - add whistle
00:58:094 (1) - spinner begain to there and add circle on the 00:57:640
01:00:821 (1) - add whistle
01:09:003 (X) - add whistle
01:12:185 (x) - add circle on there and spinner begain to 01:12:640
01:22:639 (1) - space
01:24:912 (X) - remove this whistle
01:25:367 (4) - add whistle
01:30:821 (1) - ^
01:37:219 (1) - this slider end on 01:37:680 and spinner begain to 01:38:142

Normal

HP-1
00:07:185 (X) - I think you don't need this green line because it is too soft......
00:19:003 (1) - space
00:23:776 (1) - Try to use this →
00:31:730 (1,2) - too soft
00:33:549 (4,1) - add whistle
00:43:662 (1) - spinner begain to there
00:45:821 (1) - try to use this

Hard

OD-1
00:13:776 (1) - you don't need this green line, 40% is good
00:18:094 (1) - ...too soft
00:37:639 (6) - NC
00:39:003 (1) - add whistle
00:46:276 (6) - NC begain to there
00:57:639 (1) - add whistle
01:02:640 (X) - ^
01:04:458 (1) - ^

GOOD LUCKY~~~~~Nice song XD

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

offset 3549

easy
00:39:003 (1) - whistle at the beginning
01:08:094 (1) - whistle or finish at the end
01:19:003 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the end
if you don't want to go on making the other parts.delete some useless timing setions

normal
00:39:003 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the end
00:54:458 (3) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning
01:05:367 (3) - ^

hard
00:11:730 (4) - NC
00:35:367 (1) - finish instead of whistle
00:45:367 (5) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning
00:46:276 (6) - finish instead of whistle
01:04:458 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

Easy:
00:07:525 - i suggest that u remove the break since its not going to kill anyone
00:12:639(1) - make this slider symmetrical
00:38:093(3) - make this slider a lot nicer
00:57:539(5) - 1 grid down

Normal:
00:07:525 - same as the 1st suggestion on easy
00:36:275(2) - make this slider a lot nicer

Hard:
00:32:639(2) - stack it properly
01:32:320(2) - oh dear i dont like this loop. make it better.
01:38:142(3) - rotate it about 5 degrees CW

this is the best i can do. GL